murda vs DMS - MURDA SHO WINS

[Cred]

The Summer Classic ‘18
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

@murda sho @Emm Kay Gee @DMS

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday,
  August 2nd, 2018 @ 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due Tuesday, July 31st, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
• Voting ends Saturday, August 4th, 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are normally 24 hours
  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 48 hours
  and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

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• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will disqualified.
• A check in IS mandatory.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

[DMS]

How about 10

[Em Kay Gee]

cool

[murda sho]

Bet

[DMS]

If you don’t need an extension I’m good

I’m a battle beast watch this boy’s straight essence daze knights,
I’ll knock anyone rude off and deliver presence like slay flights.
Emm Kay Gee, only here cus of NS, so without armor sufficient I’m pushing through
When I’m strapped with arms I’ll dispatch my plot, you know, do what you couldn’t do
No way he’ll trample me, he wouldn’t champ a league of dummies
The only way he’ll bounce back to his original place is on a trampoline or bungee
And Murda getting wrecked in the three way, this dumb man can just suck it
He’s getting so many ‘Dole Dippers’ in the plantation, he’s called the banana republics
Think moving, cus his back was getting a heavy load with two men in a truck
He’s more filled with strange substances than an abandoned chemical dump

[murda sho]

Originally Posted by DMS

... Well on kik me n him were talking about something I forget, which lead to us discussing Bongo, who I do admit I shouldn’t have DQ’d, because I think Lenox lost to him in week like 7...

Look this thread is just odd bro, fuck Lenox and Bongo...
When this 9 blow it got a kik that’d make him forget the rest of his convos
Nerd niggas dance when I’m dumpin or I’ll cripple you punks then
Hit ya block boy and what I shoot will have em kickin and jumpin
Could sit him or slump him then once Kay is dead this lame is next
Ima make this lead slide into DMs like “hey bighead”
Emm has got a hound! when I saw his chick the way I felt was kinda down
Cause that bitch wouldn’t hear “good lookin” if she helped somebody out
Ima spray at his whip then his next battle he’ll be great at this shit
You’ll see improvement cause them EKG lines will be straight after this

Zip Em Up!

[Blue Bayou]

I’m a battle beast watch this boy’s straight essence daze knights,
I’ll knock anyone rude off and deliver presence like slay flights.
very outdated and played w/p tbh, meh open
Emm Kay Gee, only here cus of NS, so without armor sufficient I’m pushing through
When I’m strapped with arms I’ll dispatch my plot, you know, do what you couldn’t do
okay angle, prob been done with the Plot ref tho.. bit easy and straightforward for a personal
No way he’ll trample me, he wouldn’t champ a league of dummies
The only way he’ll bounce back to his original place is on a trampoline or bungee
lol dece meta.. wording was strong , the actual punch of 'bouncing back to his original place' was a bit light tho
And Murda getting wrecked in the three way, this dumb man can just suck it
He’s getting so many ‘Dole Dippers’ in the plantation, he’s called the banana republics
lolish idea, bit out there... okay
Think moving, cus his back was getting a heavy load with two men in a truck
He’s more filled with strange substances than an abandoned chemical dump
nah, not feelin the closer .. the two men in a truck / load tie in was fine, but 'strange substances' was a bit of a reach imo for the concept

vs.

Look this thread is just odd bro, fuck Lenox and Bongo...
When this 9 blow it got a kik that’d make him forget the rest of his convos
pretty dece open.. cool attack line with a good tie in
Nerd niggas dance when I’m dumpin or I’ll cripple you punks then
Hit ya block boy and what I shoot will have em kickin and jumpin
okay, pretty dece attack line and concept
Could sit him or slump him then once Kay is dead this lame is next
Ima make this lead slide into DMs like “hey bighead”
nah I did this in the cypher on DMs and thought it was a lot cleaner, so this missed for me
Emm has got a hound! when I saw his chick the way I felt was kinda down
Cause that bitch wouldn’t hear “good lookin” if she helped somebody out
lol, like this idea... feel the wording could've been better, but still dig it
Ima spray at his whip then his next battle he’ll be great at this shit
You’ll see improvement cause them EKG lines will be straight after this
pretty solid nameplay and flip... dece finisher


Cool battle... fairly close as both had some pretty solid lines but no real banger simo.. I;ev gotta give the edge to Murda Sho for being a bit more consistent & because I liked his concepts a tad better... props to both

Vote - Murda Sho

[For Battling]

I’m a battle beast watch this boy’s straight essence daze knights,
I’ll knock anyone rude off and deliver presence like slay flights.
wasnt feelin this
Emm Kay Gee, only here cus of NS, so without armor sufficient I’m pushing through
When I’m strapped with arms I’ll dispatch my plot, you know, do what you couldn’t do
not good
No way he’ll trample me, he wouldn’t champ a league of dummies
The only way he’ll bounce back to his original place is on a trampoline or bungee
lmao so stupid but I liked it
And Murda getting wrecked in the three way, this dumb man can just suck it
He’s getting so many ‘Dole Dippers’ in the plantation, he’s called the banana republics
decent
Think moving, cus his back was getting a heavy load with two men in a truck
He’s more filled with strange substances than an abandoned chemical dump
ok


