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After this whole brass body debacle :) I thought i would ask the common censuses on what a topical means to everyone..
Cause kuja and mine both got considered as standard topical's by different people.. So i'm just wondering if yall from other boards see topical's as a rhyming piece of literature birthed from a viewable certain topic.. Or do you separate the difference .from a lyrical story.. regardless if the topic is a full quote, a story lead or just one word. This is not a shot anyone person this is purely out of curiosity.. And even at the sake of body brass coming back n saying look look cats over there dont know what a topical is, i dont care.. he is a nice writer just an over sensitive one, that smokes too many four leaf clovers :) My view is that a topical verse is a single idea/point portrayed around that topic, it can venture off to prove that point but there is one single voice of reason.. when you have a verse like either kuja or mine they turn into lyircal stories.. where there are multiple avenues to take where it can be left as just a story an no more where there are twists that throw you from any meaning that might occur where there are alternate ending depending on your views etc, etc so im not attacking anybody, i am not trolling brass body.. If anything im putting my own neck on the line looking like a dickhead.. N im cool with that, i just want to hear your views on what you believe it is.. Maybe that i've viewed shit wrong for separating the two n a topical is just that "lyrics to a topic" If i feel im wrong n you sell me, shit i'll call a topical an advanced haiku if peeps make it sound legit.. :)
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i like when topicals rhyme and arent just filled with end rhymes. i also like either a story or a good description of something, like i feel like you dont ALWAYS need a plot with a dope twist but if ppl try to write a plot im gonna critique them on it
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03-27-2013, 05:31 PM | #46 |
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@Cereal_Killa I pretty much agree with you on everything you said about a topical.
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sweet, i think it might b just a site thing where the word can be used in dif ways..
I just wanted to see where yall heads are at on the topic :)
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03-27-2013, 05:43 PM | #48 |
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ohh sorry for the absolutely atrocious grammar.. I have been up all night working n it is no 9am over here (insert sad face)
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Straight talk here.. i would put a black lotus flower up that zygote vs adonis gets BOTW..
U loose, i will use that flower for all intents and purposes.. ILLEGALLY
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03-27-2013, 06:20 PM | #53 |
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Frank vs RedGlare .. And at third place King Kieth vs that Colourful Koala
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hey someone asked me to do an acloholic collab but i lost the page.. cause im gay
is that still going i got sometime like 2hrs before my eyes forcibly close themselves, so i can quickly knock one out..
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@ZenLand man this sounds great i would pop in to participate but i have the worst sleeping pattern ever i wld b missing some n making others.. I pretty much would b the worst mod for this.. But thanx n i hope it happens..
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i think that was me, not sure. yeah just pick an alcohol type and do 10-12 lines. not tequila, whiskey, gin, or vodka (i believe)
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damn mescals taken.. i should do beer but im thinking maybe ouzo.. or white sambuca
ill get back to yah..
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Why does the prediction say i got swept last week? =(
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