Fraze vs. MFTastick - OPEN FOR VOTES!

[sral]

FINALLY it’s here – the INTERSITE INVASION begins!



A true Netcees first, this card is stacked with some of the illest textcees still actively participating in the game today… and Veritas vs Prelec. LULZ! You’ve all seen how hotly anticipated these matchups are, you’ve read the magazine and seen the battler profiles of everyone involved, you’ve watched the Lars video magazine which set the new fucking standard for anything similar that proceeds it. The time is now. It’s official, we’ve an entire card full of classics in the making and this shit is about to go DOWNNNN!!!

Line limits: 14 lines (Unless otherwise agreed by both opponents prior to the battle)
Video battle: 3.00 (3 MINS IN LENGTH, DATSHITCRAY!)

CHECK IN’S DUE: 12 NOON TUESDAY 8TH SEPTEMBER (UK TIME)
VERSES DUE: SATURDAY 12TH SEPTEMBER (UK TIME)

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LET’S FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

@fraze @MFtastick

RMBVA MIRROR MATCH-LINK:

http://rmbva.com/showthread.php?t=22062

[MFtastick]

Checking in. @fraze you want standard 14 or 16?? im down on 16 but either way is fine bruh.

[fraze]

16 is cool. check.

[MFtastick]

You taking a battle with MFtastick. Got me thinkin you droppin shrooms
You lost to Doctor Dog. What Makes you think you can fuck with Doctor Doom?
Fraze, i'm on to you, show up to one of your poetry jams. loaded 9, splittin' tops
Stand up and cock back, start snappin' in the crowd.. I ain't giving props.
Should I Give him the chopper?, or let the .45 unload clips.
Toss my shooter the colt. full clip tellem hold this
Empty the k, but he still breathin'. i just blew out his whole chest
Now i gotta rely on the fif.. feel like a Chapelle Show sketch
Nigga i got a Gun so big, Puffy dance in the back when i shoot it
And the silencer sound like librarians when dudes in the back actin stupid
I got another gun so big... nigga.. I don't even know how to use it
But He get the point when I pull/apple and hit the top of his head. Sir Isaac Newton
Your name landed on my desk. so i went to Netcees.. undercover
Knew nothing about him. but it didn't take long to see hes as tough as Usher
Studied this bitch, so i cant believe him when he say he clutch the thunder
Its like Animorphs. So when he turns into an animal, its just a cover.

@fraze

[fraze]

you had me fucked up with those timezones Lars. my bad on posting late.

this little fuck would have to run and jump to see me im the king ape
got the hammer on deck and i’m unloading barrels like the original DK
i got a rasp and ill split stic in half… but this ain’t woodshop class
this is MF Doom. now your face in that metal…. but it ain’t a prop mask
these comical web tales of you poppin off from the wrist with a weapon?
who’d believe your peter parker fibs. lizman bodied you in a cypher session
who gassed this mother fucker up? on my life i cannot handle this.
you’re the worst murda sho knockoff i’ve seen since CSI: Los Angeles

fuck tha bullshit….

no matter what weapons you brandish, you simply don’t stand any chance
my skill is disarming. i won’t just get rid of stic... your whole site’ll leave with empty hands
ya bitch gives fire knowledge. prometheus. so i cum bust on her lipskin
stic is no match to me… but these violent strikes will make his head combust from friction
when this kenpo blow to the temple leaves you on your knees doubled over
you won’t have a prayer... but you don’t need one... after this verse you’ll meet jehovah
i’m a living breathing massacre… in my wake is a trail of bodied amateurs
you’ll have dismantled remains in your wake… and a sign that says: “Please No Cameras”

[sral]

Dope shit, props to both emcees, LETS GET IT!

[Hush]

