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07-15-2013, 02:57 AM
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Round 1 - 6: Meth vs. 11: Untold - {Untold wins}
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07-15-2013, 09:06 AM
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How many u want. No atomic/his alias' votes until further notice |
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07-15-2013, 09:40 AM
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07-20-2013, 10:47 PM
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@Untold
Let's Dance When it comes to cash, than Im winnin it G If unclaimed money than you know that's the way it was intended to be I'm the vilain. u dont get pussy but ur the biggest ive met dude You're not a Here oh Untold, and no way you would ever hear that in the bedroom Call me professor, My punches hit in a heavy way I can give u a lesson or 2, but that just happens to ur skill every day My wording's the mechanics, wp and nps are my trigger, maggot You can have all the ammo in the world, but you still need a firing pin to shoot me faggot I'm blowing cities up in flames, everyones retreatin kid You dropping bombs? You're verse wouldnt be an Atomic Blast if i deleted it homies have my back, for war, love, or spottin bitch Only dudes that have your 6 are just so they can be the 9 on top of it I hope you get diseases anything that will be burning you son I don't care if you get a tumor not. I just hope you fucking die and spend eternity in one Any region take a pick cuz im winning little runt Hell, I'd kick your ass so far up North West, Kanye's baby would spit you up |
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07-21-2013, 01:42 AM
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u MUST've applied this same principle in ur verse battlin Bags<-- pack'd those n kept goin n ur right! those matches were shitty. but this whore shouldn't speak cuz whats THAT say about a guy who participated in battles ALL four of those weeks ur fat, ugly, over weight n out'a shape. while i run laps for fun on tracks i can't picture u makin it a Round 1, much less a Round 2 befor ur gaspin for air n ya lungs collapse ya girls outlook seems larger than life. she'll take half of ya name cuz when i look at the big picture, that BITCH still only fits in half of the frame dawg, ur banana suit was disgustin! too bad ur a breathin disgrace cuz that 'Getup, made me wanna do that n find a toilet to puke in after seein ur face in reality; ur sad, pathetic, live wit ur parents n whack as hell plus ur Saturday Night Fever's r spent watchin that movie wit ur mom nursin u back to health soft fag, don't start whore. what i'm keyin is hardcore last thing u key'd that had an impact, wuz "I MIZZ U BABY" in ya x-bf's car door this dead mans bleedin Redman. ya cant replace ya sobriety s'when M-E-T-H O.D., man.. it'll be the first drug related death embraced by society |
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07-21-2013, 04:29 AM
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When it comes to cash, than Im winnin it G
If unclaimed money than you know that's the way it was intended to be punch is meh, un-flips are too easy but it's ok i guess I'm the vilain. u dont get pussy but ur the biggest ive met dude You're not a Here oh Untold, and no way you would ever hear that in the bedroom mehhhh ok Call me professor, My punches hit in a heavy way I can give u a lesson or 2, but that just happens to ur skill every day someone can't "lessen or 2" so it makes no sense, the concept was good tho My wording's the mechanics, wp and nps are my trigger, maggot You can have all the ammo in the world, but you still need a firing pin to shoot me faggot hah, cool I'm blowing cities up in flames, everyones retreatin kid You dropping bombs? You're verse wouldnt be an Atomic Blast if i deleted it this is honestly awful. an atomic blast? doesn't even connect w/ u deleting votes either wtf.. homies have my back, for war, love, or spottin bitch Only dudes that have your 6 are just so they can be the 9 on top of it ok I hope you get diseases anything that will be burning you son I don't care if you get a tumor not. I just hope you fucking die and spend eternity in one "get a tumor not" it doesn't even work both ways @ all. so forced Any region take a pick cuz im winning little runt Hell, I'd kick your ass so far up North West, Kanye's baby would spit you up lol wtf... no .. this must be tru n ur takin a vacation from dope verses wit what ur texts showin u MUST've applied this same principle in ur verse battlin Bags<-- pack'd those n kept goin bag flips are played, this was good tho n ur right! those matches were shitty. but this whore shouldn't speak cuz whats THAT say about a guy who participated in battles ALL four of those weeks ok ur fat, ugly, over weight n out'a shape. while i run laps for fun on tracks i can't picture u makin it a Round 1, much less a Round 2 befor ur gaspin for air n ya lungs collapse cool ya girls outlook seems larger than life. she'll take half of ya name cuz when i look at the big picture, that BITCH still only fits in half of the frame lmao, concepts played but i laughed dawg, ur banana suit was disgustin! too bad ur a breathin disgrace cuz that 'Getup, made me wanna do that n find a toilet to puke in after seein ur face lmaoooooo cool in reality; ur sad, pathetic, live wit ur parents n whack as hell plus ur Saturday Night Fever's r spent watchin that movie wit ur mom nursin u back to health LOL soft fag, don't start whore. what i'm keyin is hardcore last thing u key'd that had an impact, wuz "I MIZZ U BABY" in ya x-bf's car door assuming key'd shits all played but ive never seen this b4, nice this dead mans bleedin Redman. ya cant replace ya sobriety s'when M-E-T-H O.D., man.. it'll be the first drug related death embraced by society doesn't work when said outloud but the concept is nice // v/untold, literally not even close. worst verse i've seen from meth + best verse i've seen from untold. |
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07-22-2013, 11:13 PM
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Tread Lightly.
