04-26-2016, 09:19 PM | #1 |
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MFTastick 1-0 vs Shanks 1-1 - MF WINS
NBL Season 9 @MFtastick @Shanks
Due FRIDAY Extension will be given if asked due to late start. You MUST ask though. Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
04-27-2016, 07:53 AM | #2 |
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I'm good with 12
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04-28-2016, 06:09 PM | #3 |
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Damn! Can I have an extension I had no clue these were set up.
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04-29-2016, 10:00 AM | #4 |
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Last joint was weak. This week I bring the bars in/
The winners circle gonna be a no shank zone, and I'm the warden/ You want beef? what block he on ima let the 4 clap/ Prison scheme leavem washed up on a beach. That's how I shawshank I'm a Led clapper. Square up. Right hook leavem dead after./ Neck snapper. Then get the buisiness with the left hand like Ned Flanders/ You in the ring with a beast. And I can see what you lack is heart/ you come off as dull tryna get your point across it ain't hard to see this shank ain't sharp/ I caught your last verse. All I can say.. That was Fucking lame. You got served by a cashier.. Thank you come again/ Anytime you talk gully, I'm filled with nothing but doubt./ How can I take you serious when you spell like you still have a MySpace account. |
04-30-2016, 07:58 PM | #6 |
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U don't play with pistols, so cut the noise this fuckin boy ain't gutter,
Shiiit, Only time u bang irons, is in the kitchen tryna annoy ya mother, So cut the silly chatter, behind a screen talkin bout who's philly fatter, While wifey given dudes knowledge, ur pea brain can't register what really matters, I'm 1 of a kind, a rare species, fuck a beast I'm greater, Ur weird ass gotta fuck animals in the wild just to be called a freak of nature, A heavyweight, ur to soft to withstand a spar, doggy, Cuz one solid punch'll murder u, that's WTF u call a hard body But u popin gats n ballin, c'mon just admit ur a poor honest failure, N only cock hammers back when he repairing the porch on his trailer, Gun bars r hot tho, So u follow suit n start pretending, WOW! That just means if a couple headz wrote gay lines, fag'll switch to what's trending now |
04-30-2016, 08:46 PM | #7 |
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Last joint was weak. This week I bring the bars in/
The winners circle gonna be a no shank zone, and I'm the warden/ Light You want beef? what block he on ima let the 4 clap/ Prison scheme leavem washed up on a beach. That's how I shawshank Ehhh I'm a Led clapper. Square up. Right hook leavem dead after./ Neck snapper. Then get the buisiness with the left hand like Ned Flanders/ Yo. Lol. This shit is so fucking fire. I'm inclined to vote for u NOW honestly ha. You in the ring with a beast. And I can see what you lack is heart/ you come off as dull tryna get your point across it ain't hard to see this shank ain't sharp/ light I caught your last verse. All I can say.. That was Fucking lame. You got served by a cashier.. Thank you come again/ Lol stupid Anytime you talk gully, I'm filled with nothing but doubt./ How can I take you serious when you spell like you still have a MySpace account. Light U don't play with pistols, so cut the noise this fuckin boy ain't gutter, Shiiit, Only time u bang irons, is in the kitchen tryna annoy ya mother, Played, poorly executed So cut the silly chatter, behind a screen talkin bout who's philly fatter, While wifey given dudes knowledge, ur pea brain can't register what really matters, Huh I'm 1 of a kind, a rare species, fuck a beast I'm greater, Ur weird ass gotta fuck animals in the wild just to be called a freak of nature, Lmao this is amusing A heavyweight, ur to soft to withstand a spar, doggy, Cuz one solid punch'll murder u, that's WTF u call a hard body Light But u popin gats n ballin, c'mon just admit ur a poor honest failure, N only cock hammers back when he repairing the porch on his trailer, Played Gun bars r hot tho, So u follow suit n start pretending, WOW! That just means if a couple headz wrote gay lines, fag'll switch to what's trending now Nothin here So I feel like I'm seeing a trend w rmbva guys .....I always see Atkeast one insane banger....but then the rest of the shit just be lazy or won't have impact or....idk...idkts like u guys maybe searching to see wat gets play over here? Also sometimes u guys lead in w wat should be ur punch as a setup an then punch w something light...ie....Ned Flanders should not have introd that dull Shank flip. That Ned Flanders line will stick w me for a while. Shank rushed his verse to show an I appreciate that ....Props for respecting ur opponent....but that verse didn't have the bangers u needed. V mf |
04-30-2016, 09:41 PM | #8 |
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that Ned Flanders bar was fucking ridiculous I laughed at the thank you come again but it was simple but fucking ned Flanders wooooooooooo! shank didn't have anything that was close to that all he needed was one banger like that but v/mf |
05-01-2016, 04:13 PM | #9 |
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MF: No Shankzone, Ned Flanders, Thank you come again
vs. Shanks: Freak of nature Thought MF took this one pretty convincingly.
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05-01-2016, 10:50 PM | #10 |
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Last joint was weak. This week I bring the bars in/
The winners circle gonna be a no shank zone, and I'm the warden/ Decent concept but the wording is elementary You want beef? what block he on ima let the 4 clap/ Prison scheme leavem washed up on a beach. That's how I shawshank Not sure what language u speak in but four clap and shawshank don't rhyme in the least bit I'm a Led clapper. Square up. Right hook leavem dead after./ Neck snapper. Then get the buisiness with the left hand like Ned Flanders/ Haha nice You in the ring with a beast. And I can see what you lack is heart/ you come off as dull tryna get your point across it ain't hard to see this shank ain't sharp/ booo I caught your last verse. All I can say.. That was Fucking lame. You got served by a cashier.. Thank you come again Lol smh. Funny in a corny way Anytime you talk gully, I'm filled with nothing but doubt./ How can I take you serious when you spell like you still have a MySpace account. ehh U don't play with pistols, so cut the noise this fuckin boy ain't gutter, Shiiit, Only time u bang irons, is in the kitchen tryna annoy ya mother, Not feeling this So cut the silly chatter, behind a screen talkin bout who's philly fatter, While wifey given dudes knowledge, ur pea brain can't register what really matters, I liked the rhyme scheme more than anything else I'm 1 of a kind, a rare species, fuck a beast I'm greater, Ur weird ass gotta fuck animals in the wild just to be called a freak of nature, Nah b A heavyweight, ur to soft to withstand a spar, doggy, Cuz one solid punch'll murder u, that's WTF u call a hard body Not feeling this either But u popin gats n ballin, c'mon just admit ur a poor honest failure, N only cock hammers back when he repairing the porch on his trailer, Ok I guess I'll.give u this one Gun bars r hot tho, So u follow suit n start pretending, WOW! That just means if a couple headz wrote gay lines, fag'll switch to what's trending now Poorly executed concept This was a good fair matchup as far as current level of skill goes. No hate to either they're still progressing it looks like and trying to tighten up some things like wording and concept development. It was close but I give it to mf for the Ned Flanders bar. That was creative lol
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05-01-2016, 11:34 PM | #11 |
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Got mf... That ned flanders bar sealed it for me
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05-02-2016, 03:40 AM | #12 |
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MF: Ned flanders
Shank: bang irons I thought shank was a bit more consistent tbh. But MF's Flanders punch was a cut above everything else in this battle, possible punch of the week. Like @Bags says, genuinely don't get how you can have such a dope punch amongst a bunch of played ones, guess you might turn out lethal when you find your Grove. Vote = MF |
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