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Old 09-03-2015, 07:34 AM   #1
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Old 09-03-2015, 03:01 PM   #2
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I'm here.

Someone need to inform this nigga of what's happening or what?
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Old 09-04-2015, 02:20 AM   #4
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im going 16.
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Old 09-08-2015, 12:49 PM   #5
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16 it is.
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Old 09-12-2015, 09:04 AM   #6
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16 sent to Lars.
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Old 09-12-2015, 08:39 PM   #7
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Plz use this verse instead bro. Thnx


WalkingDead... aka Rudge1, aka Diss Kabob, aka Linesman...

aka a nigga who shoulda stayed hiding under a fuckin rock...

Ohh so u Chi town's own then huh?...

Aye yo...
I'd watch da Bears w/ ya chic, Cutler's they biggest star
But only thing movin up in da pocket's her hand when she tuggin a nigga hard
I'd dismantle u proper, hand on da Glock, animal, monster
Hammer is cocked bruh, a few clicks & u'd checkout like an Amazon shopper
Aloe, Sime, Res, & Rygar ALL treated u like a casual poo
& since u Cottonelle w/ them niggas I'll go ahead & wipe my ass w/ u too
Fuck ya statements.. ur dead & shooting's da sole factor
Whatever u say I'ma get around da point w/ lead like I'm using a protractor
But 4get typin shit at u.. I let da steel just bark instead
These shells can spinoff into ya brain, but we NEVER Fear the Walking Dead
I'll off ya head, & u won't escape da punching whirlwind
If u Kabob & weave bitch, u just spendin time w/ ya bald head ass girlfriend
Strik keeps it tyrannical, bully nerds type yo, please Bob
I'll just hold down power & start pushin this square like a iphone screenshot
See dog u wack as shit, mostly we all laugh at ya scripts
Anybody feeling Lines just did 3 rails of molly & read ya verse after it kicked

Squad.
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@WalkingDead
Ya'll.

Any site That I repped . They call me the king there
you ain’t even the foremost of niggas that constitute netcees here.
Seen the way u type . U think thats first class
Getting to switch numerous characters . Rockstar North is signing ya ass.
Facin me. fool u about to get thralled
Like smug Bowlers in Cricket . you stepping over the line with no balls
This fuck be a low life prick ,more of a negative type
only positive sign he rocked had switzerland’s flag Stripe
Plus
He dont know hip hop. he’s here to act fellas
What he writes comes very close to wraps like quesadillas
he got no friends, girl ,family to hang or talk about
Masturbation be the only time he tries to come out
By taking one glance at this loner’s book shelf visually
i knew 100 years of solitude got him great impact.. i mean literally.
With such names. you aint climbing heights in this biz
levi’s 501 filed on for a trademark change. knowing about who strauss

Whatever.
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Old 09-12-2015, 08:56 PM   #9
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Aye yo...
I'd watch da Bears w/ ya chic, Cutler's they biggest star
But only thing movin up in da pocket's her hand when she tuggin a nigga hard
Lol okay

I'd dismantle u proper, hand on da Glock, animal, monster
Hammer is cocked bruh, a few clicks & u'd checkout like an Amazon shopper
Heh okay

Aloe, Sime, Res, & Rygar ALL treated u like a casual poo
& since u Cottonelle w/ them niggas I'll go ahead & wipe my ass w/ u too
Nooo lol

Fuck ya statements.. ur dead & shooting's da sole factor
Whatever u say I'ma get around da point w/ lead like I'm using a protractor
Solid

But 4get typin shit at u.. I let da steel just bark instead
These shells can spinoff into ya brain, but we NEVER Fear the Walking Dead
This cool

I'll off ya head, & u won't escape da punching whirlwind
If u Kabob & weave bitch, u just spendin time w/ ya bald head ass girlfriend
Dead

Strik keeps it tyrannical, bully nerds type yo, please Bob
I'll just hold down power & start pushin this square like a iphone screenshot
Cool

See dog u wack as shit, mostly we all laugh at ya scripts
Anybody feeling Lines just did 3 rails of molly & read ya verse after it kicked
Cool


@WalkingDead
Ya'll.

