Orc vs slecht - (Orc wins)

[Orc]

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@slecht

[slech]

Greetings and Salutations @Orc

[Orc]

My man

[slech]

If ya bitch got syphilis, I wouldn't be suprised with ya slippery Tramp,
she got u feeling the Burn, now u a potential threat to hillary's camp.
I'll make ur second place go viral, ya punch drunk lame,
I'd say burd's been dropping turds ...way before the trump dump game
Allen gave u the dick to rescue this league, u thought u on some braveheart shit.
while knight giving you the whole load ..rivals any laundromat graveyard shift.
quit ya hiding. These back to back bars will destroy ur frail asshole.
I'd have the mexican officials suspicious when they see this L, chop O
we'll go tow to tow. fuck ya drive and hardest writtens
claim that spot for a little too long and get taken out like excessive' parking tickets


quick 10. @Orc

[Orc]

From an earlier meaning of "simple, ordinary, inferior, plain", from Middle Dutch slecht ‎(“smooth, flat”)

Watup Dutch boy,

.

We've got ORCCC. A monsta. Vicious in reign
Vs Slecht. A mighty alias who evokes fear by being simple & plain
Orc's a damn Household name. U've no hope in this,
My reputation is Double Dutch... Yours is Jumping Rope with kids
You've zero clout. With verses basiccc as shit.
We'd only put you in the 'Spotlight' because you were raped as a kid
Bitches reply to The Orcster in bulk. Trusttt me kid
They reply in Bulk to you too.. Like ''eww, you big Fat disgusting pig''
&&&The whole site thinks u've no rep. Fact
I'll give this boy a Show of Hands. Then ask ''NC's is Slecht wack?''

[Allen Knight]

If ya bitch got syphilis, I wouldn't be suprised with ya slippery Tramp,
she got u feeling the Burn, now u a potential threat to hillary's camp.
^^^^ cool opener
I'll make ur second place go viral, ya punch drunk lame,
I'd say burd's been dropping turds ...way before the trump dump game
^^^no lol wtf
Allen gave u the dick to rescue this league, u thought u on some braveheart shit.
while knight giving you the whole load ..rivals any laundromat graveyard shift.
^^^nah
quit ya hiding. These back to back bars will destroy ur frail asshole.
I'd have the mexican officials suspicious when they see this L, chop O
^^^ok idea but didnt hit to hard
we'll go tow to ow. fuck ya drive and hardest writtens
claim that spot for a little too long and get taken out like excessive' parking tickets
^^^good closer


Vs

We've got ORCCC. A monsta. Vicious in reign
Vs Slecht. A mighty alias who evokes fear by being simple & plain
^^^decent opener
Orc's a damn Household name. U've no hope in this,
My reputation is Double Dutch... Yours is Jumping Rope with kids
^^^good
You've zero clout. With verses basiccc as shit.
We'd only put you in the 'Spotlight' because you were raped as a kid
^^^loll..nice
Bitches reply to The Orcster in bulk. Trusttt me kid
They reply in Bulk to you too.. Like ''eww, you big Fat disgusting pig''
^^^nah
&&&The whole site thinks u've no rep. Fact
I'll give this boy a Show of Hands. Then ask ''NC's is Slecht wack?''
^^^^cool


V/orc, decent lil battle slecht has to be shaking rust cuz some those
lines werent hitting tbh but he had acouple good also, just keep battling
orc had a solid verse spotlight was nice. props to both for dropping early.

[Saint]

If ya bitch got syphilis, I wouldn't be suprised with ya slippery Tramp,
she got u feeling the Burn, now u a potential threat to hillary's camp.
^ Ok. Coulda worded this better imo.
Like said:" feeling the burn.. u could win every poll in Dem states" or something, as it us its kind've okay take on a popular slogan.

I'll make ur second place go viral, ya punch drunk lame,
I'd say burd's been dropping turds ...way before the trump dump game
^ Nah wack imo.
droppin turds is lame thing to say, & referencing trump after Bernie is kindve redundant..

Allen gave u the dick to rescue this league, u thought u on some braveheart shit.
while knight giving you the whole load ..rivals any laundromat graveyard shift.
^Nah. Load is played in this context.. and laundromat flip isn't hard hitting, imo..

quit ya hiding. These back to back bars will destroy ur frail asshole.
I'd have the mexican officials suspicious when they see this L, chop O
^ Sloppy executing, kindve stretched, but ehh better idea w/ nameplay I guess

we'll go tow to tow. fuck ya drive and hardest writtens
claim that spot for a little too long and get taken out like excessive' parking tickets

^ Cool closer, your best line, best worded 1 too, do more if this and you'll fare better in the league.. Could've setup to make it harder too, like " Orc sits on the throne but cant go tow to tow w/ my hardest writtens"

Overall, seemed rushed, but last line has potential..

Orc won tho.. Smoother, more direct with disses..
Spotlight and show of hands took it

Vote orc

[Hush]

El chapo was cool
Parking tickets was fire


Double Dutch show of hands and bulk were ok



Slecht has bad misses
Orc didn't have a good verse but it was better

V Orc


I'd love to see u change ur wording style bro

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by slecht

Graveyard shift & Parking tickets

Not bad, u just need harsher wording & concepts, your bars lack sting.

Originally Posted by Orc

Double Dutch, Spotlight, Show of hands

Idk bruh, this reads like a throwaway key, really simplistic.

Overall ORC takes it, even tho he's rusty asf, Slecht u just have to get meaner & heavier w/ the bars.

[Fracture]

Good battle


Sletch, solid verse. All the political puns were telegraphed. Laundromat was dope... Could be doope with two o's but the wording was tough. Parking tickets was a certified banger

Orc, a lot of confidence. Concept wise... Uninspired. Double Dutch was great. Show of hands was an ill concept... But how are you going to show him hands before you ask the question?

V/sletch. He wasn't as polished as Orc, but that closer was just enough

[Pinot Grij]

Slecht - Bernie Sanders line was cool, well worded. Trump dump - I don't know what the fuck that is. Loads line is gay - I hate gay sex bars, please stop them forever. El Chapo is ok, but a concept that should've been left on the cutting room floor.

Orc - Double dutch and Spotlight.

Vote -- Orc

[ill nik-A]

Slect
Opener was cool

Orc
Double Dutch and spotlight sealed it

Orc wins

[Cred]

Sleicht closer was cool

Vs

Double dutch n spotlight was alright


Cool match nonetheless. Orc got this one.