04-04-2016, 06:08 AM | #1 |
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Wear Shhh 3-1 vs Toil 1-1 - TOIL WINS
NBL Season 9 Due THURSDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Toil @Wear Shhh |
04-04-2016, 11:59 AM | #2 |
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Don't guilt trip me yo lol I just wanna do reg cause I got no showed last week
Only gimmick I'll do is if you're des & I'm muff
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04-04-2016, 12:11 PM | #3 |
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I got no idea what that means. Lmao. Reg battle it is I guess
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04-07-2016, 03:14 PM | #5 |
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04-08-2016, 05:41 AM | #6 |
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Vs Batshit
I spaffed in ya dame she lay flat as I came.. Fixed her up by inserting little Ts..like Orc with HabiTaT’s name I’ll send ya to the world beyond as I smother ya pride.. ..at least now ya future matches ur sexuality: Bat’s for the other side I’ll puncture his lungs, watch B’s pleas at T’s knees ..the medics'll have to slap a tube to this pussy...just call him a she wee Got T at the wheel. Push the pedal flat with my heal I’ll leave Bat's head stretched across my bonnet like the batmobile I'll bleed out this heathen, when I cut through his spleen, 'n ..leave his blood endlessly streaming more than Spotify premium Ya beckon and say ‘heeeeeeeey’, one’ve the biggest gays in town Fucksake. Bats are meant to see through sound waves..not have a see-through wave sound Always dreamed u’d face me, I’m the star ya love reading Facing T got u all 'pumping heart and deep breathing' more than the cpr you'll be needing @Orc I dropped Last edited by Toil; 04-08-2016 at 05:43 AM. |
04-08-2016, 12:14 PM | #7 |
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Ur old, tired & beat, u dnt quit now I'll have the beamer' barkin
put a big round under ur eye.. boy you need to sleep more often Best believe I'm next up, shank get antsy if u think this is yo time Knife got a fastpass, that mean if toil crew In front then I'm cuttin the whole line Old gats for u old heads. raise ya blood pressure & split ya head Homie I'll hit u wit the 40 then the 45.. I call em nik & des Nigga I'm bout to bless ya soul! But at the same time Ima pack the heat.. Cuz when my arm start wavin' & I start sprayin just kno I ain't a catholic priest Ur set can get merkd while u chillin, wat im packin a make ya core leak Clean out ur whole section wit the auto.. that Roomba's a sure beast Meet you and ya girl on the beach, we'll spend the whole day whilin' dat'll b the last time u see this Guyana girl together, cuz I'll em both dead on the island I'll leave this player dead, trust. He can get it wit the hands or even the tommy have you running away from so many arms u'll feel like ur playin nazi zombies Last edited by SHECK WES; 04-08-2016 at 12:18 PM. |
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04-08-2016, 03:11 PM | #9 |
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normally I don't go for one letter np or even self np for that matter but I'll give toil's opener a decent on creativity n humor alone lol
tube to this pussy was dope af endlessly streaming was coo vs cuttin the whole line was nice nik & des was funny closer wasn't bad, decent this was actually pretty close imo, toil just had the better wording on his hitters. that she wee line was crazy if u know what a she wee is, good shit v/toil barely |
04-08-2016, 04:36 PM | #10 |
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Toil
I spaffed in ya dame she lay flat as I came.. Fixed her up by inserting little Ts..like Orc with HabiTaT’s name -Maybe I'm outta the loop but what the fuck does inserting little t mean? Like if I knew what the fuck that meant i'm pretty sure this would be good but as is I can't honestly give it to ya I’ll send ya to the world beyond as I smother ya pride.. ..at least now ya future matches ur sexuality: Bat’s for the other side -not diggin tihs I’ll puncture his lungs, watch B’s pleas at T’s knees ..the medics'll have to slap a tube to this pussy...just call him a she wee -haha nice Got T at the wheel. Push the pedal flat with my heal I’ll leave Bat's head stretched across my bonnet like the batmobile -not a fan I'll bleed out this heathen, when I cut through his spleen, 'n ..leave his blood endlessly streaming more than Spotify premium -aight Ya beckon and say ‘heeeeeeeey’, one’ve the biggest gays in town Fucksake. Bats are meant to see through sound waves..not have a see-through wave sound -nah Always dreamed u’d face me, I’m the star ya love reading Facing T got u all 'pumping heart and deep breathing' more than the cpr you'll be needing -this was decent wear SHH Ur old, tired & beat, u dnt quit now I'll have the beamer' barkin put a big round under ur eye.. boy