11-12-2013, 02:14 PM | #1 |
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Plot vs. Unfukwitable - UNFUKWITABLE WINS
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Week 4 Due Tuesday, November 19th Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You must vote on 4 battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Plot @UNFUKWITABLE
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11-12-2013, 03:26 PM | #2 |
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11-13-2013, 12:08 AM | #3 |
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11-19-2013, 11:51 PM | #4 |
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Ext tomorrow?...
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11-20-2013, 01:34 AM | #5 |
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11-20-2013, 11:09 PM | #6 |
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Plot aka Dystopian
. . I viewed your songs & what I heard was the proof that avenging honest Abe's death couldn't help you murder a Booth . It's no need to toss hooks against the crap he's speaking, I'll just come with enough Pun jabs to over populate a Paki region . I Got this down to every nook & cranny fag.. Btw I seen the way his face looks in hairy snatch So I guess the last time I seen Dys ability in Flat bush wasn't a Brooklyn handicap. It's no growth of interest in his lines, It seems he can't advance his skills So if the plot thickens it's only due to male enhancement pills Ray beat phlegm out'em using B+ bars & left his vague speech dimmed & this drop is more of a Rayge A+... It makes Ye's teeth cringe (Ray J plus) Last edited by Unfukwitable; 11-21-2013 at 01:40 AM. |
11-21-2013, 11:31 AM | #7 |
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You’re a disgrace to humanity son, so I have to clown on you viciously,
And then it's like euthanizing Aids sufferers, wit the ‘unfuckable’ put out of it’s misery. With a creative artillery, see the gag reflexes as I’m snuffing this joke, You’ll think your choking vodkas when I get all these screwdrivers stuck in your throat. Weak and pretentious you aint delivering dope, Yo this geeks a pretender, And Plot’ll get you back pedalling down the street quicker than repeat offenders. Seen your battle in the booth with Phuck Yew, both verses sucked, it was de ja vu, And it’s got 1 vote in over a month! So I guess Netcees couldn’t give 2 fucks about you. Give up life man, your no good at it, just lame fake who can’t grasp the game state, So its time to go ahead and kwit faggot, we can all see it’s the centre of your namesake. Last edited by Plot; 11-21-2013 at 11:57 AM. |
11-21-2013, 12:02 PM | #8 |
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I Got this down to every nook & cranny fag.. Btw I seen the way his face looks in hairy snatch
So I guess the last time I seen Dys ability in Flat bush wasn't a Brooklyn handicap. It's no growth of interest in his lines, It seems he can't advance his skills So if the plot thickens it's only due to male enhancement pills Ray beat phlegm out'em using B+ bars & left his vague speech dimmed & this drop is more of a Rayge A+... It makes Ye's teeth cringe ^i liked this the creativity was there the direction was there and it read very smoothly.. vs You’re a disgrace to humanity son, so I have to clown on you viciously, And like euthanizing Aids sufferers, put the ‘unfuckable’ out of it’s misery. Seen your battle in the booth with Phuck Yew, both verses sucked, it was de ja vu, And it’s got 1 vote in over a month! So I guess Netcees couldn’t give 2 fucks about you. . ^the middle 4 lines where very basic and played .. screw driver punches the back pedalling was decent .. the closer was a stretch.. Vote- Fuk wit me! |
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I thought this was a pretty one sided battle. Plot's verse wasn't bad, but the Fuck's wordplay really connected and his wording was better all around. He also really didn't have any misses besides the closer, IMO. Pretty good showing from both of you. Vote - Un |
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11-21-2013, 05:37 PM | #10 |
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I viewed your songs & what I heard was the proof
