Ronic vs. Rayge - {Rayge wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Wednesday,
  May 29th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends Tuesday 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are normally 24 hours
  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 36 hours
  and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.

Voting:

• Must vote on 5 battles and post your links.
• Post the links in the thread titled "Week 7 Voting Links".
• You will be punished if you don't post all 5 voting links.
  You will not like the punishment, so just vote so you
  don't have to cry later. Details about this are to be
  found in the "Week 7 Voting Links" thread.

General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will disqualified.
• A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
• If your opponent doesn't check in,
  you still have to post a verse.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

@Ronic @Rayge

[Maximus]

Ten homie

[Ronic]

Aight

[~RustyGunZ~]

@Ronic @Rayge

you guys need extensions inform eachother tonight

[Ronic]

Ext cuz

[Maximus]

10 sent to knucklehead

[~RustyGunZ~]

@Ronic

[Ronic]

quick verse, gotta get back to business @Knucklehead @Rayge

Like an oven I turn it up, get baked and that shit is fan-forced
But your shit so conventional, you get no fans servin that bland course
Now I’m scared to spit fire in case it turns him on – gas top
You know how it go, if he calls this kettle a wackjob – black pot
He’ll tell you he got that smooth drive like a classic, but face the fact
He’s more of a golf cart than a sports model, caddy lack
It’s easy to play him, you can find dude in the clubhouse Water Closet
No money exchange hands when Rayge askin for that ball deposit
Bruv it’s like you forgot how to rap, your shit is at best a bore
And I can’t give you a refresher, coz you never been fresh before

[~RustyGunZ~]

Rayge's verse

always composing weak lines cos u lack skill, im ending this moron
See, u've got no element of an emcee but with the pen u're a BoRon
U'll kill urself when this match's done cos u lost, i'll feed ur flesh to rodents
So after this you're gonna meet Death.... like that texcee was ur next opponent
thug?? u're a clown, so stop claiming u're da hannibal who blast toasters
cos no one calls Ron G...and he's much more laughable than that Joker
ur poor wording makes ur wack verse jumbled, i'll leave this chump dead
seems u were inebriated when u typed it, it should've been in Drunk Thread
his concepts are ancient.. if he says he's fresh, this nerd tells lies
you got nothin neuRon...& i'll paralyze you till those nerve cells die

[Ronic]

Couldn't find that week 7 voting links thread... what are we now, week 12 or something... putting links here even tho it looks like nobody cares about that anymore anyway

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6781
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6786
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6783
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6788
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6792

[Defiant]

Bruv it’s like you forgot how to rap, your shit is at best a bore
And I can’t give you a refresher, coz you never been fresh before

vs

always composing weak lines cos u lack skill, im ending this moron
See, u've got no element of an emcee but with the pen u're a BoRon
U'll kill urself when this match's done cos u lost, i'll feed ur flesh to rodents
So after this you're gonna meet Death.... like that texcee was ur next opponent
his concepts are ancient.. if he says he's fresh, this nerd tells lies
you got nothin neuRon...& i'll paralyze you till those nerve cells die


kinda one sided, i thought the boron line was dope, rayges verse was pretty good. Ronics wording is played, that He’s more of a golf cart than a sports model, caddy lack thing has been done, people were getting dogged for that years ago

vote - rayge

[Spoken]

Ronic - this is a text battle not audio so that describe and then expose or compare shit ain't gonna cut it... Nice ideas but so no real punches.

Rave- the Ron g line was cool... The boRon line was nice... The rest was decent pretty solid verse though. Nice ideas that came through.

Mvgt: Rayge

[IamBenT]

Yeesh..

Ronic - I liked the last two lines here the most, next time you should look at those lines as a primer for what a decent verse looks like. Some of this just didnt hit like it should have.
Wasn't feeling the "oven" opener, the rest was decent.

Rayge - Didn't like the Boron opener, how can he BE a Boron? or what is a "Bo Ron"? Just fell flat to me, like the Death and the Drunk Thread reference, that was cool. Overall better worded verse that hit a bit harder.

Vote -Rayge

[Sharp]

nothing really, sorry

v

boron, neuron



rayge was consistent, had a good showing, ronic seemed kinda rushed. rayge got it pretty easy imo.

v/ rayge


btw @IamBenT

boron (element) pronounced bore-on, so 'bore-ron' isnt really a stretch

[IamBenT]

no doubt @Sharp, I just feel it would have been better if he said

"but with a pen, you Boron" or something, cuz it's a verb. Im just weird

[Atomic]

Like an oven I turn it up, get baked and that shit is fan-forced
But your shit so conventional, you get no fans servin that bland course
Okay
Now I’m scared to spit fire in case it turns him on – gas top
You know how it go, if he calls this kettle a wackjob – black pot
meh
He’ll tell you he got that smooth drive like a classic, but face the fact
He’s more of a golf cart than a sports model, caddy lack
heh reaching tho
It’s easy to play him, you can find dude in the clubhouse Water Closet
No money exchange hands when Rayge askin for that ball deposit
LMAO
Bruv it’s like you forgot how to rap, your shit is at best a bore
And I can’t give you a refresher, coz you never been fresh before
nah

//

always composing weak lines cos u lack skill, im ending this moron
See, u've got no element of an emcee but with the pen u're a BoRon
i like this even tho it's a reach lol.
U'll kill urself when this match's done cos u lost, i'll feed ur flesh to rodents
So after this you're gonna meet Death.... like that texcee was ur next opponent
mmmeeeeeehhhhh too easy
thug?? u're a clown, so stop claiming u're da hannibal who blast toasters
cos no one calls Ron G...and he's much more laughable than that Joker
haha, dece
ur poor wording makes ur wack verse jumbled, i'll leave this chump dead
seems u were inebriated when u typed it, it should've been in Drunk Thread
na, again too simple
his concepts are ancient.. if he says he's fresh, this nerd tells lies
you got nothin neuRon...& i'll paralyze you till those nerve cells die
meh, k

//


close fucking battle idk man. I'd vote tie but that's retarded. v/ Rayge, barely.