BLACKLISTED (Crew collab, Mr. J, Split Eight, Figurative, Just Write, StoryTeller )

Just Write · 07-02-2013, 11:33 PM

Mr. J...
My crew is calculated, calibrated mass amount of hatred
surrounded by these rounds & chasers, sending shots & rounds at your table
cheers sucka, those light shots prove y'all should stick to beers fuckers
if them hops make you froggy leap, we'll ring bells like de beers fuckers
crack your liberty, silly me willingly puttin you on your death bed
watchin' ever move like your kinect set, up in your girl 360..5 days off she wept and..
it's back like she never left, shook the thought of you like a etch-a-sketch
treat this rap game like your bitch...take the assist nigga there's always seconds left

Split Eight...
hallucinogens... hell loose in a sense: like afteraffects of
what my crew induces in rappers pretending to be masters of text.
tilted the planet's axis to amend the seasons as we imagined them:
the plan of action- be the reason the past is bent on repeating its accidents.
catch me in a creed with assassins, been sneaking past the masses,
scheming up disasters with my team between the ceiling rafters.
fuck illuminati, annunaki murderings and summa cum laudes from Rawn McUniveristy
just tryna shine a lil truth behind dishonesty in the first degree

Figurative...
Clamorous crowds in outcry established in sounds from Delphi
In hell, eyes widen at celsius that ive held high.
Impel rhymes propelled as militant like monstrousities
With a burning bodies gleam that's key to converting Constatine.
Daumers doppelganger in essence. Ink drips from hollow tips.
A philosoph with written set visions; bet that apollo bit.
My atmospheric blasts leave gods battered in gauze
With a lord like visage. Im the mirror held to the mirage.

Just Write...
I've been to hell and beyond, still got the scars to prove it
dark n' ruthless. instigating instant hatred through a carnage movement
carved out the heart of cupid just so i could show you no love
emotions unplugged. s'why it's so easy to pull out the pump n put holes in ur lungs
I cut straight to the point, fuck your allegories, metaphors, and an extended vocab
cuz in the end ima laugh. watch you get blacklisted by these kids invested in wrath
step into my path and get knocked out faster then a tyson opponent
and I'm not talkin little kids still in their diapers, wipin their noses.

StoryTeller..
Last on the scene but its tolls your last chance in the scheme,
They saved Hannibal the verbal cannibal to krueger ya dreams.
Try to survive but it's passed ur last effort to be imperial,
My aim looms like Noah's ark so I flex to mark my reach of miracles.
Pack my verses with twists but like cursive it's swift,
Literal grips that dump the best off with the use of minimal clips.
Lex luthor in text.. Your best friend but also your worst enemy ho,
Future set in stone- I'm supernatural tearing down the walls of Jericho.

Rojo187 · 07-03-2013, 12:01 AM

tough shyt I like the contrast of styles

mr. j started it off strong....has that swag cuz he talking about yo bitch lol..def gave an urban feel

split shyt was tough..flowed good and the scheming up disasters was a highlight of the whole thing...gives an imagery of unity and I'm a conspiracy theorist so the f the illuminati I can dig that lol

fig...yours was very forceful and commanding..def took note...a trick I picked up recording...that words that have the same first letter trend to flow better and seems more impactful...You demostrated that a few times like the militant line...the burning bodies with converting Constantine is the prime example...overall

just...yours was def in attack mode...I can tell you battle lol...the flow was very natural and
the unplugged line was hot...the flow really stood out tho and the aggression

story...Ya shyt was tough very vivid....i could picture the verbal Hannibal to the Kruger your dreams....even the noah ark line to reach a mark of miracles...the swift cursive part came together really nice...flowed extremely nice to me...

one thing is that I don't think there's a common theme throughout the whole collab...

..juss flexing huh lol...but the skill def shows....

Good shyt y'all...

