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Old 09-01-2013, 07:58 PM   #1
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Default ROUND 2 - ill nik-A/Bags vs. Witty/Genocide - NIK/BAGS WIN

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Old 09-01-2013, 08:45 PM   #2
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Yep.
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Old 09-03-2013, 08:34 PM   #6
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Yo. Were going 16
just match thhat @ill nik-A @Ole Dirty Bagstard
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Old 09-03-2013, 09:40 PM   #7
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Nik already prolly wrote like 30 lol

Whatevers clever tho.
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Witty/Genocide
Slay you with facts, bags the type to buy a verse cause he plainly a fag
Thats why all the xanax in the world couldn't stop his paynik-attacks
Basic nd wack, id gamble the barrel would have you empty your purse
But you could never show gun dinero when your in debt for his verse
This is death for the champs, you fuckin squarepants know we the best
Ill put u spongebobs in a box like a vender man, nickel-o-deon rent
I throw heat on vets, bullets spray random as u get chopped with a gat
My caps locked nd loaded, nd way fuckin hotter than a topic from bags
Nik-a got the short end of the staff, picks were panicky in the hype
Draft is ugly as fuck, coincidentally his fantasy and girl look alike
Tryfe, type to lose control when neigh crushed the fag so he quit
Won the battle cause ur tears carry more weight than bags at the gym
A look he's ben draggin with him, s'why ur girl hates ur face in the morning
Nut flavor is clorine, but ur wife thinks my hot sauce the taste of new orleans
The lamest at boarding, fourty, this fagit team has death comin
Nik over the hill, nd bags chicken chest could feed the metts brothers
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Old 09-06-2013, 10:43 AM   #11
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nik/bags
This aint a fair scrap....i promise and swear that.
Witty? Nah. U stupid like a fox......that just walked into a bear trap.
Ya girl? Bang me like a skeez. She take me on her knees
Got er prayin for a G. I split her throat w the pipe. Thats a tracheotomy
Geno audio was WEAK.u play the bitch w/ them rhymes
Had me ready to die & made DG dropalopaha seem like Big in his prime
We got them poems locked kid. Topical? No prob bitch.
Cuz Ud still lose the tournament in ya own realm on sum shoa kahn shit
Yall don’t live up to ur names so chill it losers
cuz the irony of this battle’s seein Witty & Genocide actually gettin killed with humor
I’m a baller but have more fun as a skinner
fuck ur infatuation with Fox… I mean my girl always Sports 1 for the winter
ATR is gay as fuck plus demented with opinions
yall love the partner idea… the type that’s legal in some states but not accepted by religion
we gettin all the women, both u lames worthless
I’d tell Geno to follow his dream… but then he’d stalk all of Vulgar’s hall of fame verses
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Old 09-08-2013, 09:31 AM   #12
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V nik bags

Paynik attack did not set a good tone for the verse. Bars at the gym and nickelodeon were played af. New Orleans was alright.

Thought shao kahn was cool. Dg and a couple others too. Overall a bit better.
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Slay you with facts, bags the type to buy a verse cause he plainly a fag
Thats why all the xanax in the world couldn't stop his paynik-attacks
This is kinda forced.. PAN NIK... PAY NIK?
Basic nd wack, id gamble the barrel would have you empty your purse
But you could never show gun dinero when your in debt for his verse
Okay here.. decent stuff
This is death for the champs, you fuckin squarepants know we the best
Ill put u spongebobs in a box like a vender man, nickel-o-deon rent
Get the concept but the nickelodeon thing seems kinda forced.. poor wording
I throw heat on vets, bullets spray random as u get chopped with a gat
My caps locked nd loaded, nd way fuckin hotter than a topic from bags
Good stuff
Nik-a got the short end of the staff, picks were panicky in the hype
Draft is ugly as fuck, coincidentally his fantasy and girl look alike
Good stuff here on the personal
Tryfe, type to lose control when neigh crushed the fag so he quit
Won the battle cause ur tears carry more weight than bags at the gym
Not really rhyming here? Decent concept though.
A look he's ben draggin with him, s'why ur girl hates ur face in the morning
Nut flavor is clorine, but ur wife thinks my hot sauce the taste of new orleans
Good flip on this played out shit..
The lamest at boarding, fourty, this fagit team has death comin
Nik over the hill, nd bags chicken chest could feed the metts brothers
Good closer


Overall: The top half of verse was choppy with wording/forced concepts. The bottom half was good/decent.




This aint a fair scrap....i promise and swear that.
Witty? Nah. U stupid like a fox......that just walked into a bear trap.
Decent opener here.. dig the personal shit on the sig
Ya girl? Bang me like a skeez. She take me on her knees
Got er prayin for a G. I split her throat w the pipe. Thats a tracheotomy
Decent flip.. Im just getting tired of seeing this concept
Geno audio was WEAK.u play the bitch w/ them rhymes
Had me ready to die & made DG dropalopaha seem like Big in his prime
Okay bar here
We got them poems locked kid. Topical? No prob bitch.
Cuz Ud still lose the tournament in ya own realm on sum shoa kahn shit
Good shit here.... good bar.
Yall don’t live up to ur names so chill it losers
cuz the irony of this battle’s seein Witty & Genocide actually gettin killed with humor
Funny concept here it worked..
I’m a baller but have more fun as a skinner
fuck ur infatuation with Fox… I mean my girl always Sports 1 for the winter
Good bar here as well.. nice flip
ATR is gay as fuck plus demented with opinions
yall love the partner idea… the type that’s legal in some states but not accepted by religion
LOL... funny
we gettin all the women, both u lames worthless
I’d tell Geno to follow his dream… but then he’d stalk all of Vulgar’s hall of fame verses
Decent closer


Overall: good verse filled with some funny lines, however, they landed. Overall nothing really to say here... good verse.



Vote: Nik/Bags cuz of smoother wording, harder hits, humor, and overall just a better verse.
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Nickelodeon and caps were ok.

Vs.

Pipe cut throat, fox

Tied in quotes I guess. But I was definitely feeling Bags/Nik(obviously just bags) overall verse more. Just had more humor and creativity. More my style.

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I throw heat on vets, bullets spray random as u get chopped with a gat
My caps locked nd loaded, nd way fuckin hotter than a topic from bags
Tryfe, type to lose control when neigh crushed the fag so he quit Won the battle cause ur tears carry more weight than bags at the gym

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We got them poems locked kid. Topical? No prob bitch.
Cuz Ud still lose the tournament in ya own realm on sum shoa kahn shit
Yall don’t live up to ur names so chill it losers
cuz the irony of this battle’s seein Witty & Genocide actually gettin killed with humor
ATR is gay as fuck plus demented with opinions
yall love the partner idea… the type that’s legal in some states but not accepted by religion
funny we gettin all the women, both u lames worthless
I’d tell Geno to follow his dream… but then he’d stalk all of Vulgar’s hall of fame verses


V, nik & bags, not bad batttle i jus thought witty an gen wasnt as consistent as nik an bags,
Both had some good bars, liked the tears jawn from wit n geno but the love the partner idea
Bar was the lotb lmao cool battle props yah.
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This was a good battle. Witty/gen had some ideas but the wording was off. The punches just didn't hit that hard. but overall not a bad verse. Bags opener was cool and was i diggin that tracheostomy line. Niks standouts were the double nameplay and closer, overall it just came down to nik/bags having more quotes.

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