07-27-2013, 10:38 PM | #1 |
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Gazette vs. CymbiCort - OPEN FOR VOTES
The Ultimate Writer II The Premier Tutoring Tournament @Gazette @CymbiCort Rules Due Dates:
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THIS WEEK IS NAMEPLAY WEEK, YOU MUST INCLUDE 3 NAMEPLAYS IN YOUR VERSE. |
07-29-2013, 07:13 AM | #2 |
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check, g'luck, 10 lines?
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07-29-2013, 12:18 PM | #4 |
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Second guessin then steppin but i dont blame this pussy for not wantin to fuck wit it...
I'll bring down GAZ so Fast, CNN will falsely report that Russias auto industry plummeted Lied n said hes too good for ultimate writer, now watch me kill this lil ass prank Cuz Only thing hes good at is makin us say no homo everytime we need to fill gas tanks This queer ain't harmin me cuz his video game steeze is sweeter than r & B Since Gaz is known to play wit dolls until they come alive in super mario rpg the way he tried dodgin me like eharmony chicks with extreme sensitivity showed gaz wouldn't even be useful to section 8 residents payin for electricity funny how your boxing skills are so bad n in this ring you have no chance You'll never inspire Ali to fight again just cuz u won a rematch with slow hands Last edited by CymbiCort; 07-29-2013 at 02:01 PM. |
07-29-2013, 03:55 PM | #5 |
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bleh, quicky
shouldn't be too long before this cunt sees he's utter shit when we "Clash, Cymb'll" get dropped like clumsy percussionists ya too dumb for this, the fella's proved he's hella stupid attestin' true shit, i'm facin' a Cort, but I aint the one bein' executed my text is lucid, anyone readin' can see that ive wrecked ock step off, cus I got more chance of a "fight, Cym" playin' UFC on my Xbox dead-lock, your past battles confirm that this is curtains for ya Rhode carried you to the L, n it doesn't look like u've turned a corner certain slaughter, when u take dick you try n force in the pork and you still choose to get shafted ... even when the balls in ya Cort Last edited by Gazette; 07-29-2013 at 04:34 PM. |
08-01-2013, 11:27 AM | #6 |
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Gazette took this very easily in my opinion. More direct punches and harder hits. Cym needs to up his punches majorly. Flow was choppy to.
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08-01-2013, 08:05 PM | #7 |
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Cymbi- u stayed in one angle with his name tbh... Felt u were stuck in a sense... Some of ya bars were stretched as fuck to.... Cool concepts but nothing really connected thoroughly... The CNN bar was nice just better wording and it would have killed. The rest were misses, the rpg would have been good if better thought into how it would play out but that's it
Gaz- nice cymb'll flip seen many but this hit nice some nice hits but very mild mostly. The fight sim was a nice flip hope most don't let thy bar fly over the heads... But yeah your misses still hit and it was more cleaner and consistent Mvgt: Gaz
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08-01-2013, 08:28 PM | #8 |
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thanks for the votes
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08-01-2013, 08:42 PM | #9 |
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shit looking jive suspect in here (o.0)
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08-02-2013, 08:50 AM | #10 |
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Cym: Punches weren't hard hitting. You only used "Gaz" as a nameplay, you could've done much more. Kind of a boring verse from you, no real stand out lines.
Gaz- Some good wordplay, punches were clever and for a quick key this was pretty good. MVGT: Gaz |
08-03-2013, 10:29 AM | #11 |
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Cy- ur lines came off more like statements eh nothing really hit ur wording was off n long, nothing jumped out but actually throw punches
Gaz- u had a better overall verse had some coo flip n u actually threw punches that connected V/ Gaz |
08-04-2013, 12:00 AM | #12 |
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Second guessin then steppin but i dont blame this pussy for not wantin to fuck wit it...
I'll bring down GAZ so Fast, CNN will falsely report that Russias auto industry plummeted this was coo, ur a bit wordy but its nice Lied n said hes too good for ultimate writer, now watch me kill this lil ass prank Cuz Only thing hes good at is makin us say no homo everytime we need to fill gas tanks didnt really get this, i mean i get the idea but dont like the concept to much and i think ur wording should be worked on This queer ain't harmin me cuz his video game steeze is sweeter than r & B Since Gaz is known to play wit dolls until they come alive in super mario rpg think the concept is a stretch and ur wording is cool on this one, still think ur concepts is ok but it seems u got the potential to lay fire down dont know why u aint the way he tried dodgin me like eharmony chicks with extreme sensitivity showed gaz wouldn't even be useful to section 8 residents payin for electricity [b]naw man the set up is meh and the bar is weak and simple]/b] funny how your boxing skills are so bad n in this ring you have no chance You'll never inspire Ali to fight again just cuz u won a rematch with slow hands i can see where uw as going with this and i think u could of made it really powerful but ur wording was an issue, and the n n part hurt ur set up vs shouldn't be too long before this cunt sees he's utter shit when we "Clash, Cymb'll" get dropped like clumsy percussionists nice ya too dumb for this, the fella's proved he's hella stupid attestin' true shit, i'm facin' a Cort, but I aint the one bein' executed ok my text is lucid, anyone readin' can see that ive wrecked ock step off, cus I got more chance of a "fight, Cym" playin' UFC on my Xbox come on man u shouldnt be in this um tourney dead-lock, your past battles confirm that this is curtains for ya Rhode carried you to the L, n it doesn't look like u've turned a corner man certain slaughter, when u take dick you try n force in the pork and you still choose to get shafted ... even when the balls in ya Cort dont like it gazette shouldnt be in this, sik shouldnt be in it and neither should gazette v/gazette |
08-04-2013, 08:30 AM | #13 |
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Lol gazette killed this - total White wash
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08-04-2013, 04:21 PM | #14 |
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Cym...
I liked the opener....You seem to have fresh concepts but ya wording is hurting you. Vs Gaz... Opener was fresh...simple yet effective so nice nameplay...UFC was good and the L/Turn the corner was a nice jab V..Gazette |
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