4. CtrlF4 vs 13. murda sho - CtrlF4 WINS

Sharp · 04-13-2014, 01:35 PM

NBL Season 7
Playoffs Round 1

Due Thursday, April 17th

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Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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@CtrlF4 @murda sho

CtrlF4 · 04-13-2014, 03:22 PM

Check.

Any chance you'll tell me who you really are?

murda sho · 04-16-2014, 10:50 PM

Check 12 lines.

CtrlF4 · 04-17-2014, 08:25 PM

I'm dropping tomorrow. ..I got the day off tomorrow so it'll be easy for me

murda sho · 04-17-2014, 09:52 PM

Get ready to lose ctrl, so take a break from niggas gassin u at all
It's Sho now, so instead of Drift you're gonna crash into the wall
I'm back! And you're just BAD so when I aim and grin...
I bet this sharp nine'll put bad blood under my name again!
You're concerned if I'm real? It's me Murda stop insultin me son
So don't worry or you'll just end up like The Ultimate one
Ima do this nigga like K Shine, but wit me it gets really sick
He gives em that "is he dead kick"... I repeat it until he is!
It's ironic how this was set up to get u shaken down and maimed
Since im here as a sub, & u're the nigga gettn taken out the game
Cause my wordplay will have you stuck on the shelf....
My advice is either run from the tomb r da clip'll make it seem like I doubled myself!!

CtrlF4 · 04-20-2014, 07:24 AM

Fell asleep I keyed 12 though

He prayed I wudnt show, he knows that its true inside
But when we heard u "turned to Christ", we hoped for castration and a suicide
Me and my girl went steady, she knows i'd give the world for her
closest you got to having a woman commit murda was u violating a protection order
Bitches laugh at your size, its a well known fact jay
maybe if your package gruesome, sex w/you wouldn't be that way
& ur moms a nasty freak, nobody wants to lick and smash it
I mean, sure she can fillet a dress out, but she smells like a fish sandwich
He gettin killed this match, simply cause I hate this dude
I'll put MSN a box and laugh, while I see him on the breakin news
+its fuckin known you only here cuz drift wudnt have shown
I haven't seen a back-up this bad since I drove through a construction zone

Bender · 04-20-2014, 08:51 PM

It's ironic how this was set up to get u shaken down and maimed
Since im here as a sub, & u're the nigga gettn taken out the game

vs

Bitches laugh at your size, its a well known fact jay
maybe if your package gruesome, sex w/you wouldn't be that way
& ur moms a nasty freak, nobody wants to lick and smash it
I mean, sure she can fillet a dress out, but she smells like a fish sandwich

+its fuckin known you only here cuz drift wudnt have shown
I haven't seen a back-up this bad since I drove through a construction zone

If this is the real Murda Sho from back in the day there is some rust that needs to be shaken off, wasn't feeling much of the verse except the one line and that was pushing it. Ctrl I think that there was an extra "a" in the fillet line but I liked that and the grew some line.

vote-CtrlF4

PancakeBrah · 04-21-2014, 08:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by murda sho

Get ready to lose ctrl, so take a break from niggas gassin u at all
It's Sho now, so instead of Drift you're gonna crash into the wall

Decent opener.

I'm back! And you're just BAD so when I aim and grin...
I bet this sharp nine'll put bad blood under my name again!

Okay. I'm sure the sharp nine concept is played against Sharp, though. Which makes this kind of played. But the bad blood tie-in made it work a bit better.

You're concerned if I'm real? It's me Murda stop insultin me son
So don't worry or you'll just end up like The Ultimate one

Wasn't feeling it.

Ima do this nigga like K Shine, but wit me it gets really sick
He gives em that "is he dead kick"... I repeat it until he is!

Simple and creative. Liked it.

It's ironic how this was set up to get u shaken down and maimed
Since im here as a sub, & u're the nigga gettn taken out the game

Pretty good

Cause my wordplay will have you stuck on the shelf....
My advice is either run from the tomb r da clip'll make it seem like I doubled myself!!

nah

Quote:

Originally Posted by CtrlF4

Fell asleep I keyed 12 though

He prayed I wudnt show, he knows that its true inside
But when we heard u "turned to Christ", we hoped for castration and a suicide

Decent recent events flip.

Me and my girl went steady, she knows i'd give the world for her
closest you got to having a woman commit murda was u violating a protection order

okay.

Bitches laugh at your size, its a well known fact jay
maybe if your package gruesome, sex w/you wouldn't be that way

Pretty good.

& ur moms a nasty freak, nobody wants to lick and smash it
I mean, sure she can fillet a dress out, but she smells like a fish sandwich

nah. the extra 'a' made it read clunky. you're dissing his mom?

He gettin killed this match, simply cause I hate this dude
I'll put MSN a box and laugh, while I see him on the breakin news

reach. played concept. nah.

+its fuckin known you only here cuz drift wudnt have shown
I haven't seen a back-up this bad since I drove through a construction zone

okay closer

Okay battle. CTRL was a little more consistent. Not bad.

v/CTRL

KwaL!ty · 04-21-2014, 09:51 PM

K shine, taken out game

Other then that Murda you seemed pretty choppy through out, or you might have rushed it.

Vs

Commit murda, package gruesome, closer

Didn't have no real haymakers just better consistency.

Vote Ctrl for have a more overall verse.