Originally Posted by MFtastick

You taking a battle with MFtastick. Got me thinkin you droppin shrooms
You lost to Doctor Dog. What Makes you think you can fuck with Doctor Doom?
nice, u did ya hw. so this hit more than it could/should of otherwise
Fraze, i'm on to you, show up to one of your poetry jams. loaded 9, splittin' tops
Stand up and cock back, start snappin' in the crowd.. I ain't giving props.
ok cool
Should I Give him the chopper?, or let the .45 unload clips.
Toss my shooter the colt. full clip tellem hold this
in this type of battle this type of line seems like a waste bro.
Empty the k, but he still breathin'. i just blew out his whole chest
Now i gotta rely on the fif.. feel like a Chapelle Show sketch
i saw all the chapelle show but im not getting this bar b...maybe its too vague iunno
Nigga i got a Gun so big, Puffy dance in the back when i shoot it
And the silencer sound like librarians when dudes in the back actin stupid
lol this shit dope af
I got another gun so big... nigga.. I don't even know how to use it
But He get the point when I pull/apple and hit the top of his head. Sir Isaac Newton
wp might be alil forced but this shit creative and cool
Your name landed on my desk. so i went to Netcees.. undercover
Knew nothing about him. but it didn't take long to see hes as tough as Usher
this weak bro, its filler. it dont help ur verse
Studied this bitch, so i cant believe him when he say he clutch the thunder
Its like Animorphs. So when he turns into an animal, its just a cover.
creative ass angle man, not so much a harsh diss but it was fly

@fraze

Originally Posted by fraze

you had me fucked up with those timezones Lars. my bad on posting late.

this little fuck would have to run and jump to see me im the king ape
got the hammer on deck and i’m unloading barrels like the original DK
this is dope, i was thinking of a line like this this week, props
i got a rasp and ill split stic in half… but this ain’t woodshop class
this is MF Doom. now your face in that metal…. but it ain’t a prop mask
hmm this is dope, both yall did a doom line lol i forgot mf doome existed, makes MF opener even doper to me, but this is dope too
these comical web tales of you poppin off from the wrist with a weapon?
who’d believe your peter parker fibs. lizman bodied you in a cypher session
angle is cool but execution was lacking here
who gassed this mother fucker up? on my life i cannot handle this.
you’re the worst murda sho knockoff i’ve seen since CSI: Los Angeles
lol ok thats cool, they dont know who murda sho is so it might be a miss to rmbva guys but i dig it
fuck tha bullshit….

no matter what weapons you brandish, you simply don’t stand any chance
my skill is disarming. i won’t just get rid of stic... your whole site’ll leave with empty hands
angle cool wording was too long winded b
ya bitch gives fire knowledge. prometheus. so i cum bust on her lipskin
stic is no match to me… but these violent strikes will make his head combust from friction
dope
when this kenpo blow to the temple leaves you on your knees doubled over
you won’t have a prayer... but you don’t need one... after this verse you’ll meet jehovah
light
i’m a living breathing massacre… in my wake is a trail of bodied amateurs
you’ll have dismantled remains in your wake… and a sign that says: “Please No Cameras”
nah

damn this shit hard to call

I LOVVVVVED MF gun so big library line, that shit was lotb. that shit was BONKERS


but I dont like the fact he threw 4 lines away with filler
that shit cost him the battle to me here


mf i will be peeping ya shit from now on my g it was hard
but fraze just used his whole clip where as u shot 2 in the air

fraze struggled with wording at times but his angles was crisp and he only really totally missed 1 time. mf missed at least 2 clean and had some other eh material in there


dope battle props to both repp to both

v/fraze

[puravida]

Originally Posted by MFtastick

You taking a battle with MFtastick. Got me thinkin you droppin shrooms
You lost to Doctor Dog. What Makes you think you can fuck with Doctor Doom?
Not feeling this.
Fraze, i'm on to you, show up to one of your poetry jams. loaded 9, splittin' tops
Stand up and cock back, start snappin' in the crowd.. I ain't giving props.
[COLOR="rgb(152, 251, 152)"]okay, I see you.[/COLOR]
Should I Give him the chopper?, or let the .45 unload clips.
Toss my shooter the colt. full clip tellem hold this
[COLOR="rgb(152, 251, 152)"]nah[/COLOR]
Empty the k, but he still breathin'. i just blew out his whole chest
Now i gotta rely on the fif.. feel like a Chapelle Show sketch
[COLOR="rgb(152, 251, 152)"]eh not bad[/COLOR]
Nigga i got a Gun so big, Puffy dance in the back when i shoot it
And the silencer sound like librarians when dudes in the back actin stupid
[COLOR="rgb(152, 251, 152)"]damn, this could have been worded out SO MUCH BETTER :([/COLOR]
I got another gun so big... nigga.. I don't even know how to use it
But He get the point when I pull/apple and hit the top of his head. Sir Isaac Newton
[COLOR="rgb(152, 251, 152)"]I see the concept. your wording is hurting it[/COLOR]
Your name landed on my desk. so i went to Netcees.. undercover
Knew nothing about him. but it didn't take long to see hes as tough as Usher
[COLOR="rgb(152, 251, 152)"]nahhhhh[/COLOR]
Studied this bitch, so i cant believe him when he say he clutch the thunder
Its like Animorphs. So when he turns into an animal, its just a cover.
[COLOR="rgb(152, 251, 152)"]I remember this. decent line[/COLOR]
@fraze

