Champ match: King karaoke (9-0) Vs ill nik-A (5-1) KAR WINS

[Allen Knight]

NBL Season 7
Week 9

Due FRIDAY, Feb 7th

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@King Karaoke vs vs @ill nik-A

[ill nik-A]

16
Welcome!

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

In...

Bye...

[ill nik-A]

16 sent to AK
@King Karaoke

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

Niggaz don't know how to do dirt clean


When I was younger noone could see me

This Coke head thinks he's better than us but he's got people mislead
Only reason he's never been to jail is cuz they give the fiends rehab instead
If I were you, I'd be more focused on health
Only person wearing Jordan's at Jordan's age should be Jordan himself
Every time u post a pic it looks like the buttons are popping
Hit the track & try getting to a Finishline when a pair Jordan's not dropping
Innovator & Phuck are your pals, u'd meet real people if u tried a salad
The reason y u've got "No New Friends" is cuz ur the same size as Khaled
My verses got us to the tag semis, everyone said that was rape
Funny how I carried the team on my back yet ur the one bent out of shape
When's the last time you've lost a battle and not cried??
The downslope u've been on could make the ones in Sochi look like a park slide
Get a real job, the only things u can afford are Jordan's and pot
U've got a pension for swaying, sad thing is it's the only 1 that u've got
I've got a knack for winning and champing leagues without pulling strings
If I mention anything Nik knacks, I'd only be talking about useless things

Bye...

[ill nik-A]

Race talk can become a hairy situation I’ve seen son get bitter
but we all know ur ‘fade’ to black is more like a soup bowl cut on a wigger
u’re on NC acting hood but cousin why don’t u prove ur type, bitch
unless Uncle Tom’s nephew is scared of postin his pic & not bein accepted by white kids
I’ll pretend too & let ur lies slide but homie get ur rhymes right
cuz those aren’t punches… I’m assuming it’s only a fist cuz u hate ur white side
ur thought process is cheap; ur discussion & current event rhyme poorest
I mean u even flip other people’s tags… so I’m making u pay the price for it
I’ll beat u at ur own game addressing ur nonsense besting ur process
cuz I’m sure u’ve entered the Bates Motel thread… fishing for the rest of ur concepts
I’ve got ur number… u know how many times I’ve bashed ur plans?!?
I’ve beaten u 7 times & u gonna need the 8th wonder of the world to even have a chance
Beating me? Pfft face ur inner demons pray now & hope
I'm not only gonna win this clean... I'm gonna shove sage down ur throat
I could either win or lose yes it's that simple
But uve set the bar so low there's no way I could be in limbo


Champ

[Alphabet]

If I were you, I'd be more focused on health
Only person wearing Jordan's at Jordan's age should be Jordan himself
Innovator & Phuck are your pals, u'd meet real people if u tried a salad
The reason y u've got "No New Friends" is cuz ur the same size as Khaled
My verses got us to the tag semis, everyone said that was rape
Funny how I carried the team on my back yet ur the one bent out of shape
Get a real job, the only things u can afford are Jordan's and pot
U've got a pension for swaying, sad thing is it's the only 1 that u've got

vs

Race talk can become a hairy situation I’ve seen son get bitter
but we all know ur ‘fade’ to black is more like a soup bowl cut on a wigger
u’re on NC acting hood but cousin why don’t u prove ur type, bitch
unless Uncle Tom’s nephew is scared of postin his pic & not bein accepted by white kids
I’ll beat u at ur own game addressing ur nonsense besting ur process
cuz I’m sure u’ve entered the Bates Motel thread… fishing for the rest of ur concepts
I’ve got ur number… u know how many times I’ve bashed ur plans?!?
I’ve beaten u 7 times & u gonna need the 8th wonder of the world to even have a chance

4 v 4 for quotables, both had some pretty nice bars, I think bates motel was prolly lotb or uncle tom was pretty dope as well. kars best bar imo was pension for swaying which was pretty nice but all in all I have ill getting the dub for being more consistent with the harder hitting quotables and his non quotes having more impact

[Eviscerate]

standout lines from each...


karaoke:

If I were you, I'd be more focused on health
Only person wearing Jordan's at Jordan's age should be Jordan himself --LOTB

Every time u post a pic it looks like the buttons are popping
Hit the track & try getting to a Finishline when a pair Jordan's not dropping

When's the last time you've lost a battle and not cried??
The downslope u've been on could make the ones in Sochi look like a park slide

-vs-


nik:

ur thought process is cheap; ur discussion & current event rhyme poorest
I mean u even flip other people’s tags… so I’m making u pay the price for it

I’ve got ur number… u know how many times I’ve bashed ur plans?!?
I’ve beaten u 7 times & u gonna need the 8th wonder of the world to even have a chance



First off, imo Karaoke has one of the cleanest wording and set-ups in text battling. His verse was solid throughout and keep the momentum i didn't see any slacking. He used 2 good angles (nikkas age/appearance and the jordan ish) and really hammered that. Although the jordan lines would seem too obvious against nikka, he executed them very creative/well. He also had LOTB.

