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Old 10-24-2020, 11:23 AM   #1
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Two verses short here. @Bomb Bard @Aero
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Double no show. Close this.


Ya newlywed kinky, she put her hand in my anus
Went hard & got her ring in the bubble like Anthony Davis
Threw ya kid off the bed, watched Dirty Dancing then fucked ya wife
Heard "Nobody puts Baby in a corner" looked at ya son & said Such is Life
At gun point I robbed her, she was looking upset
You came home massaged her, she said she had a crook in her neck
She cant cook, its a blessing & a curse to love this bitch
Literally, I prayed over the meal then said fuck this shit
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Aero aka Wisconsin kid aka Auuuuusnap Gamertag on PS3

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You little faggot!....
GOAT who hasn’t won in years! S’why I’m murkin ur shit
L’s to Legends & Bitches been more a Bump in ur Life..than the Herps on ur Dick
Aero tried ‘Rashing’ it out w/Hush... & dude was slapped
Manhood got Lumped in Fucking seconds... But we all know He use to that
5’6 & torn! “Always get pussy” ain’t ur fame form
Cos warts on ur dick’s the only growth you’ve had since age 4
Wisconsin pimpin? This virgins Hits is ways from facts
Only proof of a Snap Bone? S’wen I lift a midget & break his back!




Dirt human! You simp now cos she don’t fuck w/ur shit
She wants to see Growth w/you! But don’t want it on her Cunt or her lips
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Ya newlywed kinky, she put her hand in my anus
Went hard & got her ring in the bubble like Anthony Davis
lmao u done lost ur dam mind
Threw ya kid off the bed, watched Dirty Dancing then fucked ya wife
Heard "Nobody puts Baby in a corner" looked at ya son & said Such is Life
lol u a fool
At gun point I robbed her, she was looking upset
You came home massaged her, she said she had a crook in her neck
lmaooooooooooooo I dig that.
She cant cook, its a blessing & a curse to love this bitch
Literally, I prayed over the meal then said fuck this shit
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Aero aka Wisconsin kid aka Auuuuusnap Gamertag on PS3

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You little faggot!....
GOAT who hasn’t won in years! S’why I’m murkin ur shit
L’s to Legends & Bitches been more a Bump in ur Life..than the Herps on ur Dick
nah. that ammo is crazy but this line seems slightly off
Aero tried ‘Rashing’ it out w/Hush... & dude was slapped
Manhood got Lumped in Fucking seconds... But we all know He use to that
I like this use of the angle better
5’6 & torn! “Always get pussy” ain’t ur fame form
Cos warts on ur dick’s the only growth you’ve had since age 4
yikes. I dont know man this is off
Wisconsin pimpin? This virgins Hits is ways from facts
Only proof of a Snap Bone? S’wen I lift a midget & break his back!
nah




Dirt human! You simp now cos she don’t fuck w/ur shit
She wants to see Growth w/you! But don’t want it on her Cunt or her lips
you used two growth lines so it hurt this one imo.


I dont know whats going on in here. The use of that ammo did not equate the damage in the punches I wanted

This is crazy but I got Aero here. The OD on them huge screenshots didnt work cuz the payoff wasnt there. Using growth twice hurt as well. I can tell Spree was short on time and Just thru that up.


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Old 10-31-2020, 04:56 PM   #9
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I gotta be honest. I wasn’t really feeling either that much. They weren’t really bad or anything, but I didn’t see one line from either that I thought was particularly witty or special... Spree had a ton of ammo, but the use of screenshots was awkward and, even with them, none of the plays on him having Herpes, etc were particularly funny... and his wording was kinda weird.

Aero had what appears to be his standard jokes about fucking the other guys lady... but, there wasn’t much wit in this. I know he relies on being funny, but this didn’t make me chuckle at all... and a couple of the lines were really bad (crook in the neck, the closer).

Frankly, I think this is a toss up... but, since I have to crown someone a winner, I guess Aero gets it. But, it was close... and it seemed obvious neither was trying very hard.
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Is this a picture battle?
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Old 11-01-2020, 03:00 AM   #11
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Aero had some funny stuff ring in the bubble, crook in her neck was cool such is life was okay and then the last two seemed like throwaways. Always a fan of Aero’s more humored approach.

Spree I’ve seen you come better and you honestly made your verse one dimensional because of the fact that you only attacked one aspect of dude. You literally beat the STD thing to death. And though some of the angles were cool it got monotonous quick

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Not reading that bs kill spree posted


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At gun point I robbed her, she was looking upset
You came home massaged her, she said she had a crook in her neck
She cant cook, its a blessing & a curse to love this bitch
Literally, I prayed over the meal then said fuck this shit

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Aero tried ‘Rashing’ it out w/Hush... & dude was slapped
Manhood got Lumped in Fucking seconds... But we all know He use to that

A lot of Spree's stuff needed harsher wording. Aero yo ass retarded on God lmaoooo talkin bout ur bubble bar better than mine ol' gay ass dude haha.

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Ya newlywed kinky, she put her hand in my anus
Went hard & got her ring in the bubble like Anthony Davis
smfh lolol... funny in a self deprecating and creative but you getting fingered doesnt hit Spree
Threw ya kid off the bed, watched Dirty Dancing then fucked ya wife
Heard "Nobody puts Baby in a corner" looked at ya son & said Such is Life
hahahahahahaha.... this ref will be lost on some but this is fire to me... great creatviity here
At gun point I robbed her, she was looking upset
You came home massaged her, she said she had a crook in her neck
dope.. witty and well delivered
She cant cook, its a blessing & a curse to love this bitch
Literally, I prayed over the meal then said fuck this shit
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GOAT who hasn’t won in years! S’why I’m murkin ur shit
L’s to Legends & Bitches been more a Bump in ur Life..than the Herps on ur Dick
okay personal
Aero tried ‘Rashing’ it out w/Hush... & dude was slapped
Manhood got Lumped in Fucking seconds... But we all know He use to that
lol this was good, double personal hit
5’6 & torn! “Always get pussy” ain’t ur fame form
Cos warts on ur dick’s the only growth you’ve had since age 4
ehh, "growth" been done a lot of ways and sharps a few weeks ago was a lot better so its hard to really like this, especially since its the 3rd same repeat personal in a short verse
Wisconsin pimpin? This virgins Hits is ways from facts
Only proof of a Snap Bone? S’wen I lift a midget & break his back!
i tried looking up snap bone to see the tie in but i got nothing
Dirt human! You simp now cos she don’t fuck w/ur shit
She wants to see Growth w/you! But don’t want it on her Cunt or her lips
ehh its okay.. pers attempt noted but it just falls a little flat as its pretty straightforward and another 'growth' concept



It feels hard voting against Spree here after he had a pretty personally directed attack and aero is literally talking about getting fingered in his opener and threw away his closer... but for the "ammo" Sprees concepts were underwhelming

I legit love the Dirty Dancing bar and crook in her neck is easily the second best line of the battle.. so ya aero takes it due to standouts... props to both

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