MFTastick vs Jilti - Jilti wins

Ghost1 · 07-27-2016, 04:13 PM

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MFtastick · 07-28-2016, 03:06 AM

Dope. im going 12 fam. good or you tryna write more? @jilti

jilti · 07-31-2016, 04:44 PM

12 cool

MFtastick · 08-03-2016, 02:20 AM

Been hella busy with work. and wont be in internet range till satursay so i gotta drop now.

Jilti want the work. Let's see who swing harder, right cross like a plane charter, face squasher
Left snap the frame on em. Hel flip when I put them things on em. Left right left. I Mix it up with the hands Like James harden
Let me catch boy slippin. The Shotty will blow his thoughts. It ain't the olmypics games if I hold the torch
It's gat swinging. Pump in his mouth like boy you aint Spose to talk. The shotty nose filed down. Bitch Look like voldemort
One shot. These Shells will fucking rip through his teeth
40 ice ya fuckin grill. He'll start sipping on lean
aint nothing but headshots when im liftin this heat.
Put this sig behind ya ear like Kenickie from Grease
Toxic punches. Wind back and let Em have it.
Jill will be seeing STARS when I hit him with these biohazards
Run up and swing like happy Gilmore, then the 40 going straight to his vest
Lift the beam and hit him with that crocodile hunter. That's a ray through the chest

jilti · 08-03-2016, 04:53 PM

ur fam worried til i mail them a thumb or index tip
so they'll hope for the best, but get the short end of the Stick
he'll never get a title shot cuz this damn fucken kid slow
only spittin' retard we'll see on the doorstep is Bags cousin Jimbo
yeah i called u a retard. but we're used to this nigga Stick
only mistaken for a Witty kid cuz we've come to expect a little bitch
36 blasting straight up the middle. call it jerome bettis
that chrome wesson put ya head in ur lap like yoga stretches
sexed his girl 12 hours straight. had my dick hard as dense gravel
sticky poll up so long it started looking like the Chyeaaah vs Cred battle
dead that hoe. gotta headstone with your name
& i'll put Stick in a plot like creators of the clue boardgame

KnowP · 08-03-2016, 08:20 PM

Jilti want the work. Let's see who swing harder, right cross like a plane charter, face squasher
Left snap the frame on em. Hel flip when I put them things on em. Left right left. I Mix it up with the hands Like James harden
---not feelin this stretched punch line. not a good hit
Let me catch boy slippin. The Shotty will blow his thoughts. It ain't the olmypics games if I hold the torch
It's gat swinging. Pump in his mouth like boy you aint Spose to talk. The shotty nose filed down. Bitch Look like Voldemort
---ehhh pretty lame hit
One shot. These Shells will fucking rip through his teeth
40 ice ya fuckin grill. He'll start sipping on lean
---no real punch here
aint nothing but headshots when im liftin this heat.
Put this sig behind ya ear like Kenickie from Grease
---old concept. aight hit
Toxic punches. Wind back and let Em have it.
Jill will be seeing STARS when I hit him with these biohazards
---naw weak jab
Run up and swing like happy Gilmore, then the 40 going straight to his vest
Lift the beam and hit him with that crocodile hunter. That's a ray through the chest
---nawww basic n weak

vs

ur fam worried til i mail them a thumb or index tip
so they'll hope for the best, but get the short end of the Stick
---lol
he'll never get a title shot cuz this damn fucken kid slow
only spittin' retard we'll see on the doorstep is Bags cousin Jimbo
---ehhh coulda been flipped better
yeah i called u a retard. but we're used to this nigga Stick
only mistaken for a Witty kid cuz we've come to expect a little bitch
---ouch shots fired
36 blasting straight up the middle. call it jerome bettis
that chrome wesson put ya head in ur lap like yoga stretches
---lite but ok
sexed his girl 12 hours straight. had my dick hard as dense gravel
sticky poll up so long it started looking like the Chyeaaah vs Cred battle
---okish
dead that hoe. gotta headstone with your name
& i'll put Stick in a plot like creators of the clue boardgame
---aight np

easy battle to judge. MF just didn't throw much from his end of the ring that was worthy. jilti hit em with some pretty coo flips. nothing real hard, but effective.

v. jilti

Ghost1 · 08-04-2016, 03:15 PM

BUMP

Schadenfreude · 08-05-2016, 01:54 AM

JILTI - J kept it simple, harsh & to the point, didn't put any real effort in the verse, but I wouldn't have either, after reading MF's verse. Stick was all over place, Voldemort would've been dope had it been cleaner, but it wasn't so oh well.

john hensley · 08-05-2016, 12:29 PM

Vote jilti.

Was a pretty easy win. Closer was solid, but honestly just didn't feel MFs verse at all.

Cred · 08-05-2016, 01:40 PM

James Harden jawn was nice, could've used less though seemed like a lot going on in that punch. But the closer, sheesh. dope.

vs

Short end of the stick was decent, yoga stretches was a good flip (I see you) , sticky poll was nice.

Nice lil match up here. Not the expected mftastik verse imo but the joints I quoted were good. Jilti came more consistent here wit an all around better verse.