that avenging honest Abe's death couldn't help you murder a Booth this was cool. I've actually heard a john wilks booth/booth line before, but everything's been said It's no need to toss hooks against the crap he's speaking, I'll just come with enough Pun jabs to over populate a Paki region meh...I've seen this concept used and worded much more effectively I Got this down to every nook & cranny fag.. Btw I seen the way his face looks in hairy snatch So I guess the last time I seen Dys ability in Flat bush wasn't a Brooklyn handicap. Flat bush concept could've been cool, but dis ability thing is played It's no growth of interest in his lines, It seems he can't advance his skills So if the plot thickens it's only due to male enhancement pills not feeling this one at all tbh Ray beat phlegm out'em using B+ bars & left his vague speech dimmed & this drop is more of a Rayge A+... It makes Ye's teeth cringe Wordings a bit funky, but this is a cool concept You’re a disgrace to humanity son, so I have to clown on you viciously, And then it's like euthanizing Aids sufferers, wit the ‘unfuckable’ put out of it’s misery. not really feeling this at all tbh. Plus his name isnt unfuckable With a creative artillery, see the gag reflexes as I’m snuffing this joke, You’ll think your choking vodkas when I get all these screwdrivers stuck in your throat. okay Weak and pretentious you aint delivering dope, Yo this geeks a pretender, And Plot’ll get you back pedalling down the street quicker than repeat offenders. Cool concept..not sure if it hits as hard as it couldve though Seen your battle in the booth with Phuck Yew, both verses sucked, it was de ja vu, And it’s got 1 vote in over a month! So I guess Netcees couldn’t give 2 fucks about you. Funny, but also kinda fillerish Give up life man, your no good at it, just lame fake who can’t grasp the game state, So its time to go ahead and kwit faggot, we can all see it’s the centre of your namesake. Not feeling this one at all Overall, it was kinda close-ish but not really. Fuk's general execution was much smoother, even though i felt like his concepts couldve been fresher - plot just kind of forced a couple things in that didnt fit and didnt have quite as many jabs MVGT - Unfukwitable |
11-21-2013, 05:46 PM | #11 |
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Unfuk murdered it
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11-22-2013, 03:54 AM | #12 |
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I think this battle was actually quite close, some of the concepts were a bit obvious from both verses but I can see that there is room for growth from you two. The style has changed from Unfuckwitable I can see he's adapted and took a different approach.. I think for the most part it works for you but you have to make sure the concepts are worded to give you more of a direct hit. Plot your verse was not bad.. Your opponent had a little more on this occasion though..
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11-24-2013, 11:10 AM | #13 |
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opener, enhancement vs plot screwdriver, 2 fucks v/un...better misses |
11-25-2013, 09:19 AM | #14 |
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@Unfukwitable, the opener was a good start. I've seen the Abe/Booth concept done before but connecting it personally gave it an added boost. Wasn't too keen on the second bar. Came off more statementish than a direct punch. The third bar- the set up was overly stretched. It really took away from the flow that you had going with the previous lines. But I liked the wordplay/punch connection though. Very nice. Fourth bar was solid, I'll give it props because of the nameplay tied into it. Could've closed out better though. I see where you were going with it, but it didn't hit for me.
@Plot, opener was generic to me. I feel you missed out on the nameplay connection you were going for, but the concept wasn't really impressive either way. Second bar, okay at the least. Wording is my issue here, as it doesn't come off smoothly. Again, the concept "vodka/choking/screwdriver" could have worked if it read better but also, you could have done it probably even better. Third bar, damn it's missing something. Doesn't have that sting, but out of what you had previously, this looks like your best line thus far. Just okay. Not really feeling your fourth bar. Would have been a solid hit being you aimed for a personal, but the wording was a bit off and then the punch itself didn't really hit here either. I have to say your closing bar also missed. Wording is off and again, the punch here didn't connect at all. I feel Unfukwitable had a pretty solid verse over his opponent in this one. The Dys/ability line was probably the LOTB for me but aside from that everything else seemed to connect, except the closer which I feel was the only miss. Plot could have made this much closer, but some wording issues and misses on some concepts is his downfall here, imo. With that said, MVGT: Unfukwitable. Good job by both competitors. |
11-26-2013, 03:48 PM | #15 |
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