Week 13 contender match: 3. Johnathan Mercy (3-2) vs. 4. King Ra. (6-5) \\ Johnathan Mercy wins via no-show

Certain · 05-19-2014, 03:33 AM

Season 3

The Basics | Read the full rules here.

Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS.

Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent.

Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread.

Topic

One False Move

Good luck, @Johnathan Mercy and @King Ra.

King Ra. · 05-19-2014, 06:11 AM

Good luck, JM.

Three-Planes-Aligned · 05-23-2014, 12:19 PM

The Biography Paradox (Johns)

It's like his thoughts are warped wantonly by sedatives
- Like he's philosophically edited, doggedly, by medicines
"My emotions are awfully repetitive
I'm horribly insensitive and positively negative
I've gone from warlike and belligerent
- to showing lethargical indifference for even the harshest of predicaments
I have nasty visions of apparitions
- while rank suspicion render falisities definitive"
It lacks description - the author is his nemesis
- penning fancy visions with expansive fissures
caught up in his shabby diction... unaware and isn't
even able to separate fact from fiction
a novelty and primitive, cognitive dimunitive
- wannabe derivative slash/ text-rapping dickhead
who's reflections scatter into combatting schisms
- projecting trains of thoughts through refractive prisms
in fast transition - Now back to our character's anguish
navigating plot holes and crappy narrative language
from an unnatural vanatage, with tangible panic
- across a landscape with massive, graphical handprints
a strangely hypnotic, vaguely narcotic
- arrangement of topics across an impractical canvas
"Help, help I've become deranged and myopic
a note stating 'I HATE YOU' has been placed in my pocket
my speech rhymes and I'm unable to stop it
and I'm terribly afraid I'll get brained by a plot twist!"

Echoes chime off in joyless cycles
- of masturbatory ploys devoid of climax
Where one false move from John the Primate
- Would make John the Tyrant employ his iron
and beat him senseless to relieve his tension
- with such heated vengeance it would destroy the climate

05-19-2014, 03:33 AM	#1
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	Week 13 contender match: 3. Johnathan Mercy (3-2) vs. 4. King Ra. (6-5) \\ Johnathan Mercy wins via no-show Season 3 The Basics \| Read the full rules here. Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS. Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent. Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread. Topic One False Move Good luck, @Johnathan Mercy and @King Ra. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

05-19-2014, 06:11 AM	#2
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Good luck, JM. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

05-23-2014, 12:19 PM	#3
Three-Planes-Aligned Hyphenated Join Date: Apr 2014 Location: The Black Lodge Posts: 79 Battle Record: 7-8 Rep Power: 549509	The Biography Paradox (Johns) It's like his thoughts are warped wantonly by sedatives - Like he's philosophically edited, doggedly, by medicines "My emotions are awfully repetitive I'm horribly insensitive and positively negative I've gone from warlike and belligerent - to showing lethargical indifference for even the harshest of predicaments I have nasty visions of apparitions - while rank suspicion render falisities definitive" It lacks description - the author is his nemesis - penning fancy visions with expansive fissures caught up in his shabby diction... unaware and isn't even able to separate fact from fiction a novelty and primitive, cognitive dimunitive - wannabe derivative slash/ text-rapping dickhead who's reflections scatter into combatting schisms - projecting trains of thoughts through refractive prisms in fast transition - Now back to our character's anguish navigating plot holes and crappy narrative language from an unnatural vanatage, with tangible panic - across a landscape with massive, graphical handprints a strangely hypnotic, vaguely narcotic - arrangement of topics across an impractical canvas "Help, help I've become deranged and myopic a note stating 'I HATE YOU' has been placed in my pocket my speech rhymes and I'm unable to stop it and I'm terribly afraid I'll get brained by a plot twist!" Echoes chime off in joyless cycles - of masturbatory ploys devoid of climax Where one false move from John the Primate - Would make John the Tyrant employ his iron and beat him senseless to relieve his tension - with such heated vengeance it would destroy the climate