FINALS: Defcon_5 vs. C. Gaffle {C.Gaffle wins}

[God Of War]

David Lama
July 16th, 2009, 07:28 AM

No Time to Waste 2009
Keystyle Tournament

Verses due July 16th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
Recycling = Automatic DQ
1st to 7 votes wins
No KO's in this one
check in. G/l

[HR][/HR]Defcon_5
July 16th, 2009, 03:38 PM

hi there

[HR][/HR]C. Gaffle
July 16th, 2009, 09:07 PM

yo

[HR][/HR]Genocide
July 16th, 2009, 11:25 PM

grrrr -been waitin all day for this... where are you guys lol?

[HR][/HR]Defcon_5
July 17th, 2009, 12:45 AM

oh well

the fact remains Def'll beat u til ya face is chewy
if u win..it'll be the worst succession since that bitch with braces blew me
i'm runnin this thread so gaffle all ya frontin is dead
ya only crownin achievement..will be puttin this one on my head
so step bitch n i'll show u the meanin of the word hectic
then u'll c gaffle run away so fast he'll break the world record
we know u got famous friends..so what u mad at now?
wayne said pussy pussy pussy..
..u should be happy that he gave u a shout out gaffe
i'm not worried bout CG or his little trash scrimmage
cause he bases his verses off his sex life..they only last minute

[HR][/HR]C. Gaffle
July 17th, 2009, 02:04 AM

aww dammit im lazy

[HR][/HR]C. Gaffle
July 17th, 2009, 02:57 AM

aw fuck


its been over a decade Def, an all ya material...dog played
ura career joke...a comic Con...that includes the cosplay
Fag, u had a spark when u started, now its no use tryin to blow
ur outta touch with ya youth...like pedophilles in retirement homes
what happened??? u ran with greats..im talkin But, Duh n' Kabob
seems they sprinted for fame kid ...an u just dropped the baton
& u gotta wife n' kid too, still writin like a scrub of a vet
been workin that Loss Column for years...with no publisher yet
Def ur useless ...a punchin bag, no ones feelin this oaf
raps not ya bread n' butter now...ur just the heal of the loaf

[HR][/HR]ALIEN
July 17th, 2009, 06:10 AM

the fact remains Def'll beat u til ya face is chewy
if u win..it'll be the worst succession since that bitch with braces blew me
-lmao

i'm runnin this thread so gaffle all ya frontin is dead
ya only crownin achievement..will be puttin this one on my head
-dece

so step bitch n i'll show u the meanin of the word hectic
then u'll c gaffle run away so fast he'll break the world record
-nope

we know u got famous friends..so what u mad at now?
wayne said pussy pussy pussy..
..u should be happy that he gave u a shout out gaffe
-nah

i'm not worried bout CG or his little trash scrimmage
cause he bases his verses off his sex life..they only last minute
nice


vs

its been over a decade Def, an all ya material...dog played
ura career joke...a comic Con...that includes the cosplay
-great CONcept, hah, not worded well, but nice

Fag, u had a spark when u started, now its no use tryin to blow
ur outta touch with ya youth...like pedophilles in retirement homes
-dece, setup was irrelevant

what happened??? u ran with greats..im talkin But, Duh n' Kabob
seems they sprinted for fame kid ...an u just dropped the baton
-dope

& u gotta wife n' kid too, still writin like a scrub of a vet
been workin that Loss Column for years...with no publisher yet
-nice

Def ur useless ...a punchin bag, no ones feelin this oaf
raps not ya bread n' butter now...ur just the heal of the loaf
-nice


Decent champ match. Def started his verse off nice, but that world record line was ehhhhh @ best, and the pussy shoutout just didn't doit for me either. Rest of it was nice. Gaff had some wording issues i feel like especially with the opener. pedophiles was forced to me, some of ur set ups weren't relative to your punches at all so not really "set ups" just rhyming words. U finished it off nicely. Verse had some personals and the closer was dope to me.

I got Gaffle takin' it in a close one. Good battle fellas.

