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07-27-2013, 10:40 PM | #1 |
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Flo Real vs. Ronic - OPEN FOR VOTES
The Ultimate Writer II The Premier Tutoring Tournament @Flo Real @Ronic Rules Due Dates:
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THIS WEEK IS NAMEPLAY WEEK, YOU MUST INCLUDE 3 NAMEPLAYS IN YOUR VERSE. |
07-27-2013, 11:11 PM | #2 |
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Oh fo real flo real this mofo easy 10 dude?
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08-01-2013, 08:55 AM | #3 |
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Your L's many, your neck on the line plenty an flo ready to snap it
Methodone left you so shook was lookin like you missed your last dose of that shit I get fit bitches loins stirrin, you only know one bitch called mum If a bitch stirrin when she cauldron... she got warts, boils an working the magic on her own son Talking bout how Meth left you shook, this match up had me crying I ain't lying, I can't bear seeing any mo'ronic attempts at rhyming this faggot must be smoking rock, if he thinking he will win round 2 no one respects rolling stones.... But then thats exactly what Ron Wood do This comp can bring rep, make champs, look at sharp nine You got no chance, in 9 matches time we'll still be waiting for you to deliver one sharp line!! @Ronic
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08-01-2013, 09:46 AM | #4 |
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Flo Real? No deal. Knucklehead you can have him back, dude
When I said I wanted the tits, I didn't mean that boob What a fuckin queen - a thug g ain't tha man he be Is that the Real life? Nah, it's just his fantasy Had your ex girly hittin on me, she was caught hook, line and sinker bro But I tuna stinkin bitch out coz only dead fish go wit tha flo I get honeys wit that code x, Flo couldn't pull em with a slow jam Media shows that Real Player... coz no-one fucks wit that program Dude knows he aint all that, even he won't believe them lies n trash Now who ironic, Real lost to a Storyteller in a swag & flo match! Last edited by Ronic; 08-02-2013 at 09:05 AM. |
08-03-2013, 10:54 AM | #5 |
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his faggot must be smoking rock, if he thinking he will win round 2
no one respects rolling stones.... But then thats exactly what Ron Wood do Vs. Had your ex girly hittin on me, she was caught hook, line and sinker bro But I tuna stinkin bitch out coz only dead fish go wit tha flo I get honeys wit that code x, Flo couldn't pull em with a slow jam Media shows that Real Player... coz no-one fucks wit that program Coo battle flo had that 1 good bar that was coo ron had those 2 that were lol but that extra quote won it 4 ron coo battle again V/ Ron |
08-03-2013, 11:43 PM | #6 |
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Your L's many, your neck on the line plenty an flo ready to snap it
Methodone left you so shook was lookin like you missed your last dose of that shit this would of been a cool concept but methadone is pronounced meth uh doh'n so the wordplay is a huge ass stretch man, i also think ur set up was to wordy I get fit bitches loins stirrin, you only know one bitch called mum If a bitch stirrin when she cauldron... she got warts, boils an working the magic on her own son aight i thought ur concept was dope i mean the cauldron was a nice idea, dont really like where u took it and u using stirrin in set up and punch makes it sound off to me Talking bout how Meth left you shook, this match up had me crying I ain't lying, I can't bear seeing any mo'ronic attempts at rhyming man i think ur wording got u here, i think moronic would of worked perfectly no sure why u got the mo'ronic in there this faggot must be smoking rock, if he thinking he will win round 2 no one respects rolling stones.... But then thats exactly what Ron Wood do dont know man seems simple and off compared to your other attemps, the hardest part of a battle is keeping consistency This comp can bring rep, make champs, look at sharp nine You got no chance, in 9 matches time we'll still be waiting for you to deliver one sharp line!! the idea was nice the concept was really cool but ur wording fucked u here, it was bulky and way over worded imo and u used double words to many trimes 9/nine sharp/sharp that kiss wording man vs Flo Real? No deal. Knucklehead you can have him back, dude When I said I wanted the tits, I didn't mean that boob this was a bit corny to me, u have the right idea but i still think