Round 2 - 2: Cashius vs. 10: Atomic - {Cashius wins}

07-28-2013, 01:53 AM

10-16 lines more if agreed upon

No cheating

Due Thursday

Will edit in real shit in the morrow

@Atomic @Cashius

Atomic · 07-28-2013, 04:02 AM

16, gl

Cashius · 07-28-2013, 07:57 AM

12 sounds better.

08-01-2013, 08:10 PM

@Atomic @Cashius

Cashius · 08-01-2013, 10:46 PM

Edit by Meth

It's obvious I got a way with bitches...they all be DYING for my junk
You got away with bitches, too...and prolly got them tied up in your trunk
He can't even hang with mid-tier dudes. Against me, this loser is finished
Be honest, you couldn't see a Split, Atom...even with a degree in nuclear physics
I can screw your bitch for hours. I'll give you some tips to see how it's done
When I fuck her, the only one to get officer...when you do, she's screaming for one
She even lets me fuck when he's ragging. She likes mine better than yours
That bitch let me hit the cycle...but I didn't stop at first, second, or third
Faggot thinks his wardrobe's fresh. Thinks his girl's turned on by his gear
But I don't care Howard you Rocket...that bitch'll STILL be gone in a year
You even look like a bitch. I'd hate to live in this feminine faggot's world
Looks like we're all taking a page from Knux...cuz now EVERYONE says Atagirl

Atomic · 08-01-2013, 11:02 PM

i agree w/ the site, i'm not solid at text & to be honest i'm just a retard,
^this idiots probably takin da-bait, but because of u no-one wants to see ours.
i'm sharp, but no nine. grab the katana & i'm slashin till the gore spreads,
& if the bat'll read well, soon ull have louisville slugger tatted on ur forehead.
ugly skeez's, nerds & fags... only ppl seen fuckin talking w/ this skid,
if u see this ugly kid brim w/ confidence he'd just be walking out of lids.
atomic drops that hot shit. yes, you'll get bombed bitch,
of course I won't give your life support, but I will put you on it.
i'll be slumpin this bitch honestly its nothing i quit,
when it comes to cash verses we DoubtFire because every punch is a miss.
ur bitch is nasty as fuck, she's honestly a whore bruh,
we'd have to force clothes on her.. i wouldn't even let the internet explorer.

Untold · 08-03-2013, 12:18 PM

It's obvious I got a way with bitches...they all be DYING for my junk
You got away with bitches, too...and prolly got them tied up in your trunk
He can't even hang with mid-tier dudes. Against me, this loser is finished
Be honest, you couldn't see a Split, Atom...even with a degree in nuclear physics
^a bit of played concept, but good flip! I dug it
You even look like a bitch. I'd hate to live in this feminine faggot's world
Looks like we're all taking a page from Knux...cuz now EVERYONE says Atagirl

Vs

i agree w/ the site, i'm not solid at text & to be honest i'm just a retard,
^this idiots probably takin da-bait, but because of u no-one wants to see ours.
ugly skeez's, nerds & fags... only ppl seen fuckin talking w/ this skid,
if u see this ugly kid brim w/ confidence he'd just be walking out of lids.
^cool concept but could hit harder

This was a decent battle. Cash, you had some creative wording, it gives some of ya concepts life, like the split atom line. I've seen similar lines like that, but you made it relevant, so I enjoyed it. There was also some stuff I've seen before but your wording makes up for it. I liked the opener a lot. Fav line of the battle. And Atomic, I saw a bunch of played concepts, especially the Doubtfire line. I feel like I've seen it before it's been used so much. The lids line was a cool idea, but your wording on it seemed a bit sloppy. The da bait line was dope. Creative wordplay and I haven't seen it before. Not a bad read.

