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The Landlord
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Round 2: 1. Sound vs. 2. MoreHits {MoreHits wins}
David Lama
July 14th, 2009, 02:05 AM No Time to Waste 2009 Keystyle Tournament Verses due July 14th 2009. 11:59PM Pacific 10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount these are keystyle battles. you only have a day to write. NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER. IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE Recycling = Automatic DQ 1st to 5 wins 3-0 = KO 4-1 = TKO check in. G/l [HR][/HR]MoreHits July 14th, 2009, 02:47 AM goodluck.....i'll drop early [HR][/HR]Sound July 14th, 2009, 10:46 AM yep.. [HR][/HR]Sound July 14th, 2009, 11:45 PM Ya vocal tone ain't right. no audio tracks fa'sho ..even at work homeboys sales pitch cracks windows he ain't want to face me. David is just makin him spar went and named himself MoreHits - that's what he'll take to the jaw last round ya got an illustration, homie i paint pictures your verse is a masterpiece - that needs a touch-up, tone, & a layer of paint thinner ..i put the word out. ya won't win. i can't begin to imagine it The problem with this tourney is the left side of the bracket is heavier with talent than the right. Semi-final might be better than the final :: shrugs : ^ agreed. but you can blame that on the faggot i'm battlin your biggest claim to fame? avoidage of being a jerk out dukes a mathmetician - struggling to raise his sperm count [HR][/HR]MoreHits July 15th, 2009, 12:43 AM round 1 n 2 u switched ya style, i caught that, ur through i should quote a deal tooÖthe one u made with the guy who wrote that for u ur drowning urself, i wont stop till ur dropping mountains of tears u beat king davidÖ..now try beating someone who hasnít been dead for thousands of years hits is too gully, iím typing this while iím robbing his house my verse got sound coveredÖÖlike the muzzle i got on his mouth me n my homies get the hottest chics, even head from lez types my click has the best of sex lifes, sound click?ÖÖ..just a website next round is mine, u cant even act like that crapís sicker u didnít do enough to get dolla.....Öiím treating u like a whack stripper [HR][/HR]Fuego. July 15th, 2009, 12:53 AM hmmm, pretty even. I think that morehits had a few stretched and played lines. but great flow. Sound had short lines and good punches (morehits did too, dont get me wrong) but choppy flow. "last round ya got an illustration, homie i paint pictures your verse is a masterpiece - that needs a touch-up, tone, & a layer of paint thinner" ^^fave line from sound "round 1 n 2 u switched ya style, i caught that, ur through i should quote a deal too…the one u made with the guy who wrote that for u" ^^fave line from hits. It all came down to punches and personals, and honestly...i think Sound had the better verse. good punches all around, but i think sound just came a little harder then hits. Good battle though, good luck to whoever wins. vote-sound. [HR][/HR]Dolla July 15th, 2009, 12:57 AM break, breakdown....steady breakin this on....down....lol Sound Ya vocal tone ain't right. no audio tracks fa'sho ..even at work homeboys sales pitch cracks windows ^ not opener material, just wasn't that good.... he ain't want to face me. David is just makin him spar went and named himself MoreHits - that's what he'll take to the jaw ^ this was okay, kind of related to the other punches thrown at him.... last round ya got an illustration, homie i paint pictures your verse is a masterpiece - that needs a touch-up, tone, & a layer of paint thinner ^ that was pretty hot ..i put the word out. ya won't win. i can't begin to imagine it ^ agreed. but you can blame that on the faggot i'm battlin ^ quote kind of broke it up your biggest claim to fame? avoidage of being a jerk out dukes a mathmetician - struggling to raise his sperm count ^ Lol not closer material but deff funny Morehits round 1 n 2 u switched ya style, i caught that, ur through i should quote a deal tooÖthe one u made with the guy who wrote that for u ^ haha that was good, good job using the experience, nice flip ur drowning urself, i wont stop till ur dropping mountains of tears u beat king davidÖ..now try beating someone who hasnít been dead for thousands of years ^ fuck yeah! that was a hard ass punch! hits is too gully, iím typing this while iím robbing his house my verse got sound coveredÖÖlike the muzzle i got on his mouth ^ kind of filler but hey it was alright me n my homies get the hottest chics, even head from lez types my click has the best of sex lifes, sound click?ÖÖ..just a website ^ lol good punch next round is mine, u cant even act like that crapís sicker u didnít do enough to get dolla.....Öiím treating u like a whack stripper ^ thanks for the shoutout/////good closer as well damn morehits came the best ive seen him so far and he just completely overpowered sound.... vote: morehits [HR][/HR]NoDoze July 15th, 2009, 01:08 AM I disagree with Dolla, Ive seen MoreHits come better then this. But that being said, he still came pretty hot Sound had some good lines to. Im not big on the using of the quotes. Kind of reminds me of explaining bars, or showing what word your wordplay is, just breaks up the verse and ruins it all for me. I really liked the sound covered line, and the king david lines from Hits. Sound I like the paint thinner line , and the sperm count was funny All in all I thought it was pretty close. I have to go with MoreHits though for the better punches, and the verse not being broke up by quotes. Vote MoreHits [HR][/HR]e July 15th, 2009, 03:31 AM "went and named himself MoreHits - that's what he'll take to the jaw nice "your verse is a masterpiece - that needs a touch-up, tone, & a layer of paint thinner" ...and then your lungs collapse. not a bad idea for a punch tho "your biggest claim to fame? avoidage of being a jerk out dukes a mathmetician - struggling to raise his sperm count" lol! those were pretty good punches. that paint thinner line was long winded tho. 20 syllables? fuck! needs its own instrumental --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "round 1 n 2 u switched ya style, i caught that, ur through i should quote a deal too…the one u made with the guy who wrote that for u" LMAO great flip. "ur drowning urself, i wont stop till ur dropping mountains of tears u beat king david…..now try beating someone who hasn’t been dead for thousands of years" long winded like hell but hillarious. one of those "ooooooooooo's" "next round is mine, u cant even act like that crap’s sicker u didn’t do enough to get dolla.....…i’m treating u like a whack stripper" hahahaha. fucking great flow got long winded at times like his verse, but your punches had some sting to them VOTE = hits FYI (thats the shit about battling online. when you go first, your shit is susceptible to flippage) [HR][/HR]Genocide July 15th, 2009, 05:20 AM imma be honest -i like ya steezo sound, but hits got this -had two particular bars that stuck out stronger and further than the stuff you wrote vote -hits |
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