12-11-2013, 09:33 AM | #21 |
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I concur with Aeros breakdown, Boredom takes this one.
Better concepts, and wording. Plus the dope/meth line was a no-no. |
12-11-2013, 06:46 PM | #22 |
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V bore
Tic last 4 were decent but bore had better misses |
12-11-2013, 07:02 PM | #23 |
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I liked that morgue line tbh, I think it was the best one here, I've seen the chicken tender line done differently and that was tics best, meh I guess I got boredom
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12-11-2013, 08:35 PM | #24 |
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Hi...
& ur a fruit who uses fruits as sex toys /w boys. This is a fact Tic Tac’d love to get that melanin and I don’t mean wishing he was black This whack fuckers stunned, w/ played concepts that lack something son Faggot u could un intentionally champ that tourney chyeaa wants to run. I think you started off weak and ended strong... Melanin was your best line... Chyeaa and toe tag line were cool but the wording was off... He's known to skip out when anyone approaches this fag His skill is always in question, so we don't need to go back to the 90s to notice Sinbad Kid has the worst ideas, that's why no one posts in his threads He never shuts up, and even when he tried to keep Hush, got outspoken instead Check his 'record,' on Black Friday he'd be hard-pressed to find a deal Cut your losses and quit, Hank, cuz the only time you'll gain points w/ text is behind the wheel Think u started off strong and trailed off in the end... Boars head was a complete miss... All around your wording was off in some places but I liked were u were going with your concepts... Tic was more consistent.... Vote- Tic Tac... Bye...
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12-12-2013, 01:03 PM | #25 |
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12-12-2013, 04:10 PM | #27 |
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Long bar dont count for
Shit to me if that's what your reffering to but sure... Last edited by Boredom; 12-12-2013 at 04:12 PM. |
12-12-2013, 06:04 PM | #28 |
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