you need to sleep more often -ehh this is ok Best believe I'm next up, shank get antsy if u think this is yo time Knife got a fastpass, that mean if toil crew In front then I'm cuttin the whole line -dope Old gats for u old heads. raise ya blood pressure & split ya head Homie I'll hit u wit the 40 then the 45.. I call em nik & des -im guessing this is referring to these old dudes ages lol aight Nigga I'm bout to bless ya soul! But at the same time Ima pack the heat.. Cuz when my arm start wavin' & I start sprayin just kno I ain't a catholic priest -this was ok Ur set can get merkd while u chillin, wat im packin a make ya core leak Clean out ur whole section wit the auto.. that Roomba's a sure beast -not diggin this Meet you and ya girl on the beach, we'll spend the whole day whilin' dat'll b the last time u see this Guyana girl together, cuz I'll em both dead on the island -ur missing a word here.. Double check ur shit. I'ma give this to u tho cause I know what u were going for I'll leave this player dead, trust. He can get it wit the hands or even the tommy have you running away from so many arms u'll feel like ur playin nazi zombies -not a fan I've gotta give this to SHH. Was feeling more of his shit. I think even if I understood little t's from toil this owuld still go to SHH. Cool battle tho some heat from both sides. Props v - shh |
04-10-2016, 12:55 AM | #11 |
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I spaffed in ya dame she lay flat as I came..
Fixed her up by inserting little Ts..like Orc with HabiTaT’s name ^decent opener I’ll send ya to the world beyond as I smother ya pride.. ..at least now ya future matches ur sexuality: Bat’s for the other side ^nah I’ll puncture his lungs, watch B’s pleas at T’s knees ..the medics'll have to slap a tube to this pussy...just call him a she wee ^lol Got T at the wheel. Push the pedal flat with my heal I’ll leave Bat's head stretched across my bonnet like the batmobile ^ok I'll bleed out this heathen, when I cut through his spleen, 'n ..leave his blood endlessly streaming more than Spotify premium ^ok Ya beckon and say ‘heeeeeeeey’, one’ve the biggest gays in town Fucksake. Bats are meant to see through sound waves..not have a see-through wave sound ^nope Always dreamed u’d face me, I’m the star ya love reading Facing T got u all 'pumping heart and deep breathing' more than the cpr you'll be needing ^cool Vs. Ur old, tired & beat, u dnt quit now I'll have the beamer' barkin put a big round under ur eye.. boy you need to sleep more often ^lol Best believe I'm next up, shank get antsy if u think this is yo time Knife got a fastpass, that mean if toil crew In front then I'm cuttin the whole line ^solid Old gats for u old heads. raise ya blood pressure & split ya head Homie I'll hit u wit the 40 then the 45.. I call em nik & des ^lol Nigga I'm bout to bless ya soul! But at the same time Ima pack the heat.. Cuz when my arm start wavin' & I start sprayin just kno I ain't a catholic priest ^nice Ur set can get merkd while u chillin, wat im packin a make ya core leak Clean out ur whole section wit the auto.. that Roomba's a sure beast ^Nah Meet you and ya girl on the beach, we'll spend the whole day whilin' dat'll b the last time u see this Guyana girl together, cuz I'll em both dead on the island ^dope I'll leave this player dead, trust. He can get it wit the hands or even the tommy have you running away from so many arms u'll feel like ur playin nazi zombies ^ok Wear tough to beat when he's on his game V- wear |
04-10-2016, 06:07 AM | #12 |
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I spaffed in ya dame she lay flat as I came.. Fixed her up by inserting little Ts..like Orc with HabiTaT’s name I’ll send ya to the world beyond as I smother ya pride.. ..at least now ya future matches ur sexuality: Bat’s for the other side I'll bleed out this heathen, when I cut through his spleen, 'n ..leave his blood endlessly streaming more than Spotify premium Always dreamed u’d face me, I’m the star ya love reading Facing T got u all 'pumping heart and deep breathing' more than the cpr you'll be needing Batshit/Wear Shhh Best believe I'm next up, shank get antsy if u think this is yo time Knife got a fastpass, that mean if toil crew In front then I'm cuttin the whole line Old gats for u old heads. raise ya blood pressure & split ya head Homie I'll hit u wit the 40 then the 45.. I call em nik & des Meet you and ya girl on the beach, we'll spend the whole day whilin' dat'll b the last time u see this Guyana girl together, cuz I'll em both dead on the island Cool reads from both, but I got Toil edging this. Can see it going either way depending on personal preference, good looks from both imo. v/ Toil |
04-10-2016, 02:02 PM | #13 |
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Enjoyed Toils verse. No horrible misses but nothing made me go wow. Didn't really like bat mobile or closer that much.
