Neighbor vs Blue Bayou - NEIGHBOR WINS

[Orc]

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League

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@Neighbor @Blue Bayou

[Blue Bayou]

g'luck old friend .. 14?

[Neighbor]

I got 16 signed & sealed, my dude

No rush

[Neighbor]

Ext. if you need it

I'm out for the night, will post tomorrow

[StarFaggot]

Will blue show

[Blue Bayou]

16 sent to Orc.

g'luck mang

[Neighbor]

You're my homie, but..


I'm fuckin ya bitch to Robin Thicke while she's grabbin my balls
So if you see any 'Blurred Lines'.. I hope you're drunk driving & crash thru a wall
He wanted to keep this one short, knowin I'm better w/ mines
But even if Bicentennial still be usin concepts that date back to that era in time
You been in the closet for years.. ain't no fuckin way I'm jokin
Forget the Metro card.. your main platform's hittin rails & runnin trains on Token
We could argue my HOF spot, talk losses.. I'm jus' keepin it rap
I know it's like splitting hairs, but this fag's gotta Paul Mitchell treatment for that
You trained w/ Sam Stout, but I'ma make our differences known
Only time you got 'Hands of Stone' in ya corner's playin rock-paper-scissors alone
Ya girl's head's mentally ill.. she fucks w/ me for the sexual thrill
After this, Blue dolphin a open her mouth & swallow like she's poppin ecstasy pills
You tagged w/ James.. he can tag you @ the hospital in'a sheet
I give a fuck who Beirut for when I show up & turn your block to the Middle East
Pussy.. you idolize Pauly D, sunbeds, tight denim & perfect brows
If this faggot gets any Tannehill be on his back, fittin right in w/ the Jersey crowd

16

[Blue Bayou]

remember Fight Night XXV?! i dropped 12 & this dude was ended
my gawd. he Tanked in the Ship so quick i swore it was a scuba lesson
week 1 was a joke. be honest neigh, you looked shook w/ the pen
how ironic. Tragic lost on a Wine Bar & that's where u spend Friday's lookin for men
please run the league again. ur hipster & really wack clown
& i got no problem 'taken down A Mod. B.' .. 'specially one w/ such an Indy Back Ground
bitch i'm Shotgun savvy so u better start to fuckin beg fam
or u'll get 'Held Up, w/ the Pump in ya Mouth' & i ain't talkin Keg Stands
Ms. Briggs been riding my shaft cuz this fakes square as hell..
plus i Hershey's leavin you for me.. but don't worry homie, i'ma take Caramel
this guy's broke as fuck. that wallet doesn't give this bitch a chance
so if ur lookin for Bordeaux... hit up Contiki tours & book a trip to France
lmao at ur diet. the pics ur postin make Rawnny look tough
be honest. ur only Pale Diet involves puking into one cuz ur scrawny as fuck
so call me rusty, outta sync.. start talkin rash n swear
but you'll be out a sync too.. once i let your head up for one last gasp of air

[StarFaggot]

Outlaw aka Neighbor:

I'm fuckin ya bitch to Robin Thicke while she's grabbin my balls
So if you see any 'Blurred Lines'.. I hope you're drunk driving & crash thru a wall
Concept was nice but the connection fizzled
He wanted to keep this one short, knowin I'm better w/ mines
But even if Bicentennial still be usin concepts that date back to that era in time
the wordplay and nameplay are on point not too much sting though
You been in the closet for years.. ain't no fuckin way I'm jokin
Forget the Metro card.. your main platform's hittin rails & runnin trains on Token
Cool.. I'm not sure I fully understand though do you mean Token the RB guy?
We could argue my HOF spot, talk losses.. I'm jus' keepin it rap
I know it's like splitting hairs, but this fag's gotta Paul Mitchell treatment for that
ha decent
You trained w/ Sam Stout, but I'ma make our differences known
Only time you got 'Hands of Stone' in ya corner's playin rock-paper-scissors alone
ehh, okay
Ya girl's head's mentally ill.. she fucks w/ me for the sexual thrill
After this, Blue dolphin a open her mouth & swallow like she's poppin ecstasy pills
LOL.. this works
You tagged w/ James.. he can tag you @ the hospital in'a sheet
I give a fuck who Beirut for when I show up & turn your block to the Middle East
Cool
Pussy.. you idolize Pauly D, sunbeds, tight denim & perfect brows
If this faggot gets any Tannehill be on his back, fittin right in w/ the Jersey crowd
is it pronounced tanny hill or tann hill? I'll go with tan hill.. bar was decent

This was a decent verse. I think you may have Od'ed on the wordplay and nameplay..


