Week 5 - Innovator (2-2) vs. Frank (2-2) - FRANK WINS BY DQ

Certain · 10-21-2013, 11:40 AM

Season 2

Rules

Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST

Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST

Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree

Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread, preferably all in one post.

If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss. If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension.

Topic

Good luck @Innovator, @Frank

Inno · 10-25-2013, 11:36 PM

Envies Shadow

3 months after the surgery and I’ve reached victory?
I’m back to my old self with a new book and story
The doc said my head would heel fast so I no worries
good memories dont erase the past Ive endured for sure
It seems I’ve yet to reached a place thats safe and secure
but the voices are gone and now im bit less obscure
I should sleep....

The next night the breeze is cool the rain is making its way towards me
I fear if it rains to much ill lose myself in the tied from a coward’s sea
I shouldn’t have let them take you(but they didn’t) I find myself misconstrued
(don’t let them fool you, I’m still here they just wantt you to feel confused
And I’ll never let them disguise you, trust me ill never try to misguide you)
I shake my head I think I just heard a familiar voice from the past I pine over
It couldn’t be the doc said I was cured of the disease, but it seems it grinds slower
It grows bolder and spreads through my psyche like hell bent endorphins
Without my endorsement you leave my mind(shhh...dont say it, its not worth it)

you should sleep, (I should sleep).

....

...one way or another I’ll get through the walls of this prison
It’s only the righteous thing for me to be in the lead position
And put in motion the very thing that fuels this inner schism
I’ll use your body as a prism and project myself with optimism
This is a self exorcism I have rights too, I think ill exercise them
And cut through the surface so my pours can finally breathe
With a swift precision I assume the incisions that will set me free

(I awake in cold dark room with one window and a foul stench
With a single chair and letters on the walls that spelled out revenge
In the mist of my confusing I admitted to myself that I knew
What was going on and I wasn’t surprised when I realized it was you
When my vision went askew and I lost my bearings in that sea
And I was a coward because I knew this would happen to me
Now I sit in this empty room watching myself through my eyes
Bring a repressed reincarnation that will only cast my demise
With no control of the situation and lost in my own disillusion
Soon I’m set for a conclusion in which I wish I had no inclusion
So I sit here, lonely looking out this window that manifest my death
sitting in the backseat of my thoughts is a fight for every breath)

Frank · 10-26-2013, 02:54 AM

knife, keys, wrist watch..
white tee's, flip flops..
light green, zip lock..
i.d..
ticket..
lets get this trip tick tocked!
hip-hop, cell phone, gel, cologne..
missin sutin’ -
dell, dutches, comb, rubba's...?

(Somebody about to give instructions)

Captain speaking
this you captain speaking -

”thank you for making reservations with bay cruise..
we hope your hungry this morning, we're in preparation of bagels..
whether, your here with us on vacation or celebration - please stay tune..
this is your mate. Jesus .
your destination await you''

(forecast)

'it's a beautiful day for bathing suits –
lively 82 degrees, warm breeze from the northeast –
sky - baby blue..
weather might be too perfect with spring training & these yankees due..
now down to stacy with more info on the trading views..
FRANKY! Your not going to believe the fire in this ace's fuse!

***we interrupt this broadcast to bring you breaking news***

WHAT YOU WILL NOW SEE IN A MATTER OF MOMENTS
IS THE HUGEST STORM EVER CAPTURED ON A CAMERAS FOCUS!
THESE EXCLUSIVE PICTURES WERE TAKEN BY A MAN ON HIS ROAD TRIP
WHO SAYS, HE WAS JUST PACKIN' WHEN HE GLANCED AT THE OCEAN
"MAN, I WAS JUST ADDIN' MY LOTION, WHEN I HAPPENED TO NOTICE
A WAVE ENGULFIN' THE PIER – I STARTED LAUGHING LIKE,
OH SHIT!
BY THE TIME I GOT OUTSIDE, WOOD WAS SHATTERED & BROKEN,
SCATTERED & FLOATIN - I NEVER EVER SAW THE ATLANTIC LOOK SO DIM!"
TO THOSE WATCHIN' SAFELY FROM YOUR CHANNELS AT HOME
IT'S YA BEST BET NOT TO TRAVEL IN THIS HAVOC IT'S HOPELESS!!!

I had BIG in the walk-man
I was getting ready to walk when -
It started raining cats & dogs an..
I still had the bagel, in my hand, about to spread the margarine
fog made it's way in a light wind -
waves -
startin' to sway..
it was frightenin'
...looked like a million blunts of haze in a cyph
when the deck couldn’t be seen without occasional lightnin!

out of no where the sky transformed, it got dry then warm
everybody poked they heads out, surprised by it all
precipitation on the screen glided along
as everybody gathered 'round me in the eye of the storm

Geno · 10-26-2013, 12:14 PM

Innovator had a cool story, lacked mechanics throughout and that's really crushing him here.

Frank came in with more class and just breezed through this imo.
Easy win for frank.

