Dominate vs. Grave Diggs {Dominate wins}

[Sn00p]

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  February 28th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
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@Dominate @Grave Diggs

[Dominate]

Sup.

10.

[Grave Diggs]

10 sounds good to me.. See ya soon!

[Dominate]

Just letting u know ima prolly need an ext. til friday night PST, but I'll def show. Sorry - during the week is super busy for me. Hope that's cool

[Grave Diggs]

Booty Goo.. Booty Goo.. Dominate wonders what yo Booty Do!

As my sexy young ass zooms by you, all you do is drool fool, please get this guy a bib
See he took Micheal Jackson's spot at the New Born's waiting room.. Dom's anxious for first dibs!
So do as I did, avoid him when he's trying to 'pull the trigger', don't be on his team
Cuz if you think you're beatin' me? Pffft Dom.. You woke up wit holes in ya chest...
You only had 'a shot in yo dreams'
Please believe I'll make fun of the way you post, it's hard not to mistake you for a queer
After this battle we should all vote... on Dominate changing his name to Domineer
Doesn't that sound more elegant? A perfect fit, for a bitch, that needs to act stronger
Just make sure you read my verse and edit proper, "hell wit it gurlll".......
"Let's make your 'extensions' even longer!!!"
I'm such a Cheech & Chonger, I forgot Snoop had me to lose, so I slouch
Well at least I fight my own battles, LOOK!... Dom's hiding out in that Kangaroo's pouch!

[Grave Diggs]

Ya the extension is all good here.

[Dominate]

Originally Posted by Sn00p

No Idea aka New or Alias:

Grave Diggs (0-0)

...

Dominate vs. Grave Diggs
Who: Dominate
How: 70-30
Why: Dominate is a known force. Quite good with wordplay.
Pretty creative. Technically sound.
But: Grave might be a good alias, because his name's not
too bad.

The incognito shits a bitch move, & u won’t get far for that effort whore
All having to Role w/ an Alias Show is that u failed to Garner respect before
& I can only start to describe how much ur a faggot that’s worthless
You wack, corny, lame as fuck... Engrave, - that just Scratches the Surface
When I roll up bitches is squealing – they see the whip & are instantly kneeling
Meanwhile... any Cardigin makes Eddie’s pink one look pretty appealing
Needs to elevate drastically, but he’s Camp as fuck & less than promising
If he’s growing by Leaps and Bounds they’re interspersed w/ Pirouettes & Frolicking
Faggot. I’ll damage ya chin, so here’s the outcome after I win kid
I’ll host a Shindig @ my Pad. U’ll be a tard who wears Pads on his Shins Digg

[Sn00p]

Up over noshows.

[~RustyGunZ~]

michael jackson jokes were lame and played before he even died...
the rest was just awful bro..

vs


When I roll up bitches is squealing – they see the whip & are instantly kneeling
Meanwhile... any Cardigin makes Eddie’s pink one look pretty appealing
Needs to elevate drastically, but he’s Camp as fuck & less than promising
If he’s growing by Leaps and Bounds they’re interspersed w/ Pirouettes & Frolicking
Faggot. I’ll damage ya chin, so here’s the outcome after I win kid
I’ll host a Shindig @ my Pad. U’ll be a tard who wears Pads on his Shins Digg

pretty dope, seen alias flips on the show before, one of the better ones but had to leave it unquoted, and the engrave nameplay was a dope concept but i just didn't love the wording. the rest was ill, leaps and bounds line leaned me

v/dom

[Allen Knight]

So do as I did, avoid him when he's trying to 'pull the trigger', don't be on his team
Cuz if you think you're beatin' me? Pffft Dom.. You woke up wit holes in ya chest...
You only had 'a shot in yo dreams'

Vs


& I can only start to describe how much ur a faggot that’s worthless
You wack, corny, lame as fuck... Engrave, - that just Scratches the Surface
Needs to elevate drastically, but he’s Camp as fuck & less than promising
If he’s growing by Leaps and Bounds they’re interspersed w/ Pirouettes & Frolicking
Faggot. I’ll damage ya chin, so here’s the outcome after I win kid
I’ll host a Shindig @ my Pad. U’ll be a tard who wears Pads on his Shins Digg

