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02-02-2013, 08:56 AM
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Mr.Sinister vs. Obey - MR SINISTER WINS
10 lines due tomorrow night...
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02-02-2013, 08:57 AM
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02-02-2013, 06:46 PM
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Don't call it a comeback...
Obey the Giant?... You naming yourself after a clothing line? I'ma put ur face on a shirt, ideas for a new clothes design My flow's devine... You can't compare to me you ain't in the field Art of battling... This bitch showed up with finger paint and a shield Wearing jewelry,flannel... I had on a vest holding uzi handles Gunbutt 'em till he just sees Starz... Tv's stuck on one movie channel Nothin boss bout em'... You up against Jordan and I cross problems Record's 1-1 but this 1 on 1 add's 1 to your loss column You just soft talcum... If you knew my past you'd know my bars smother But now you'll hate me tomorrow like the losing Harbaugh brother Touchdown... |
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02-03-2013, 12:14 AM
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lol back in my day.....
you so old if a girl is on top sin says stop it cuz it hurts we see chicks n I say that bitch got ass, he's like well thats neater than a pocket on a shirt this is straight robbery you cant fight it I mean your pulse weak when you lost your mind all I found was old toe nail clippings and false teeth dont act raw guy you definitely not from the burbs shits posed no one wants you, so I'll make the beating bloody and 'nurse sin home I get head from sexy women, girls that walk down his street this man films them cuz the only time this fossil got his finger in the hole is when he's calling his grandchildren he's from a strict family so being on the net he screams words you aint ill dawg the only time sin bad is watching cartoons by dreamworks |
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02-03-2013, 12:40 AM
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02-03-2013, 07:52 AM
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I see I didn't put the poll on the thread and shit lol... Good verse tho
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02-03-2013, 04:42 PM
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Mr. Sinister: The metaphors are great. The word play is terrific. Love the opener -- the clothing line is a great personal. The 1-1 line is great especially when combined with the "cross problems/loss column". The scheme is intricate. The ryhmes were tight. The punches weren't super strong. Obey: Another really strong performance by you. The opening line was probably your weakest. The second line was super-stretched and the punch didn't land to well. I think the second line would be better if all the bars were similar length, but the second half sort of stretches out. The rest of the punches landed well, were creative, and hit hard. Liked the use of rhythm throughout the scheme. Two really strong performances. Gotta go with Mr. Sinister as his first and last two were a bit better. |
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02-03-2013, 05:21 PM
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02-03-2013, 05:49 PM
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02-03-2013, 09:04 PM
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02-05-2013, 05:52 PM
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Votes?
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02-05-2013, 06:44 PM
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39 NS, lost in votes once
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Obey the Giant?... You naming yourself after a clothing line?
I'ma put ur face on a shirt, ideas for a new clothes design My flow's devine... You can't compare to me you ain't in the field Art of battling... This bitch showed up with finger paint and a shield You just soft talcum... If you knew my past you'd know my bars smother But now you'll hate me tomorrow like the losing Harbaugh brother Vs. this is straight robbery you cant fight it I mean your pulse weak when you lost your mind all I found was old toe nail clippings and false teeth I wasn't feeling much from Obey.. iono if it was just me or what, but I didn't really get any of them lines. Alot of misses thruout his verse. Sin is rusty as to be expected.. the Starz line was hella played. Harbaugh closer was bland too.. but looking at the date of the verse posted it makes sense tho. Sin still has good concepts and wording.. he just needs to work on execution more & get back into form. Obey needs to work on his concepts for sure tho, imo. Props to both. Vote- Mr. Sinister |
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02-07-2013, 03:15 AM
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2-1 TO SIN
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02-07-2013, 12:26 PM
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Mr.Sinister
Obey the Giant?... You naming yourself after a clothing line? I'ma put ur face on a shirt, ideas for a new clothes design Decent Opener My flow's devine... You can't compare to me you ain't in the field Art of battling... This bitch showed up with finger paint and a shield Ok Wearing jewelry,flannel... I had on a vest holding uzi handles Gunbutt 'em till he just sees Starz... Tv's stuck on one movie channel Meh Nothin boss bout em'... You up against Jordan and I cross problems Record's 1-1 but this 1 on 1 add's 1 to your loss column Played Concept, and not much of a hit You just soft talcum... If you knew my past you'd know my bars smother But now you'll hate me tomorrow like the losing Harbaugh brother Okay, but could have hit harder Obey you so old if a girl is on top sin says stop it cuz it hurts we see chicks n I say that bitch got ass, he's like well thats neater than a pocket on a shirt Nah this is straight robbery you cant fight it I mean your pulse weak when you lost your mind all I found was old toe nail clippings and false teeth Ok dont act raw guy you definitely not from the burbs shits posed no one wants you, so I'll make the beating bloody and 'nurse sin home Ok, but the wordplay doesn't work both ways I get head from sexy women, girls that walk down his street this man films them cuz the only time this fossil got his finger in the hole is when he's calling his grandchildren The old jokes are, ironically, getting old he's from a strict family so being on the net he screams words you aint ill dawg the only time sin bad is watching cartoons by dreamworks Simple np, but ok This was an okay battle. Obey drove the old jokes into the ground. Mr. Sinister was decently consistent and much more varied in punch concept. Overall I think Sin took this. V/ Mr. Sinister
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02-07-2013, 03:44 PM
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My flow's devine... You can't compare to me you ain't in the field
Art of battling... This bitch showed up with finger paint and a shield Wearing jewelry,flannel... I had on a vest holding uzi handles Gunbutt 'em till he just sees Starz... Tv's stuck on one movie channel Nothin boss bout em'... You up against Jordan and I cross problems Record's 1-1 but this 1 on 1 add's 1 to your loss column vs this is straight robbery you cant fight it I mean your pulse weak when you lost your mind all I found was old toe nail clippings and false teeth i thought this was one sided, obey lines were stretched into weak punches or personals. this line made me chuckle tho. i felt sin had more consistency in his verse. some pretty decent quotables also, i enjoyed his verse way more than obey Vote: sin
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