Any site That I repped . They call me the king there
you ain’t even the foremost of niggas that constitute netcees here.
Cool

Seen the way u type . U think thats first class
Getting to switch numerous characters . Rockstar North is signing ya ass.
Lol okay

Facin me. fool u about to get thralled
Like smug Bowlers in Cricket . you stepping over the line with no balls
Heh okay

This fuck be a low life prick ,more of a negative type
only positive sign he rocked had switzerland’s flag Stripe
Plus
Eh could of been more

He dont know hip hop. he’s here to act fellas
What he writes comes very close to wraps like quesadillas
Like this

he got no friends, girl ,family to hang or talk about
Masturbation be the only time he tries to come out
Lol k

By taking one glance at this loner’s book shelf visually
i knew 100 years of solitude got him great impact.. i mean literally.
Solid

With such names. you aint climbing heights in this biz
levi’s 501 filed on for a trademark change. knowing about who strauss
Dont get it.

This was dope. Walking dead could have took this. Just didnt.

V stikta

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Old 09-13-2015, 02:31 PM   #10
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Plz use this verse instead bro. Thnx


WalkingDead... aka Rudge1, aka Diss Kabob, aka Linesman...

aka a nigga who shoulda stayed hiding under a fuckin rock...

Ohh so u Chi town's own then huh?...

Aye yo...
I'd watch da Bears w/ ya chic, Cutler's they biggest star
But only thing movin up in da pocket's her hand when she tuggin a nigga hard
thats nice
I'd dismantle u proper, hand on da Glock, animal, monster
Hammer is cocked bruh, a few clicks & u'd checkout like an Amazon shopper
nice
Aloe, Sime, Res, & Rygar ALL treated u like a casual poo
& since u Cottonelle w/ them niggas I'll go ahead & wipe my ass w/ u too
almost forced kinda forced but execution was on
Fuck ya statements.. ur dead & shooting's da sole factor
Whatever u say I'ma get around da point w/ lead like I'm using a protractor
this ok kidna light, but u going in i cant front
But 4get typin shit at u.. I let da steel just bark instead
These shells can spinoff into ya brain, but we NEVER Fear the Walking Dead
light
I'll off ya head, & u won't escape da punching whirlwind
If u Kabob & weave bitch, u just spendin time w/ ya bald head ass girlfriend
this is a stretch not feeling
Strik keeps it tyrannical, bully nerds type yo, please Bob
I'll just hold down power & start pushin this square like a iphone screenshot
dope creative
See dog u wack as shit, mostly we all laugh at ya scripts
Anybody feeling Lines just did 3 rails of molly & read ya verse after it kicked
nah

Squad.



no lies thats the dopest I saw Strik drop in a long time, very impressed

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Ya'll.

Any site That I repped . They call me the king there
you ain’t even the foremost of niggas that constitute netcees here.
wording on this was odd bro.. real straight forward here, statement an shit.. it could be really harsh and hit harder if u put more "fuck u" into it. the wording had it come off almost polite
Seen the way u type . U think thats first class
Getting to switch numerous characters . Rockstar North is signing ya ass.
thats dope
Facin me. fool u about to get thralled
Like smug Bowlers in Cricket . you stepping over the line with no balls
im ignorant to cricket but i think i get this
This fuck be a low life prick ,more of a negative type
only positive sign he rocked had switzerland’s flag Stripe
ok light but ok
Plus
He dont know hip hop. he’s here to act fellas
What he writes comes very close to wraps like quesadillas
lol ok. this is dope man, i wish u were meaner with ur executions
he got no friends, girl ,family to hang or talk about
Masturbation be the only time he tries to come out
a cum line? this cant be rudge can it?
By taking one glance at this loner’s book shelf visually
i knew 100 years of solitude got him great impact.. i mean literally.
lmao yeeeeeaaaaaaa that shit was mean, this bang
With such names. you aint climbing heights in this biz
levi’s 501 filed on for a trademark change. knowing about who strauss
bro biz and strauss dont rhyme. house and strauss rhyme. iunno that caught me off gaurd. i dont get the wp u going for either.. i read it 10 times
Whatever.