V/ Cashius

Orc · 08-03-2013, 12:23 PM

It's obvious I got a way with bitches...they all be DYING for my junk
You got away with bitches, too...and prolly got them tied up in your trunk
He can't even hang with mid-tier dudes. Against me, this loser is finished
Be honest, you couldn't see a Split, Atom...even with a degree in nuclear physics
I can screw your bitch for hours. I'll give you some tips to see how it's done
When I fuck her, the only one to get officer...when you do, she's screaming for one
She even lets me fuck when he's ragging. She likes mine better than yours
That bitch let me hit the cycle...but I didn't stop at first, second, or third
You even look like a bitch. I'd hate to live in this feminine faggot's world
Looks like we're all taking a page from Knux...cuz now EVERYONE says Atagirl

vs

i agree w/ the site, i'm not solid at text & to be honest i'm just a retard,
^this idiots probably takin da-bait, but because of u no-one wants to see ours.
atomic drops that hot shit. yes, you'll get bombed bitch,
of course I won't give your life support, but I will put you on it.
i'll be slumpin this bitch honestly its nothing i quit,
when it comes to cash verses we DoubtFire because every punch is a miss.

force clothes cuda been dope. ya wording just killing u at this point. u are getting better w. each verse & u'll start winning a lot more if u keep at it & dont go full retard. ur currently at about 58% retard. some great ideas but then u force it or hurt it w/ ya wording. experience will help. cash was very consistent hes hard to beat ina 10 liner. nothing too wow but still a good verse. nice swagger to it.

Maximus · 08-03-2013, 06:14 PM

It's obvious I got a way with bitches...they all be DYING for my junk
You got away with bitches, too...and prolly got them tied up in your trunk
PLAYED
He can't even hang with mid-tier dudes. Against me, this loser is finished
Be honest, you couldn't see a Split, Atom...even with a degree in nuclear physics
COOL NP
I can screw your bitch for hours. I'll give you some tips to see how it's done
When I fuck her, the only one to get officer...when you do, she's screaming for one
COOL AGAIN BUT WORDING WAS SLIGHTLY OFF
She even lets me fuck when he's ragging. She likes mine better than yours
That bitch let me hit the cycle...but I didn't stop at first, second, or third
MEH
Faggot thinks his wardrobe's fresh. Thinks his girl's turned on by his gear
But I don't care Howard you Rocket...that bitch'll STILL be gone in a year
DIDNT GET THIS, DUNNO WHO HOWARD IS...SORRY
You even look like a bitch. I'd hate to live in this feminine faggot's world
Looks like we're all taking a page from Knux...cuz now EVERYONE says Atagirl
AIGHT
vs
i agree w/ the site, i'm not solid at text & to be honest i'm just a retard,
^this idiots probably takin da-bait, but because of u no-one wants to see ours.
OK
i'm sharp, but no nine. grab the katana & i'm slashin till the gore spreads,
& if the bat'll read well, soon ull have louisville slugger tatted on ur forehead.
PLAYED CONCEPT AND THE WAY U FLIPPED WITH ALSO MADE IT IMPACTLESS
ugly skeez's, nerds & fags... only ppl seen fuckin talking w/ this skid,
if u see this ugly kid brim w/ confidence he'd just be walking out of lids.
OK
atomic drops that hot shit. yes, you'll get bombed bitch,
of course I won't give your life support, but I will put you on it.
NAH, PLAYED AS FUCK
i'll be slumpin this bitch honestly its nothingi quit,
when it comes to cash verses we DoubtFire because every punch is a miss.
PLAYED AGAIN
ur bitch is nasty as fuck, she's honestly a whore bruh,
we'd have to force clothes on her.. i wouldn't even let the internet explorer.
NOT FEELING
V/CASH...he was less played, better wording and more consistent

Joe Metts · 08-05-2013, 06:01 PM

I liked atagirl alot. Rest of cash was solid. Nothing wack from cash.

Atomic had some played concepts. Alot of played concepts actually.

V/Cash

If atomic can come fresh i feel like he'd be pretty good.