Blue Bayou

remember Fight Night XXV?! i dropped 12 & this dude was ended
my gawd. he Tanked in the Ship so quick i swore it was a scuba lesson
ehhh ok
week 1 was a joke. be honest neigh, you looked shook w/ the pen
how ironic. Tragic lost on a Wine Bar & that's where u spend Friday's lookin for men
ha okay...
please run the league again. ur hipster & really wack clown
& i got no problem 'taken down A Mod. B.' .. 'specially one w/ such an Indy Back Ground
I'm not even going to look up the reference.. I'll assume A mod is Ahmad.. Probably still wouldn't think it was great if I fully got it
bitch i'm Shotgun savvy so u better start to fuckin beg fam
or u'll get 'Held Up, w/ the Pump in ya Mouth' & i ain't talkin Keg Stands
LOL, nice
Ms. Briggs been riding my shaft cuz this fakes square as hell..
plus i Hershey's leavin you for me.. but don't worry homie, i'ma take Caramel
the wordplay does not work sir
this guy's broke as fuck. that wallet doesn't give this bitch a chance
so if ur lookin for Bordeaux... hit up Contiki tours & book a trip to France
nice...
lmao at ur diet. the pics ur postin make Rawnny look tough
be honest. ur only Pale Diet involves puking into one cuz ur scrawny as fuck
aighhhht
so call me rusty, outta sync.. start talkin rash n swear
but you'll be out a sync too.. once i let your head up for one last gasp of air
decent

Decent verse I can sense some rust and maybe a struggle of ideas for concepts but you pulled through


This was a close battle. I've got Blue edging this with better bars..

[Unfukwitable]

I liked this battle right here close match but Ima go with one who edged it by 2 bars .

v/Blue

[Tic]

Both had equal personals and punches. I felt that Blue's wording and execution was a little bit better. I don't think either attempt at nameplay, the Bicentennial or Caramel was effective. It has to work both ways, and I don't think either did. I'm edging this to Blue for slightly better wording and execution.

[Sentex]

Close battle.

I think that for me Blue Bayou was a little bit stronger, there really wasn't much in it to be honest though. I liked the sync line, but I personally didn't think that these verses had overly stand out lines. I am unfamiliar with you both so maybe some personals went over my head, but for me, I'll have to give the win to Blue.

V - Blue.

[Dominate]

I'm fuckin ya bitch to Robin Thicke while she's grabbin my balls
So if you see any 'Blurred Lines'.. I hope you're drunk driving & crash thru a wall
heh, cool. Not bad
He wanted to keep this one short, knowin I'm better w/ mines
But even if Bicentennial still be usin concepts that date back to that era in time
nicceeee np. Well done
You been in the closet for years.. ain't no fuckin way I'm jokin
Forget the Metro card.. your main platform's hittin rails & runnin trains on Token
Yup. wp's work and punch is good
We could argue my HOF spot, talk losses.. I'm jus' keepin it rap
I know it's like splitting hairs, but this fag's gotta Paul Mitchell treatment for that
LoL OK, cool
You trained w/ Sam Stout, but I'ma make our differences known
Only time you got 'Hands of Stone' in ya corner's playin rock-paper-scissors alone
had to look up the reference so lost impact for me, but it's cool
Ya girl's head's mentally ill.. she fucks w/ me for the sexual thrill
After this, Blue dolphin a open her mouth & swallow like she's poppin ecstasy pills
good wp/punch
You tagged w/ James.. he can tag you @ the hospital in'a sheet
I give a fuck who Beirut for when I show up & turn your block to the Middle East
yep, works.
Pussy.. you idolize Pauly D, sunbeds, tight denim & perfect brows
If this faggot gets any Tannehill be on his back, fittin right in w/ the Jersey crowd
Nice. Clever wording.


