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11-18-2014, 06:28 PM | #1 |
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ALIAS SEMIFINALS: Bedpan Delivery vs Bishop Sankey's Missing Hankey - BISHOP WINS
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11-18-2014, 08:08 PM | #2 |
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Bishop is in
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11-20-2014, 02:06 PM | #3 |
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Bedpan is in for 16
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11-25-2014, 11:33 AM | #4 |
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Bedpan asks for ext
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11-26-2014, 07:50 AM | #5 |
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Bish sent 12
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11-26-2014, 03:04 PM | #6 |
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Bedpan Delivery
theres no excuse for trashy. your style? it needs improving badly Your verses make us say "Wtf is this shit?" ..like Bags when he saw the preview 4 Annie Bishops never the proper Wingman. Hes hideous n undeniably flayed So when friends tell you to "take one for the team" it means "sir plz dive on grenades" Ull never gain proper employment..son,simply.. Closest you had to a PayDay that was 100 Grand u were eatin those candy bars in one sitting I approached w/ that iron outlike "Im taking your bitch"n Damn it thrilled dude Call you Diddy from Monsters Ball..youll be leavin the good pussy to the man who killed you Ill beat the vag up. She loves the savagery fam So you can try to Hold the Fort Down..im still bringin wood to her walls like a battering ram your a sucidal faggot. shut ur lid n ur mouth Yeah lifes a double edged sword. Dive on the side thats pointy bitch figure it out Bishop Sankey's Missing Hankey I’ll send fists your way & trust my hook is mean You’ll Catch such a beating it’ll make Beckham Jr’s look routine I set Records daily, this fuck isn’t awesome or hyped Last time Pancetta Record it involved Joe Metts w/ a fork & a knife No one's Amused w/ ya verse..you're weak, pretentious While my writtens are such a Riot they make Ferguson look like a Peace convention All ya drops are Shit, no one ranks Pan the highest Iunno what’s worse. That name you picked or the fact all ya verses stand behind it I'm Grimy & Vile plus my punches give the worst hurtin Dog, Yucatán for years and still wouldn’t be considered a dirt person My swings are fierce, vets swear I’m like Rocky dude If I connect, it’ll give you such a Black eye Darren Wilson’d prolly shoot |
11-28-2014, 06:26 AM | #7 |
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theres no excuse for trashy. your style? it needs improving badly
Your verses make us say "Wtf is this shit?" ..like Bags when he saw the preview 4 Annie okay Bishops never the proper Wingman. Hes hideous n undeniably flayed So when friends tell you to "take one for the team" it means "sir plz dive on grenades" didn't like the delivery of this Ull never gain proper employment..son,simply.. Closest you had to a PayDay that was 100 Grand u were eatin those candy bars in one sitting nah I approached w/ that iron outlike "Im taking your bitch"n Damn it thrilled dude Call you Diddy from Monsters Ball..youll be leavin the good pussy to the man who killed you this was cool Ill beat the vag up. She loves the savagery fam So you can try to Hold the Fort Down..im still bringin wood to her walls like a battering ram wood flips r played to death, it was a cool idea tho your a sucidal faggot. shut ur lid n ur mouth Yeah lifes a double edged sword. Dive on the side thats pointy bitch figure it out nah v Bishop Sankey's Missing Hankey I’ll send fists your way & trust my hook is mean You’ll Catch such a beating it’ll make Beckham Jr’s look routine weak connection I set Records daily, this fuck isn’t awesome or hyped Last time Pancetta Record it involved Joe Metts w/ a fork & a knife this is cool, wp is acceptable but not both ways No one's Amused w/ ya verse..you're weak, pretentious While my writtens are such a Riot they make Ferguson look like a Peace convention another weak connection All ya drops are Shit, no one ranks Pan the highest Iunno what’s worse. That name you picked or the fact all ya verses stand behind it not feeling this, nothing to it I'm Grimy & Vile plus my punches give the worst hurtin Dog, Yucatán for years and still wouldn’t be considered a dirt person cool this was creative My swings are fierce, vets swear I’m like Rocky dude If I connect, it’ll give you such a Black eye Darren Wilson’d prolly shoot this is okay, slightly better connection second guy had better ideas but had some weak connections. it's not enough to say Catch a beating and then play off the word catch. it needs to be flipped better. anyone could do that with any word. first dude had the better style to me but just didn't bring any dope shit second dude wins |
11-30-2014, 01:35 AM | #8 |
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Vote Bishop
His lines hit harder, LOTB to me was the stand behind it diss. I liked the hold down the fort bar too. Good shit both but going with Bishop. |
11-30-2014, 09:10 PM | #9 |
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I approached w/ that iron outlike "Im taking your bitch"n Damn it thrilled dude
Call you Diddy from Monsters Ball..youll be leavin the good pussy to the man who killed you Ill beat the vag up. She loves the savagery fam So you can try to Hold the Fort Down..im still bringin wood to her walls like a battering ram Vs I set Records daily, this fuck isn’t awesome or hyped Last time Pancetta Record it involved Joe Metts w/ a fork & a knife I'm Grimy & Vile plus my punches give the worst hurtin Dog, Yucatán for years and still wouldn’t be considered a dirt person V/bishop, this was a good battle, bedpan quotes were cool battering ram i thought was nice but bishop was more consistent the ones i didnt quote still were solid his verse just hit better, still a close battle, props yah'll but bishop got it.
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12-01-2014, 09:28 AM | #10 |
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theres no excuse for trashy. your style? it needs improving badly
Your verses make us say "Wtf is this shit?" ..like Bags when he saw the preview 4 Annie this was stale. Bishops never the proper Wingman. Hes hideous n undeniably flayed So when friends tell you to "take one for the team" it means "sir plz dive on grenades" same as your opener. I think you could have executed this with just a little more creativity and harshness, tbh. Ull never gain proper employment..son,simply.. Closest you had to a PayDay that was 100 Grand u were eatin those candy bars in one sitting this was ok. but set up was filler, son simply? I think you could have used more of a relevent end rhyme. I approached w/ that iron outlike "Im taking your bitch"n Damn it thrilled dude Call you Diddy from Monsters Ball..youll be leavin the good pussy to the man who killed you didn't like this much. Ill beat the vag up. She loves the savagery fam So you can try to Hold the Fort Down..im still bringin wood to her walls like a battering ram this was ok. your a sucidal faggot. shut ur lid n ur mouth Yeah lifes a double edged sword. Dive on the side thats pointy bitch figure it out I feel the same about this bar as I did w/ the take one for the team concept. vs I’ll send fists your way & trust my hook is mean You’ll Catch such a beating it’ll make Beckham Jr’s look routine eh, ok. I set Records daily, this fuck isn’t awesome or hyped Last time Pancetta Record it involved Joe Metts w/ a fork & a knife Lol, ok. No one's Amused w/ ya verse..you're weak, pretentious While my writtens are such a Riot they make Ferguson look like a Peace convention Self hype, cool tho. All ya drops are Shit, no one ranks Pan the highest Iunno what’s worse. That name you picked or the fact all ya verses stand behind it eh, wasn't feelin' this one to much. I'm Grimy & Vile plus my punches give the worst hurtin Dog, Yucatán for years and still wouldn’t be considered a dirt person this was nice. My swings are fierce, vets swear I’m like Rocky dude If I connect, it’ll give you such a Black eye Darren Wilson’d prolly shoot this was ok. I think the 2nd dude got this. punches a tad bit more effective. 1st guy had some cool concepts but his executions were lazy which hurt his verse a lot. so with that being said... v/2nd alias. |
12-02-2014, 08:21 PM | #11 |
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4-0 bishop
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