its a bit corney of a concept What a fuckin queen - a thug g ain't tha man he be Is that the Real life? Nah, it's just his fantasy this isnt really a diss imo ur punch was meh and was so simply, creativty has to be in eac bar even if its simple it still should be creative and the "man he be" killed me Had your ex girly hittin on me, she was caught hook, line and sinker bro But I tuna stinkin bitch out coz only dead fish go wit tha flo again your wording is horrible, why is the first bar the only decent worded bar in ur verse? the idea is ok but tuna has been done alot but still the idea is ok but the delivery is horrible man or execution u got to execute a punch to hit hard and urs is falling short of that remember execution is just as important as the punch imo I get honeys wit that code x, Flo couldn't pull em with a slow jam Media shows that Real Player... coz no-one fucks wit that program i dont really get this bar at all Dude knows he aint all that, even he won't believe them lies n trash Now who ironic, Real lost to a Storyteller in a swag & flo match! this isnt a diss man, u had two ok attempts at dissing and it was the tuna and tits bar the rest was real simple and meh, u got to bring it every line and work on ur execution imo flo you really need to fuck with ur wording and ur consistency u really started losing what u did have at the end and ronic ur execution is a big part of ur issue, the execution of a bar can determine whether a bar is ok or its a bodybag with that said i think flo got this v/flo real |
08-04-2013, 08:58 AM | #7 |
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Your L's many, your neck on the line plenty an flo ready to snap it
Methodone left you so shook was lookin like you missed your last dose of that shit First line was alright, second was a bit off/not hard hitting. Wording hurt ya. I get fit bitches loins stirrin, you only know one bitch called mum If a bitch stirrin when she cauldron... she got warts, boils an working the magic on her own son First line was kinda wack/played, second was a decent, cool wordplay. But, wording was off a bit around the end, and the punch wasn't that great. Talking bout how Meth left you shook, this match up had me crying I ain't lying, I can't bear seeing any mo'ronic attempts at rhyming Was a good concept, but stop trying to force the internals. It's too filler. You were 'crying' that just sounds stupid and like you are trying to get the internals to rhyme too hard. Nice wordplay though this faggot must be smoking rock, if he thinking he will win round 2 no one respects rolling stones.... But then thats exactly what Ron Wood do Ehh, wasn't feeling the punch in here. Not a great attempt at the wordplay. This comp can bring rep, make champs, look at sharp nine You got no chance, in 9 matches time we'll still be waiting for you to deliver one sharp line!! Wording wasn't great. Sharp nine/Sharp line, not feeling the double rhyme. But, decent concepts, alright closer. vs Flo Real? No deal. Knucklehead you can have him back, dude When I said I wanted the tits, I didn't mean that boob Weak opener, no real punch in here. What a fuckin queen - a thug g ain't tha man he be Is that the Real life? Nah, it's just his fantasy Not much of a punch here again. Don't try to force the multis, it backfired here and left you w/o a pnuch and a weak line. Had your ex girly hittin on me, she was caught hook, line and sinker bro But I tuna stinkin bitch out coz only dead fish go wit tha flo First line is played. Then, second was wack. Wording murked you here, my man. I get honeys wit that code x, Flo couldn't pull em with a slow jam Media shows that Real Player... coz no-one fucks wit that program Not much of a punch, wordplay/name play wasn't strong. Dude knows he aint all that, even he won't believe them lies n trash Now who ironic, Real lost to a Storyteller in a swag & flo match! Ok attempt at personal, but was executed badly. I got Flo Real taking this. Had more consistency, and the punches hit a bit harder for me. Both need to work on wording, and getting punches in. 2-1 Flo Real
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08-04-2013, 04:19 PM | #8 |
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Ya concepts are good, but your forcing some of your nameplays...You get the idea tho just need to sharpen ya skills which Philly should be able to help you with Ronic... Need to work on your concepts....Your wording is pretty bad and your concepts seem childish V-Flo with a better understanding/concepts |
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