02-26-2013, 10:00 AM | #1 |
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Camp Bell vs. Flo Real {Camp Bell wins}
Round 2 Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Tuesday, March 5th 2013 11:59 PM PST. Voting ends Friday 11:59 PM PST. (Battles that lack votes may close later.) (One sided battles may get closed early.) (Extensions can be no longer than 36 hours and have to be granted by your opponent.) Line Limit: Min. = 10 lines Max. = 16 lines (The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.) Voting: Must vote on 5 battles and post your links. Post the links in the thread titled "Round 2 Voting Links". You will be punished if you don't post all 5 voting links. You will not like the punishment, so just vote so you don't have to cry later. General Rules: 1st person can't edit after the 2nd person posts. 2nd person can't edit after a vote has been made. Feeding = DQ. Recycling = DQ. Biting = DQ. No freeposting, swaying or bitching. Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post MUST match the 1st person's line amount. @Camp Bell @Flo Real |
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03-01-2013, 04:46 AM | #3 |
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03-01-2013, 03:43 PM | #4 |
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Im 3 steps up from you - unlike meth ill humour ya witta contribution
your 3 steps down from me - in skill, wins and fucking stages in evolution on the topic of 3's bitch look at yo loss count - you steppin upto flo?! niggas won 3 matches but never once where it wasnt titled - CB wins by no show Your teams full of feelings So team Orc dont have a chance to champ There's feeling sik, rayge, bordom an I have to face the one feelin camp You'll never have a big hit yo shit overplayed Yo concepts White noise Nike tick yo loss to win ratio it lacks the frequency for that fight voice Tweetin bout how he'll make it big but yo shit could be free n still Wont sell I'll be a mod one day an tweeting this one time @banned camp I dropped this fucking bell "your existence is basic"- You do know startin beef with il-Nik is bad for your health? Doesnt respect his elders but then hes biting lines that older then himself your flow is shit your punches are weak your concepts are simply played Ultimate writer? Bitch leave this shit to cats that actually have skill in this trade |
03-02-2013, 10:35 AM | #5 |
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"Waynes world where you think he's lost garth but then...he hasn't." - 'Movies that make you cry' thread
you cant stomach puns as i savor this bountiful meal wrote this with the bubble guts, im not playing, shit about to get real your not getting out of this deal, admit it then forfeit i'm busting flo's, he was stumbling for gold BEFORE jennifer lawrence my whispering skills raw, it brings attention to war but when somebody says real talk, its usually dismissed and ignored i'll stab this prick with a fork then your done bitch if wayne get tears to come, wat brings ya spirit up, suckin dick for trukfit? your not geared enough to compose trouble dude no way this lame name wins, leaving the way he came in, flo with no W your controlled and so gullible, its such a shame kid Orc's pick just gift bagged a corpse quick, you was playing wit a saint nik all i do is work on grave digs, this jerk is makeshift if real recognized real, your worthless is a personal statement, not a nameflip
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First off, nice job for two new guys - Flo, you seem pretty good as far as picking out ammo but you could benefit a lot if you were to try to start using some wordplay. Camp, you've come a pretty long way with how you were on NC. Your style's still got that swaggy flowy shit at times which can be great for delivery and wording, but you need to focus on setting up the punchlines a lot better. So both of you keep at it. This is a tough call. Seems to be statements vs wordplay that coulda been a lot stronger. I think I have a decision but I'd like to sit on it for a bit first Basically boiled down to Your teams full of feelings So team Orc dont have a chance to champ There's feeling sik, rayge, bordom an I have to face the one feelin camp v my whispering skills raw, it brings attention to war but when somebody says real talk, its usually dismissed and ignored but I feel like beyond those two bars they were all attempts... and some of camp's were closer? really close battle that i can see going either way, but I felt like Camp took it with better attempts v/ Campbell keep at it guys |
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03-07-2013, 07:20 PM | #7 |
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Im 3 steps up from you - unlike meth ill humour ya witta contribution
