BLeS RoCK ONE-PoLiTE

Master Rock · 07-16-2013, 03:17 PM

What up Netcees...
Yo this eReCK..AKA MaSTER ROCK..
This is my first Directorial Debut with a Music Vid..
Introducing BLeS RoCK ONE...
I Hope yall digg it..
PEACE..

Lecture · 07-16-2013, 04:02 PM

Basic rhyme scheme.
No flavor to it really, you need to work on your flow control.

Pronunciation is a must work on.

Next time send it to be mixed & mastered.

Or at least do it yourself.

Pyro · 07-16-2013, 04:05 PM

^pretty much nailed it.. def needs mixing..

Geno · 07-16-2013, 08:47 PM

werd to what the above said. good to see you doing something, keep working

Master Rock · 07-17-2013, 02:56 AM

word thanks on the feedback..
I directed this video for my friend, however I did record this track for him on the laptop..

mixed and mastered?
Maybe someone can be more in-depth about what I should do to improve the mixing and mastering of the audio, because I winged it.

But for real thanks on the feedback..

TYSON · 07-17-2013, 03:32 AM

Not bad tbh

Ronic · 07-17-2013, 04:22 AM

On the real dog, you need to stop with the lettErS LiKe tHiS, that shit is gay as fuck.

On the audio ya keys n strings should be low in the mix, nothin should sit above the vocals yo. EQ the vox add some shine roll off the low end under about 300Hz to make more room for ya bass n kick. Kick should sit around the 40-100Hz area n needs more punch. Try to roll off the bass (even better sidechain it to the kick) so that ya bass n kick dont blend together yo. Def need more lo end in ya mix, biggest two problems is ya levels n air in tha vox son. Get that shit n your on your way to an aight sound.

Master Rock · 07-17-2013, 01:15 PM

Thanks for the feedback Ronic..I'm definitely going to consider not doing that with the letters, I not trying to come off as a homo...NO WAY!

But yea bro this is really detailed and can definitely help me...

Oh and be the way yall, this be is a Madlib beat off that track "Fallin"..

So I didn't produce the track, I just recorded it and work on the level of his voice and attempted to blend it in...Next track I aim at mixing and mastering..

On the real...thanks bro..

Ronic · 07-17-2013, 07:26 PM

@Master Rock that explains why the keys n strings the main focus in the mix then, you right. How'd you record the vox man?

Master Rock · 08-27-2013, 05:41 PM

My bad for getting back at u late...but yea..i used that magix software to record the vox...I'm finishing up the next project right now..it should be finished by next month..I jumped on the track with bles..it should be promising..if ur a graff head..its definitely for u..

07-16-2013, 04:02 PM	#2
Lecture The Playground Bully Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 292 Battle Record: 3-5 Rep Power: 34	Basic rhyme scheme. No flavor to it really, you need to work on your flow control. Pronunciation is a must work on. Next time send it to be mixed & mastered. Or at least do it yourself. __________________ creativity, effortless while to yall it be a chore bars be fucking ugly to the point ill nik-A could even score

07-16-2013, 04:05 PM	#3
Pyro Shunnin Da Chillins Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 151 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 34	^pretty much nailed it.. def needs mixing.. __________________ Soundcloud Strawberry Pineapples Cuhh

07-16-2013, 08:47 PM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,328 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	werd to what the above said. good to see you doing something, keep working __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

07-17-2013, 02:56 AM	#5
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,331 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599638	word thanks on the feedback.. I directed this video for my friend, however I did record this track for him on the laptop.. mixed and mastered? Maybe someone can be more in-depth about what I should do to improve the mixing and mastering of the audio, because I winged it. But for real thanks on the feedback..

07-17-2013, 03:32 AM	#6
TYSON IN LOVE WITH A STRIPPER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,985 Battle Record: 10-15 Rep Power: 23089119	Not bad tbh

07-17-2013, 04:22 AM	#7
Ronic Blood and Hunger Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 191 Battle Record: 2-4 Rep Power: 412353	On the real dog, you need to stop with the lettErS LiKe tHiS, that shit is gay as fuck. On the audio ya keys n strings should be low in the mix, nothin should sit above the vocals yo. EQ the vox add some shine roll off the low end under about 300Hz to make more room for ya bass n kick. Kick should sit around the 40-100Hz area n needs more punch. Try to roll off the bass (even better sidechain it to the kick) so that ya bass n kick dont blend together yo. Def need more lo end in ya mix, biggest two problems is ya levels n air in tha vox son. Get that shit n your on your way to an aight sound.

07-17-2013, 01:15 PM	#8
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,331 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599638	Thanks for the feedback Ronic..I'm definitely going to consider not doing that with the letters, I not trying to come off as a homo...NO WAY! But yea bro this is really detailed and can definitely help me... Oh and be the way yall, this be is a Madlib beat off that track "Fallin".. So I didn't produce the track, I just recorded it and work on the level of his voice and attempted to blend it in...Next track I aim at mixing and mastering.. On the real...thanks bro..

07-17-2013, 07:26 PM	#9
Ronic Blood and Hunger Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 191 Battle Record: 2-4 Rep Power: 412353	@Master Rock that explains why the keys n strings the main focus in the mix then, you right. How'd you record the vox man?

08-27-2013, 05:41 PM	#10
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,331 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599638	My bad for getting back at u late...but yea..i used that magix software to record the vox...I'm finishing up the next project right now..it should be finished by next month..I jumped on the track with bles..it should be promising..if ur a graff head..its definitely for u..