Wear Shhhh had some nice concepts but worded them poorly. Nik/Des and cut the line were pretty good. I think he had the content to win but the wording took away the impact. I got toil here. |
04-10-2016, 02:05 PM | #14 |
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I spaffed in ya dame she lay flat as I came..
Fixed her up by inserting little Ts..like Orc with HabiTaT’s name Ok lol I’ll send ya to the world beyond as I smother ya pride.. ..at least now ya future matches ur sexuality: Bat’s for the other side solid I’ll puncture his lungs, watch B’s pleas at T’s knees ..the medics'll have to slap a tube to this pussy...just call him a she wee not feeling that Got T at the wheel. Push the pedal flat with my heal I’ll leave Bat's head stretched across my bonnet like the batmobile kinda works for me I'll bleed out this heathen, when I cut through his spleen, 'n ..leave his blood endlessly streaming more than Spotify premium seen a lot of stream bars so I know it's coming, but it's not a miss imo Ya beckon and say ‘heeeeeeeey’, one’ve the biggest gays in town Fucksake. Bats are meant to see through sound waves..not have a see-through wave sound kinda funny but we're on bat flip number 3 already Always dreamed u’d face me, I’m the star ya love reading Facing T got u all 'pumping heart and deep breathing' more than the cpr you'll be needing definitely don't need the quotes, okish Ur old, tired & beat, u dnt quit now I'll have the beamer' barkin put a big round under ur eye.. boy you need to sleep more often light imo Best believe I'm next up, shank get antsy if u think this is yo time Knife got a fastpass, that mean if toil crew In front then I'm cuttin the whole line solid Old gats for u old heads. raise ya blood pressure & split ya head Homie I'll hit u wit the 40 then the 45.. I call em nik & des funny, haven't seen this exact angle with the age thing but it doesn't really hit Toil as much as those two. Solid bar though Nigga I'm bout to bless ya soul! But at the same time Ima pack the heat.. Cuz when my arm start wavin' & I start sprayin just kno I ain't a catholic priest ok Ur set can get merkd while u chillin, wat im packin a make ya core leak Clean out ur whole section wit the auto.. that Roomba's a sure beast so many gunflips at this point I just can't say I'm feeling another Meet you and ya girl on the beach, we'll spend the whole day whilin' dat'll b the last time u see this Guyana girl together, cuz I'll em both dead on the island ok I'll leave this player dead, trust. He can get it wit the hands or even the tommy have you running away from so many arms u'll feel like ur playin nazi zombies not feeling that Toil had too many name flips and zelph had too many gun bars. I'd quote Toils first 4 and zelph fastpass/40 lines so I gotta give the edge to Toil for having personal/relevant angles. That just tends to work more for me. But I got this pretty close, definitely could end either way V/Toil by a hair |
04-10-2016, 03:48 PM | #15 |
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Toil - few ok lines nothing that really stood out with that wow factor but misses wasn't too bad.
Wear - some nice idea's and concepts bro but your wording took away all the impact of the punch I felt, nik n des was ok but work on your wording your getting better This could of gone either way but i have toil edging just from his misses being better misses V - toil |
04-11-2016, 12:03 AM | #16 |
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Opener, other side, spotify and wave sound bars were dope to me. Very creative and well done
Vs Fastpass was hard, 40/45 was funny and Catholic priest was OK. Good battle Vote toil
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