07-30-2018, 07:33 AM | #1 |
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Flow vs Ryno - FLOW WINS
The Summer Classic ‘18 The Premier Text Battling Tournament @Ryno @Flow Rules Due Dates:
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07-30-2018, 07:53 AM | #2 | |
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Best of the rookies? This nigga is pussy, Ry aimin’ to hurt dude
Ur the most hyped out of a bad class, Lavar ball should sponsor ur first shoe Quote:
My bare hands’ll rip ur Barc, to the point that ur bitching and go totally Ghost This is my turf now, calm down, trust me u dont wanna tease the beast Out the gate i’ve been a dawg, u pass yards w/ chihuahua’s & frantically cross the street Got old school values, lets throw the knucks, no need to lift the boiler Pussy, come fight night i’ll give u the blues n leave u leakin’ like destroyer Names flow but for what, slangin’ rhymes aint really ya callin’ see Call the .45 Kulture, once it pops this bitch’ll be off stage quicker than cardi b Boss shit, i’ll press the mack n nina to ya features, those rockets gotta hurt U flinch they’re bound to burst, now ur stuck between to pieces like a micrometer Last edited by Ryno; 08-02-2018 at 05:01 PM. |
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08-03-2018, 05:55 AM | #3 |
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Lost to a bar thief last week now you fuckin witta boss
Vipers bite had enough sting to make voters 'believe venom' and you lost Another British invasion, crossed without the music but I'm bringing a buck Cus the Macklemore than show this clown he 'can't hold us' when the hands are put up no tactical espionage I got the metal gear pointing at your heart who cares bout what Raiden, he been running towards a Big Shell from the start U sound like a noob who never been in a head to head for a title so imma just ignore Ryan Seacrest since this american idle The first rounds a breeze, in the second is where the weak fall through Last round you got a "bye" but this round it's a "don't call us, we'll call you" N this tourney dont need u...shit its all our hope that you die Cus anythin Ricin makes us wish u’d push the envelope and find poison inside
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08-05-2018, 05:53 PM | #4 |
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Best of the rookies? This nigga is pussy, Ry aimin’ to hurt dude
Ur the most hyped out of a bad class, Lavar ball should sponsor ur first shoe alright pretty cool here Oh really ur groot huh? Dumb punk, filler lines’ll leave ya totally roast My bare hands’ll rip ur Barc, to the point that ur bitching and go totally Ghost you had a decent concept going but I’m no feelin how you ended This is my turf now, calm down, trust me u dont wanna tease the beast Out the gate i’ve been a dawg, u pass yards w/ chihuahua’s & frantically cross the street lol nah man Got old school values, lets throw the knucks, no need to lift the boiler Pussy, come fight night i’ll give u the blues n leave u leakin’ like destroyer heres another one where you had a cool concept going but didn’t quite finish it off good. Decent Names flow but for what, slangin’ rhymes aint really ya callin’ see Call the .45 Kulture, once it pops this bitch’ll be off stage quicker than cardi b alright not bad Boss shit, i’ll press the mack n nina to ya features, those rockets gotta hurt U flinch they’re bound to burst, now ur stuck between to pieces like a micrometer nah bro Vs Lost to a bar thief last week now you fuckin witta boss Vipers bite had enough sting to make voters 'believe venom' and you lost this was OK, wasn’t feelin the “believe venom” part. Feel like it could have been better without that Another British invasion, crossed without the music but I'm bringing a buck Cus the Macklemore than show this clown he 'can't hold us' when the hands are put up this was cool, nice wp no tactical espionage I got the metal gear pointing at your heart who cares bout what Raiden, he been running towards a Big Shell from the start in America we pronounce this as “ray-din”, not “ry-din” or “ry-don” lol brits...I’ll give you credit for the language barrier though. The concept was good U sound like a noob who never been in a head to head for a title so imma just ignore Ryan Seacrest since this american idle oh nahhhh man I wasn’t feelin this lol The first rounds a breeze, in the second is where the weak fall through Last round you got a "bye" but this round it's a "don't call us, we'll call you" weird take but i liked this lol N this tourney dont need u...shit its all our hope that you die Cus anythin Ricin makes us wish u’d push the envelope and find poison inside this is cool Don’t know why this doesn’t have any votes yet, that’s a shame smh. Pretty cool battle here, props to both for dishing out some good lines and showing up. My favorite bar from Ryno was his opener, that was nice. Ryno also had a lot of good ideas and concepts but struggled to finish them out at times, definitely has potential to be dope but just has to tweak a few things. Flow also had a lot of cool ideas and was also able to close out on almost every bar. Cool battle here but I have Flow edging this. Vote Flow |
08-05-2018, 06:09 PM | #5 |
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Best of the rookies? This nigga is pussy, Ry aimin’ to hurt dude
Ur the most hyped out of a bad class, Lavar ball should sponsor ur first shoe nice w/ a good personal hit, dig this Oh really ur groot huh? Dumb punk, filler lines’ll leave ya totally roast My bare hands’ll rip ur Barc, to the point that ur bitching and go totally Ghost nah, I get the attempt just not into it... totally x 2 needed to be changed This is my turf now, calm down, trust me u dont wanna tease the beast Out the gate i’ve been a dawg, u pass yards w/ chihuahua’s & frantically cross the street ehh, not feelin Got old school values, lets throw the knucks, no need to lift the boiler Pussy, come fight night i’ll give u the blues n leave u leakin’ like destroyer hmmm, feel like more couldve been done with it, fell pretty flat Names flow but for what, slangin’ rhymes aint really ya callin’ see Call the .45 Kulture, once it pops this bitch’ll be off stage quicker than cardi b pretty dece Boss shit, i’ll press the mack n nina to ya features, those rockets gotta hurt U flinch they’re bound to burst, now ur stuck between to pieces like a micrometer this was okay vs. Lost to a bar thief last week now you fuckin witta boss Vipers bite had enough sting to make voters 'believe venom' and you lost solid.. would've used diff wording personally, personal hit Another British invasion, crossed without the music but I'm bringing a buck Cus the Macklemore than show this clown he 'can't hold us' when the hands are put up niiiiice, fresh w/p that was done well no tactical espionage I got the metal gear pointing at your heart who cares bout what Raiden, he been running towards a Big Shell from the start yaaaa it's a hard 'ray-din' for me so it doesn't really work... give you a pass since ur foreign, concept was dope U sound like a noob who never been in a head to head for a title so imma just ignore Ryan Seacrest since this american idle lol, light but it worked and was cool The first rounds a breeze, in the second is where the weak fall through Last round you got a "bye" but this round it's a "don't call us, we'll call you" hmmmm, nah N this tourney dont need u...shit its all our hope that you die Cus anythin Ricin makes us wish u’d push the envelope and find poison inside pretty cool, solid close Cool battle guys... I've got Flow here tho, better concepts & execution and was more consistent... props to both Vote - Flow |
08-05-2018, 06:15 PM | #6 |
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Got flow taking this pretty handily. Ry just need to work on his concept a little more, simply mentioning another battler’s name on nc’s isn’t really a concept. You can def have potential tho, just work on the bars a bit.