Nikka's wording was not as clean, but had good personals in the beginning and pretty much had the 2nd best line of the battle with that people's tags/pay the price line which i really liked. Some of the personals weren't that effective imo, and overall his punches weren't as effective as Kar's. Still a good verse though.


V/Karaoke

[CtrlF4]

I'll have a vote up within an hour.

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Originally Posted by King Karaoke

Hi...



This Coke head thinks he's better than us but he's got people mislead
Only reason he's never been to jail is cuz they give the fiends rehab instead
Decent
If I were you, I'd be more focused on health
Only person wearing Jordan's at Jordan's age should be Jordan himself
ok
Every time u post a pic it looks like the buttons are popping
Hit the track & try getting to a Finishline when a pair Jordan's not dropping
ok
Innovator & Phuck are your pals, u'd meet real people if u tried a salad
The reason y u've got "No New Friends" is cuz ur the same size as Khaled
coo
My verses got us to the tag semis, everyone said that was rape
Funny how I carried the team on my back yet ur the one bent out of shape
ok..but the out of shape thing is a bit used
When's the last time you've lost a battle and not cried??
The downslope u've been on could make the ones in Sochi look like a park slide
ok
Get a real job, the only things u can afford are Jordan's and pot
U've got a pension for swaying, sad thing is it's the only 1 that u've got
not bad
I've got a knack for winning and champing leagues without pulling strings
If I mention anything Nik knacks, I'd only be talking about useless things
didn't like
Bye...

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

Race talk can become a hairy situation I’ve seen son get bitter
but we all know ur ‘fade’ to black is more like a soup bowl cut on a wigger
ok
u’re on NC acting hood but cousin why don’t u prove ur type, bitch
unless Uncle Tom’s nephew is scared of postin his pic & not bein accepted by white kids
nah
I’ll pretend too & let ur lies slide but homie get ur rhymes right
cuz those aren’t punches… I’m assuming it’s only a fist cuz u hate ur white side
meh
ur thought process is cheap; ur discussion & current event rhyme poorest
I mean u even flip other people’s tags… so I’m making u pay the price for it
nice
I’ll beat u at ur own game addressing ur nonsense besting ur process
cuz I’m sure u’ve entered the Bates Motel thread… fishing for the rest of ur concepts
coo
I’ve got ur number… u know how many times I’ve bashed ur plans?!?
I’ve beaten u 7 times & u gonna need the 8th wonder of the world to even have a chance
coo
Beating me? Pfft face ur inner demons pray now & hope
I'm not only gonna win this clean... I'm gonna shove sage down ur throat
decent
I could either win or lose yes it's that simple
But uve set the bar so low there's no way I could be in limbo
nah...played

Champ

V/Kar...Nik hit were harder when they hit but karaoke was more consistent

[JonTheDon]

Wearing jordans, no new friends, caring on back, pension

Vs.

Super bowl, uncle tom, bates hotel, 8th wonder

Good ass battle, quotes the same..... coming back 2 edit this was good lol

[Bender]

kar- I liked the no new friends line, the 3 jordan punches were all decent but you kinda beat the idea to death by talking about it so much.

nik- had the flipped tags, opener and closer.


this was close I read it the other night and my first impression was that Nika won but now I'm not so sure. I mean there was a few good punches but a few of them were really played ideas that felt like the 8th wonder line was wack to me...on the other hand Kar had some good personals but they repetitive Jordan lines feel kind of short but theyt still. hit hard for me...

this battle is very hard to vote on but I have to pic Kar for more solid punches all together.

vote kar

[Allen Knight]

3-1 kar
Upping, muthafuckas vote or lose votes next week.

[Tettris]

If I were you, I'd be more focused on health
Only person wearing Jordan's at Jordan's age should be Jordan himself
My verses got us to the tag semis, everyone said that was rape
Funny how I carried the team on my back yet ur the one bent out of shape
When's the last time you've lost a battle and not cried??
The downslope u've been on could make the ones in Sochi look like a park slide
Get a real job, the only things u can afford are Jordan's and pot
U've got a pension for swaying, sad thing is it's the only 1 that u've got

vs

Race talk can become a hairy situation I’ve seen son get bitter
but we all know ur ‘fade’ to black is more like a soup bowl cut on a wigger
ur thought process is cheap; ur discussion & current event rhyme poorest
I mean u even flip other people’s tags… so I’m making u pay the price for it
I’ve got ur number… u know how many times I’ve bashed ur plans?!?
I’ve beaten u 7 times & u gonna need the 8th wonder of the world to even have a chance

great champ match here...two vets going hard...I think Karaoke got this battle with one more quotable than Nik...excellent job gentlemen

v/Kar

[Sharp]

