04-18-2016, 03:34 PM | #1 |
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Shanks 1-0 vs SuckaFreeCashier 0-1 - SUCKAFREE WINS
NBL Season 9 Due THURSDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Shanks @SuckaFreeCashier |
04-18-2016, 07:21 PM | #2 |
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whatever is good with me
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04-19-2016, 03:59 PM | #3 |
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We'll go ten cool? Can I drop Friday? (Unless I can find time tomorrow)
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04-19-2016, 04:35 PM | #4 |
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10 and that's fine with me
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04-21-2016, 06:05 PM | #5 |
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I'll get in ur face n watch u turn bitch, then tap ur dome n ur chin, nerd
It'll Have this whole league viewing Free as a bird now,,,, no Lynyrd Skynyrd N last week u got trashed geek, s'like u never could land shit The way u just didn't touch bags, I thought u was tryna better the planet Evey1 got a thing fa doe, Even broke cats hustle for a buck when they're hungry Ull try the cheeseburger skit, so when it fails n u can display how ur a sucker fa money Where I'm from net geeks get F'd with, so I write this text shit on the low Fag'll invite 20 headz for netcees n popcorn, knowin every1 on the guest list gonna show Electronics fucked ur head up, s'why u never felt breasts pal So u can blame technology, why bitches avoid cashier n go straight to self check out |
04-21-2016, 08:00 PM | #6 |
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I’ll get ya whole family in the same shot – that’s a Christmas card
I hit em hard, you can find Shanks in the dirt like a prison guard Should I give him bars or shots when I’m grippin the handle? Only time you grippin a handle is tryna fuck ya bish … liftin her handles He had to settle for shit cuz he was on tinder posin like a white knight How ironic the guy named shanks couldn’t get a swipe right That legion verse wasn’t even dirt, shanks shoulda dropped this hobby Your only win on the Lime scene was a crime scene – just a drawn out body Now son is done, like a Calipari player – you’ll be one and done Gave ya 9 lines, this last one a bonus cuz now you one and one |
04-21-2016, 09:57 PM | #7 |
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I'll get in ur face n watch u turn bitch, then tap ur dome n ur chin, nerd
It'll Have this whole league viewing Free as a bird now,,,, no Lynyrd Skynyrd Wording sucked N last week u got trashed geek, s'like u never could land shit The way u just didn't touch bags, I thought u was tryna better the planet Preciate that. But nah this shit is wack. Evey1 got a thing fa doe, Even broke cats hustle for a buck when they're hungry Ull try the cheeseburger skit, so when it fails n u can display how ur a sucker fa money Little wordy but this ur best so far Where I'm from net geeks get F'd with, so I write this text shit on the low Fag'll invite 20 headz for netcees n popcorn, knowin every1 on the guest list gonna show Lmfao this is such a weird bar lolol Electronics fucked ur head up, s'why u never felt breasts pal So u can blame technology, why bitches avoid cashier n go straight to self check out This is.....ok I’ll get ya whole family in the same shot – that’s a Christmas card I hit em hard, you can find Shanks in the dirt like a prison guard BANGARANG Should I give him bars or shots when I’m grippin the handle? Only time you grippin a handle is tryna fuck ya bish … liftin her handles Lol eh....wording sucked to me....an love handles flips r played He had to settle for shit cuz he was on tinder posin like a white knight How ironic the guy named shanks couldn’t get a swipe right Okish That legion verse wasn’t even dirt, shanks shoulda dropped this hobby Your only win on the Lime scene was a crime scene – just a drawn out body I want this to work so much lol. But the drawn out body part don't make sense to me....like u should've included something about the win taking forever to get votes...or being drawn out in sum way etc Now son is done, like a Calipari player – you’ll be one and done Gave ya 9 lines, this last one a bonus cuz now you one and one Eh All in all both were a bit clunky. I'm gonna edge it to SFC just cuz his opening bar was fire as fuck to me. Love the double punch style. Shanks u got the general idea but u need to work on more elaborate concepts coupled with more concise wording to really make ur punches land V sfc |
04-22-2016, 01:37 AM | #8 |
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The opening nameflip/lynrd skynrd tie-in could've been dope but the wording was doing to much. The closer was decent. Tbh I wasn't feeling what was in between. a combination of poor wording and iffy concepts imo.
Frees opening bar was easily line of the battle for me. Definitely tapered off as the verse went along but not nearly as off the rails as shanks. Vote- sucker free cashier
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04-22-2016, 09:23 AM | #9 |
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shank
I'll get in ur face n watch u turn bitch, then tap ur dome n ur chin, nerd It'll Have this whole league viewing Free as a bird now,,,, no Lynyrd Skynyrd -nah this didn't really make sense N last week u got trashed geek, s'like u never could land shit The way u just didn't touch bags, I thought u was tryna better the planet -this was decent Evey1 got a thing fa doe, Even broke cats hustle for a buck when they're hungry Ull try the cheeseburger skit, so when it fails n u can display how ur a sucker fa money -not a fan Where I'm from net geeks get F'd with, so I write this text shit on the low Fag'll invite 20 headz for netcees n popcorn, knowin every1 on the guest list gonna show -ehhhh Electronics fucked ur head up, s'why u never felt breasts pal So u can blame technology, why bitches avoid cashier n go straight to self check out -this could have hit with a different set up approach and better wording SFC I’ll get ya whole family in the same shot – that’s a Christmas card I hit em hard, you can find Shanks in the dirt like a prison guard -this was decent Should I give him bars or shots when I’m grippin the handle? Only time you grippin a handle is tryna fuck ya bish … liftin her handles -nah bro n rhyming handle with handles is weak He had to settle for shit cuz he was on tinder posin like a white knight How ironic the guy named shanks couldn’t get a swipe right -not a fan That legion verse wasn’t even dirt, shanks shoulda dropped this hobby Your only win on the Lime scene was a crime scene – just a drawn out body -cool Now son is done, like a Calipari player – you’ll be one and done Gave ya 9 lines, this last one a bonus cuz now you one and one -throw away bar SFC takes this with 2 solid hits v - SFC |
04-22-2016, 10:08 AM | #10 |
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Lol @ better the planet & that self check was ok, woulda been fire with diff wording.
vs Shanks in the dirt was dopee, swipe right was decent Decent battle here. Both came with 2 punches a piece i thought were koo. Sucka had the shanks/prison joint which was fire n lotb Vote - SFC |
04-23-2016, 01:20 AM | #11 |
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SUCKAFREECASHIER gets the W, Shanks u need to polish up that wording. SFC u weren't phenomenal, but most def did well enough to run away w/ this victory.
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04-23-2016, 09:36 AM | #12 |
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Shanks: better the planet, self check out
Sucka: prison guard, lifting her handles, swipe right Sucka takes this. Swipe right punch was dope. Vote = SFC |
04-25-2016, 09:07 AM | #13 |
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Lynyrd Skynyrd, better the planet, self check out
Vs Shank in the dirt, swipe right V/ shanks |
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