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Unclaimed was OK but could have been better with a stronger flip, here oh untold is OK wording wasn't good for the punch, lesson is played, ammo was OK, Atomic Blast nah, got ur 6 was dope I never saw that before surprisingly and you worded and flipped that one really well, tumor should have been the other way round for technicality, tumor/tomb or wp had potential but it's tricky to execute it and the 'or' bit was awkward how u did it... north west nah... ur verse against bags was waaay better... guessing u rushed or didn't care about this one... Un: 'Bags' lines are all done, you would have to have an amazingly creative flip or a verrrry harsh punch to make it work.... all four of those weeks was a cool personal... round 1/2 is kinda generic but you flipped it with a personal and I liked how u worded it, still hit for me... big picture ehhh too generic/played... getup was a good idea but the flip was just so-so... saturday night fever I felt could have been set up better but the flip was funny and harsh enough that I still liked it... key'd nah, played... closer was eh/OK.... got potential, hope ur participating in UW on my team :) tbh I gotta give it to Untold as well... he just had more stuff I was feeling... think you took him too lightly Meth... v/ Untold
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07-23-2013, 04:12 PM
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Only dudes that have your 6 are just so they can be the 9 on top of it I hope you get diseases anything that will be burning you son I don't care if you get a tumor not. I just hope you fucking die and spend eternity in one vs n ur right! those matches were shitty. but this whore shouldn't speak cuz whats THAT say about a guy who participated in battles ALL four of those weeks ur fat, ugly, over weight n out'a shape. while i run laps for fun on tracks i can't picture u makin it a Round 1, much less a Round 2 befor ur gaspin for air n ya lungs collapse n reality; ur sad, pathetic, live wit ur parents n whack as hell plus ur Saturday Night Fever's r spent watchin that movie wit ur mom nursin u back to health the two bars i quoted from meth were solid but the rest of his verse was just kind of lackluster in comparison and not up to par with the 2 dope bars from his verse, consistency just didn't keep up. untold had 3 bars which i felt hit, and his misses were more on point and had a bit more connection than meths which made for a stronger verse. |
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07-24-2013, 12:22 PM
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Meth verse was alright. Unclaimed didn't come across right. Tumor was okay lesson was a stretch.
Untold puke key and and snf were cool. A round was reaching a little but it was cool V untold |
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07-25-2013, 06:00 AM
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When it comes to cash, than Im winnin it G
If unclaimed money than you know that's the way it was intended to be COOL NP I'm the vilain. u dont get pussy but ur the biggest ive met dude You're not a Here oh Untold, and no way you would ever hear that in the bedroom EHH Call me professor, My punches hit in a heavyway I can give u a lesson or 2, but that just happens to ur skill every day OK My wording's the mechanics, wp and nps are my trigger, maggot You can have all the ammo in the world, butyou still need a firing pin to shoot me faggot THIS CAME OFF STATEMENTISH TO ME I'm blowing cities up in flames, everyones retreatin kid You dropping bombs? You're verse wouldnt be an Atomic Blast if i deleted it NAH MAN homies have my back, for war, love, or spottin bitch Only dudes that have your 6 are just so they can be the 9 on top of it OK I hope you get diseases anything that will be burning you son I don't care if you get a tumor not. I just hope you fucking die and spend eternity in one OK WORDPLAY BUT KINDA LONG WINDED Any region take a pick cuz im winning little runt Hell, I'd kick your ass so far up North West, Kanye's baby would spit you up NAH VS this must be tru n ur takin a vacation from dope verses wit what ur texts showin u MUST've applied this same principle in ur verse battlin Bags<-- pack'd those n kept goin NOT A BAD PERSONAL n ur right! those matches were shitty. but this whore shouldn't speak cuz whats THAT say about a guy who participated in battles ALL four of those weeks SIMPLE BUT NOT BAD ur fat, ugly, over weight n out'a shape. while i run laps for fun on tracks i can't picture u makin it a Round 1, much less a Round 2 befor ur gaspin for air n ya lungs collapse NAH ya girls outlook seems larger than life. she'll take half of ya name cuz when i look at the big picture, that BITCH still only fits in half of the frame OK dawg, ur banana suit was disgustin! too bad ur a breathin disgrace cuz that 'Getup, made me wanna do that n find a toilet to puke in after seein ur face COOL PERSONAL in reality; ur sad, pathetic, live wit ur parents n whack as hell plus ur Saturday Night Fever's r spent watchin that movie wit ur mom nursin u back to health SOLID FLIP soft fag, don't start whore. what i'm keyin is hardcore last thing u key'd that had an impact, wuz "IMIZZ U BABY" in ya x-bf's car door NAHH, SHIT WAS JUST SO SO this dead mans bleedin Redman. ya cant replace ya sobriety s'when M-E-T-H O.D., man.. it'll be the first drug related death embraced by society A STRETCH . . SEEN BETTER FROM BOTH TBH, FOR A 16LINE VERSE YALL WERENT CONSISTENT AT ALL, SO MANY MISSES AND EHH LINES. STILL SOME GOOD SHIT THO, UN'S PUNCHES JUST HIT BETTER IMO AND HE HAD THE SATURDAY NITE LINE AS LOTB IMO SO HE TAKES THIS.. V/UNTOLD |
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