Loast v Rawn MacDon - {Loast wins}

[Sharp]

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday,
  July 11th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends Sunday July 14th at 11:59 PM PST.
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@Loast @Rawn MacDon

Check 10?

[Loast]

yurp...

@Rawn MacDon @Loast

I Got Swedish whores doin the Swedish horse while phone sexin ya dime
Who won’t accept calls or dial bars because after she feels dirty n has to use that soap every time
Besides, I only hit clean females that douche and use the baday
Game ur bitch an twister box, while your go on play dates w friends and proceed to lose in that game
Its sad when I can Bogart u off the table with all prior shown cards
For example I’ll handle bars like handle bars and using a variation of lines n concepts from those bars
I’m mean man, and u’re rock bottom tier on a get counsel tip
I beat on ur girl at all time, Lo; she says its like that because that’s about how good u arouse her clit
Ur a bitch, ur diet consists of more soy then active Hispanics
Even if gps tracked where I landed, according to NC ill never be behind bars despite wrap sheets n transcipts
@Loast @Meth

[Loast]

ill post 2nite

[Loast]

look,
i'm on a grown man status n ya Disney flow is what your Bars do hold
we all see Rawn Stoppable lines n has a childish feel that comes off with a cartoon show
I'll body n clown this dude till he sways votes with the foulest moves
what u keep in store will have u sink to a new low that a make every bargain hunter proud of you
wanna get on some grimey shit i'll find this kid n shank you slowly sucker
I'll Impale U right thru the middle till you and pitchfork could go for brothers
i'm not even taking you serious cuz every bar u Major has average quotations
goddamn u have so many minor problems ur verse could put u on academic probation
you Suck, but admit you are a fighter.. get it thru ur skull that you are not nicer
everything u write is Hollow.. Duh, Don! til the point i thought u were a URL Biter



quick 10, g/l

[Atomic]

Twister

vs

new low & probation

rawns wording hurt him big time. had some ok concepts he didnt use correctly. loast came ok poor wording aswell but he took it, somewhat of an edge. v/ loast

cool concepts but just terrible wording from rawn, no hate man

vs

new low

not a bad battle

loast was consistently alright

did enuff to win

[Sharp]

I Got Swedish whores doin the Swedish horse while phone sexin ya dime
Who won’t accept calls or dial bars because after she feels dirty n has to use that soap every time
really clever, little awkard wording. just make sure theres an 'aka barz' or something at the top of your verse cause this sorta thing could get missed
Besides, I only hit clean females that douche and use the baday
Game ur bitch an twister box, while your go on play dates w friends and proceed to lose in that game
could've been done better, wording was meh
Its sad when I can Bogart u off the table with all prior shown cards
For example I’ll handle bars like handle bars and using a variation of lines n concepts from those bars
handlebars/handle barz coulda been done more smoothly. probably a played out idea
I’m mean man, and u’re rock bottom tier on a get counsel tip
I beat on ur girl at all time, Lo; she says its like that because that’s about how good u arouse her clit
so close but the end of the punch just wasn't as effective. you had a nice idea with all time lo but coulda just kept at like 'cause her sex life w/ you is there'
Ur a bitch, ur diet consists of more soy then active Hispanics
Even if gps tracked where I landed, according to NC ill never be behind bars despite wrap sheets n transcipts
cool idea, liked this but wording wasnt too strong


i'm on a grown man status n ya Disney flow is what your Bars do hold
we all see Rawn Stoppable lines n has a childish feel that comes off with a cartoon show
lmao nice
I'll body n clown this dude till he sways votes with the foulest moves
what u keep in store will have u sink to a new low that a make every bargain hunter proud of you
ok
wanna get on some grimey shit i'll find this kid n shank you slowly sucker
I'll Impale U right thru the middle till you and pitchfork could go for brothers
eh
i'm not even taking you serious cuz every bar u Major has average quotations
goddamn u have so many minor problems ur verse could put u on academic probation
solid
you Suck, but admit you are a fighter.. get it thru ur skull that you are not nicer
everything u write is Hollow.. Duh, Don! til the point i thought u were a URL Biter
kind of a stretch but wording got it for you


rawn had cool ideas but didnt have the wording loast did. good battle tho


v/loast