04-11-2013, 03:27 PM | #41 |
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Dude stop reaching for the win and let the votes decide.
Rules says the vote deduction happens the following week and I havent been signed in for 2 so how can they apply to me |
04-11-2013, 03:35 PM | #43 |
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Also. Please drop the issue. Mods have final say, this could be regarded as swaying (even if sarcastic) and seeing as you already PM'd for votes I'd hate to DQ you... its really not a big deal. The battle will be over soon
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04-11-2013, 03:58 PM | #44 |
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Surprisingly, I've acually voted on this match.
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04-11-2013, 04:00 PM | #45 |
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O shit. I haven't. lmfao I should go do that.
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04-11-2013, 04:29 PM | #46 |
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red and pents battle is still open after the tiebreaker realllllllly
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04-11-2013, 04:42 PM | #47 |
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in the future I would say that as long as a battle has at least 10 votes, if the time limit is up , that shits a tie. case closed. fuck holding up the league and begging people to vote
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BOTW/ VOTW will remain open until the mag is up.. pls go vote. I'll be doing vote tallies now. If you've got deductions... SORRY BE QUICKER NEXT TIME. YOU CAN DO EXTRA VOTES THIS WEEK AND MAKE UP.
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04-11-2013, 04:55 PM | #49 |
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Pent Up - Pretty dope, P. You took a cerebral direction that reminded me of a Michael Bay-like character going on an island getaway vacation and watching his own personality dissolve in the tropical heat, literally unravelling all of his credibility, mental toughness and eroding away the last of his reinforcing thoughts. The content was engaging and I followed through it without any road blocks, which is rare for me when I read your pieces because there's a sense of accomplishment when I can plough through chunky sentiments to reach a collective conclusion. I didn't struggle with that here. Nice piece.
Red Glare - I'd say you killed it with the rhyme scheme. It was all done well with some hiccups you maybe could've accounted for, but the length of the scheme was ambitious enough and I'm surprised you maintained relevance. What may have happened for me is the anticipation of your insistently consistent rhyme scheme causing me as the reader to get distracted by the story and focus more on the sounds and syllabic flows you produced. I don't know if the story was all that great. The rhythmic presentation was of high quality and execution, but did I walk away feeling enriched, or given any thoughts to chew on and expand upon in my own mind? I feel like this failed at that, while Pent's succeeded. My vote goes to @pohfig this week for a verse that pleased my brain sensors as well as my senses. Red Glare's was juicy but lacked any nutritional value imho. Keep doing you |
04-11-2013, 05:01 PM | #50 |
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@Red glare, I guess I didn't fully get your verse but it's too late now. I think I still would vote for Poh.
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04-11-2013, 05:02 PM | #51 |
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Red Glare wins by one vote anyways. @Vulgar thanks for voting when you did, no deduction @TYSON if you voted and it didnt let you post, PM it to me or post it here and i wont deduct from ur votes MATCHES GOING UP NOW
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04-11-2013, 05:49 PM | #56 |
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How did i go from 3-1.. Losing to Vulgar and then going 3-5? Damn.. Didnt know Losing to Vulgar would hurt that bad lol
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04-11-2013, 05:50 PM | #57 |
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Yes losing to Vulgar counts as four losses. I remember reading that in the rules somewhere.
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04-11-2013, 05:52 PM | #58 |
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Everyone knows that rule.
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04-11-2013, 06:02 PM | #59 |
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