Thought this was a dope verse. No misses, and a couple were standouts... maybe best verse I've seen from you... at least in recent memory. Well done.



vs



remember Fight Night XXV?! i dropped 12 & this dude was ended
my gawd. he Tanked in the Ship so quick i swore it was a scuba lesson
cool... I'm guessing you mean champion-ship.... tanked is a fresh wp... flip is creative.... personal works
week 1 was a joke. be honest neigh, you looked shook w/ the pen
how ironic. Tragic lost on a Wine Bar & that's where u spend Friday's lookin for men
LoL, cool personal/funny punch
please run the league again. ur hipster & really wack clown
& i got no problem 'taken down A Mod. B.' .. 'specially one w/ such an Indy Back Ground
I asked you about this one but you're not responding. I decided to go ahead and vote anyway bc I feel like the onus was on you to make sure readers got it or at leeeeast could find it with a quick google search... which didn't happen. It might have been an OK line... it was really all about the wp though - the punch itself isnt that stingy or personal...
bitch i'm Shotgun savvy so u better start to fuckin beg fam
or u'll get 'Held Up, w/ the Pump in ya Mouth' & i ain't talkin Keg Stands
heh, cool... not bad
Ms. Briggs been riding my shaft cuz this fakes square as hell..
plus i Hershey's leavin you for me.. but don't worry homie, i'ma take Caramel
This was the other one I didn't get but decided to vote anyway bc I'm pretty sure I wouldn't like it anyway. I'll assume it's something like Neigh's surname or alias is Briggs and his wife to be is called Mel... not feelin the hersheys wp and the way u worded wasn't a strong punch
this guy's broke as fuck. that wallet doesn't give this bitch a chance
so if ur lookin for Bordeaux... hit up Contiki tours & book a trip to France
heh, good nameplay, fresh... flip works but feel like maybe you could've done something more punchy with it... still a good bar
lmao at ur diet. the pics ur postin make Rawnny look tough
be honest. ur only Pale Diet involves puking into one cuz ur scrawny as fuck
haha, cool
so call me rusty, outta sync.. start talkin rash n swear
but you'll be out a sync too.. once i let your head up for one last gasp of air
cool... good as a closer... sync wp not super fresh but wording/punch on this one was good enough to compensate

Picked up more toward the end... does seem to me like you're pretty rusty.... wording not as sharp/harsh as it's been in the past and seemed like u were struggling to come up with concepts.... hope you'll stick around a while and we'll see the mighty Blue Bayou in full swing again... .That said, this is still a verse that would body most ppl.



howwwweverrr.... Neigh is not 'most people', I thought he came really dope here. Blue had 2 lines I wasn't feeling, Neigh had no misses. That's the biggest difference here. Otherwise the level was comparable.... close in that sense, but to me Neigh was the clear winner



v/ neigh

[Allen Knight]

I'm fuckin ya bitch to Robin Thicke while she's grabbin my balls
So if you see any 'Blurred Lines'.. I hope you're drunk driving & crash thru a wall
He wanted to keep this one short, knowin I'm better w/ mines
But even if Bicentennial still be usin concepts that date back to that era in time
You been in the closet for years.. ain't no fuckin way I'm jokin
Forget the Metro card.. your main platform's hittin rails & runnin trains on Token
We could argue my HOF spot, talk losses.. I'm jus' keepin it rap
I know it's like splitting hairs, but this fag's gotta Paul Mitchell treatment for that
You trained w/ Sam Stout, but I'ma make our differences known
Only time you got 'Hands of Stone' in ya corner's playin rock-paper-scissors alone

vs

week 1 was a joke. be honest neigh, you looked shook w/ the pen
how ironic. Tragic lost on a Wine Bar & that's where u spend Friday's lookin for men
please run the league again. ur hipster & really wack clown
& i got no problem 'taken down A Mod. B.' .. 'specially one w/ such an Indy Back Ground
bitch i'm Shotgun savvy so u better start to fuckin beg fam
or u'll get 'Held Up, w/ the Pump in ya Mouth' & i ain't talkin Keg Stands
lmao at ur diet. the pics ur postin make Rawnny look tough
be honest. ur only Pale Diet involves puking into one cuz ur scrawny as fuck

v/neighbor, cool battle both had some nice shit
but i thought neigh was more consistent here his jabs still were solid blue had some nice shit
but his misses were off and i feel he still a lil rusty but yah came nice, dope shit yahll props to both but i got neigh winning

[ill nik-A]

Blue won pretty easy IMO but I'm sure neighbor doesn't want me voting

Ill break it down more if I'm allowed

[StarFaggot]

No, no you cannot.