Sharp · 08-05-2013, 06:03 PM

It's obvious I got a way with bitches...they all be DYING for my junk
You got away with bitches, too...and prolly got them tied up in your trunk
cool
He can't even hang with mid-tier dudes. Against me, this loser is finished
Be honest, you couldn't see a Split, Atom...even with a degree in nuclear physics
nice
I can screw your bitch for hours. I'll give you some tips to see how it's done
When I fuck her, the only one to get officer...when you do, she's screaming for one
lol
She even lets me fuck when he's ragging. She likes mine better than yours
That bitch let me hit the cycle...but I didn't stop at first, second, or third
oh
Faggot thinks his wardrobe's fresh. Thinks his girl's turned on by his gear
But I don't care Howard you Rocket...that bitch'll STILL be gone in a year
nice
You even look like a bitch. I'd hate to live in this feminine faggot's world
Looks like we're all taking a page from Knux...cuz now EVERYONE says Atagirl
solid

i agree w/ the site, i'm not solid at text & to be honest i'm just a retard,
^this idiots probably takin da-bait, but because of u no-one wants to see ours.
meh
i'm sharp, but no nine. grab the katana & i'm slashin till the gore spreads,
& if the bat'll read well, soon ull have louisville slugger tatted on ur forehead.
eh
ugly skeez's, nerds & fags... only ppl seen fuckin talking w/ this skid,
if u see this ugly kid brim w/ confidence he'd just be walking out of lids.
eh
atomic drops that hot shit. yes, you'll get bombed bitch,
of course I won't give your life support, but I will put you on it.
really obvious
i'll be slumpin this bitch honestly its nothing i quit,
when it comes to cash verses we DoubtFire because every punch is a miss.
cool
ur bitch is nasty as fuck, she's honestly a whore bruh,
we'd have to force clothes on her.. i wouldn't even let the internet explorer.
alright idea

cool battle. both guys were pretty consistent but cash was a lot harder hitting.

v/ cash

07-28-2013, 01:53 AM	#1
Meth Guest Posts: n/a	Round 2 - 2: Cashius vs. 10: Atomic - {Cashius wins} 10-16 lines more if agreed upon No cheating Due Thursday Will edit in real shit in the morrow @Atomic @Cashius

08-01-2013, 11:02 PM	#6
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	i agree w/ the site, i'm not solid at text & to be honest i'm just a retard, ^this idiots probably takin da-bait, but because of u no-one wants to see ours. i'm sharp, but no nine. grab the katana & i'm slashin till the gore spreads, & if the bat'll read well, soon ull have louisville slugger tatted on ur forehead. ugly skeez's, nerds & fags... only ppl seen fuckin talking w/ this skid, if u see this ugly kid brim w/ confidence he'd just be walking out of lids. atomic drops that hot shit. yes, you'll get bombed bitch, of course I won't give your life support, but I will put you on it. i'll be slumpin this bitch honestly its nothing i quit, when it comes to cash verses we DoubtFire because every punch is a miss. ur bitch is nasty as fuck, she's honestly a whore bruh, we'd have to force clothes on her.. i wouldn't even let the internet explorer. Last edited by Atomic; 08-02-2013 at 10:27 AM.

07-28-2013, 04:02 AM	#2
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	16, gl

07-28-2013, 07:57 AM	#3
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257520	12 sounds better.

