My 3 fav text bars - Page 4

Ghost1 · 10-24-2015, 07:59 AM

The wow was for eth remedial ass obv

ill nik-A · 10-24-2015, 08:01 AM

Correct

Boredom · 10-24-2015, 08:24 AM

post placement got me

EtH · 10-24-2015, 12:51 PM

I thought that...but it makes no sense so I thought I missed something. "I'll have you crying until the nightlight in your room...which you know...is way over there and nowhere near your eyes...turns into a rainbow....".

sral · 10-24-2015, 03:30 PM

could it be the teary eyes meeting the light of the nightlight, creating the image of a rainbow?

makes perfect sense tbc

Resin M-I-C · 10-24-2015, 04:27 PM

off the top some simple but effective shit

u have a fake city background late night talk shows would kill for - rygar

leave u 12 and1 like a streetball team - Sur5ill vs Evo who was 12-0 at the time

frac's letter jacket line, which i gave him by the way lol

Useless · 10-24-2015, 07:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by EtH

I thought that...but it makes no sense so I thought I missed something. "I'll have you crying until the nightlight in your room...which you know...is way over there and nowhere near your eyes...turns into a rainbow....".

lol wow

EtH · 10-24-2015, 11:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sraL

could it be the teary eyes meeting the light of the nightlight, creating the image of a rainbow?

makes perfect sense tbc

Yo nigga when your tear filled eyes meet your night light, the prismatic effect creates some form of visual rainbow...BITCH!

Strikta · 10-25-2015, 08:32 AM

^Lame ass nigga why u even here?

This thing maybe ain't for u bruh.

Strikta · 10-25-2015, 08:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Resin M-I-C

u have a fake city background late night talk shows would kill for - rygar

& that was ill to me.. I remember that joint.

EtH · 10-25-2015, 02:19 PM

Yeah that line's slick as fuck.

~RustyGunZ~ · 10-25-2015, 06:44 PM

fire

Toil · 03-17-2016, 02:54 PM

Here's some of my favs I pulled together for another forum a few years ago.

They were dope in the context of battling at the time, but can look weaker compared to how writing styles have changed now... E.g. 'Foil your plan and stick it in the microwave' was hella creative then but not sure it would stand out now.

"cus i'ma foil your plan, then toss it in the microwave" - L Evasion
"you look like a million bucks..at the start of hunting season" - Relentless Fist
"ur career lies in ruins for picking bones like an archeologist's" - Storm G
"u get so nervous the butterflies in ya stomach go back to the pupa " - Storm G
"like crashed computers; more so, youll need a data recover" - Sur
"dumb rhymes with Numb(haha), I gotta carefree attitude
ya know what rhymes with trash? Anyone that collabs with you" - L Evasion
"you winning is 'once in a blue moon' to colour blind dogs" - Relentless Fist
"its only funny till he loses an eye, then its hilarious" - Relentless Fist
"i put cheap skates on thin ice, like bums playing hockey" - Storm G
"beating yous like stealing candy from a baby..that died at birth" - Note
"have you breathing thru plastic like janet jacksons nose" - Espionage
"youre dead in the long run, like fat kids with asthma" - Aloe
"so ya going thru a dry spell..like shamans in a flooding village" - Ajax
"if ur lip is having a bad time, I can make it swell" - Storm G
"Cane'll break you into a thousand Peaces, like a 70s rock concert" - Cane
"Let's talk about my win percentage, since you brought it up" - Rudge 1
"You weren't dropped on your head, it was more of a throw" - Advance
"I don't stutter bitch, but no one would accept you except you" - Storm Chamber
"Cuz I'll let my fists do the talking, like some hand puppets" - Storm Chamber
"The L's right for you, like you had your headphones on backwards" - Nebs
"Nebs is even to short to ride on his emotional roller coaster" - Resin
"I guess light is faster than sound, i thought you shined before i heard you" - Rudge1
"look here, 'threes a crowd'..like the audience at your concert" - Resin
"that light over ya heads not an idea..its heaven openin up" - Radius
"we know you 'live out of a suitcase' like ventriloquist dolls" - Relentless Fist
"and while you stop at labyrinths I never cease to a maze" - Axl Prose
"cus you're a fruit who 'sleeps with more pricks' than a bed of roses" - BladeRunner

Hush · 03-17-2016, 04:06 PM

That radius heaven line is fire @Toil

Strikta · 03-17-2016, 04:24 PM

My nigga Radius was such a monster.

Wear a watch around my cock n give ya bitch a hard time.

Strikta · 03-17-2016, 04:30 PM

Toil busted out some old UA & Prowlers bars there yo... Some fire shit.

Fuck L Evasion tho.

Hated that nigga, him & Supernova.

Both were incredibly ill tho. Can't front.

The homie Cane too... Smh @ Cane.

emcee squared · 03-17-2016, 06:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Toil

ya know what rhymes with trash? Anyone that collabs with you" - L Evasion

emcee squared · 03-17-2016, 06:39 PM

nothing

Geno · 03-18-2016, 12:17 PM

Strik weng innnnn wowzas. Where he been

Witty · 03-18-2016, 02:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by emcee squared

Lol. I really like this one.

