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Old 11-21-2015, 11:43 AM   #1
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Old 11-21-2015, 11:59 AM   #2
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Any suggests on how I should break this week and next week up considering the holidays?

Writing this week should be no problem as verses are due before ThanksGiving the 26th


I will let voting linger on to say Monday the latest unless there are decisive winners and shit before hand

Round three I'll try and keep you guys back on track by allowing an extra day or two for writing


Important Question

What type of topic would you like if you made the finals?

Picture or quote? The other option I always consider for the finals is simply having no topic


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Old 11-21-2015, 12:02 PM   #3
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It's fucked up our battle ended on a shit vote tbh

I still wanna know how having the better verse cost me the battle smfh
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Old 11-21-2015, 12:06 PM   #4
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It's fucked up our battle ended on a shit vote tbh

I still wanna know how having the better verse cost me the battle smfh
I think he explained himself really well though? I voted similar. It was a tough vote man, very close. He edged it out for me off of preference and that flip on the topic alone as well. Writing wise, it was pretty damn close, but that put him over the top for me, I think it is the same for Time
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Old 11-21-2015, 12:10 PM   #5
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I think he explained himself really well though? I voted similar. It was a tough vote man, very close. He edged it out for me off of preference and that flip on the topic alone as well. Writing wise, it was pretty damn close, but that put him over the top for me, I think it is the same for Time
He said I had the better verse, named negative things about the other verse,then voted for his because he had a cool flip tho?
That don't make sense to me, every other vote I understand but that one just seemed retarded.
Like the whole point is to write a better verse than your opponent, not just throw words at a page an make it somehow randomly twist into the topic lol
Mmlp had a cool verse, not hatin on that. But by timeless' explanation all it was was bad slant rhymes slow progression and a cool flip?
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Old 11-21-2015, 12:13 PM   #6
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IDK man, I see your point and it's valid, I get you want an explanation and that is fine

However, these are opinion based votes and his vote had enough explanation to be allowed you know? I feel your pain though man, really do.
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Old 11-21-2015, 12:14 PM   #7
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@YDK didnt want this L
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Old 11-21-2015, 12:17 PM   #8
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I didn't understand what he was sayin about mine tho, like all I see is that I said time alot (yet apparently ppl still missed how it related to a path in the pic) and that I had the better verse...but... Then he voted for the verse he only said one positive thing about which is the flip.
Especially with a vote that could have tied the battle up

Y'all know I never say shit about votes so its gotta say somethin about how retarded his voted sounds to me lmao
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Not like that no lol if he said mmlp had a better verse an didn't like mine then cool...but don't say I had the better verse and not vote for it

That completely defeats the purpose of voting for the better verse
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@asylum you want to write to something you can fathom









































or you want to take this easy L
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Not like that no lol if he said mmlp had a better verse an didn't like mine then cool...but don't say I had the better verse and not vote for it

That completely defeats the purpose of voting for the better verse
its already buddy I lost to Nigma by one vote although it should have been 2


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Yeah I feel ya, it rarely happens atleast to me but every time it does its like whhyyyyyy are people idddiiooottssss lmao fuck it tho

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So MMLP huh? Cool.

@MMLP, a heads up, I will probably go 40+ lines.
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Guess I should've been more specific for the whiny little bitch @YDK you had a "better written verse" when it comes to refinement/flow/wording but you're shit was boring as fuck. Write better next time faggot.
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Cheers! lets make a classic gawd!

Work, gym, eating , porn n sleeping lol take up my time in the period of when topics go up and verses are due so im expecting around 28 tbh.
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I'm out till late tonight on my grown up adults friendsgiving

@Mr. J you tryna battle twice in one week? You'd be the third to do it this season
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I been tryna get a 2nd battle all season ^_^
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