08-01-2013, 08:10 PM	#4
Meth Guest Posts: n/a	@Atomic @Cashius

08-01-2013, 10:46 PM	#5
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257520	Edit by Meth It's obvious I got a way with bitches...they all be DYING for my junk You got away with bitches, too...and prolly got them tied up in your trunk He can't even hang with mid-tier dudes. Against me, this loser is finished Be honest, you couldn't see a Split, Atom...even with a degree in nuclear physics I can screw your bitch for hours. I'll give you some tips to see how it's done When I fuck her, the only one to get officer...when you do, she's screaming for one She even lets me fuck when he's ragging. She likes mine better than yours That bitch let me hit the cycle...but I didn't stop at first, second, or third Faggot thinks his wardrobe's fresh. Thinks his girl's turned on by his gear But I don't care Howard you Rocket...that bitch'll STILL be gone in a year You even look like a bitch. I'd hate to live in this feminine faggot's world Looks like we're all taking a page from Knux...cuz now EVERYONE says Atagirl

08-03-2013, 12:18 PM	#7
Untold Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 865 Battle Record: 10-7 Rep Power: 0	It's obvious I got a way with bitches...they all be DYING for my junk You got away with bitches, too...and prolly got them tied up in your trunk He can't even hang with mid-tier dudes. Against me, this loser is finished Be honest, you couldn't see a Split, Atom...even with a degree in nuclear physics ^a bit of played concept, but good flip! I dug it You even look like a bitch. I'd hate to live in this feminine faggot's world Looks like we're all taking a page from Knux...cuz now EVERYONE says Atagirl Vs i agree w/ the site, i'm not solid at text & to be honest i'm just a retard, ^this idiots probably takin da-bait, but because of u no-one wants to see ours. ugly skeez's, nerds & fags... only ppl seen fuckin talking w/ this skid, if u see this ugly kid brim w/ confidence he'd just be walking out of lids. ^cool concept but could hit harder This was a decent battle. Cash, you had some creative wording, it gives some of ya concepts life, like the split atom line. I've seen similar lines like that, but you made it relevant, so I enjoyed it. There was also some stuff I've seen before but your wording makes up for it. I liked the opener a lot. Fav line of the battle. And Atomic, I saw a bunch of played concepts, especially the Doubtfire line. I feel like I've seen it before it's been used so much. The lids line was a cool idea, but your wording on it seemed a bit sloppy. The da bait line was dope. Creative wordplay and I haven't seen it before. Not a bad read. V/ Cashius

08-03-2013, 12:23 PM	#8
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	It's obvious I got a way with bitches...they all be DYING for my junk You got away with bitches, too...and prolly got them tied up in your trunk He can't even hang with mid-tier dudes. Against me, this loser is finished Be honest, you couldn't see a Split, Atom...even with a degree in nuclear physics I can screw your bitch for hours. I'll give you some tips to see how it's done When I fuck her, the only one to get officer...when you do, she's screaming for one She even lets me fuck when he's ragging. She likes mine better than yours That bitch let me hit the cycle...but I didn't stop at first, second, or third You even look like a bitch. I'd hate to live in this feminine faggot's world Looks like we're all taking a page from Knux...cuz now EVERYONE says Atagirl vs i agree w/ the site, i'm not solid at text & to be honest i'm just a retard, ^this idiots probably takin da-bait, but because of u no-one wants to see ours. atomic drops that hot shit. yes, you'll get bombed bitch, of course I won't give your life support, but I will put you on it. i'll be slumpin this bitch honestly its nothing i quit, when it comes to cash verses we DoubtFire because every punch is a miss. force clothes cuda been dope. ya wording just killing u at this point. u are getting better w. each verse & u'll start winning a lot more if u keep at it & dont go full retard. ur currently at about 58% retard. some great ideas but then u force it or hurt it w/ ya wording. experience will help. cash was very consistent hes hard to beat ina 10 liner. nothing too wow but still a good verse. nice swagger to it.