[HR][/HR]Mighty Odds
July 17th, 2009, 08:48 AM

i'm runnin this thread so gaffle all ya frontin is dead
ya only crownin achievement..will be puttin this one on my head
i'm not worried bout CG or his little trash scrimmage
cause he bases his verses off his sex life..they only last minute

vs

its been over a decade Def, an all ya material...dog played
ura career joke...a comic Con...that includes the cosplay
what happened??? u ran with greats..im talkin But, Duh n' Kabob
seems they sprinted for fame kid ...an u just dropped the baton
& u gotta wife n' kid too, still writin like a scrub of a vet
been workin that Loss Column for years...with no publisher yet

this was a cool battle.. def kinda fell off towards the middle.. while gaffle picked it up towards the end.. but non the less this was a nice little battle.. props to both but my votes gotta go to GAffle

vote Gaffle

[HR][/HR]Eddie the Munster
July 17th, 2009, 10:57 AM

i'm runnin this thread so gaffle all ya frontin is dead
ya only crownin achievement..will be puttin this one on my head
we know u got famous friends..so what u mad at now?
wayne said pussy pussy pussy..
..u should be happy that he gave u a shout out gaffe

didn't really come bad, your closer was awful lol @ the forcedness.

vs.

what happened??? u ran with greats..im talkin But, Duh n' Kabob
seems they sprinted for fame kid ...an u just dropped the baton
& u gotta wife n' kid too, still writin like a scrub of a vet
been workin that Loss Column for years...with no publisher yet
Def ur useless ...a punchin bag, no ones feelin this oaf
raps not ya bread n' butter now...ur just the heal of the loaf

pretty solid verse. wasn't too bad of a battle actually, but I'm goin with Gaff for consistency.

vote - CG

[HR][/HR]iDeals
July 17th, 2009, 11:44 AM

the fact remains Def'll beat u til ya face is chewy
if u win..it'll be the worst succession since that bitch with braces blew me
Kind of funny, didn't like the bar as a whole though

i'm runnin this thread so gaffle all ya frontin is dead
ya only crownin achievement..will be puttin this one on my head
liked this one

so step bitch n i'll show u the meanin of the word hectic
then u'll c gaffle run away so fast he'll break the world record
Eh... missed with this one

we know u got famous friends..so what u mad at now?
wayne said pussy pussy pussy..
..u should be happy that he gave u a shout out gaffe
WTF? I assume this was a shot at a personal, where was the rhyme?

i'm not worried bout CG or his little trash scrimmage
cause he bases his verses off his sex life..they only last minute
this one had potential, didn't like the wording



its been over a decade Def, an all ya material...dog played
ura career joke...a comic Con...that includes the cosplay
decent opener

Fag, u had a spark when u started, now its no use tryin to blow
ur outta touch with ya youth...like pedophilles in retirement homes
again decent...

what happened??? u ran with greats..im talkin But, Duh n' Kabob
seems they sprinted for fame kid ...an u just dropped the baton
Set up looks like a personal, I'm not familiar with the cats in reference, but still liked the concept

& u gotta wife n' kid too, still writin like a scrub of a vet
been workin that Loss Column for years...with no publisher yet
Nice jab

Def ur useless ...a punchin bag, no ones feelin this oaf
raps not ya bread n' butter now...ur just the heal of the loaf
decent ending

Ironically I was expecting more of Def, and less of Gaffle. I think CG came with a better all around verse here.

Vote = C. Gaffle

[HR][/HR]Hush
July 17th, 2009, 12:21 PM

gaff killed it with the opener..n stood above avg most the way threw..

def..iunno I liked like one of your lines here


vote-gaffle

[HR][/HR]MoreHits
July 17th, 2009, 03:13 PM

nice battle.......def had heaters like crown n the last minute bars...........rest was alright......gaffle had like 1 more heater than def......dropped the baton, loss column, cosplay.......all dope........gotta give it to gaffle by a tiny margin........vote c gaffle

[HR][/HR]Genocide
July 17th, 2009, 05:40 PM

dayum -well.. defcon came dope -as was to be expected, but man -gaffle really layed into you here man.. got real personal with the family n kids shyt thrown in there --i feel his verse was a little harder, real close to call -i had to re-read this three times to decide.. nice one doOds

vote -gaffle

[HR][/HR]David Lama
July 17th, 2009, 06:49 PM

C. Gaffle wins 7-0

props on winning the tourney man!

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