Originally Posted by fraze

you had me fucked up with those timezones Lars. my bad on posting late.

this little fuck would have to run and jump to see me im the king ape
got the hammer on deck and i’m unloading barrels like the original DK

nicely worded.
i got a rasp and ill split stic in half… but this ain’t woodshop class
this is MF Doom. now your face in that metal…. but it ain’t a prop mask
[COLOR="rgb(0, 191, 255)"]good[/COLOR]
these comical web tales of you poppin off from the wrist with a weapon?
who’d believe your peter parker fibs. lizman bodied you in a cypher session
[COLOR="rgb(0, 191, 255)"]okay.[/COLOR]
who gassed this mother fucker up? on my life i cannot handle this.
you’re the worst murda sho knockoff i’ve seen since CSI: Los Angeles
[COLOR="rgb(0, 191, 255)"]i'm diggin it[/COLOR]

fuck tha bullshit….

no matter what weapons you brandish, you simply don’t stand any chance
my skill is disarming. i won’t just get rid of stic... your whole site’ll leave with empty hands
[COLOR="rgb(0, 191, 255)"]nah not feeling it.[/COLOR]
ya bitch gives fire knowledge. prometheus. so i cum bust on her lipskin
stic is no match to me… but these violent strikes will make his head combust from friction
[COLOR="rgb(0, 191, 255)"]ooooh not bad.[/COLOR]
when this kenpo blow to the temple leaves you on your knees doubled over
you won’t have a prayer... but you don’t need one... after this verse you’ll meet jehovah
[COLOR="rgb(0, 191, 255)"]eh not feeling it.[/COLOR]
i’m a living breathing massacre… in my wake is a trail of bodied amateurs
you’ll have dismantled remains in your wake… and a sign that says: “Please No Cameras”

[COLOR="rgb(0, 191, 255)"]not feeling it[/COLOR]

my decision is pretty much based on who had the best wording. I feel like Fraze structured his bars better. my vote goes to Fraze.

[jilti]

You taking a battle with MFtastick. Got me thinkin you droppin shrooms
You lost to Doctor Dog. What Makes you think you can fuck with Doctor Doom?
solid opener
Fraze, i'm on to you, show up to one of your poetry jams. loaded 9, splittin' tops
Stand up and cock back, start snappin' in the crowd.. I ain't giving props.
dope
Should I Give him the chopper?, or let the .45 unload clips.
Toss my shooter the colt. full clip tellem hold this
not really
Empty the k, but he still breathin'. i just blew out his whole chest
Now i gotta rely on the fif.. feel like a Chapelle Show sketch
cool
Nigga i got a Gun so big, Puffy dance in the back when i shoot it
And the silencer sound like librarians when dudes in the back actin stupid
lotb
I got another gun so big... nigga.. I don't even know how to use it
But He get the point when I pull/apple and hit the top of his head. Sir Isaac Newton
too much of a stretch with i pull/apple
Your name landed on my desk. so i went to Netcees.. undercover
Knew nothing about him. but it didn't take long to see hes as tough as Usher
not feeling
Studied this bitch, so i cant believe him when he say he clutch the thunder
Its like Animorphs. So when he turns into an animal, its just a cover.
ok

Started strong, kinda lost steam towards the end. Good shit tho



Vs.