Every time u post a pic it looks like the buttons are popping
Hit the track & try getting to a Finishline when a pair Jordan's not dropping
Innovator & Phuck are your pals, u'd meet real people if u tried a salad
The reason y u've got "No New Friends" is cuz ur the same size as Khaled
My verses got us to the tag semis, everyone said that was rape
Funny how I carried the team on my back yet ur the one bent out of shape
When's the last time you've lost a battle and not cried??
The downslope u've been on could make the ones in Sochi look like a park slide
Get a real job, the only things u can afford are Jordan's and pot
U've got a pension for swaying, sad thing is it's the only 1 that u've got



Race talk can become a hairy situation I’ve seen son get bitter
but we all know ur ‘fade’ to black is more like a soup bowl cut on a wigger
I’ll pretend too & let ur lies slide but homie get ur rhymes right
cuz those aren’t punches… I’m assuming it’s only a fist cuz u hate ur white side
ur thought process is cheap; ur discussion & current event rhyme poorest
I mean u even flip other people’s tags… so I’m making u pay the price for it
I’ve got ur number… u know how many times I’ve bashed ur plans?!?
I’ve beaten u 7 times & u gonna need the 8th wonder of the world to even have a chance
Beating me? Pfft face ur inner demons pray now & hope
I'm not only gonna win this clean... I'm gonna shove sage down ur throat


christ this is close... either one could take it in my eyes I just thought nik hit a little bit harder. dope match

v/nik

[Plot]

I liked Kareoke better here, Nik came okay and seemed probably harder, but Kar was fresher. Jordans, out of shape, pension and Nik knacks were standuts to me. I only really liked Niks closer which I thought was dope.

[Clash]

Originally Posted by King Karaoke

Hi...



This Coke head thinks he's better than us but he's got people mislead
Only reason he's never been to jail is cuz they give the fiends rehab instead
not hittin, maybe I'm missin a personal
If I were you, I'd be more focused on health
Only person wearing Jordan's at Jordan's age should be Jordan himself
word feelin that
Every time u post a pic it looks like the buttons are popping
Hit the track & try getting to a Finishline when a pair Jordan's not dropping
same name flip, wording off
Innovator & Phuck are your pals, u'd meet real people if u tried a salad
The reason y u've got "No New Friends" is cuz ur the same size as Khaled
not bad
My verses got us to the tag semis, everyone said that was rape
Funny how I carried the team on my back yet ur the one bent out of shape
I liked dat
When's the last time you've lost a battle and not cried??
The downslope u've been on could make the ones in Sochi look like a park slide
another good hit
Get a real job, the only things u can afford are Jordan's and pot
U've got a pension for swaying, sad thing is it's the only 1 that u've got
ehhh ok
I've got a knack for winning and champing leagues without pulling strings
If I mention anything Nik knacks, I'd only be talking about useless things
ehhh would better if knacking something was a thing

Bye...

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

Race talk can become a hairy situation I’ve seen son get bitter
but we all know ur ‘fade’ to black is more like a soup bowl cut on a wigger
not bad
u’re on NC acting hood but cousin why don’t u prove ur type, bitch
unless Uncle Tom’s nephew is scared of postin his pic & not bein accepted by white kids
no comment
I’ll pretend too & let ur lies slide but homie get ur rhymes right
cuz those aren’t punches… I’m assuming it’s only a fist cuz u hate ur white side
not feelin it
ur thought process is cheap; ur discussion & current event rhyme poorest
I mean u even flip other people’s tags… so I’m making u pay the price for it
word this one hit
I’ll beat u at ur own game addressing ur nonsense besting ur process
cuz I’m sure u’ve entered the Bates Motel thread… fishing for the rest of ur concepts
seen that bates motel, still don't get the punch
I’ve got ur number… u know how many times I’ve bashed ur plans?!?
I’ve beaten u 7 times & u gonna need the 8th wonder of the world to even have a chance
liked that nice
Beating me? Pfft face ur inner demons pray now & hope
I'm not only gonna win this clean... I'm gonna shove sage down ur throat
ehhhh
I could either win or lose yes it's that simple
But uve set the bar so low there's no way I could be in limbo
played concept


Champ

Score:

Karaoke - 4 hits
Ill - 3 hits


Mvgt kar

[Destroyer]

karaoke already won this, but Allen says I have to vote
I liked the Jordan's lines, the one about Jordan himself, the finish line one was hilarious
from nik I liked flip tags

[Hush]

Damn felt Kare entire verse save the closer

First 6 were beast
No criticism to be given


Dude beasted




Fade 2 black was lotb
Flip tags was dope too


Nik verse would beat most but kar just was in another level this time

[Allen Knight]

Jordan, finishline, bent outta shape, sochi

Vs

Fade to black, tags, 8th. Wonder


V/KAR, this was close as fuck both had some dope shit. Real nice champ match.
Nik all three bars we're nice I qouted. But kars were dope and he was a little more consistent
here he had one more strong qouted. Took it imo, dope shit yahll props.