Dug pretty much everything from flow but sea rest, and raiden was a stretch to me V/flow |
08-05-2018, 10:48 PM | #7 |
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Best of the rookies? This nigga is pussy, Ry aimin’ to hurt dude
Ur the most hyped out of a bad class, Lavar ball should sponsor ur first shoe Ok Oh really ur groot huh? Dumb punk, filler lines’ll leave ya totally roast My bare hands’ll rip ur Barc, to the point that ur bitching and go totally Ghost Eh This is my turf now, calm down, trust me u dont wanna tease the beast Out the gate i’ve been a dawg, u pass yards w/ chihuahua’s & frantically cross the street Wack Got old school values, lets throw the knucks, no need to lift the boiler Pussy, come fight night i’ll give u the blues n leave u leakin’ like destroyer Nah Names flow but for what, slangin’ rhymes aint really ya callin’ see Call the .45 Kulture, once it pops this bitch’ll be off stage quicker than cardi b Cool Boss shit, i’ll press the mack n nina to ya features, those rockets gotta hurt U flinch they’re bound to burst, now ur stuck between to pieces like a micrometer Awful wording, why not say vice instead of micrometer lmao? Simple connection too vs Lost to a bar thief last week now you fuckin witta boss Vipers bite had enough sting to make voters 'believe venom' and you lost Ehhhh Another British invasion, crossed without the music but I'm bringing a buck Cus the Macklemore than show this clown he 'can't hold us' when the hands are put up Cool concept not in love with the wording towards the end no tactical espionage I got the metal gear pointing at your heart who cares bout what Raiden, he been running towards a Big Shell from the start Not sure how it ties to a punch? Ry Din? Maybe you mean Ry Done? His name is pronounced Ry Din. Cool idea just forced. U sound like a noob who never been in a head to head for a title so imma just ignore Ryan Seacrest since this american idle Idol* ffs lol. Cool nameplay not the greatest bar. The first rounds a breeze, in the second is where the weak fall through Last round you got a "bye" but this round it's a "don't call us, we'll call you" Liked it, simple N this tourney dont need u...shit its all our hope that you die Cus anythin Ricin makes us wish u’d push the envelope and find poison inside Cool Both struggled with wording, flow had slightly better concepts though v/ Flow |
08-05-2018, 11:03 PM | #8 |
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Best of the rookies? This nigga is pussy, Ry aimin’ to hurt dude
Ur the most hyped out of a bad class, Lavar ball should sponsor ur first shoe cool line Quote: Get cocky with me boy n Marvel as i go old yella on a negro I am Groot cus this the 2nd time a stick blowin a brain up to end an Ego Oh really ur groot huh? Dumb punk, filler lines’ll leave ya totally roast My bare hands’ll rip ur Barc, to the point that ur bitching and go totally Ghost lol This is my turf now, calm down, trust me u dont wanna tease the beast Out the gate i’ve been a dawg, u pass yards w/ chihuahua’s & frantically cross the street ehhh Got old school values, lets throw the knucks, no need to lift the boiler Pussy, come fight night i’ll give u the blues n leave u leakin’ like destroyer ehh Names flow but for what, slangin’ rhymes aint really ya callin’ see Call the .45 Kulture, once it pops this bitch’ll be off stage quicker than cardi b not bad Boss shit, i’ll press the mack n nina to ya features, those rockets gotta hurt U flinch they’re bound to burst, now ur stuck between to pieces like a micrometer lol oook Lost to a bar thief last week now you fuckin witta boss Vipers bite had enough sting to make voters 'believe venom' and you lost st8 Another British invasion, crossed without the music but I'm bringing a buck Cus the Macklemore than show this clown he 'can't hold us' when the hands are put up worded off but cool no tactical espionage I got the metal gear pointing at your heart who cares bout what Raiden, he been running towards a Big Shell from the start ehh U sound like a noob who never been in a head to head for a title so imma just ignore Ryan Seacrest since this american idle st8 The first rounds a breeze, in the second is where the weak fall through Last round you got a "bye" but this round it's a "don't call us, we'll call you" lol N this tourney dont need u...shit its all our hope that you die Cus anythin Ricin makes us wish u’d push the envelope and find poison inside decent closer I got Flow here on a decent battle. |
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