Spoken · 07-03-2013, 12:29 AM

Yeah just a flex the next collab will be more one directional

Wise Wiggles · 07-03-2013, 01:22 AM

hallucinogens... hell loose in a sense: like afteraffects of
what my crew induces in rappers pretending to be masters of text.

^ thought that was pretty slick

along w/the heart of Cupid part

Spoken · 07-03-2013, 11:28 AM

Bump thanks @Whys Ways for the looks

Coup · 07-03-2013, 07:47 PM

Quote:

the plan of action- be the reason the past is bent on repeating its accidents.
catch me in a creed with assassins, been sneaking past the masses,

Quote:

crack your liberty, silly me willingly puttin you on your death bed
watchin' ever move like your kinect set, up in your girl 360..5 days off she wept and

liked this^

Quote:

hallucinogens... hell loose in a sense: like afteraffects of
what my crew induces in rappers pretending to be masters of text.

dope opener...swoll, ya heard

nice colab bros...read em all and they all were relatively dope in different ways. seemed like an crew introduction spit...looking forward to other concepts yall work on...

until then, until then

Just Write · 07-05-2013, 04:12 PM

thanks for the feed guys, link some pieces and i'll get to em

@CopyPat feed this sucka

Spoken · 07-05-2013, 10:44 PM

Props on this I'll leave my two cents on the other verses...

Bump for recognition fellas

Geno · 07-06-2013, 01:52 PM

Been on a four day drinking binge. Woke up drunk. But I've been checking in and out and reading this in stages. Pretty gathering of different taleents. Good shit from everyone. Will holla when sobre

CopyPat · 07-09-2013, 02:58 AM

^^holler when somber
One Tough Hombre, Bomber. Poppin my collar
at slumber parties.. stocking ya daughters
from afar with binoculars watchin so my opticals proper

haha shit

well to be honest bro's this didn't blow me away. you all came with a bit of an attitude which was cool and kept everything consistent (which is a must in collabs this big) but the hardness of it seemed a little forced to me. just didn't seem natural really. Flow wize, vocab, complexity scheming etc was also pretty average..missing a few syllables here and there. Just Write had the smoothest verse for sure. The rest came off a tad choppy. Not hating fella's just giving honest feedback.. it's all i ever do. I really feel you all coulda came more natural on this one. Or if u are gonna come with some harder content than fully commit to the griminess.

07-02-2013, 11:33 PM	#1
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997613	BLACKLISTED (Crew collab, Mr. J, Split Eight, Figurative, Just Write, StoryTeller ) Mr. J... My crew is calculated, calibrated mass amount of hatred surrounded by these rounds & chasers, sending shots & rounds at your table cheers sucka, those light shots prove y'all should stick to beers fuckers if them hops make you froggy leap, we'll ring bells like de beers fuckers crack your liberty, silly me willingly puttin you on your death bed watchin' ever move like your kinect set, up in your girl 360..5 days off she wept and.. it's back like she never left, shook the thought of you like a etch-a-sketch treat this rap game like your bitch...take the assist nigga there's always seconds left Split Eight... hallucinogens... hell loose in a sense: like afteraffects of what my crew induces in rappers pretending to be masters of text. tilted the planet's axis to amend the seasons as we imagined them: the plan of action- be the reason the past is bent on repeating its accidents. catch me in a creed with assassins, been sneaking past the masses, scheming up disasters with my team between the ceiling rafters. fuck illuminati, annunaki murderings and summa cum laudes from Rawn McUniveristy just tryna shine a lil truth behind dishonesty in the first degree Figurative... Clamorous crowds in outcry established in sounds from Delphi In hell, eyes widen at celsius that ive held high. Impel rhymes propelled as militant like monstrousities With a burning bodies gleam that's key to converting Constatine. Daumers doppelganger in essence. Ink drips from hollow tips. A philosoph with written set visions; bet that apollo bit. My atmospheric blasts leave gods battered in gauze With a lord like visage. Im the mirror held to the mirage. Just Write... I've been to hell and beyond, still got the scars to prove it dark n' ruthless. instigating instant hatred through a carnage movement carved out the heart of cupid just so i could show you no love emotions unplugged. s'why it's so easy to pull out the pump n put holes in ur lungs I cut straight to the point, fuck your allegories, metaphors, and an extended vocab cuz in the end ima laugh. watch you get blacklisted by these kids invested in wrath step into my path and get knocked out faster then a tyson opponent and I'm not talkin little kids still in their diapers, wipin their noses. StoryTeller.. Last on the scene but its tolls your last chance in the scheme, They saved Hannibal the verbal cannibal to krueger ya dreams. Try to survive but it's passed ur last effort to be imperial, My aim looms like Noah's ark so I flex to mark my reach of miracles. Pack my verses with twists but like cursive it's swift, Literal grips that dump the best off with the use of minimal clips. Lex luthor in text.. Your best friend but also your worst enemy ho, Future set in stone- I'm supernatural tearing down the walls of Jericho. __________________

