03-28-2016, 12:16 PM | #1 |
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Toil vs Cashius - CASHIUS WINS
NBL Season 9 Due THURSDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Toil @Cashius |
03-28-2016, 02:36 PM | #2 |
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Gimmick battle? You can choose the lines
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03-28-2016, 04:18 PM | #3 |
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I think he means pics, roast, swag and flow, etc.
I'd be down for a roast or regular. 12. |
03-29-2016, 05:52 AM | #4 |
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Ah cool. I was looking for something more interesting as did a roast last week, but never mind.
Reg battle then I guess, but let's do more than 12 man. 16? 18? |
03-29-2016, 11:24 AM | #5 | |
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Edited down to 16 on the hope you'll show
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Seems we got such a Cash flow problem...even the Fed couldn’t bail him out Ya won season 6 by standing on top of all of the vets from before.. Now we’re vexed that you soared. You’re only on top of the giant on my shoulders...so he can suplex ya neck to the floor Ya style reminds me of Resin’s, except where he roasts ya just swoon.. ..it’s such a ‘feminine remake of a classic’...ya oughta write the new Ghostbusters tune Too weak for this match, as I sweep the clash you’ll hide at home eating trash.. Guess we’re alike after all: cus while you’re cleaning out cookies, I’ll be deleting ***he Facing Toil means ur dead. This thread filled ya with wonder then dread.. ..and made ya piss ur sheets so violently, you waterboarded the monster under ya bed.. Ya fell from heavyweight to paper champ. Fact. This story is funny.. Cash went from gold to paper so seamlessly...thought he was re-enacting the history of money I dread to boast but I fucked ya girl first, she bled the most So while I’m ahead in this roast, at least you’re a notch above Toil...on her bed post I got a dick like the biggest club, ya girl cried as it got thick with blood ...I left her pussy ‘ripped as proof of entry’. Like a fucking ticket stub. Last edited by Toil; 03-31-2016 at 02:18 PM. |
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03-31-2016, 10:03 PM | #6 | |
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It looks like you already tried this in your verse and your words were "weak", "forced", and "boring" Your chick's yelling at me "Don't Pull out!" A seed?...She's like fuck it, whatever She's screaming at YOU to stay inside too...so you aren't seen in public together Ex just split...Now he's depressed and shit to the point he might stalk her. It's quite awkward....dude turned blue and started touching more boys than a White Walker The WHOLE LEAGUE is better than this guy...I guess that he can try though Motherfucker, you couldn't be a Season Champ if you stole the recipe from Diode You're not ACTUALLY gettin' paid, B...Cash is getting gravy Broke bitch don't even understand the Term Paper...the only one he getting a Pass from is the ladies And back to his ex, this cat is a mess...I bet you needing the hoe, look... You prolly Trapper Keeper binded, then force her to act out scenes from The Notebook Meet the ruthlessness of Cashius. You didn't check in truthfully, you faggot It's like you turned down the Gimmick Battle...then tried to see who can be the wackest Mother FUCK your old site. This is Nessy's! ...And no one is feeling you, hoss He's been sucking on the Lime so hard his diet must consist of tequila and salt Last edited by Cashius; 03-31-2016 at 10:44 PM. |
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04-01-2016, 12:41 PM | #7 | |
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versus Sick, sick verse Bruh. Very creative, u most def have some of the best concepts in the league. Only bars I really wasn't liking were the last two, otherwise dope showing, especially that white walker line..lol. Overall this was extremely close, both had some shit. Because y'all are so even I have to nitpick - Toil was impressive, especially since that's my 1st time reading his stuff, but I'd say CASHIUS edges, because of the creativity & fresher concepts, but BARELY tho. The ole head Toil was dope as well, much propers. |
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04-02-2016, 10:51 AM | #8 |
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Dope fuckin battle. Imma edit my vote here.
