Sharp 3-2 Vs Razah 1-1 - SHARP WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, May 21th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@Sharp @Razah

[Sharp]

cool, 10?

[Razah]

word.

[Sharp]

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If you're still around I'll need the ext

[Razah]

word. ill post tomorrow too

[Sharp]

pedo motherfucker. you get turned on every time a preteen pass
ya boys can tell you Dugg'ar cuz youre more of a molester than his creepy ass
You suck at wordplay. In text there's nuthin worse
Dumbass couldn't even turn a fraze without feedin off his fuckin verse
Text is everything to you. without it you'd have nothin, bitch
Your sad ass tries to drop bars in the middle of chats on some @Lil Muffin shit
Every verse is wannabe gutter shit. you must be sufferin brain erosion
This fag Ra's a Ghul? Only cause he been bombing like a fuckin train explosion
Fuck your slashes. the oldschool bars are just wack shit
Ain't really throwback drops... its more like some limp-wristed backwards passes

[Razah]

Fuck rap it's gun claps, squaddd uppp; I'm 'bout to mess up the game
With all the Chinks' in your armor - Ya'll gonna end up the same
I hope you don't actually rap, silence is best for this brutha'
The moment you speak we say Sh sh sh sh like we developed a stutter//
Your raps are written poorly, the technique is weak with no recovering
& your verses got a stream of consciousness that are steady buffering
He's the softest I've seen, he's not offended if I'm calling him gay
If you're into that, he has the voice of an angel & plays the harp in his name//
Another target to slay, a phony a fake, no bite & it's too late to bark
On some real life, I got money & ho's, and I'm sorry, you'll never be razor, sharp.

Now, on to the weekend. Holler.

[El Muffin]

Sharp
open ok
fraze lol
muff nah
ra a Gul was coo
closer nah

Razah
open nah
stutter was slick
steam eh
into that was swagger but that's it
same with Clos

Got sharp


Just more battle oriented

[murda sho]

Razah

Your raps are written poorly, the technique is weak with no recovering
& your verses got a stream of consciousness that are steady buffering


Sharp

You suck at wordplay. In text there's nuthin worse
Dumbass couldn't even turn a fraze without feedin off his fuckin verse


This was a weird battle... Razah had the dope flow definitely but his punches was weak as fuck other than the one I quoted... then Sharp had better off punches slightly but was reaching like a mufucka haha other than the bar I quoted... but since Sharps off punches were a lil better also and these quotes were on the same level I think that gives him the slight edge..v/ Sharp

[jilti]

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[jilti]

pedo motherfucker. you get turned on every time a preteen pass
ya boys can tell you Dugg'ar cuz youre more of a molester than his creepy ass
cool opener
You suck at wordplay. In text there's nuthin worse
Dumbass couldn't even turn a fraze without feedin off his fuckin verse
not good but not bad
Text is everything to you. without it you'd have nothin, bitch
Your sad ass tries to drop bars in the middle of chats on some @Lil Muffin shit
no no no
Every verse is wannabe gutter shit. you must be sufferin brain erosion
This fag Ra's a Ghul? Only cause he been bombing like a fuckin train explosion
forced
Fuck your slashes. the oldschool bars are just wack shit
Ain't really throwback drops... its more like some limp-wristed backwards passes
ok


Vs.


Fuck rap it's gun claps, squaddd uppp; I'm 'bout to mess up the game
With all the Chinks' in your armor - Ya'll gonna end up the same
ok
I hope you don't actually rap, silence is best for this brutha'
The moment you speak we say Sh sh sh sh like we developed a stutter//
i likes
Your raps are written poorly, the technique is weak with no recovering
& your verses got a stream of consciousness that are steady buffering
nah
He's the softest I've seen, he's not offended if I'm calling him gay
If you're into that, he has the voice of an angel & plays the harp in his name//
nope
Another target to slay, a phony a fake, no bite & it's too late to bark
On some real life, I got money & ho's, and I'm sorry, you'll never be razor, sharp.
definitely noooo

thought sharp came a teenie itty bit better and barely snuck out a victory here..
Vote-Sharp