Vote goes jil

Og smokinstein · 08-05-2016, 03:53 PM

Respect to Mf for rushing to get an verse in.. Its had to give 100% to an hobby, when you got shit, and life in general.

But with that being said, jilti verse was lil more put together, than Mf.
Mf had a couple dope punches, if he had more time, then he could've developed them into haymakers.

Jiliti didn't have too much more than Mf, I just thought he had more well written verse.

vot3 Jiliti

Blanco Bishop · 08-05-2016, 08:53 PM

Stick was slightly sloppy. Cool verse but too many gun bars back to back so that lost effect for me. Jilti had that yoga bar which I liked and the opener was pretty clever IMO.
Jilts verse was a little more polished so he gets the w.

V jilti

Plot · 08-06-2016, 12:29 AM

Yeah Jilti got this, Stick shoulda took 15 minutes to polish his verse a bit. Had potential concepts but the structure was to choppy. Jil had a few nameplays and the Witty punch that was popular this week.
V-Jil

Kenny the OG · 08-08-2016, 01:48 AM

Mf had the voldermort line which was ok but i wasnt feeling much else tbh. Rushed verse and it showed. Jilti had the yoga stretch which was ok and sticky poll which was lotb imo. Jilti didn't try at all either. Under different circumstances this coulda been a good battle but jilti wins anyway here

Chemist · 08-08-2016, 01:52 AM

Jilti want the work. Let's see who swing harder, right cross like a plane charter, face squasher
Left snap the frame on em. Hel flip when I put them things on em. Left right left. I Mix it up with the

Run up and swing like happy Gilmore, then the 40 going straight to his vest
Lift the beam and hit him with that crocodile hunter. That's a ray through the chest

vs

ur fam worried til i mail them a thumb or index tip
so they'll hope for the best, but get the short end of the Stick
36 blasting straight up the middle. call it jerome bettis
that chrome wesson put ya head in ur lap like yoga stretches
sexed his girl 12 hours straight. had my dick hard as dense gravel
sticky poll up so long it started looking like the Chyeaaah vs Cred battle
dead that hoe. gotta headstone with your name
& i'll put Stick in a plot like creators of the clue boardgame

I like J's personal approach to this. Nameplay and jus tover stronger hits here.
MFtastik, truly was just wordy gunplay which wasnt enough for the W

vote jilti

08-03-2016, 04:53 PM	#5
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	ur fam worried til i mail them a thumb or index tip so they'll hope for the best, but get the short end of the Stick he'll never get a title shot cuz this damn fucken kid slow only spittin' retard we'll see on the doorstep is Bags cousin Jimbo yeah i called u a retard. but we're used to this nigga Stick only mistaken for a Witty kid cuz we've come to expect a little bitch 36 blasting straight up the middle. call it jerome bettis that chrome wesson put ya head in ur lap like yoga stretches sexed his girl 12 hours straight. had my dick hard as dense gravel sticky poll up so long it started looking like the Chyeaaah vs Cred battle dead that hoe. gotta headstone with your name & i'll put Stick in a plot like creators of the clue boardgame Last edited by jilti; 08-03-2016 at 05:03 PM.

08-05-2016, 01:54 AM	#8
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049081	JILTI - J kept it simple, harsh & to the point, didn't put any real effort in the verse, but I wouldn't have either, after reading MF's verse. Stick was all over place, Voldemort would've been dope had it been cleaner, but it wasn't so oh well. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.

08-08-2016, 01:48 AM	#14
Kenny the OG tutankhamen Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 363 Battle Record: 6-5 Rep Power: 16107555	Mf had the voldermort line which was ok but i wasnt feeling much else tbh. Rushed verse and it showed. Jilti had the yoga stretch which was ok and sticky poll which was lotb imo. Jilti didn't try at all either. Under different circumstances this coulda been a good battle but jilti wins anyway here __________________ Wordplay? My words ain't meant to be played with.

08-08-2016, 01:52 AM	#15
Chemist Try this shit Join Date: Sep 2015 Location: uninhabitable Posts: 365 Battle Record: 5-11 Rep Power: 0	Jilti want the work. Let's see who swing harder, right cross like a plane charter, face squasher Left snap the frame on em. Hel flip when I put them things on em. Left right left. I Mix it up with the Run up and swing like happy Gilmore, then the 40 going straight to his vest Lift the beam and hit him with that crocodile hunter. That's a ray through the chest vs ur fam worried til i mail them a thumb or index tip so they'll hope for the best, but get the short end of the Stick 36 blasting straight up the middle. call it jerome bettis that chrome wesson put ya head in ur lap like yoga stretches sexed his girl 12 hours straight. had my dick hard as dense gravel sticky poll up so long it started looking like the Chyeaaah vs Cred battle dead that hoe. gotta headstone with your name & i'll put Stick in a plot like creators of the clue boardgame I like J's personal approach to this. Nameplay and jus tover stronger hits here. MFtastik, truly was just wordy gunplay which wasnt enough for the W vote jilti __________________