07-03-2013, 12:29 AM	#3
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Yeah just a flex the next collab will be more one directional __________________ WP Po'ethics

07-03-2013, 01:22 AM	#4
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,507 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788019	hallucinogens... hell loose in a sense: like afteraffects of what my crew induces in rappers pretending to be masters of text. ^ thought that was pretty slick along w/the heart of Cupid part __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

07-03-2013, 11:28 AM	#5
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Bump thanks @Whys Ways for the looks __________________ WP Po'ethics

07-05-2013, 04:12 PM	#7
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997613	thanks for the feed guys, link some pieces and i'll get to em @CopyPat feed this sucka __________________

07-03-2013, 12:01 AM	#2
Rojo187 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 208 Champed The Hunt for Cane VII Rep Power: 34	tough shyt I like the contrast of styles mr. j started it off strong....has that swag cuz he talking about yo bitch lol..def gave an urban feel split shyt was tough..flowed good and the scheming up disasters was a highlight of the whole thing...gives an imagery of unity and I'm a conspiracy theorist so the f the illuminati I can dig that lol fig...yours was very forceful and commanding..def took note...a trick I picked up recording...that words that have the same first letter trend to flow better and seems more impactful...You demostrated that a few times like the militant line...the burning bodies with converting Constantine is the prime example...overall just...yours was def in attack mode...I can tell you battle lol...the flow was very natural and the unplugged line was hot...the flow really stood out tho and the aggression story...Ya shyt was tough very vivid....i could picture the verbal Hannibal to the Kruger your dreams....even the noah ark line to reach a mark of miracles...the swift cursive part came together really nice...flowed extremely nice to me... one thing is that I don't think there's a common theme throughout the whole collab... ..juss flexing huh lol...but the skill def shows.... Good shyt y'all...

07-05-2013, 10:44 PM	#8
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Props on this I'll leave my two cents on the other verses... Bump for recognition fellas __________________ WP Po'ethics

07-06-2013, 01:52 PM	#9
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,328 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Been on a four day drinking binge. Woke up drunk. But I've been checking in and out and reading this in stages. Pretty gathering of different taleents. Good shit from everyone. Will holla when sobre __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

07-09-2013, 02:58 AM	#10
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742221	^^holler when somber One Tough Hombre, Bomber. Poppin my collar at slumber parties.. stocking ya daughters from afar with binoculars watchin so my opticals proper haha shit well to be honest bro's this didn't blow me away. you all came with a bit of an attitude which was cool and kept everything consistent (which is a must in collabs this big) but the hardness of it seemed a little forced to me. just didn't seem natural really. Flow wize, vocab, complexity scheming etc was also pretty average..missing a few syllables here and there. Just Write had the smoothest verse for sure. The rest came off a tad choppy. Not hating fella's just giving honest feedback.. it's all i ever do. I really feel you all coulda came more natural on this one. Or if u are gonna come with some harder content than fully commit to the griminess.