this little fuck would have to run and jump to see me im the king ape
got the hammer on deck and i’m unloading barrels like the original DK
ok
i got a rasp and ill split stic in half… but this ain’t woodshop class
this is MF Doom. now your face in that metal…. but it ain’t a prop mask
im sure there have been many MF Doom lines flipped on him but this was nice
these comical web tales of you poppin off from the wrist with a weapon?
who’d believe your peter parker fibs. lizman bodied you in a cypher session
ok
who gassed this mother fucker up? on my life i cannot handle this.
you’re the worst murda sho knockoff i’ve seen since CSI: Los Angeles
nothing new in a murda sho/ csi concept but it flowed smoothly. However still a miss
no matter what weapons you brandish, you simply don’t stand any chance
my skill is disarming. i won’t just get rid of stic... your whole site’ll leave with empty hands
liked this
ya bitch gives fire knowledge. prometheus. so i cum bust on her lipskin
stic is no match to me… but these violent strikes will make his head combust from friction
nice
when this kenpo blow to the temple leaves you on your knees doubled over
you won’t have a prayer... but you don’t need one... after this verse you’ll meet jehovah
lol
i’m a living breathing massacre… in my wake is a trail of bodied amateurs
you’ll have dismantled remains in your wake… and a sign that says: “Please No Cameras”
whew harsh

Good wording overall.





Soooo.. even tho Mf had the best 2 bars of the battle imo, im going with fraze on consistency & less misses

V-fraze

[Junto]

Fraze, i'm on to you, show up to one of your poetry jams. loaded 9, splittin' tops
Stand up and cock back, start snappin' in the crowd.. I ain't giving props.
gutter shit... I fuck wit it
Nigga i got a Gun so big, Puffy dance in the back when i shoot it
And the silencer sound like librarians when dudes in the back actin stupid
this is heat
I got another gun so big... nigga.. I don't even know how to use it
But He get the point when I pull/apple and hit the top of his head. Sir Isaac Newton
creative concept but "I pull/apple and hit" part wasn't smooth to me

vs.

this little fuck would have to run and jump to see me im the king ape
got the hammer on deck and i’m unloading barrels like the original DK
nice... wording coulda been better but I liked this
i got a rasp and ill split stic in half… but this ain’t woodshop class
this is MF Doom. now your face in that metal…. but it ain’t a prop mask
tough
ya bitch gives fire knowledge. prometheus. so i cum bust on her lipskin
stic is no match to me… but these violent strikes will make his head combust from friction
solid shit

MFTastick silencer joint was crazy, that's fire man. Snappin in the crowd was nice too.
There was a few bars I was scratchin my head though... Usher, Chapelle, & hold this
If it was 8 lines vs 8 I'd be givin it to MF. But those 3 took away from overall quality a lot
Fraze was consistent... unloading barrels & MF Doom was good, strike matches decent...
Murda sho was cool but not real fresh. A few others that were aight too but didn't hit as hard

This'll prolly be a close one... well I guess they all will but to me this one was real tough to judge
I got Fraze by a hair based on MF bigger misses & more effective execution on some
That librarian line was G shit though

V/ Fraze

[Greed]

You taking a battle with MFtastick. Got me thinkin you droppin shrooms
You lost to Doctor Dog. What Makes you think you can fuck with Doctor Doom?
Cool start

Fraze, i'm on to you, show up to one of your poetry jams. loaded 9, splittin' tops
Stand up and cock back, start snappin' in the crowd.. I ain't giving props.
Lol

Should I Give him the chopper?, or let the .45 unload clips.
Toss my shooter the colt. full clip tellem hold this
Empty the k, but he still breathin'. i just blew out his whole chest
Now i gotta rely on the fif.. feel like a Chapelle Show sketch
Lol okay

Nigga i got a Gun so big, Puffy dance in the back when i shoot it
And the silencer sound like librarians when dudes in the back actin stupid
Sickk

I got another gun so big... nigga.. I don't even know how to use it
But He get the point when I pull/apple and hit the top of his head. Sir Isaac Newton
Cool idea. Super Reach

Your name landed on my desk. so i went to Netcees.. undercover
Knew nothing about him. but it didn't take long to see hes as tough as Usher
Nah

Studied this bitch, so i cant believe him when he say he clutch the thunder
Its like Animorphs. So when he turns into an animal its just cover
Light




you had me fucked up with those timezones Lars. my bad on posting late.

this little fuck would have to run and jump to see me im the king ape
got the hammer on deck and i’m unloading barrels like the original DK
Okay

i got a rasp and ill split stic in half… but this ain’t woodshop class
this is MF Doom. now your face in that metal…. but it ain’t a prop mask
Cool

these comical web tales of you poppin off from the wrist with a weapon?
who’d believe your peter parker fibs. lizman bodied you in a cypher session
Lool

who gassed this mother fucker up? on my life i cannot handle this.
you’re the worst murda sho knockoff i’ve seen since CSI: Los Angeles
Lol ok

fuck tha bullshit….

