02-02-2013, 04:25 PM | #1 |
The Landlord
Join Date: Jan 2013
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Round 1: 1. Dolla vs. 4. Odds {Dolla wins}
David Lama
July 12th, 2009, 08:35 PM No Time to Waste 2009 Keystyle Tournament Verses due July 13th 2009. 11:59PM Pacific 10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount these are keystyle battles. you only have a day to write. NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER. IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE 1st to 5 wins 3-0 = KO 4-1 = TKO check in. G/l [HR][/HR]Dolla July 12th, 2009, 10:30 PM thanks man Chizzeck.... Good Luck Odds [HR][/HR]Dolla July 12th, 2009, 11:11 PM I wonder why this dude tries and runs with the best? Mentioning me is what made ya avi put a gun to his head! Close the thread lama, stay lockin this tight He finna bitch when he lose, assured he got his moniker right http://www.aacap.org/cs/root/facts_f...fiant_disorder I'm a full blown force, you can't even trust with a glock out Your round 1 battles seem to repeat...HUSHed by a knockout He rockin a mask of shame with a drastic pain status draped You winnin this battle? The description would match ya name (odd) You was holding on to this thread have it breached from ya claws I must have luck on my side, because i'm beatin the odds [HR][/HR]Mighty Odds July 13th, 2009, 01:28 AM for real dolla.. I ain't even worried when I slaughter rivals cuz I can cut u in 4 pieces & make it passed the quarter finals! So I'll punch ur face cuz I love hearing u scream for help cunt but u got the upper hand tho..cuz u trying to cover yaself up 1 flipped nameplay'd after another its really what this lad brings but his concepts are like cigarettes cuz he cant filter the bad things! How did I get u first my dude when u lacking a skill flow Lama! I ain't broke my dude so fuck having a dolla bill yo! cuz ur fucking horrible, I mean this nigga can't rhyme u got no scene in wining! so I'm a smash u into nickles & dimes! [HR][/HR]Dolla July 13th, 2009, 01:35 AM good shit homie uppin on votes [HR][/HR]Genocide July 13th, 2009, 05:20 AM dolla came harder -odd got soft towards the end, if he woulda stasyed stronger throughout -would have been a closer call... that opner had me crackin up dolla lol vote dolla [HR][/HR]Final Chapta July 13th, 2009, 11:38 AM wow. wasnt overly impressive. but both came equally decent. seriously. this is a tough one to call. both had a few choppy points in their verses & the stees were very similar. i thought a few concepts could have been really killer from odds. but the wording seemed to be off each time. that cover yaself up shit could have won the battle IMO. odds last 4 lines seemed rushed and didnt really have any sting to them. thoguht Dolla was faily consistant throughout his verse. cool read guys. props to both. Vote - Dolla. Chap. [HR][/HR]PhiLLy-Stacks July 13th, 2009, 12:45 PM I gotta go with Dolla on this one...Both battles were nice BUT Odds really fell off during the last 4 lines and thats the reason why I gotta go with Dolla here, he stayed hitting harder [HR][/HR]Mighty Odds July 13th, 2009, 12:58 PM thanks for the votes.. nice battle dolla.. be at ease [HR][/HR]Dolla July 13th, 2009, 02:53 PM thanks odds....seriously when i saw your verse....i was revaluating on this tornuament....i thought i was done for.....my advice for you is to call some people out and just practice until the next tourney and believe me you'll get further....thanks to philly, chap and geno for voting, i'll hit ya'll back 3-0 KO |
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