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Old 02-09-2013, 10:50 AM   #1
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Old 02-09-2013, 12:33 PM   #2
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Old 02-10-2013, 05:10 PM   #4
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Your bitch brags about how i fuck her i know you've heard of me
Only time she bragging bout Hollywood is if she wanna be an actress or get plastic surgery
Stop acting like u hard you'll never bust truly
Shots will blow him back like Blizzard Nemo, we also know its this fags favorite movie
chill now that the NFL is over yeah it was great fucking year
i can see u all about having raven sensation cuz every nasty bitch you've been with made u burn down there
You never see him bagging bitches this dudes style is all wrong
When he approach every bitch be "Decking The Balls of Holly" and we know they aint reciting Christmas songs
His family poor as fuck nothing to eat and no soap to wash with
I know its sounds kinda lo mein and thats what u get when u open his fridge to some empty noodle boxes
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so Joe's a real American too? I can't tell if it's true yall..
cuz when he sees stars and stripes, I'm knocking him out w/ a pool ball
you can't hang bro, that lame flow ain't testin the flames
w/ enough weak lines chained together to anger Django & the rest of the slaves
you couldn't even place a bet, your bank account's at nothin son
you clearly ain't got no dough Joe, plus any bitch could beat you up in one
my punches certainly hurt, burstin this nerd's snout
I'm on the outskirts of perfect... he thinks he's perfect w/ skirts out
for running his mouth I'm shutting him out, very clean
I just zipped up the prick quicker than the Something About Mary scene
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Old 02-11-2013, 02:28 PM   #6
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Nice drop @Hollywood lets get some votes gl man
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Joes concepts were lacking, execution and wording were off. Holly had stars n stripes, unchained and dough joe that were fuxkin beast IMO. Holly gmv quite easily
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so Joe's a real American too? I can't tell if it's true yall..
cuz when he sees stars and stripes, I'm knocking him out w/ a pool ball

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Joe's last two were decent concept, but weren't pulled off cleanly enough to do much damage

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you can't hang bro, that lame flow ain't testin the flames
w/ enough weak lines chained together to anger Django & the rest of the slaves
you couldn't even place a bet, your bank account's at nothin son
you clearly ain't got no dough Joe, plus any bitch could beat you up in one


Hollywood's verse was more consistent, had harder hitting punches and lotb. Took this pretty comfortably. I can break down further if needed, but he got my vote

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@Skunk if u voting can u explain a bit more my dude thanks man. My bad for the freepost.
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I wasn't voting, just commenting
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His family poor as fuck nothing to eat and no soap to wash with
I know its sounds kinda lo mein and thats what u get when u open his fridge to some empty noodle boxes

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so Joe's a real American too? I can't tell if it's true yall..
cuz when he sees stars and stripes, I'm knocking him out w/ a pool ball
you can't hang bro, that lame flow ain't testin the flames
w/ enough weak lines chained together to anger Django & the rest of the slaves
you couldn't even place a bet, your bank account's at nothin son
you clearly ain't got no dough Joe, plus any bitch could beat you up in one

V/holly, not a bad battle, joe that bar i quoted was nice i like it if u had more of those u coulda took this
i the hang holly i did before so it didnt hit but ur wordings the issue u have concepts work on that..
holly came wit a nice verse the pool ball & dough joe lines was nice, cool read yah'll.
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Your bitch brags about how i fuck her i know you've heard of me
Only time she bragging bout Hollywood is if she wanna be an actress or get plastic surgery
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Stop acting like u hard you'll never bust truly
Shots will blow him back like Blizzard Nemo, we also know its this fags favorite movie
Ok
chill now that the NFL is over yeah it was great fucking year
i can see u all about having raven sensation cuz every nasty bitch you've been with made u burn down there
Meh..
You never see him bagging bitches this dudes style is all wrong
When he approach every bitch be "Decking The Balls of Holly" and we know they aint reciting Christmas songs
Ok
His family poor as fuck nothing to eat and no soap to wash with
I know its sounds kinda lo mein and thats what u get when u open his fridge to some empty noodle boxes
Ok

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so Joe's a real American too? I can't tell if it's true yall..
cuz when he sees stars and stripes, I'm knocking him out w/ a pool ball
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you can't hang bro, that lame flow ain't testin the flames
w/ enough weak lines chained together to anger Django & the rest of the slaves
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you couldn't even place a bet, your bank account's at nothin son
you clearly ain't got no dough Joe, plus any bitch could beat you up in one
Cool
my punches certainly hurt, burstin this nerd's snout
I'm on the outskirts of perfect... he thinks he's perfect w/ skirts out
Ok
for running his mouth I'm shutting him out, very clean
I just zipped up the prick quicker than the Something About Mary scene
Ok

Joe's wording still needs improvement. With that being said,Hollywood had some cool hits. Ive got to give this to holly.
V/Holly
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I feel like JB used too many generics that lacked the sting to make up for it. The concepts were nice, but could have been directed towards anyone, which takes away from the quality imo. The lo mein was a miss, the others were decent.

Holly had consistency, all of his punches had at least a lil somethin behind em, so Holly gmv.
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