Picture vs ...The Munster - NOT open for votes UNTIL LINKS ARE PROVIDED

Picture · 07-31-2013, 03:11 PM

10 lines
due today

...the Nagger · 07-31-2013, 04:35 PM

Im blessed wit gettin green dog im gettn guac'
Ya chick see me roll in' paper.. youd almost think i didnt make her gimmie Top
Thats nacho bitch.
We hit ya weed, then grab that cheese after we fold ya chick
See we line up ya chips... - after we clean the bowl, & dip.
I get the Scoop on where duke Lays.. fuck them phone ads when i meet ya
Yall gonn get to see a Picture underwater, without that new Galaxy feature.
I'll beat u til u chilli over that food. U dont eat off my Plate, soldier..
& if we argue over that base, ball.. or i'll Bat ya face off ya shoulders
This is where the long scheme endin. Yall aint catch it anyway.
Only time u around a win is if u picture me in it.

Picture · 07-31-2013, 06:36 PM

Tryna act hard, your name shows you lying so drop it
Munster? That just mean you be hiding in the closet
I devour munster like energy drink and leave him as dust
One thrust I stick my blade in this pussy, no beating around the bush
I obliterate you before you can stop and think
My pengame is your cryptonite, Munsters ink
I read up on your post and have to say that it was lame
Your post make people pause like the beggining of your name
Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man
Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can

...the Nagger · 07-31-2013, 07:48 PM

Can I change "meet u" to "meet ya"?

Sho Money EMG · 07-31-2013, 09:07 PM

Wooo bowl and dip... Munster kilt it here clearly one sided battled

Mvgt - Munster

Sharp · 07-31-2013, 10:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ...the Munster

Can I change "meet u" to "meet ya"?

got you

also imma need two links from you and @Picture

Lost in Thought · 08-01-2013, 01:57 AM

nether had the awe factor in my opinion on this... hard to say.

Both had the same impact when it came to punches

So i guess ill go with flow and multi's

give it to munster

StarFaggot · 08-01-2013, 01:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ...the Munster

Im blessed wit gettin green dog im gettn guac'
Ya chick see me roll in' paper.. youd almost think i didnt make her gimmie Top
nigga what?
Thats nacho bitch.
We hit ya weed, then grab that cheese after we fold ya chick
See we line up ya chips... - after we clean the bowl, & dip.
did you just say that's Nacho bitch? Kill ya self this bar was awful
I get the Scoop on where duke Lays.. fuck them phone ads when i meet ya
Yall gonn get to see a Picture underwater, without that new Galaxy feature.
dope
I'll beat u til u chilli over that food. U dont eat off my Plate, soldier..
& if we argue over that base, ball.. or i'll Bat ya face off ya shoulders
nigga were you hungry writing this? This bar is shit
This is where the long scheme endin. Yall aint catch it anyway.
Only time u around a win is if u picture me in it
you couldn't think of a better name play than that? Kill ya self
.

Tryna act hard, your name shows you lying so drop it
Munster? That just mean you be hiding in the closet
good nameplay
I devour munster like energy drink and leave him as dust
One thrust I stick my blade in this pussy, no beating around the bush
no
I obliterate you before you can stop and think
My pengame is your cryptonite, Munsters ink
nah
I read up on your post and have to say that it was lame
Your post make people pause like the beggining of your name
coo concept
Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man
Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can
niiiiice... Seen similar wp but this is a nameplay too

Vote Picture

...the Nagger · 08-01-2013, 01:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero

Tryna act hard, your name shows you lying so drop it
Munster? That just mean you be hiding in the closet
good nameplay
I devour munster like energy drink and leave him as dust
One thrust I stick my blade in this pussy, no beating around the bush
no
I obliterate you before you can stop and think
My pengame is your cryptonite, Munsters ink
nah
I read up on your post and have to say that it was lame
Your post make people pause like the beggining of your name
coo concept
Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man
Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can
niiiiice... Seen similar wp but this is a nameplay too

be honest, do you really understand the second bar for what it is?

PancakeBrah · 08-03-2013, 01:28 PM

I get the Scoop on where duke Lays.. fuck them phone ads when i meet ya
Yall gonn get to see a Picture underwater, without that new Galaxy feature.
I'll beat u til u chilli over that food. U dont eat off my Plate, soldier..
& if we argue over that base, ball.. or i'll Bat ya face off ya shoulders

What's cool about your style is even if I don't enjoy a line as punch, they flow well and there's always something going on wordplay wise. Granted, sometimes the wordplay can be corny and lame if your heart wasn't in the verse like in this case. A lot of that mexican food scheme was just filler level stuff. The first bar I quoted was legitimately dope, second line had a lot of swagger to it. The chips/bow/dip idea was a borderline quotable.

vs.

Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man
Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can

Good line. Set up was too wordy, and the rhyme was forced and corny. But I liked the wordplay. You had a lot of concepts thought could have been good, specifically the opener and monster's inc. But your wording and execution need work, they basically read like you thought of the concept, used filler, and typed the concept in. Potential.

v/munster

Sharp · 08-04-2013, 03:38 AM

@Aero did you want to vote for either guy?

and @...the Munster can i get two voting links

StarFaggot · 08-04-2013, 10:36 AM

Edited

Sharp · 08-14-2013, 11:24 PM

3-1 Munster

KwaL!ty · 08-15-2013, 10:46 AM

I get the Scoop on where duke Lays.. fuck them phone ads when i meet ya
Yall gonn get to see a Picture underwater, without that new Galaxy feature.

vs

Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man
Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can

Vote- Munster just a better read, both need to un-rustify or some shit lol.