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Sharp

pedo motherfucker. you get turned on every time a preteen pass
ya boys can tell you Dugg'ar cuz youre more of a molester than his creepy ass
light hit on forced wp
You suck at wordplay. In text there's nuthin worse
Dumbass couldn't even turn a fraze without feedin off his fuckin verse
this wp is too simple. But nice personal
Text is everything to you. without it you'd have nothin, bitch
Your sad ass tries to drop bars in the middle of chats on some @Lil Muffin shit
simple flip. light hit but personal
Every verse is wannabe gutter shit. you must be sufferin brain erosion
This fag Ra's a Ghul? Only cause he been bombing like a fuckin train explosion
I want to give you credit but this is kind of forced
Fuck your slashes. the oldschool bars are just wack shit
Ain't really throwback drops... its more like some limp-wristed backwards passes
light

Originally Posted by Razah

Fuck rap it's gun claps, squaddd uppp; I'm 'bout to mess up the game
With all the Chinks' in your armor - Ya'll gonna end up the same
played and not a hard hit
I hope you don't actually rap, silence is best for this brutha'
The moment you speak we say Sh sh sh sh like we developed a stutter//
not really with it as written but the concept is ok
Your raps are written poorly, the technique is weak with no recovering
& your verses got a stream of consciousness that are steady buffering
cool concept bad wording
He's the softest I've seen, he's not offended if I'm calling him gay
If you're into that, he has the voice of an angel & plays the harp in his name//
light diss on a forced punch
Another target to slay, a phony a fake, no bite & it's too late to bark
On some real life, I got money & ho's, and I'm sorry, you'll never be razor, sharp.
too simple not to be played. I basically used this concept in my battle against you, so Id like to see more creativity in your flip
Now, on to the weekend. Holler.

Being honest this is a cool battle but I wasn't feeling much from either. Sharp seemed like he was sleepwalking through the verse. He had some nice personals, but mostly just with light jabs. Razah had some flow but his concepts were on the simple side. Sharp takes this on better execution.

vote sharp

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Sharp

pedo motherfucker. you get turned on every time a preteen pass
ya boys can tell you Dugg'ar cuz youre more of a molester than his creepy ass
don't get the reference
You suck at wordplay. In text there's nuthin worse
Dumbass couldn't even turn a fraze without feedin off his fuckin verse
Ok
Text is everything to you. without it you'd have nothin, bitch
Your sad ass tries to drop bars in the middle of chats on some @Lil Muffin shit
Meh
Every verse is wannabe gutter shit. you must be sufferin brain erosion
This fag Ra's a Ghul? Only cause he been bombing like a fuckin train explosion
Not really feeling
Fuck your slashes. the oldschool bars are just wack shit
Ain't really throwback drops... its more like some limp-wristed backwards
Nah
passes

Vs

Originally Posted by Razah

Fuck rap it's gun claps, squaddd uppp; I'm 'bout to mess up the game
With all the Chinks' in your armor - Ya'll gonna end up the same
Didn't like the wording
I hope you don't actually rap, silence is best for this brutha'
The moment you speak we say Sh sh sh sh like we developed a stutter//
Not really feeling
Your raps are written poorly, the technique is weak with no recovering
& your verses got a stream of consciousness that are steady buffering
Nah
He's the softest I've seen, he's not offended if I'm calling him gay
If you're into that, he has the voice of an angel & plays the harp in his name//
Doesn't really work
Another target to slay, a phony a fake, no bite & it's too late to bark
On some real life, I got money & ho's, and I'm sorry, you'll never be razor, sharp.
Nah
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Sharp clearly didn't come with his best and razah was just blah I dunno. Sharp takes it overall cos if I was feeling anything at all it was that fraze line.. Looking back ras a ghul not terrible either. Just edging it on consistency I gotta go with Sharp

V/Sharp

[Destroyer]

I liked the stream of consciousness that's steady buffering line
that was clever and deserved more props than it got
however, sharp got this pretty easily with his opener and better misses
fraze came decent tho

v/sharp