Props to both tho |
04-02-2016, 12:22 PM | #9 |
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^^That scheme’s a fail, no doubt. Wouldn’t rhyme if ya wail or shout
Seems we got such a Cash flow problem...even the Fed couldn’t bail him out Ya style reminds me of Resin’s, except where he roasts ya just swoon.. ..it’s such a ‘feminine remake of a classic’...ya oughta write the new Ghostbusters tune Too weak for this match, as I sweep the clash you’ll hide at home eating trash.. Guess we’re alike after all: cus while you’re cleaning out cookies, I’ll be deleting ***he Ya fell from heavyweight to paper champ. Fact. This story is funny.. Cash went from gold to paper so seamlessly...thought he was re-enacting the history of money I got a dick like the biggest club, ya girl cried as it got thick with blood ...I left her pussy ‘ripped as proof of entry’. Like a fucking ticket stub. alllll of these were creative/good man. the wording is really oldschool, it needs to tighten up and modernise and that'd make them hit wayyy harder. just add a little more swagger to it so that it can't be seen as bland. match up the syllables when you're rhyming too that's a big difference. overall was a dope verse i'm just trying to help out vs "Hey, guys lets try this cool complicated thing!" Shut the fuck up...Could you be more annoying? It looks like you already tried this in your verse and your words were "weak", "forced", and "boring" Your chick's yelling at me "Don't Pull out!" A seed?...She's like fuck it, whatever She's screaming at YOU to stay inside too...so you aren't seen in public together ^^^ simple as fuck, easy to do, BUT the wording makes it hit Ex just split...Now he's depressed and shit to the point he might stalk her. It's quite awkward....dude turned blue and started touching more boys than a White Walker The WHOLE LEAGUE is better than this guy...I guess that he can try though Motherfucker, you couldn't be a Season Champ if you stole the recipe from Diode You're not ACTUALLY gettin' paid, B...Cash is getting gravy Broke bitch don't even understand the Term Paper...the only one he getting a Pass from is the ladies your wording is probably my favourite to read now that i think about it. maybe trim them down a little but it's fluid and there's a lot of swagger to it. you're like a young Orc. haha nah but the way you execute your bars is what makes them hit. overall i think the style clash is what made this easier than it should have been to vote on. i warmed to Cash's style so it made his bars hit way harder than Toil's did. Toil still done really good, but my preference is Cashius |
04-02-2016, 07:06 PM | #10 |
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^^That scheme’s a fail, no doubt. Wouldn’t rhyme if ya wail or shout
Seems we got such a Cash flow problem...even the Fed couldn’t bail him out Ya style reminds me of Resin’s, except where he roasts ya just swoon.. ..it’s such a ‘feminine remake of a classic’...ya oughta write the new Ghostbusters tune Too weak for this match, as I sweep the clash you’ll hide at home eating trash.. Guess we’re alike after all: cus while you’re cleaning out cookies, I’ll be deleting ***he Facing Toil means ur dead. This thread filled ya with wonder then dread.. ..and made ya piss ur sheets so violently, you waterboarded the monster under ya bed vs Hey, guys lets try this cool complicated thing!" Shut the fuck up...Could you be more annoying? It looks like you already tried this in your verse and your words were "weak", "forced", and "boring" Ex just split...Now he's depressed and shit to the point he might stalk her. It's quite awkward....dude turned blue and started touching more boys than a White Walker And back to his ex, this cat is a mess...I bet you needing the hoe, look... You prolly Trapper Keeper binded, then force her to act out scenes from The Notebook Meet the ruthlessness of Cashius. You didn't check in truthfully, you faggot It's like you turned down the Gimmick Battle...then tried to see who can be the wackest Mother FUCK your old site. This is Nessy's! ...And no one is feeling you, hoss He's been sucking on the Lime so hard his diet must consist of tequila and salt props to both, i enjoyed this battle a lot. weren't really any misses on either side, but Cash was a little more polished and a connected harder more consistently. dope battle gents. Cash |
04-02-2016, 08:46 PM | #11 |
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Too lazy for the half asset breakdown. But cash gets my vote
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04-02-2016, 10:47 PM | #12 |
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Cash flow, suplex, ***he, monster under bed, history of money, ticket stub
Vs. Public together, season champ, term paper, notebook, sucking on the lime I got it 6-5 in quotes V/ toil |
04-03-2016, 12:10 AM | #13 |
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great batt
I got cash flow feminine remake deleting ***he waterboarded gold to paper closer vs opener stay inside white walker term paper loved reading this, props to both. toil was just a bit more consistent, surprisingly. I had cash starting out hot n then cooling off, that lime closer hurt him imo v/toil |
04-03-2016, 01:39 AM | #14 |
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Ya style reminds me of Resin’s, except where he roasts ya just swoon..
