Round One: Tiger Spitz vs. Ed Poe [TIGERSPITZ wins (NS)]

Adonis · 07-25-2014, 01:26 AM

Verses will be due Friday at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. There are no Extensions. No Exceptions.

Verses must be a minimum of 10 Lines and maximum of 48 Lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by both competitors.

Votes will be due Sundays at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK .

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Goodluck

@TIGERSPITZ @EdPoe

Topic:

TIGERSPITZ · 08-02-2014, 12:58 AM

there's a bus route, and a path less wandered.
deviate from routine & you leave unmasked, an impostor.
a faker, a fraud, sure, you try to fit in-
you cram in the pack and smack of antacid on blotter.
hit to the lick. clap for the concert.
fuck it. you brave through the walk,
alone. you cuss & manage a laugh to calm nerves...
the rustic path is abandoned, solo and awkward.
it winds through the woods. wine-tips and good.
you're feeling it now, weirdly cautiously proud-
reminisce upon-
father's corvette, a remembrance: steering rockets through town
micromanage a perfect 4th of july.
responsible now, work into coffers 'til die. so forget zero pressure,
inaudible sentences, improper nouns- just the scent of December.
proud of every present you found without fostering doubt.
discovering Santa was built beneath a tree of misgivings, and guilt.
my fake reads Art-Deku McFleeting. treble & loud. flannel & reading.
tremble & scrounge for reasons for living: well, i'm drawing a blank.
perhaps existentialism's robbing a bank,
and swiping a sack full of memories with
no offering thanks. that's emptiness in a pause .
the emptiness we applaud. the empty symphony hall
that sinks that 'empty' in all, as we develop
theories of meaning that barely compel me to stop
reading the walls with a candle in the belly of god.
head towards the light. it's quite the conundrum.

King Ra. · 08-02-2014, 03:18 AM

TIGERSPITZ wins by no show.

07-25-2014, 01:26 AM	#1
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	Round One: Tiger Spitz vs. Ed Poe [TIGERSPITZ wins (NS)] Verses will be due Friday at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. There are no Extensions. No Exceptions. Verses must be a minimum of 10 Lines and maximum of 48 Lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by both competitors. Votes will be due Sundays at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK . View Other Rules Here Goodluck @TIGERSPITZ @EdPoe Topic: __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

08-02-2014, 12:58 AM	#2
TIGERSPITZ faded Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NYCSPITZ's closet Posts: 28 Rep Power: 0	BULLSHIT ABSTRACTION. there's a bus route, and a path less wandered. deviate from routine & you leave unmasked, an impostor. a faker, a fraud, sure, you try to fit in- you cram in the pack and smack of antacid on blotter. hit to the lick. clap for the concert. fuck it. you brave through the walk, alone. you cuss & manage a laugh to calm nerves... the rustic path is abandoned, solo and awkward. it winds through the woods. wine-tips and good. you're feeling it now, weirdly cautiously proud- reminisce upon- father's corvette, a remembrance: steering rockets through town micromanage a perfect 4th of july. responsible now, work into coffers 'til die. so forget zero pressure, inaudible sentences, improper nouns- just the scent of December. proud of every present you found without fostering doubt. discovering Santa was built beneath a tree of misgivings, and guilt. my fake reads Art-Deku McFleeting. treble & loud. flannel & reading. tremble & scrounge for reasons for living: well, i'm drawing a blank. perhaps existentialism's robbing a bank, and swiping a sack full of memories with no offering thanks. that's emptiness in a pause . the emptiness we applaud. the empty symphony hall that sinks that 'empty' in all, as we develop theories of meaning that barely compel me to stop reading the walls with a candle in the belly of god. head towards the light. it's quite the conundrum. Last edited by TIGERSPITZ; 08-02-2014 at 01:00 AM.

08-02-2014, 03:18 AM	#3
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	TIGERSPITZ wins by no show. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.