WEEK THIRTEEN DISCUSSION - Page 12

Rawn MD · 07-19-2022, 02:03 AM

I actually said that your ending was your strong point… but ur opponent just overpowered ur verse to his with a better story.

He also dropped like triple the line count of you… and although I liked ur verse, it just couldn’t overpower the sheer line count to justify his story over yours… your lines would have had to each one had some “umph” to them, which some did and some didn’t… that’s why I said I shornurself in the door, bc had u came a little longer or a little harder u would have won it. @Dominate

Dominate · 07-19-2022, 02:08 AM

Probably. It wasn’t a great verse by any means, but it wasn’t as simple/phoned in as people said either.

Soule · 07-19-2022, 02:09 AM

It was a Nokia, last week you dropped an iphone x bro.

Rawn MD · 07-19-2022, 02:12 AM

Nah I caught a lot of what you were saying, like I said it just wasn’t enough, and Truthfully if ppl have to search out something, than honestly it could have been stated better so it’s not as hidden and that way it connects, and the effort is appreciated.

Dominate · 07-19-2022, 02:16 AM

You don’t need to justify yourself. Like I said - I didn’t do the reveal correctly, so it’s my fault. I’m not saying I should have won.

Rawn MD · 07-19-2022, 02:17 AM

That’s word

Adverse · 07-19-2022, 03:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dominate

Probably. It wasn’t a great verse by any means, but it wasn’t as simple/phoned in as people said either.

Honestly it just came down to content. If you matched eviction bar for bar and let your piece be a slow burn “no pun intended” gave yourself time to flesh it out. You’d of won. Didn’t think of it as phoned in myself, it was engaging and was dope for what it was

Soule · 07-19-2022, 04:01 PM

Let's GO!!!

Dank · 07-19-2022, 04:17 PM

Eviction gonna be smarting off that W forever more

Frank · 07-19-2022, 04:49 PM

Hold my beer

Dominate · 07-19-2022, 05:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adverse

Honestly it just came down to content. If you matched eviction bar for bar and let your piece be a slow burn “no pun intended” gave yourself time to flesh it out. You’d of won. Didn’t think of it as phoned in myself, it was engaging and was dope for what it was

There was only so many wordplays about lighting a match I could think of lol.

Is there someone who wants to do a short verse (say max 20) battle with me next week? Or may I please have the honour/privilege of facing Sinacog? Otherwise I need to be out next week.

Soule · 07-19-2022, 05:31 PM

I'll pull a double

Rawn MD · 07-19-2022, 05:41 PM

I’m down @Dominate @Adverse

Eviction · 07-19-2022, 06:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dank

Eviction gonna be smarting off that W forever more

Not really it was a free win

Eviction · 07-19-2022, 06:18 PM

This is only the second time I beat dominate this season hehe

Soule · 07-19-2022, 07:31 PM

@Adverse @Dominate @NYCSPITZ
@brokenhal0

Let's get these votes on fellas. Champ match has one vote, three way is 2-2-0.

Adverse · 07-19-2022, 07:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dominate

There was only so many wordplays about lighting a match I could think of lol.

Is there someone who wants to do a short verse (say max 20) battle with me next week? Or may I please have the honour/privilege of facing Sinacog? Otherwise I need to be out next week.

If I can’t get Sinacog (busy schedule) I’ll hop in for 10-20 versuses you but be warned I am not inspired in the least bit

Master Rock · 07-19-2022, 08:18 PM

Don't tripp Dom. In no particular order, you, adverse, halo, inno, mmlp, frank, mr. j, and razah have been my favs as of lately. Not forgetting honorable mention...my man candy.

Eviction · 07-19-2022, 10:08 PM

damn i don't even make the top 5.

Eviction · 07-19-2022, 10:14 PM

torn between the champ match, if nycspitz wins I will get to take the title from him again, if universe wins I get to become the only 2 time champ this season.

not voting anyway as there is a conflict of interest.

07-19-2022, 02:03 AM	#221
Rawn MD Get MacDon Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 2,168 Battle Record: 3-7 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 0	I actually said that your ending was your strong point… but ur opponent just overpowered ur verse to his with a better story. He also dropped like triple the line count of you… and although I liked ur verse, it just couldn’t overpower the sheer line count to justify his story over yours… your lines would have had to each one had some “umph” to them, which some did and some didn’t… that’s why I said I shornurself in the door, bc had u came a little longer or a little harder u would have won it. @Dominate __________________ FFC>FCC A. bove T. he R. est Last edited by Rawn MD; 07-19-2022 at 02:07 AM.

07-19-2022, 02:08 AM	#222
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,309 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	Probably. It wasn’t a great verse by any means, but it wasn’t as simple/phoned in as people said either. __________________ The Bad Guys

07-19-2022, 02:09 AM	#223
Soule Save The Sea Join Date: Aug 2021 Location: Oregon Posts: 553 Rep Power: 3013536	It was a Nokia, last week you dropped an iphone x bro. __________________

07-19-2022, 02:12 AM	#224
Rawn MD Get MacDon Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 2,168 Battle Record: 3-7 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 0	Nah I caught a lot of what you were saying, like I said it just wasn’t enough, and Truthfully if ppl have to search out something, than honestly it could have been stated better so it’s not as hidden and that way it connects, and the effort is appreciated. __________________ FFC>FCC A. bove T. he R. est

07-19-2022, 02:16 AM	#225
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,309 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	You don’t need to justify yourself. Like I said - I didn’t do the reveal correctly, so it’s my fault. I’m not saying I should have won. __________________ The Bad Guys

07-19-2022, 02:17 AM	#226
Rawn MD Get MacDon Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 2,168 Battle Record: 3-7 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 0	That’s word __________________ FFC>FCC A. bove T. he R. est

07-19-2022, 04:01 PM	#228
Soule Save The Sea Join Date: Aug 2021 Location: Oregon Posts: 553 Rep Power: 3013536	Let's GO!!! __________________

07-19-2022, 04:17 PM	#229
Dank Member Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 90 Battle Record: 1-0 Rep Power: 2167889	Eviction gonna be smarting off that W forever more

07-19-2022, 04:49 PM	#230
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	Hold my beer __________________ *VETWORK*

07-19-2022, 05:31 PM	#232
Soule Save The Sea Join Date: Aug 2021 Location: Oregon Posts: 553 Rep Power: 3013536	I'll pull a double __________________

07-19-2022, 05:41 PM	#233
Rawn MD Get MacDon Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 2,168 Battle Record: 3-7 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 0	I’m down @Dominate @Adverse __________________ FFC>FCC A. bove T. he R. est

07-19-2022, 06:18 PM	#235
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	This is only the second time I beat dominate this season hehe

07-19-2022, 07:31 PM	#236
Soule Save The Sea Join Date: Aug 2021 Location: Oregon Posts: 553 Rep Power: 3013536	@Adverse @Dominate @NYCSPITZ @brokenhal0 Let's get these votes on fellas. Champ match has one vote, three way is 2-2-0. __________________

07-19-2022, 08:18 PM	#238
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,331 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599638	Don't tripp Dom. In no particular order, you, adverse, halo, inno, mmlp, frank, mr. j, and razah have been my favs as of lately. Not forgetting honorable mention...my man candy. __________________ https://www.instagram.com/master_rock1/ https://www.youtube.com/graphicalmindz

07-19-2022, 10:08 PM	#239
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	damn i don't even make the top 5.

07-19-2022, 10:14 PM	#240
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	torn between the champ match, if nycspitz wins I will get to take the title from him again, if universe wins I get to become the only 2 time champ this season. not voting anyway as there is a conflict of interest.