no matter what weapons you brandish, you simply don’t stand any chance
my skill is disarming. i won’t just get rid of stic... your whole site’ll leave with empty hands
Cool

ya bitch gives fire knowledge. prometheus. so i cum bust on her lipskin
stic is no match to me… but these violent strikes will make his head combust from friction
Nice

when this kenpo blow to the temple leaves you on your knees doubled over
you won’t have a prayer... but you don’t need one... after this verse you’ll meet jehovah
Solid

i’m a living breathing massacre… in my wake is a trail of bodied amateurs
you’ll have dismantled remains in your wake… and a sign that says: “Please No Cameras”
Solid close


Lotb obviously the librarian line but too much filler from mf

V fraze

[Ghost1]

this little fuck would have to run and jump to see me im the king ape
got the hammer on deck and i’m unloading barrels like the original DK

Lol played.

i got a rasp and ill split stic in half… but this ain’t woodshop class
this is MF Doom. now your face in that metal…. but it ain’t a prop mask

This is dope.

these comical web tales of you poppin off from the wrist with a weapon?
who’d believe your peter parker fibs. lizman bodied you in a cypher session

Peter parker Web stuff is wild.played....poppin off from the wrist was a fresh twist on it tho...also the lizman tie in was cool....I don't think that's the bad guys name tho? Idk....Imma give u this one. Nice.

who gassed this mother fucker up? on my life i cannot handle this.
you’re the worst murda sho knockoff i’ve seen since CSI: Los Angeles

This is ok....murda sho flips r dumb played tho...even w the relevance I can't dig it.

fuck tha bullshit….

Oh no every1 look out!

no matter what weapons you brandish, you simply don’t stand any chance
my skill is disarming. i won’t just get rid of stic... your whole site’ll leave with empty hands

Disarming played....ttho leave w empty hands was a nice spin on it. I dug this.

ya bitch gives fire knowledge. prometheus. so i cum bust on her lipskin
stic is no match to me… but these violent strikes will make his head combust from friction

BLAT BLAT BLAT

when this kenpo blow to the temple leaves you on your knees doubled over
you won’t have a prayer... but you don’t need one... after this verse you’ll meet jehovah

PLAYED and wack to me.

i’m a living breathing massacre… in my wake is a trail of bodied amateurs
you’ll have dismantled remains in your wake… and a sign that says: “Please No Cameras”

U didn't do nothin here for me



You taking a battle with MFtastick. Got me thinkin you droppin shrooms
You lost to Doctor Dog. What Makes you think you can fuck with Doctor Doom?

DON DEMARCO

Fraze, i'm on to you, show up to one of your poetry jams. loaded 9, splittin' tops
Stand up and cock back, start snappin' in the crowd.. I ain't giving props.

this ain't much

Should I Give him the chopper?, or let the .45 unload clips.
Toss my shooter the colt. full clip tellem hold this
Empty the k, but he still breathin'. i just blew out his whole chest
Now i gotta rely on the fif.. feel like a Chapelle Show sketch

This was a cool segment. I remember the plead the 5th/fif sketch....I fucked w this.

Nigga i got a Gun so big, Puffy dance in the back when i shoot it
And the silencer sound like librarians when dudes in the back actin stupid

Lol wild swag on this.

I got another gun so big... nigga.. I don't even know how to use it
But He get the point when I pull/apple and hit the top of his head. Sir Isaac Newton

Cool....I pull apple isn't that much of a stretch to me....the part that was bad was it don't work both ways....U can't say....when apple an hit the top of his head....it's still cool but could've been cleaner

Your name landed on my desk. so i went to Netcees.. undercover
Knew nothing about him. but it didn't take long to see hes as tough as Usher
Studied this bitch, so i cant believe him when he say he clutch the thunder
Its like Animorphs. So when he turns into an animal, its just a cover.

Another 3 line set up punch. Honestly I'd love to write 3 line set ups for punches.....so I'm really diggin that u did it here........but if u gonna use 3 whole lines in a 16 line battle that punch better be fuckin crazy. To me this shit was not crazy. Wasn't even really good honestly lol.


All in all MF had my favorite bars of the battle.....he threw away alotve lines tho setting up punches that should've been way better then they turned out to be. I'd say MF prolly had the lotb but fraze landed more often.

V fraze