IGotzJockaZ vs Storyteller - VOID

IGotzJockaZ · 07-15-2013, 10:35 PM

10 lines due tonight 7/15

house rules

IGotzJockaZ · 07-15-2013, 10:37 PM

check n ill post links n vote after i get this

edit: nah ill give till 12 est i wanna twist first =) @Storyteller

Spoken · 07-15-2013, 10:37 PM

Iight

And let's key something now if ya want?? Say due in 10 min... @IGotzJockaZ

iight well I'm postin soon

IGotzJockaZ · 07-15-2013, 11:59 PM

I’ll fuck ur girl raw, have her pussy floodin amino aids
Last time story got inundate it was during a storm, on the weather channel in closed captions
Ur clothes fashion is more wholey then the popes cassock
Get it thuggin and we can gun-it out, that sht wont matter
Ur demeaninor is weaker comin off more one arm short than kirt abbott
This cant b life; I was listen to phife dog n u watchd ‘barnie phife’
Ur hardest write leaves peeps in more a sync-‘ope’, than fallin in those or how u horribly live life
U suck dood, I don’t even need to read or ur intentions to speak
When I cut story out the picture quicker than an editorial release
Know im who ur honey-due while u weep with that melon, shes on mine...yellin', holdin her feet

@Storyteller

Spoken · 07-16-2013, 02:28 AM

Undefeated as the underdog watch and C how i aim for the W now,
act cocky anderson tzu tactics that'll have this joke like him gettin clipped and knocked out.
He get pussy? please aint no way he poker unless he gave up some chips
went all in on straight but we all know that a joker is always just the middle bitch.
you have no importance. came back? should build you a proper grave now,
verse is like the discussion forum how it gets buried by other shit that we'd rather speak about.
if you causing disturbance N see LOL responses under your verses,
S'only cuz we find ur name suiting and can't stop laughin' of horribly it's worded.
you a soft bitch really... a worlds series of acting hard...
the only time he see's much action ^^ is from other men pulling his card.

@Sharp Nine please open for votes @IGotzJockaZ nice drop fam see you still got it

Sharp · 07-16-2013, 02:29 AM

Opened. no rush, but voting links sometime soon dudes

Spoken · 07-16-2013, 02:31 AM

i got you

place a vote while your own fam @Sharp Nine

Spoken · 07-16-2013, 05:17 PM

Bump for looks wtf

PancakeBrah · 07-16-2013, 07:43 PM

Jockaz (lol) structure was weird as fuck to me. The setup/punchline shit was not normal. Concept wise he had some okay ideas but the wording got in the way or he didn't flip it to it's best use.

Story had some really clunky wording. I wasn't too impressed with the concepts and none of them were flipped cleverly.

v/ Jockaz (lol)

IGotzJockaZ · 07-17-2013, 04:04 PM

Climb

Geno · 07-17-2013, 08:45 PM

This was awkward to read for me. Both could have done better with wording imo

Pretty close line for line wise. Wasn't the greatest battle ever honestly.. but I think jockaz edged it with a couple of fresher lines than story and got the creativity edge here.

V-jockaz

Dope · 07-23-2013, 05:20 PM

V/story battle was close to me ..was able to edge this both had far fetched concepts

Spoken · 07-29-2013, 05:13 AM

Bump

Sharp · 08-03-2013, 12:01 PM

2-1 Jockaz

UP

Mael · 08-03-2013, 12:45 PM

U suck dood, I don’t even need to read or ur intentions to speak
When I cut story out the picture quicker than an editorial release

vs.

you have no importance. came back? should build you a proper grave now,
verse is like the discussion forum how it gets buried by other shit that we'd rather speak about.

This was a, battle, to say the least. I got you tied with quotes. Jockaz was basically rapping about banging Story's girl, and Story had too many statement-ish lines about how wack Jockas was. Creativity was definitely lacking here, guys. However, I thought Story had the better, more direct verse. Props to both, nonetheless.

Vote; Storyteller.

Spoken · 08-03-2013, 12:49 PM

2-2 thanks mael for the vote....

KwaL!ty · 08-06-2013, 03:35 PM

filler

vs

you have no importance. came back? should build you a proper grave now,
verse is like the discussion forum how it gets buried by other shit that we'd rather speak about.
^only bar that slightly did it for me.

mvgt- Story

Sharp · 08-14-2013, 11:24 PM

3-2 story

KwaL!ty · 08-16-2013, 11:36 AM

@Rawn M.D. @IGotzJockaZ @Storyteller links until provided CLOSED

Decibel · 09-16-2013, 02:14 AM

Battle Voided Due to No Links! -- PM me links if you want open.

07-15-2013, 10:35 PM	#1
IGotzJockaZ Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 95 Rep Power: 33	IGotzJockaZ vs Storyteller - VOID 10 lines due tonight 7/15 house rules

07-15-2013, 10:37 PM	#2
IGotzJockaZ Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 95 Rep Power: 33	check n ill post links n vote after i get this edit: nah ill give till 12 est i wanna twist first =) @Storyteller Last edited by IGotzJockaZ; 07-15-2013 at 10:39 PM.