It's kinda like that joke 'What's brown and rhymes with snoop?

Dr. Dre.'

10-24-2015, 08:01 AM	#62
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,407 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	Correct __________________ Grumpy old man.

10-24-2015, 12:51 PM	#64
EtH Erebus Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 435 Battle Record: 6-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 3537332	I thought that...but it makes no sense so I thought I missed something. "I'll have you crying until the nightlight in your room...which you know...is way over there and nowhere near your eyes...turns into a rainbow....". __________________

10-24-2015, 03:30 PM	#65
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,260 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	could it be the teary eyes meeting the light of the nightlight, creating the image of a rainbow? makes perfect sense tbc __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

10-25-2015, 02:19 PM	#71
EtH Erebus Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 435 Battle Record: 6-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 3537332	Yeah that line's slick as fuck. __________________

03-17-2016, 06:39 PM	#78
emcee squared Banned Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 430 Rep Power: 0	nothing Last edited by emcee squared; 10-31-2016 at 04:43 PM.

10-24-2015, 08:24 AM	#63
Boredom Been On One Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 1,618 Battle Record: 26-28 Champed - Newbie Tournament IV Rep Power: 415107	post placement got me

10-24-2015, 04:27 PM	#66
Resin M-I-C Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 734 Battle Record: 33-9 Champed - 1-2 Punch Onslaught II - Tag Team Tournament V - 1-2 Punch Season III - Netcees SOL - Battle Arena - SOL Season I - NBL Season XIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 8150228	off the top some simple but effective shit u have a fake city background late night talk shows would kill for - rygar leave u 12 and1 like a streetball team - Sur5ill vs Evo who was 12-0 at the time frac's letter jacket line, which i gave him by the way lol

10-25-2015, 08:32 AM	#69
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181449	^Lame ass nigga why u even here? This thing maybe ain't for u bruh.

03-17-2016, 02:54 PM	#73
Toil Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 137 Battle Record: 5-1 Rep Power: 2785770	Here's some of my favs I pulled together for another forum a few years ago. They were dope in the context of battling at the time, but can look weaker compared to how writing styles have changed now... E.g. 'Foil your plan and stick it in the microwave' was hella creative then but not sure it would stand out now. "cus i'ma foil your plan, then toss it in the microwave" - L Evasion "you look like a million bucks..at the start of hunting season" - Relentless Fist "ur career lies in ruins for picking bones like an archeologist's" - Storm G "u get so nervous the butterflies in ya stomach go back to the pupa " - Storm G "like crashed computers; more so, youll need a data recover" - Sur "dumb rhymes with Numb(haha), I gotta carefree attitude ya know what rhymes with trash? Anyone that collabs with you" - L Evasion "you winning is 'once in a blue moon' to colour blind dogs" - Relentless Fist "its only funny till he loses an eye, then its hilarious" - Relentless Fist "i put cheap skates on thin ice, like bums playing hockey" - Storm G "beating yous like stealing candy from a baby..that died at birth" - Note "have you breathing thru plastic like janet jacksons nose" - Espionage "youre dead in the long run, like fat kids with asthma" - Aloe "so ya going thru a dry spell..like shamans in a flooding village" - Ajax "if ur lip is having a bad time, I can make it swell" - Storm G "Cane'll break you into a thousand Peaces, like a 70s rock concert" - Cane "Let's talk about my win percentage, since you brought it up" - Rudge 1 "You weren't dropped on your head, it was more of a throw" - Advance "I don't stutter bitch, but no one would accept you except you" - Storm Chamber "Cuz I'll let my fists do the talking, like some hand puppets" - Storm Chamber "The L's right for you, like you had your headphones on backwards" - Nebs "Nebs is even to short to ride on his emotional roller coaster" - Resin "I guess light is faster than sound, i thought you shined before i heard you" - Rudge1 "look here, 'threes a crowd'..like the audience at your concert" - Resin "that light over ya heads not an idea..its heaven openin up" - Radius "we know you 'live out of a suitcase' like ventriloquist dolls" - Relentless Fist "and while you stop at labyrinths I never cease to a maze" - Axl Prose "cus you're a fruit who 'sleeps with more pricks' than a bed of roses" - BladeRunner

03-17-2016, 04:06 PM	#74
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	That radius heaven line is fire @Toil

03-17-2016, 04:24 PM	#75
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181449	My nigga Radius was such a monster. Wear a watch around my cock n give ya bitch a hard time.

03-17-2016, 04:30 PM	#76
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181449	Toil busted out some old UA & Prowlers bars there yo... Some fire shit. Fuck L Evasion tho. Hated that nigga, him & Supernova. Both were incredibly ill tho. Can't front. The homie Cane too... Smh @ Cane.

03-18-2016, 12:17 PM	#79
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,328 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Strik weng innnnn wowzas. Where he been __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*