07-28-2016, 03:06 AM	#2
MFtastick Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 101 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 9184439	Dope. im going 12 fam. good or you tryna write more? @jilti

07-31-2016, 04:44 PM	#3
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	12 cool

08-03-2016, 02:20 AM	#4
MFtastick Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 101 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 9184439	Been hella busy with work. and wont be in internet range till satursay so i gotta drop now. Jilti want the work. Let's see who swing harder, right cross like a plane charter, face squasher Left snap the frame on em. Hel flip when I put them things on em. Left right left. I Mix it up with the hands Like James harden Let me catch boy slippin. The Shotty will blow his thoughts. It ain't the olmypics games if I hold the torch It's gat swinging. Pump in his mouth like boy you aint Spose to talk. The shotty nose filed down. Bitch Look like voldemort One shot. These Shells will fucking rip through his teeth 40 ice ya fuckin grill. He'll start sipping on lean aint nothing but headshots when im liftin this heat. Put this sig behind ya ear like Kenickie from Grease Toxic punches. Wind back and let Em have it. Jill will be seeing STARS when I hit him with these biohazards Run up and swing like happy Gilmore, then the 40 going straight to his vest Lift the beam and hit him with that crocodile hunter. That's a ray through the chest

08-03-2016, 08:20 PM	#6
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 221 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463485	Jilti want the work. Let's see who swing harder, right cross like a plane charter, face squasher Left snap the frame on em. Hel flip when I put them things on em. Left right left. I Mix it up with the hands Like James harden ---not feelin this stretched punch line. not a good hit Let me catch boy slippin. The Shotty will blow his thoughts. It ain't the olmypics games if I hold the torch It's gat swinging. Pump in his mouth like boy you aint Spose to talk. The shotty nose filed down. Bitch Look like Voldemort ---ehhh pretty lame hit One shot. These Shells will fucking rip through his teeth 40 ice ya fuckin grill. He'll start sipping on lean ---no real punch here aint nothing but headshots when im liftin this heat. Put this sig behind ya ear like Kenickie from Grease ---old concept. aight hit Toxic punches. Wind back and let Em have it. Jill will be seeing STARS when I hit him with these biohazards ---naw weak jab Run up and swing like happy Gilmore, then the 40 going straight to his vest Lift the beam and hit him with that crocodile hunter. That's a ray through the chest ---nawww basic n weak vs ur fam worried til i mail them a thumb or index tip so they'll hope for the best, but get the short end of the Stick ---lol he'll never get a title shot cuz this damn fucken kid slow only spittin' retard we'll see on the doorstep is Bags cousin Jimbo ---ehhh coulda been flipped better yeah i called u a retard. but we're used to this nigga Stick only mistaken for a Witty kid cuz we've come to expect a little bitch ---ouch shots fired 36 blasting straight up the middle. call it jerome bettis that chrome wesson put ya head in ur lap like yoga stretches ---lite but ok sexed his girl 12 hours straight. had my dick hard as dense gravel sticky poll up so long it started looking like the Chyeaaah vs Cred battle ---okish dead that hoe. gotta headstone with your name & i'll put Stick in a plot like creators of the clue boardgame ---aight np easy battle to judge. MF just didn't throw much from his end of the ring that was worthy. jilti hit em with some pretty coo flips. nothing real hard, but effective. v. jilti

08-05-2016, 12:29 PM	#9
john hensley . Join Date: May 2013 Location: SEATTLE, WA Posts: 385 Battle Record: 6-5 Champed - Summer Classic III - Fight Night XIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 5859171	Vote jilti. Was a pretty easy win. Closer was solid, but honestly just didn't feel MFs verse at all.

08-05-2016, 01:40 PM	#10
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	James Harden jawn was nice, could've used less though seemed like a lot going on in that punch. But the closer, sheesh. dope. vs Short end of the stick was decent, yoga stretches was a good flip (I see you) , sticky poll was nice. Nice lil match up here. Not the expected mftastik verse imo but the joints I quoted were good. Jilti came more consistent here wit an all around better verse. Vote goes jil

08-05-2016, 03:53 PM	#11
Og smokinstein The Marathon Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 114 Battle Record: 3-4 Rep Power: 352396	Respect to Mf for rushing to get an verse in.. Its had to give 100% to an hobby, when you got shit, and life in general. But with that being said, jilti verse was lil more put together, than Mf. Mf had a couple dope punches, if he had more time, then he could've developed them into haymakers. Jiliti didn't have too much more than Mf, I just thought he had more well written verse. vot3 Jiliti

08-05-2016, 08:53 PM	#12
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	Stick was slightly sloppy. Cool verse but too many gun bars back to back so that lost effect for me. Jilti had that yoga bar which I liked and the opener was pretty clever IMO. Jilts verse was a little more polished so he gets the w. V jilti

08-06-2016, 12:29 AM	#13
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	Yeah Jilti got this, Stick shoulda took 15 minutes to polish his verse a bit. Had potential concepts but the structure was to choppy. Jil had a few nameplays and the Witty punch that was popular this week. V-Jil