07-15-2013, 10:37 PM	#3
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Iight And let's key something now if ya want?? Say due in 10 min... @IGotzJockaZ iight well I'm postin soon __________________ WP Po'ethics Last edited by Spoken; 07-15-2013 at 10:41 PM.

07-15-2013, 11:59 PM	#4
IGotzJockaZ Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 95 Rep Power: 33	I’ll fuck ur girl raw, have her pussy floodin amino aids Last time story got inundate it was during a storm, on the weather channel in closed captions Ur clothes fashion is more wholey then the popes cassock Get it thuggin and we can gun-it out, that sht wont matter Ur demeaninor is weaker comin off more one arm short than kirt abbott This cant b life; I was listen to phife dog n u watchd ‘barnie phife’ Ur hardest write leaves peeps in more a sync-‘ope’, than fallin in those or how u horribly live life U suck dood, I don’t even need to read or ur intentions to speak When I cut story out the picture quicker than an editorial release Know im who ur honey-due while u weep with that melon, shes on mine...yellin', holdin her feet @Storyteller Last edited by IGotzJockaZ; 07-16-2013 at 12:08 AM.

07-16-2013, 02:28 AM	#5
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Undefeated as the underdog watch and C how i aim for the W now, act cocky anderson tzu tactics that'll have this joke like him gettin clipped and knocked out. He get pussy? please aint no way he poker unless he gave up some chips went all in on straight but we all know that a joker is always just the middle bitch. you have no importance. came back? should build you a proper grave now, verse is like the discussion forum how it gets buried by other shit that we'd rather speak about. if you causing disturbance N see LOL responses under your verses, S'only cuz we find ur name suiting and can't stop laughin' of horribly it's worded. you a soft bitch really... a worlds series of acting hard... the only time he see's much action ^^ is from other men pulling his card. @Sharp Nine please open for votes @IGotzJockaZ nice drop fam see you still got it __________________ WP Po'ethics Last edited by Spoken; 07-16-2013 at 11:10 AM.

07-16-2013, 02:31 AM	#7
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	i got you place a vote while your own fam @Sharp Nine __________________ WP Po'ethics

07-16-2013, 05:17 PM	#8
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Bump for looks wtf __________________ WP Po'ethics

07-16-2013, 07:43 PM	#9
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	Jockaz (lol) structure was weird as fuck to me. The setup/punchline shit was not normal. Concept wise he had some okay ideas but the wording got in the way or he didn't flip it to it's best use. Story had some really clunky wording. I wasn't too impressed with the concepts and none of them were flipped cleverly. v/ Jockaz (lol) __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

07-17-2013, 04:04 PM	#10
IGotzJockaZ Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 95 Rep Power: 33	Climb

07-17-2013, 08:45 PM	#11
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	This was awkward to read for me. Both could have done better with wording imo Pretty close line for line wise. Wasn't the greatest battle ever honestly.. but I think jockaz edged it with a couple of fresher lines than story and got the creativity edge here. V-jockaz __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

07-23-2013, 05:20 PM	#12
Dope blueprint to success Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Raleigh, NC Posts: 85 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 33	V/story battle was close to me ..was able to edge this both had far fetched concepts __________________ I shine.. diamond in the light... they fold under pressure

07-29-2013, 05:13 AM	#13
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Bump __________________ WP Po'ethics

08-03-2013, 12:01 PM	#14
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	2-1 Jockaz UP

08-03-2013, 12:45 PM	#15
Mael Almighty Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 580 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 428841	U suck dood, I don’t even need to read or ur intentions to speak When I cut story out the picture quicker than an editorial release vs. you have no importance. came back? should build you a proper grave now, verse is like the discussion forum how it gets buried by other shit that we'd rather speak about. This was a, battle, to say the least. I got you tied with quotes. Jockaz was basically rapping about banging Story's girl, and Story had too many statement-ish lines about how wack Jockas was. Creativity was definitely lacking here, guys. However, I thought Story had the better, more direct verse. Props to both, nonetheless. Vote; Storyteller.

08-03-2013, 12:49 PM	#16
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	2-2 thanks mael for the vote.... __________________ WP Po'ethics

08-06-2013, 03:35 PM	#17
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	filler vs you have no importance. came back? should build you a proper grave now, verse is like the discussion forum how it gets buried by other shit that we'd rather speak about. ^only bar that slightly did it for me. mvgt- Story

08-14-2013, 11:24 PM	#18
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	3-2 story

08-16-2013, 11:36 AM	#19
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	@Rawn M.D. @IGotzJockaZ @Storyteller links until provided CLOSED

09-16-2013, 02:14 AM	#20
Decibel Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 0	Battle Voided Due to No Links! -- PM me links if you want open. __________________ ..:: Decibel ::..