your 3 steps down from me - in skill, wins and fucking stages in evolution eh, shoulda came with harder opener on the topic of 3's bitch look at yo loss count - you steppin upto flo?! niggas won 3 matches but never once where it wasnt titled - CB wins by no show okay. Your teams full of feelings So team Orc dont have a chance to champ There's feeling sik, rayge, bordom an I have to face the one feelin camp You could flipped this really well but it turned out being just aight. You'll never have a big hit yo shit overplayed Yo concepts White noise Nike tick yo loss to win ratio it lacks the frequency for that fight voice nah Tweetin bout how he'll make it big but yo shit could be free n still Wont sell I'll be a mod one day an tweeting this one time @banned camp I dropped this fucking bell ok "your existence is basic"- You do know startin beef with il-Nik is bad for your health? Doesnt respect his elders but then hes biting lines that older then himself ok i guess your flow is shit your punches are weak your concepts are simply played Ultimate writer? Bitch leave this shit to cats that actually have skill in this trade Nah bad closer. VS you cant stomach puns as i savor this bountiful meal wrote this with the bubble guts, im not playing, shit about to get real cool opener i guess your not getting out of this deal, admit it then forfeit i'm busting flo's, he was stumbling for gold BEFORE jennifer lawrence ok my whispering skills raw, it brings attention to war but when somebody says real talk, its usually dismissed and ignored Aight coo, hit a bit i'll stab this prick with a fork then your done bitch if wayne get tears to come, wat brings ya spirit up, suckin dick for trukfit? lol ok your not geared enough to compose trouble dude no way this lame name wins, leaving the way he came in, flo with no W Pretty nice lotb your controlled and so gullible, its such a shame kid Orc's pick just gift bagged a corpse quick, you was playing wit a saint nik Coo but i think you could have worded it better to make it hit harder all i do is work on grave digs, this jerk is makeshift if real recognized real, your worthless is a personal statement, not a nameflip eh closer This was an eh battle pretty much. Kinda dissapointed but I have to give it to V/Campbell Yall just have to try and use more personals and word them better to hit your opponent.
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Im 3 steps up from you - unlike meth ill humour ya witta contribution
your 3 steps down from me - in skill, wins and fucking stages in evolution Your teams full of feelings So team Orc dont have a chance to champ There's feeling sik, rayge, bordom an I have to face the one feelin camp vs your not getting out of this deal, admit it then forfeit i'm busting flo's, he was stumbling for gold BEFORE jennifer lawrence your not geared enough to compose trouble dude no way this lame name wins, leaving the way he came in, flo with no W i dunno here, both had pretty decent attempts at concepts but the execution wasnt there. Too many nameflips as well here. when it comes down to is its close, v/ Camp I'll say work on personals tie ins, and make sure punches come off with that snap.. because alot lines from both off came off statementish then kinda fell flat. good battle guys |
03-08-2013, 02:22 PM | #10 |
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3-0, Camp Bell. Up for more votes.
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03-08-2013, 07:46 PM | #11 |
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Im 3 steps up from you - unlike meth ill humour ya witta contribution
your 3 steps down from me - in skill, wins and fucking stages in evolution Statementish - Came across as pretty simple on the topic of 3's bitch look at yo loss count - you steppin upto flo?! niggas won 3 matches but never once where it wasnt titled - CB wins by no show Too simple man Your teams full of feelings So team Orc dont have a chance to champ There's feeling sik, rayge, bordom an I have to face the one feelin camp This was nice, lol'd...good shit You'll never have a big hit yo shit overplayed Yo concepts White noise Nike tick yo loss to win ratio it lacks the frequency for that fight voice Not bad, wording hurt it though Tweetin bout how he'll make it big but yo shit could be free n still Wont sell I'll be a mod one day an tweeting this one time @banned camp I dropped this fucking bell Nice idea, decent execution...could have been better "your existence is basic"- You do know startin beef with il-Nik is bad for your health? Doesnt respect his elders but then hes biting lines that older then himself nah your flow is shit your punches are weak your concepts are simply played Ultimate writer? Bitch leave this shit to cats that actually have skill in this trade Weakest bar of your verse imo, way too simple vs you cant stomach puns as i savor this bountiful meal wrote this with the bubble guts, im not playing, shit about to get real No your not getting out of this deal, admit it then forfeit i'm busting flo's, he was stumbling for gold BEFORE jennifer lawrence Decent my whispering skills raw, it brings attention to war but when somebody says real talk, its usually dismissed and ignored Cool...could have been worded better though i'll stab this prick with a fork then your done bitch if wayne get tears to come, wat brings ya spirit up, suckin dick for trukfit? Ehh your not geared enough to compose trouble dude no way this lame name wins, leaving the way he came in, flo with no W Lol lotb so far imo your controlled and so gullible, its such a shame kid Orc's pick just gift bagged a corpse quick, you was playing wit a saint nik Weak all i do is work on grave digs, this jerk is makeshift if real recognized real, your worthless is a personal statement, not a nameflip Saw what you tried, didn't come off right though Some cool hits, and some bad misses on both sides of this battle. I think it was even enough for the most part, flo had the camp line which made me lol, and camp had the flo with no w line which I thought was definitely lotb....so I gotta give it to him. Vote - Camp Bell
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