Round one: Frank vs. Genocide [Frank wins Genocide NO SHOW]

Adonis · 06-04-2013, 08:48 PM

THERE WILL BE ZERO NO SHOWS...So if you do write a ten line no show verse live with the loss when a random alternate comes in and beats you..FY motherfucking I!!

16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum. (if agreed upon by both participants, you may go beyond the limit at your own risk.)

Verses are due SATURDAY 6/8 at 11:59 PST.
Extensions are due SUNDAY 6/9 at 11:59 PST.

You must vote on at least 4 other battles and post links in the Voting Thread. For every absent vote, you will be deducted ONE vote next week. I am much less lenient on this rule then Keith, so please vote.

While there's no absolute criteria for voting, 1 line votes and criminally underdeveloped ones won't be allowed. I will holler via private message if I think a vote of yours isn't up to snuff and you'll be allowed to develop it, as long as you do it within the deadline. At a minimum, you should aim to include what you liked and what you didn't like (if anything) about each verse as well as an explanation towards why you thought one verse was better than the other.
There is NO RECYCLING.BITING.GHOSTWRITING.

Voting ends TUESDAY 6/11 at 11:59 PST.(Unless otherwise it may be extended another day at the most.)

You MUSTcheck in.

NOTE:
Swaying, excessive freeposting, voter fraud etc. are grounds for vote deductions at discretion of the moderators.
Editing your verse after the grace period, after your opponent posts, or after the first vote (especially this)- as well as biting- are grounds for disqualification at discretion of the moderators.

TOPIC: Incoming...

Good luck to both participants... @Frank @Genocide

Geno · 06-05-2013, 10:10 PM

Climbing.

Frank · 06-07-2013, 12:16 PM

Welcome back to the AOWL.

Geno · 06-08-2013, 09:50 AM

Extend. Will show

Frank · 06-10-2013, 06:31 AM

Ain't no drug better than weed - I'm selling trees
Rolling a L, lighting a J,
What the letters read?
Shieet I ain't spellin for free...
Settle ya debt, deadin ya credit with me -
Procrastinating loser -
Waking and baking - No thanking any rooster
Just Blazing. all praise to the producer
Getting wasted im faded - im stankin' i'm gettin juiced - UH
Here in the building
Very appealing
Mary was chilling with the bud man and it wasn't on Married with Children
feeling like filling the bong with ice, til the calm excites
turning on the mic and watching life come alive inside the palms of Christ

Lord knows I've still got room to grow as artist and a human being,

Thank you

06-04-2013, 08:48 PM	#1
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	Round one: Frank vs. Genocide [Frank wins Genocide NO SHOW] THERE WILL BE ZERO NO SHOWS...So if you do write a ten line no show verse live with the loss when a random alternate comes in and beats you..FY motherfucking I!! 16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum. (if agreed upon by both participants, you may go beyond the limit at your own risk.) Verses are due SATURDAY 6/8 at 11:59 PST. Extensions are due SUNDAY 6/9 at 11:59 PST. You must vote on at least 4 other battles and post links in the Voting Thread. For every absent vote, you will be deducted ONE vote next week. I am much less lenient on this rule then Keith, so please vote. While there's no absolute criteria for voting, 1 line votes and criminally underdeveloped ones won't be allowed. I will holler via private message if I think a vote of yours isn't up to snuff and you'll be allowed to develop it, as long as you do it within the deadline. At a minimum, you should aim to include what you liked and what you didn't like (if anything) about each verse as well as an explanation towards why you thought one verse was better than the other. There is NO RECYCLING.BITING.GHOSTWRITING. Voting ends TUESDAY 6/11 at 11:59 PST.(Unless otherwise it may be extended another day at the most.) You MUSTcheck in. NOTE: Swaying, excessive freeposting, voter fraud etc. are grounds for vote deductions at discretion of the moderators. Editing your verse after the grace period, after your opponent posts, or after the first vote (especially this)- as well as biting- are grounds for disqualification at discretion of the moderators. TOPIC: Incoming... Good luck to both participants... @Frank @Genocide __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR Last edited by Adonis; 06-10-2013 at 09:33 PM.

06-05-2013, 10:10 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,328 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Climbing. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

06-07-2013, 12:16 PM	#3
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	Welcome back to the AOWL. __________________ *VETWORK*

06-08-2013, 09:50 AM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,328 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Extend. Will show __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

06-10-2013, 06:31 AM	#5
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	Ain't no drug better than weed - I'm selling trees Rolling a L, lighting a J, What the letters read? Shieet I ain't spellin for free... Settle ya debt, deadin ya credit with me - Procrastinating loser - Waking and baking - No thanking any rooster Just Blazing. all praise to the producer Getting wasted im faded - im stankin' i'm gettin juiced - UH Here in the building Very appealing Mary was chilling with the bud man and it wasn't on Married with Children feeling like filling the bong with ice, til the calm excites turning on the mic and watching life come alive inside the palms of Christ Lord knows I've still got room to grow as artist and a human being, Thank you __________________ *VETWORK* Last edited by Frank; 06-10-2013 at 06:34 AM.