..it’s such a ‘feminine remake of a classic’...ya oughta write the new Ghostbusters tune Ya fell from heavyweight to paper champ. Fact. This story is funny.. Cash went from gold to paper so seamlessly...thought he was re-enacting the history of money I got a dick like the biggest club, ya girl cried as it got thick with blood ...I left her pussy ‘ripped as proof of entry’. Like a fucking ticket stub. Vs You're not ACTUALLY gettin' paid, B...Cash is getting gravy Broke bitch don't even understand the Term Paper...the only one he getting a Pass from is the ladies And back to his ex, this cat is a mess...I bet you needing the hoe, look... You prolly Trapper Keeper binded, then force her to act out scenes from The Notebook Vt- toil
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04-03-2016, 11:51 AM | #15 |
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^^That scheme’s a fail, no doubt. Wouldn’t rhyme if ya wail or shout
Seems we got such a Cash flow problem...even the Fed couldn’t bail him out Ya style reminds me of Resin’s, except where he roasts ya just swoon.. ..it’s such a ‘feminine remake of a classic’...ya oughta write the new Ghostbusters tune Too weak for this match, as I sweep the clash you’ll hide at home eating trash.. Guess we’re alike after all: cus while you’re cleaning out cookies, I’ll be deleting ***he Facing Toil means ur dead. This thread filled ya with wonder then dread.. ..and made ya piss ur sheets so violently, you waterboarded the monster under ya bed vs Hey, guys lets try this cool complicated thing!" Shut the fuck up...Could you be more annoying? It looks like you already tried this in your verse and your words were "weak", "forced", and "boring" Ex just split...Now he's depressed and shit to the point he might stalk her. It's quite awkward....dude turned blue and started touching more boys than a White Walker And back to his ex, this cat is a mess...I bet you needing the hoe, look... You prolly Trapper Keeper binded, then force her to act out scenes from The Notebook Meet the ruthlessness of Cashius. You didn't check in truthfully, you faggot It's like you turned down the Gimmick Battle...then tried to see who can be the wackest Wow this has to be BOTW I had cash down to body toil but he proved me wrong i swung towards cash because i prefer his style of wording and writing but this was a lot closer than i thought it would be, props to toil dope verse bro you held you own. Cash good to see you back concepts was creative hard hitting punches looking forward to reading ya next verse once ya back for a bit. Could go either way with style preference but I got cash just edging it. Vote- cash |
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04-03-2016, 12:16 PM | #17 |
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^^That scheme’s a fail, no doubt. Wouldn’t rhyme if ya wail or shout
Seems we got such a Cash flow problem...even the Fed couldn’t bail him out kinda relevant but I've seen this wp on him enough Ya won season 6 by standing on top of all of the vets from before.. Now we’re vexed that you soared. You’re only on top of the giant on my shoulders...so he can suplex ya neck to the floor solid Ya style reminds me of Resin’s, except where he roasts ya just swoon.. ..it’s such a ‘feminine remake of a classic’...ya oughta write the new Ghostbusters tune okay Too weak for this match, as I sweep the clash you’ll hide at home eating trash.. Guess we’re alike after all: cus while you’re cleaning out cookies, I’ll be deleting ***he nice Facing Toil means ur dead. This thread filled ya with wonder then dread.. ..and made ya piss ur sheets so violently, you waterboarded the monster under ya bed.. light Ya fell from heavyweight to paper champ. Fact. This story is funny.. Cash went from gold to paper so seamlessly...thought he was re-enacting the history of money haven't seen this angle on him. Cool I dread to boast but I fucked ya girl first, she bled the most So while I’m ahead in this roast, at least you’re a notch above Toil...on her bed post eh I got a dick like the biggest club, ya girl cried as it got thick with blood ...I left her pussy ‘ripped as proof of entry’. Like a fucking ticket stub. ok Consistent. Standouts were definitely suplex, ***he and money "Hey, guys lets try this cool complicated thing!" Shut the fuck up...Could you be more annoying? It looks like you already tried this in your verse and your words were "weak", "forced", and "boring" damn Your chick's yelling at me "Don't Pull out!" A seed?...She's like fuck it, whatever She's screaming at YOU to stay inside too...so you aren't seen in public together ok Ex just split...Now he's depressed and shit to the point he might stalk her. It's quite awkward....dude turned blue and started touching more boys than a White Walker dope The WHOLE LEAGUE is better than this guy...I guess that he can try though Motherfucker, you couldn't be a Season Champ if you stole the recipe from Diode ok You're not ACTUALLY gettin' paid, B...Cash is getting gravy Broke bitch don't even understand the Term Paper...the only one he getting a Pass from is the ladies nice And back to his ex, this cat is a mess...I bet you needing the hoe, look... You prolly Trapper Keeper binded, then force her to act out scenes from The Notebook lol ok Meet the ruthlessness of Cashius. You didn't check in truthfully, you faggot It's like you turned down the Gimmick Battle...then tried to see who can be the wackest eh Mother FUCK your old site. This is Nessy's! ...And no one is feeling you, hoss He's been sucking on the Lime so hard his diet must consist of tequila and salt alright So close but I think cash had the lotb with his opener. Toil was more personal in general but cash had the advantage with wording and the lotb. Could see it ending either way tho. Good shit guys V/cash |
04-03-2016, 07:26 PM | #18 |
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I got cash edging this barely... both verses were dope, some nice hits landed on each side. i just preferred cash's style more personally, agree with other's that this battle could've gone either way though, depending on personal preference.
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04-03-2016, 10:34 PM | #19 |
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Good read here from both. Read this one a couple times. Toil came with some good shit, ghostbusters/***he/history of money were my faves. Cash had that nasty opener, recipe from diode and that closer. This one came down to personal preference.
Vote - toil |
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