Allen Knight · 08-16-2013, 09:48 AM

Chip
Galaxy

Vs

3 cuts in munster

V/ eddie, pic had all played ass bars monsters ink ,hide in the closet i seen done to death but atleast flipped fresh the 3 cuts was good but coulda been dope worded diff, eddie had those 2 bars that were cool an he was less played imo.

KwaL!ty · 08-16-2013, 11:12 AM

closed until 2 vote links.

Decibel · 08-28-2013, 02:50 AM

@...the Munster

Please provide 2 voting links so this can be closed as current vote tally is 5-1 in your favor.

Decibel · 09-16-2013, 02:25 AM

CLOSED due to no links... PM me if want closed.

07-31-2013, 03:11 PM	#1
Picture Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 27 Rep Power: 33	Picture vs ...The Munster - NOT open for votes UNTIL LINKS ARE PROVIDED 10 lines due today __________________ White is Tight fyi. my other name's white Therefor white is tight

07-31-2013, 06:36 PM	#3
Picture Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 27 Rep Power: 33	Tryna act hard, your name shows you lying so drop it Munster? That just mean you be hiding in the closet I devour munster like energy drink and leave him as dust One thrust I stick my blade in this pussy, no beating around the bush I obliterate you before you can stop and think My pengame is your cryptonite, Munsters ink I read up on your post and have to say that it was lame Your post make people pause like the beggining of your name Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can __________________ White is Tight fyi. my other name's white Therefor white is tight

07-31-2013, 09:07 PM	#5
Sho Money EMG Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Location: Zooyork Posts: 2,124 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 0	Wooo bowl and dip... Munster kilt it here clearly one sided battled Mvgt - Munster __________________ Sho Money \| Camp Bell Team Alpha EMG This site is whack

08-01-2013, 01:57 AM	#7
Lost in Thought Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 70 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 33	nether had the awe factor in my opinion on this... hard to say. Both had the same impact when it came to punches So i guess ill go with flow and multi's give it to munster __________________ Look up to the sky to try n find god in the clouds Hopin when he looks down I dont get lost in the crowd

08-03-2013, 01:28 PM	#10
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	I get the Scoop on where duke Lays.. fuck them phone ads when i meet ya Yall gonn get to see a Picture underwater, without that new Galaxy feature. I'll beat u til u chilli over that food. U dont eat off my Plate, soldier.. & if we argue over that base, ball.. or i'll Bat ya face off ya shoulders What's cool about your style is even if I don't enjoy a line as punch, they flow well and there's always something going on wordplay wise. Granted, sometimes the wordplay can be corny and lame if your heart wasn't in the verse like in this case. A lot of that mexican food scheme was just filler level stuff. The first bar I quoted was legitimately dope, second line had a lot of swagger to it. The chips/bow/dip idea was a borderline quotable. vs. Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can Good line. Set up was too wordy, and the rhyme was forced and corny. But I liked the wordplay. You had a lot of concepts thought could have been good, specifically the opener and monster's inc. But your wording and execution need work, they basically read like you thought of the concept, used filler, and typed the concept in. Potential. v/munster __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

07-31-2013, 04:35 PM	#2
...the Nagger Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 2,862 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 15781384	Im blessed wit gettin green dog im gettn guac' Ya chick see me roll in' paper.. youd almost think i didnt make her gimmie Top Thats nacho bitch. We hit ya weed, then grab that cheese after we fold ya chick See we line up ya chips... - after we clean the bowl, & dip. I get the Scoop on where duke Lays.. fuck them phone ads when i meet ya Yall gonn get to see a Picture underwater, without that new Galaxy feature. I'll beat u til u chilli over that food. U dont eat off my Plate, soldier.. & if we argue over that base, ball.. or i'll Bat ya face off ya shoulders This is where the long scheme endin. Yall aint catch it anyway. Only time u around a win is if u picture me in it.

07-31-2013, 07:48 PM	#4
...the Nagger Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 2,862 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 15781384	Can I change "meet u" to "meet ya"?

08-04-2013, 03:38 AM	#11
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	@Aero did you want to vote for either guy? and @...the Munster can i get two voting links

08-04-2013, 10:36 AM	#12
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,110 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	Edited

08-14-2013, 11:24 PM	#13
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	3-1 Munster

08-15-2013, 10:46 AM	#14
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	I get the Scoop on where duke Lays.. fuck them phone ads when i meet ya Yall gonn get to see a Picture underwater, without that new Galaxy feature. vs Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can Vote- Munster just a better read, both need to un-rustify or some shit lol.

08-16-2013, 09:48 AM	#15
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Chip Galaxy Vs 3 cuts in munster V/ eddie, pic had all played ass bars monsters ink ,hide in the closet i seen done to death but atleast flipped fresh the 3 cuts was good but coulda been dope worded diff, eddie had those 2 bars that were cool an he was less played imo. __________________ C.O.B

08-16-2013, 11:12 AM	#16
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	closed until 2 vote links.

08-28-2013, 02:50 AM	#17
Decibel Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 0	@...the Munster Please provide 2 voting links so this can be closed as current vote tally is 5-1 in your favor.

09-16-2013, 02:25 AM	#18
Decibel Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 0	CLOSED due to no links... PM me if want closed. __________________ ..:: Decibel ::..