[DLB]

the power is granted nik. break it down sir

[Cunt]

You tagged w/ James.. he can tag you @ the hospital in'a sheet
I give a fuck who Beirut for when I show up & turn your block to the Middle East
Pussy.. you idolize Pauly D, sunbeds, tight denim & perfect brows
If this faggot gets any Tannehill be on his back, fittin right in w/ the Jersey crowd


vs


week 1 was a joke. be honest neigh, you looked shook w/ the pen
how ironic. Tragic lost on a Wine Bar & that's where u spend Friday's lookin for men
please run the league again. ur hipster & really wack clown
& i got no problem 'taken down A Mod. B.' .. 'specially one w/ such an Indy Back Ground
bitch i'm Shotgun savvy so u better start to fuckin beg fam
or u'll get 'Held Up, w/ the Pump in ya Mouth' & i ain't talkin Keg Stands
Ms. Briggs been riding my shaft cuz this fakes square as hell..
plus i Hershey's leavin you for me.. but don't worry homie, i'ma take Caramel



cool battle was looking forward to this one the most out of all this week...... yup, I have blue taking this one.... enjoyed his verse a lot more than neighs. wine bar line was nice, same goes for indy background.... neighs beirut was nice too..... surprised blue showed tbh but yeah, he takes this comfortably in my opinion.

v' blue

[Cashius]

Bicentennial, metro card, Paul Mitchell, hands of stone

Vs.

Keg stand, Hershey's, Bordeaux

Dope battle. Thought Neigh was a bit more consistant. Keg stand was lotb, but gotta go with Neigh.

Neighbor.

[Beyond]

He wanted to keep this one short, knowin I'm better w/ mines
But even if Bicentennial still be usin concepts that date back to that era in time
You trained w/ Sam Stout, but I'ma make our differences known
Only time you got 'Hands of Stone' in ya corner's playin rock-paper-scissors alone
Ya girl's head's mentally ill.. she fucks w/ me for the sexual thrill
After this, Blue dolphin a open her mouth & swallow like she's poppin ecstasy pills
You tagged w/ James.. he can tag you @ the hospital in'a sheet
I give a fuck who Beirut for when I show up & turn your block to the Middle East
Pussy.. you idolize Pauly D, sunbeds, tight denim & perfect brows
If this faggot gets any Tannehill be on his back, fittin right in w/ the Jersey crowd

vs

week 1 was a joke. be honest neigh, you looked shook w/ the pen
how ironic. Tragic lost on a Wine Bar & that's where u spend Friday's lookin for men
bitch i'm Shotgun savvy so u better start to fuckin beg fam
or u'll get 'Held Up, w/ the Pump in ya Mouth' & i ain't talkin Keg Stands
Ms. Briggs been riding my shaft cuz this fakes square as hell..
plus i Hershey's leavin you for me.. but don't worry homie, i'ma take Caramel
this guy's broke as fuck. that wallet doesn't give this bitch a chance
so if ur lookin for Bordeaux... hit up Contiki tours & book a trip to France
lmao at ur diet. the pics ur postin make Rawnny look tough
be honest. ur only Pale Diet involves puking into one cuz ur scrawny as fuck
so call me rusty, outta sync.. start talkin rash n swear
but you'll be out a sync too.. once i let your head up for one last gasp of air


Nasty battle. Wasn't feeling Blurred Lines misdirect too much. Don't really fuck with Robin Thicke, tbh, & song lines aren't really creative, IMO. Bicentennnial was good. Seen quite a few Token/subway type of lines, this one was a decent flip, but a doesn't hit too hard since him and Token aren't really known to have some great friendship or anything. Personal seems fabricated in order to make the punch work. Splitting hairs, another misdirect punch. It's alright, but set-up is kind of eh since no one really shouting from rooftops that Neighbor should be in the HOF. I don't know whether it's from seeing Bags and Karp go in or something and just feeling like it's 'your turn,' but just coming out of no where at this juncture. Hands of Stone is kind of clever. I kind of wish I would of thought of that play when I battled him. Oh well, still won. Blue dolphin is dope. Haven't seen, so fresh Blue nameplay. Beirut is nice, too. Unless it has something to do with me falsely being considered Middle Eastern. In that case, you're a faggot. Giving you the benefit of your clout, though. Tannehill is a good closer. Fresh. Opener was alright. Tank would of been better, but probably not possible. Wine Bar was cool. Whine/wine not the most original, but a decent flip none the less. No idea what A Mod B means. I'm guessing has something to do with Indie, idk. Keg stand is dope as fuck, best line I've read so far in the battle. Hershey's is ill, too. Bordeaux good nameplay. Pale Diet is good, too. Clever. Sync, good closer. Much like Pale Diet. Overall this one could probably go either way, but I have to go with Blue because Keg Stand I thought was LOTB and he just turned up the heat down the stretch. Neigh had some fresh shit, though. Hate there has to be a loser. Props to both.

/v blue bayou