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I like short pieces if they're is a lot of substances, if they're short with no substance it makes me think you don't even want to write. if they're too long without saying nothing it makes me think you're trying to take advantage of your opponent by writing more, if I seen dom's verse first I would have probably shortened it up.
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07-18-2022, 09:15 AM
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I don't really care as long as it is an engaging verse.
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07-18-2022, 10:36 AM
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@Rawn MD funny you say that , when I first returned this season my style had just naturally evolved into super short lines say more with less words type of content. Very vague with hidden messages. People didn’t like it. So I said fuck it and went back to my old style and the voters dug it a lot more. Stories with characters is what wins here
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07-18-2022, 11:13 AM
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I vote for the best writer.
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07-18-2022, 11:24 AM
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Soule, should sub for me so I don't get a no show...whatta ya think? @Adverse
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07-18-2022, 11:30 AM
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I vote for Pedro
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07-18-2022, 12:38 PM
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Pedro for the W.
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07-18-2022, 12:57 PM
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07-18-2022, 01:20 PM
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Let's get these votes in so we can move on. Some of these battles are already 3-0
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kind of disapointed dom didn't try feel like I wasted a verse too haha.
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07-18-2022, 03:46 PM
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Shit comes up and inspiration drifts. He had a strong season and maybe he'll return to form next battle
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You're silly
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