08-03-2013, 06:14 PM	#9
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169469	It's obvious I got a way with bitches...they all be DYING for my junk You got away with bitches, too...and prolly got them tied up in your trunk PLAYED He can't even hang with mid-tier dudes. Against me, this loser is finished Be honest, you couldn't see a Split, Atom...even with a degree in nuclear physics COOL NP I can screw your bitch for hours. I'll give you some tips to see how it's done When I fuck her, the only one to get officer...when you do, she's screaming for one COOL AGAIN BUT WORDING WAS SLIGHTLY OFF She even lets me fuck when he's ragging. She likes mine better than yours That bitch let me hit the cycle...but I didn't stop at first, second, or third MEH Faggot thinks his wardrobe's fresh. Thinks his girl's turned on by his gear But I don't care Howard you Rocket...that bitch'll STILL be gone in a year DIDNT GET THIS, DUNNO WHO HOWARD IS...SORRY You even look like a bitch. I'd hate to live in this feminine faggot's world Looks like we're all taking a page from Knux...cuz now EVERYONE says Atagirl AIGHT vs i agree w/ the site, i'm not solid at text & to be honest i'm just a retard, ^this idiots probably takin da-bait, but because of u no-one wants to see ours. OK i'm sharp, but no nine. grab the katana & i'm slashin till the gore spreads, & if the bat'll read well, soon ull have louisville slugger tatted on ur forehead. PLAYED CONCEPT AND THE WAY U FLIPPED WITH ALSO MADE IT IMPACTLESS ugly skeez's, nerds & fags... only ppl seen fuckin talking w/ this skid, if u see this ugly kid brim w/ confidence he'd just be walking out of lids. OK atomic drops that hot shit. yes, you'll get bombed bitch, of course I won't give your life support, but I will put you on it. NAH, PLAYED AS FUCK i'll be slumpin this bitch honestly its nothingi quit, when it comes to cash verses we DoubtFire because every punch is a miss. PLAYED AGAIN ur bitch is nasty as fuck, she's honestly a whore bruh, we'd have to force clothes on her.. i wouldn't even let the internet explorer. NOT FEELING V/CASH...he was less played, better wording and more consistent

08-05-2013, 06:01 PM	#10
Joe Metts Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Hanover, PA Posts: 2,760 Battle Record: 14-6 Rep Power: 18112000	I liked atagirl alot. Rest of cash was solid. Nothing wack from cash. Atomic had some played concepts. Alot of played concepts actually. V/Cash If atomic can come fresh i feel like he'd be pretty good.

08-05-2013, 06:03 PM	#11
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	It's obvious I got a way with bitches...they all be DYING for my junk You got away with bitches, too...and prolly got them tied up in your trunk cool He can't even hang with mid-tier dudes. Against me, this loser is finished Be honest, you couldn't see a Split, Atom...even with a degree in nuclear physics nice I can screw your bitch for hours. I'll give you some tips to see how it's done When I fuck her, the only one to get officer...when you do, she's screaming for one lol She even lets me fuck when he's ragging. She likes mine better than yours That bitch let me hit the cycle...but I didn't stop at first, second, or third oh Faggot thinks his wardrobe's fresh. Thinks his girl's turned on by his gear But I don't care Howard you Rocket...that bitch'll STILL be gone in a year nice You even look like a bitch. I'd hate to live in this feminine faggot's world Looks like we're all taking a page from Knux...cuz now EVERYONE says Atagirl solid i agree w/ the site, i'm not solid at text & to be honest i'm just a retard, ^this idiots probably takin da-bait, but because of u no-one wants to see ours. meh i'm sharp, but no nine. grab the katana & i'm slashin till the gore spreads, & if the bat'll read well, soon ull have louisville slugger tatted on ur forehead. eh ugly skeez's, nerds & fags... only ppl seen fuckin talking w/ this skid, if u see this ugly kid brim w/ confidence he'd just be walking out of lids. eh atomic drops that hot shit. yes, you'll get bombed bitch, of course I won't give your life support, but I will put you on it. really obvious i'll be slumpin this bitch honestly its nothing i quit, when it comes to cash verses we DoubtFire because every punch is a miss. cool ur bitch is nasty as fuck, she's honestly a whore bruh, we'd have to force clothes on her.. i wouldn't even let the internet explorer. alright idea cool battle. both guys were pretty consistent but cash was a lot harder hitting. v/ cash