Vs


Look this thread is just odd bro, fuck Lenox and Bongo...
When this 9 blow it got a kik that’d make him forget the rest of his convos
this was cool
Nerd niggas dance when I’m dumpin or I’ll cripple you punks then
Hit ya block boy and what I shoot will have em kickin and jumpin
alrighht
Could sit him or slump him then once Kay is dead this lame is next
Ima make this lead slide into DMs like “hey bighead”
gone @ hey big head. This wasn’t good tho
Emm has got a hound! when I saw his chick the way I felt was kinda down
Cause that bitch wouldn’t hear “good lookin” if she helped somebody out
decent
Ima spray at his whip then his next battle he’ll be great at this shit
You’ll see improvement cause them EKG lines will be straight after this
good here


DMS had an ok verse but first two bars were misses. Murda didn’t have anything explosive but he had no misses and that opener was nice. Cool bsttle here


Vote murda sho

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by DMS

If you don’t need an extension I’m good

I’m a battle beast watch this boy’s straight essence daze knights,
I’ll knock anyone rude off and deliver presence like slay flights.

its spelled sleigh u fuckin mongoloid ...not to mention u trying to pass off the first wordplay EVER like hm no one gon notice

Emm Kay Gee, only here cus of NS, so without armor sufficient I’m pushing through
When I’m strapped with arms I’ll dispatch my plot, you know, do what you couldn’t do

dispatch my plot? whatre u a fucking cartoon super villain? even saying he couldn't dispatch plot promise me on your life u would say that at any time that wasn't this verse.....promise me

No way he’ll trample me, he wouldn’t champ a league of dummies
The only way he’ll bounce back to his original place is on a trampoline or bungee

this is ok i guess? didn't really think too hard about these huh?

And Murda getting wrecked in the three way, this dumb man can just suck it
He’s getting so many ‘Dole Dippers’ in the plantation, he’s called the banana republics

literally wtf does any of this mean....any single word

Think moving, cus his back was getting a heavy load with two men in a truck
He’s more filled with strange substances than an abandoned chemical dump

contrived. wack shit.

Originally Posted by murda sho

Look this thread is just odd bro, fuck Lenox and Bongo...
When this 9 blow it got a kik that’d make him forget the rest of his convos

lol ok

Nerd niggas dance when I’m dumpin or I’ll cripple you punks then
Hit ya block boy and what I shoot will have em kickin and jumpin

behind the other kick line this felt repetitive but this one was the better of the two

Could sit him or slump him then once Kay is dead this lame is next
Ima make this lead slide into DMs like “hey bighead”

i didn't see blues version if i did i prolly woulda voted against it but i dug this lol

Emm has got a hound! when I saw his chick the way I felt was kinda down
Cause that bitch wouldn’t hear “good lookin” if she helped somebody out

lol dig

Ima spray at his whip then his next battle he’ll be great at this shit
You’ll see improvement cause them EKG lines will be straight after this

fire

Zip Em Up!

literally this was a landslide fuck calling these shits even if they aren't dms got bodied i felt like i stepped into a time warp w those ancient concepts, contrived scenarios and just overall poor wording. tf is a dole dipper? the world may never know. was happy to see sho is still a little bit better than average tho.


v sho

[Ryno]

I’m a battle beast watch this boy’s straight essence daze knights,
I’ll knock anyone rude off and deliver presence like slay flights.
-nah man
Emm Kay Gee, only here cus of NS, so without armor sufficient I’m pushing through
When I’m strapped with arms I’ll dispatch my plot, you know, do what you couldn’t do
-i like this
No way he’ll trample me, he wouldn’t champ a league of dummies
The only way he’ll bounce back to his original place is on a trampoline or bungee
-nah fam
And Murda getting wrecked in the three way, this dumb man can just suck it
He’s getting so many ‘Dole Dippers’ in the plantation, he’s called the banana republics
-not feeling this
Think moving, cus his back was getting a heavy load with two men in a truck
He’s more filled with strange substances than an abandoned chemical dump
- this was light at best

vs

Look this thread is just odd bro, fuck Lenox and Bongo...
When this 9 blow it got a kik that’d make him forget the rest of his convos
-nasty
Nerd niggas dance when I’m dumpin or I’ll cripple you punks then
Hit ya block boy and what I shoot will have em kickin and jumpin
-ok
Could sit him or slump him then once Kay is dead this lame is next
Ima make this lead slide into DMs like “hey bighead”
-fire
Emm has got a hound! when I saw his chick the way I felt was kinda down
Cause that bitch wouldn’t hear “good lookin” if she helped somebody out
-i like this
Ima spray at his whip then his next battle he’ll be great at this shit
You’ll see improvement cause them EKG lines will be straight after this
-decent

v-Murda sho. DMS was alil over matched in this one.

[Cred]

DMS - strange substance was cool, nothing besides that hit. Keep elevating and battling. You got some cool concepts, now you just need to get that wording down packed. It'll come with time.

murda - showed out here. Don't even look like you need a dust any rust b. Kik and hey big head were crazy

vote - murda sho