Alvin Karpis · 04-22-2014, 08:34 PM

not the best from both but decent battle

Felt sho was rusty and had some cool ideas w/ poor execution
Just didn't have the impact he normally brings w/ his lines

Crtl was consistent w/ light jabs, some misses, and nothing too crazy but still was consistent enough to grab the W

V/ctrlf4

Destroyer · 04-22-2014, 11:16 PM

I have ctrl takin it also
murda's verse was ok on second read, I liked some of the concepts but just wasn't feeling the sting on a lot of em. k shine was decent

v/ctrl

Sharp · 04-22-2014, 11:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KwaL!ty

Vote Ctrl for have a more overall verse.

@delicious girl?

murda sho · 04-23-2014, 09:50 PM

my last bar was so wack hahaha who wrote that shit

CtrlF4 · 04-23-2014, 10:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by murda sho

my last bar was so wack hahaha who wrote that shit

Yo acct got jacked?

ill nik-A · 04-24-2014, 08:00 PM

Sub vs back up lol at ppl quoting that gruesome line sorry but that's maaaad played

Still got Ctrl with his quote being slightly better

04-13-2014, 01:35 PM	#1
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	4. CtrlF4 vs 13. murda sho - CtrlF4 WINS NBL Season 7 Playoffs Round 1 Due Thursday, April 17th WAIT FOR YOU OPPONENT TO CHECK IN, THEY MAY BE REPLACED Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on 4 battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @CtrlF4 @murda sho

04-16-2014, 10:50 PM	#3
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758479	Check 12 lines. __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

04-17-2014, 09:52 PM	#5
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758479	Get ready to lose ctrl, so take a break from niggas gassin u at all It's Sho now, so instead of Drift you're gonna crash into the wall I'm back! And you're just BAD so when I aim and grin... I bet this sharp nine'll put bad blood under my name again! You're concerned if I'm real? It's me Murda stop insultin me son So don't worry or you'll just end up like The Ultimate one Ima do this nigga like K Shine, but wit me it gets really sick He gives em that "is he dead kick"... I repeat it until he is! It's ironic how this was set up to get u shaken down and maimed Since im here as a sub, & u're the nigga gettn taken out the game Cause my wordplay will have you stuck on the shelf.... My advice is either run from the tomb r da clip'll make it seem like I doubled myself!! __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

04-20-2014, 07:24 AM	#6
CtrlF4 ....Hakuna Matata.... Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 769 Battle Record: 11-11 Rep Power: 3351059	Fell asleep I keyed 12 though He prayed I wudnt show, he knows that its true inside But when we heard u "turned to Christ", we hoped for castration and a suicide Me and my girl went steady, she knows i'd give the world for her closest you got to having a woman commit murda was u violating a protection order Bitches laugh at your size, its a well known fact jay maybe if your package gruesome, sex w/you wouldn't be that way & ur moms a nasty freak, nobody wants to lick and smash it I mean, sure she can fillet a dress out, but she smells like a fish sandwich He gettin killed this match, simply cause I hate this dude I'll put MSN a box and laugh, while I see him on the breakin news +its fuckin known you only here cuz drift wudnt have shown I haven't seen a back-up this bad since I drove through a construction zone Last edited by CtrlF4; 04-20-2014 at 07:28 AM.

04-23-2014, 09:50 PM	#13
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758479	my last bar was so wack hahaha who wrote that shit __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

04-13-2014, 03:22 PM	#2
CtrlF4 ....Hakuna Matata.... Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 769 Battle Record: 11-11 Rep Power: 3351059	Check. Any chance you'll tell me who you really are?

04-17-2014, 08:25 PM	#4
CtrlF4 ....Hakuna Matata.... Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 769 Battle Record: 11-11 Rep Power: 3351059	I'm dropping tomorrow. ..I got the day off tomorrow so it'll be easy for me

04-20-2014, 08:51 PM	#7
Bender Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 264 Battle Record: 11-5 Rep Power: 146916	It's ironic how this was set up to get u shaken down and maimed Since im here as a sub, & u're the nigga gettn taken out the game vs Bitches laugh at your size, its a well known fact jay maybe if your package gruesome, sex w/you wouldn't be that way & ur moms a nasty freak, nobody wants to lick and smash it I mean, sure she can fillet a dress out, but she smells like a fish sandwich +its fuckin known you only here cuz drift wudnt have shown I haven't seen a back-up this bad since I drove through a construction zone If this is the real Murda Sho from back in the day there is some rust that needs to be shaken off, wasn't feeling much of the verse except the one line and that was pushing it. Ctrl I think that there was an extra "a" in the fillet line but I liked that and the grew some line. vote-CtrlF4

04-21-2014, 09:51 PM	#9
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	K shine, taken out game Other then that Murda you seemed pretty choppy through out, or you might have rushed it. Vs Commit murda, package gruesome, closer Didn't have no real haymakers just better consistency. Vote Ctrl for have a more overall verse.

04-22-2014, 08:34 PM	#10
Alvin Karpis 2020 Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 647 Battle Record: 34-12 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Summer Classic V - Summer Classic IV - NBL Season 7 - BA Swag and Flow - BA Swag & Flow Tournament II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV Rep Power: 4052844	not the best from both but decent battle Felt sho was rusty and had some cool ideas w/ poor execution Just didn't have the impact he normally brings w/ his lines Crtl was consistent w/ light jabs, some misses, and nothing too crazy but still was consistent enough to grab the W V/ctrlf4

04-24-2014, 08:00 PM	#15
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,407 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	Sub vs back up lol at ppl quoting that gruesome line sorry but that's maaaad played Still got Ctrl with his quote being slightly better __________________ Grumpy old man.