Jusst so you know, I'm here for you, old pal. It won't be a case of the no shows this time

Certain · 10-27-2013, 01:40 AM

I'm not sure if this is recycling or biting, though I'm guessing it's the former:

http://rapisalive.com/archive/index.php/t-14910.html

@Innovator @Mike Wrecka @Frank

In case anything happens to that link, I took a screen capture: http://i.imgur.com/zo9NmM7.png

10-21-2013, 11:40 AM	#1
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	Week 5 - Innovator (2-2) vs. Frank (2-2) - FRANK WINS BY DQ Season 2 Rules Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread, preferably all in one post. If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss. If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension. Topic Good luck @Innovator, @Frank __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-25-2013, 11:36 PM	#2
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Envies Shadow 3 months after the surgery and I’ve reached victory? I’m back to my old self with a new book and story The doc said my head would heel fast so I no worries good memories dont erase the past Ive endured for sure It seems I’ve yet to reached a place thats safe and secure but the voices are gone and now im bit less obscure I should sleep.... The next night the breeze is cool the rain is making its way towards me I fear if it rains to much ill lose myself in the tied from a coward’s sea I shouldn’t have let them take you(but they didn’t) I find myself misconstrued (don’t let them fool you, I’m still here they just wantt you to feel confused And I’ll never let them disguise you, trust me ill never try to misguide you) I shake my head I think I just heard a familiar voice from the past I pine over It couldn’t be the doc said I was cured of the disease, but it seems it grinds slower It grows bolder and spreads through my psyche like hell bent endorphins Without my endorsement you leave my mind(shhh...dont say it, its not worth it) you should sleep, (I should sleep). .... ...one way or another I’ll get through the walls of this prison It’s only the righteous thing for me to be in the lead position And put in motion the very thing that fuels this inner schism I’ll use your body as a prism and project myself with optimism This is a self exorcism I have rights too, I think ill exercise them And cut through the surface so my pours can finally breathe With a swift precision I assume the incisions that will set me free (I awake in cold dark room with one window and a foul stench With a single chair and letters on the walls that spelled out revenge In the mist of my confusing I admitted to myself that I knew What was going on and I wasn’t surprised when I realized it was you When my vision went askew and I lost my bearings in that sea And I was a coward because I knew this would happen to me Now I sit in this empty room watching myself through my eyes Bring a repressed reincarnation that will only cast my demise With no control of the situation and lost in my own disillusion Soon I’m set for a conclusion in which I wish I had no inclusion So I sit here, lonely looking out this window that manifest my death sitting in the backseat of my thoughts is a fight for every breath) Last edited by Inno; 10-25-2013 at 11:39 PM.

10-26-2013, 02:54 AM	#3
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	100% chance of rain knife, keys, wrist watch.. white tee's, flip flops.. light green, zip lock.. i.d.. ticket.. lets get this trip tick tocked! hip-hop, cell phone, gel, cologne.. missin sutin’ - dell, dutches, comb, rubba's...? (Somebody about to give instructions) Captain speaking this you captain speaking - ”thank you for making reservations with bay cruise.. we hope your hungry this morning, we're in preparation of bagels.. whether, your here with us on vacation or celebration - please stay tune.. this is your mate. Jesus . your destination await you'' (forecast) 'it's a beautiful day for bathing suits – lively 82 degrees, warm breeze from the northeast – sky - baby blue.. weather might be too perfect with spring training & these yankees due.. now down to stacy with more info on the trading views.. FRANKY! Your not going to believe the fire in this ace's fuse! *we interrupt this broadcast to bring you breaking news* WHAT YOU WILL NOW SEE IN A MATTER OF MOMENTS IS THE HUGEST STORM EVER CAPTURED ON A CAMERAS FOCUS! THESE EXCLUSIVE PICTURES WERE TAKEN BY A MAN ON HIS ROAD TRIP WHO SAYS, HE WAS JUST PACKIN' WHEN HE GLANCED AT THE OCEAN "MAN, I WAS JUST ADDIN' MY LOTION, WHEN I HAPPENED TO NOTICE A WAVE ENGULFIN' THE PIER – I STARTED LAUGHING LIKE, OH SHIT! BY THE TIME I GOT OUTSIDE, WOOD WAS SHATTERED & BROKEN, SCATTERED & FLOATIN - I NEVER EVER SAW THE ATLANTIC LOOK SO DIM!" TO THOSE WATCHIN' SAFELY FROM YOUR CHANNELS AT HOME IT'S YA BEST BET NOT TO TRAVEL IN THIS HAVOC IT'S HOPELESS!!! I had BIG in the walk-man I was getting ready to walk when - It started raining cats & dogs an.. I still had the bagel, in my hand, about to spread the margarine fog made it's way in a light wind - waves - startin' to sway.. it was frightenin' ...looked like a million blunts of haze in a cyph when the deck couldn’t be seen without occasional lightnin! out of no where the sky transformed, it got dry then warm everybody poked they heads out, surprised by it all precipitation on the screen glided along as everybody gathered 'round me in the eye of the storm __________________ *VETWORK* Last edited by Frank; 10-26-2013 at 04:09 AM.

10-26-2013, 12:14 PM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,328 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Innovator had a cool story, lacked mechanics throughout and that's really crushing him here. Frank came in with more class and just breezed through this imo. Easy win for frank. Jusst so you know, I'm here for you, old pal. It won't be a case of the no shows this time __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

10-27-2013, 01:40 AM	#5
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	I'm not sure if this is recycling or biting, though I'm guessing it's the former: http://rapisalive.com/archive/index.php/t-14910.html @Innovator @Mike Wrecka @Frank In case anything happens to that link, I took a screen capture: http://i.imgur.com/zo9NmM7.png __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws. Last edited by Certain; 10-27-2013 at 01:44 AM.