10-03-2013, 12:12 AM | #1 |
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Unfukwitable vs. Trag. - TRAGIC WINS
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10-03-2013, 12:20 AM | #2 |
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10-03-2013, 04:17 AM | #3 |
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you can have the win, im not liking this voting rule...
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10-03-2013, 04:25 AM | #4 |
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wtf?, you can't vote on 4 battles...
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10-03-2013, 04:55 AM | #5 |
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alright how many lines...
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10-03-2013, 01:53 PM | #6 |
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10-06-2013, 06:22 PM | #7 |
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unfuk pm'd a verse
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10-07-2013, 05:41 PM | #8 |
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I'll stab ya oldest living, this blade'll show em' harm Display his family crest in front of him and really watch blood coat his arms. Your names ironic tho, I bet true life shook this bitch Last girl who wanted to unfuck the situation... split his money & took the kids. And ya rican battle? it showed off the leagues worse offering.. you winning was the lesser of two evils, voters wanna opt for a third party. faggot, italics & underlining ya wordplay is certainly crap... if that's dressing up ya punches? then it's no wonder why ya verse is a drag. It'll be a massacre on news the way u got manhandled you'll get the sandy hook treatment- a beach bully punchin u for makin sandcastles. I beat Des last week. old age. dont mend the truth But i find it funny des is closing in on death & death will close this thread on u. Last edited by Trag.; 10-07-2013 at 05:50 PM. |
10-07-2013, 05:45 PM | #9 |
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unfukwitable's verse
you wouldn't have heated riddles if you stirred upped Dr. Seuss which is why I Got this pussy in czech.. & I never had a Europe prostitue He don't pan statement's vicious, this battle'll make fam play submissive cause for him to have the edge on common grounds- means he's in the landscaping business I reject lames and leave the rest slay'n so since Trag wanna test flames I got a home for'em with a "tomb in it"... that shit'll remind girls of his sex game His plan was to leave me wasted, But Instead you will suffer as viewers mistake this for the PBA- when bold strikes leave this pin head in the gutta catch me in a living-room near you, I'll be at yo bitch spot As he Busts open the door I'm all on his ratchet racks like a Ghetto thrift shop I seen what Neighbor did to him & he won't last this fight I'll pour gasoline on him & toss a match.. you'll really see a "Tragic night" |
10-08-2013, 08:47 AM | #11 |
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I'll stab ya oldest living, this blade'll show em' harm
Display his family crest in front of him and really watch blood coat his arms. Your names ironic tho, I bet true life shook this bitch Last girl who wanted to unfuck the situation... split his money & took the kids. vs I reject lames and leave the rest slay'n so since Trag wanna test flames I got a home for'em with a "tomb in it"... that shit'll remind girls of his sex game His plan was to leave me wasted, But Instead you will suffer as viewers mistake this for the PBA- when bold strikes leave this pin head in the gutta My bad for editing my verse but when giving this a quick read i missed some of the wordplay I do apologize but Fuk takes this Last edited by KwaL!ty; 10-09-2013 at 02:11 PM. |
10-08-2013, 10:06 PM | #12 |
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Trag I liked ur opener. Pretty clever graphic shit. In fuck the situation was tight. The third party punch was nice too but offering n party don't rhyme. Dressing up ya punches was pretty nice as well. I don't get the sandy hook reference other than the obvious where the punch comes in. Closer was alright.
Unfuck opener was ok. Next couplet was ehh. Tomb in it was actually pretty dope hahamade me laugh. Pba was okish. N the rest kinda fell off. Closer was almost nice but I don't like the way u delivered it. This battle was kinda close but kinda not. I really liked the tomb in it wordplay I think it was the most creative of the battle but it wasn't enough. Trag was more polished n came across more witty. Vote trag |
10-09-2013, 01:05 PM | #13 |
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I think unfuk got this tbh. More creative and tomb in it was cool. Trag was sloppy n didnt try and Unf got the win with the better verse.
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10-09-2013, 07:19 PM | #14 |
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And ya rican battle? it showed off the leagues worse offering..
you winning was the lesser of two evils, voters wanna opt for a third party. It'll be a massacre on news the way u got manhandled you'll get the sandy hook treatment- a beach bully punchin u for makin sandcastles. vs He don't pan statement's vicious, this battle'll make fam play submissive cause for him to have the edge on common grounds- means he's in the landscaping business I seen what Neighbor did to him & he won't last this fight I'll pour gasoline on him & toss a match.. you'll really see a "Tragic night" Surprisingly close battle, kind of. Trag ignite slightly forced, but I let slide. Landscaping was nice. Third party was good. Sandy Hook, lol. Kind of corny, but I like. Crest seemed like a throwaway. Unfuck was kind of good, but the way the nameplay was used was a bit odd. Drag was clean, but not fresh. Same with closer, sort of. For Unfuck Czech wasn't fresh either. Same for tomb in it for me. Blame longbar. Seen too many bowling lines like that. Needed to be a really good flip. Wasn't feeling Ghetto thrift shop similar to family crest. Overall battle could possibly go either way, which is shocking, but I have Tragic edging it out on unquotes and originality. Props to both. /v tragic |
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really quite close but after reading again I'll edge it to Trag for being more creative and having a little more polish good battle v/ Trag
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10-10-2013, 06:28 AM | #16 |
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And ya rican battle? it showed off the leagues worse offering..
you winning was the lesser of two evils, voters wanna opt for a third party. faggot, italics & underlining ya wordplay is certainly crap... if that's dressing up ya punches? then it's no wonder why ya verse is a drag. I beat Des last week. old age. dont mend the truth But i find it funny des is closing in on death & death will close this thread on u. vs you wouldn't have heated riddles if you stirred upped Dr. Seuss which is why I Got this pussy in czech.. & I never had a Europe prostitue played wp. I seen what Neighbor did to him & he won't last this fight I'll pour gasoline on him & toss a match.. you'll really see a "Tragic night" Alright battle. Trag got this with more consistency. Unfukwitable had some played concepts, so that took away from him winning. Keep elevating. Props. Vote - Trag |
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