V/Dominate, this was a decent battle, i think dom took it wit alot more consistent verse imo
grave had that one bar it was cool the rest wasnt hitting or really creative tbh work on concepts,
dom engrave line was nice solid verse he gets my vote, props yah'll

[Hollywood]

engrave & shindig lines were the only lines I was feelin TBH

Dom clearly won w/ a better thought out verse overall, V/Dominate

[Vinzr]

So do as I did, avoid him when he's trying to 'pull the trigger', don't be on his team
Cuz if you think you're beatin' me? Pffft Dom.. You woke up wit holes in ya chest...
You only had 'a shot in yo dreams'

vs

& I can only start to describe how much ur a faggot that’s worthless
You wack, corny, lame as fuck... Engrave, - that just Scratches the Surface
Needs to elevate drastically, but he’s Camp as fuck & less than promising
If he’s growing by Leaps and Bounds they’re interspersed w/ Pirouettes & Frolicking
Faggot. I’ll damage ya chin, so here’s the outcome after I win kid
I’ll host a Shindig @ my Pad. U’ll be a tard who wears Pads on his Shins Digg

Dom just had this from the get go...had the better verse and this was one sided as fuk i thought. The one quote from Grave was the only one i thought hit. On the other hand i dug almost all of Dom's lines, had nice creativity on em

v/ Dominate

[Mac]

So do as I did, avoid him when he's trying to 'pull the trigger', don't be on his team
Cuz if you think you're beatin' me? Pffft Dom.. You woke up wit holes in ya chest...

vs

& I can only start to describe how much ur a faggot that’s worthless
You wack, corny, lame as fuck... Engrave, - that just Scratches the Surface
Needs to elevate drastically, but he’s Camp as fuck & less than promising
If he’s growing by Leaps and Bounds they’re interspersed w/ Pirouettes & Frolicking
Faggot. I’ll damage ya chin, so here’s the outcome after I win kid
I’ll host a Shindig @ my Pad. U’ll be a tard who wears Pads on his Shins Digg

pretty much an 1sided battle here. dominate came up with decent & creative verse overall. diggs had almost no hits or played lines overall.. so my vote is for dominate

[bleak]

Pretty one sided, I don't feel a full breakdown is necessary. Grave, you use a lot of pointless shit in your lines, that doesn't make sense with what you're trying to get across. I used to do the same thing. Keep it concise, and get as much across in as little words as possible. Dom had consistency, didn't need much to take it but still had a pretty decent verse. Had some cool wp's and used them effectively.

DOMINATE takes it pretty easily.

[RPK]

As my sexy young ass zooms by you, all you do is drool fool, please get this guy a bib
See he took Micheal Jackson's spot at the New Born's waiting room.. Dom's anxious for first dibs!
(Not a good punch, but LMAO at 'As my sexy young ass zooms by you')

vs.

& I can only start to describe how much ur a faggot that’s worthless
You wack, corny, lame as fuck... Engrave, - that just Scratches the Surface
Needs to elevate drastically, but he’s Camp as fuck & less than promising
If he’s growing by Leaps and Bounds they’re interspersed w/ Pirouettes & Frolicking
Faggot. I’ll damage ya chin, so here’s the outcome after I win kid
I’ll host a Shindig @ my Pad. U’ll be a tard who wears Pads on his Shins Digg

Thought this was pretty onesided. Liked a lot of Dom's bars. Grave didnt have ahything really.
V/Dominate

[El Muffin]

The incognito shits a bitch move, & u won’t get far for that effort whore
All having to Role w/ an Alias Show is that u failed to Garner respect before
& I can only start to describe how much ur a faggot that’s worthless
You wack, corny, lame as fuck... Engrave, - that just Scratches the Surface
Faggot. I’ll damage ya chin, so here’s the outcome after I win kid
I’ll host a Shindig @ my Pad. U’ll be a tard who wears Pads on his Shins Digg

thought for the most part dom went in..even the ones i didnt quote were passable..but lolz at shindig..

was hard to find a quoteble in other dudes verse..even the shot in your dreams jawn is quite used..iono

v/dom