WalkingDead had some dope shit, simple style that hit hard when it did. Strik had some more complex shit and landed a few more hits for my eyes. Walking had the masterbation come out line which left me stratching my head, same with the closer

both were on in this when they hit
Strik just was more consistent to me as I said earlier


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@WalkingDead
Ya'll.

Any site That I repped . They call me the king there
you ain’t even the foremost of niggas that constitute netcees here.
I like the idea, reminds me karaokes regular ones line. But urs needs harsher wording.
Seen the way u type . U think thats first class
Getting to switch numerous characters . Rockstar North is signing ya ass.
aiight
Facin me. fool u about to get thralled
Like smug Bowlers in Cricket . you stepping over the line with no balls
needs a better set up, imo
This fuck be a low life prick ,more of a negative type
only positive sign he rocked had switzerland’s flag Stripe
flow isn't great. could've multi the end rhymes. This could've been worded better in the set up to make this punch more effective, creative idea tho
Plus
He dont know hip hop. he’s here to act fellas
What he writes comes very close to wraps like quesadillas
ur lack of smooth rhyming is more apparent then ur punching, a lot of ur bars sound unfinished, like ur missing a few words to make em' completely hit
he got no friends, girl ,family to hang or talk about
Masturbation be the only time he tries to come out
no
By taking one glance at this loner’s book shelf visually
i knew 100 years of solitude got him great impact.. i mean literally.
aiight
With such names. you aint climbing heights in this biz
levi’s 501 filed on for a trademark change. knowing about who strauss
why aren't u rhyming? think u have too much going on here, totally fizzed ya shit

Whatever.
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WalkingDead... aka Rudge1, aka Diss Kabob, aka Linesman...

aka a nigga who shoulda stayed hiding under a fuckin rock...

Ohh so u Chi town's own then huh?...

Aye yo...
I'd watch da Bears w/ ya chic, Cutler's they biggest star
But only thing movin up in da pocket's her hand when she tuggin a nigga hard
ok
I'd dismantle u proper, hand on da Glock, animal, monster
Hammer is cocked bruh, a few clicks & u'd checkout like an Amazon shopper
cool
Aloe, Sime, Res, & Rygar ALL treated u like a casual poo
& since u Cottonelle w/ them niggas I'll go ahead & wipe my ass w/ u too
LOL, nah but was funny
Fuck ya statements.. ur dead & shooting's da sole factor
Whatever u say I'ma get around da point w/ lead like I'm using a protractor
aiight
But 4get typin shit at u.. I let da steel just bark instead
These shells can spinoff into ya brain, but we NEVER Fear the Walking Dead
spinoff/prequel
I'll off ya head, & u won't escape da punching whirlwind
If u Kabob & weave bitch, u just spendin time w/ ya bald head ass girlfriend
lol
Strik keeps it tyrannical, bully nerds type yo, please Bob
I'll just hold down power & start pushin this square like a iphone screenshot
fire
See dog u wack as shit, mostly we all laugh at ya scripts
Anybody feeling Lines just did 3 rails of molly & read ya verse after it kicked
nah

Squad.
Strik got this,
walking dead you need to work on making ur bars rhyme bruh, work on wording your shots to be more harsh. You came off close to statement-ish to me cus of how soft ur shit sounded compared to strik's wording. Also if your diss kabob shame on u for not using constrikta personals
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Plz use this verse instead bro. Thnx


WalkingDead... aka Rudge1, aka Diss Kabob, aka Linesman...

aka a nigga who shoulda stayed hiding under a fuckin rock...

Ohh so u Chi town's own then huh?...

Aye yo...
I'd watch da Bears w/ ya chic, Cutler's they biggest star
But only thing movin up in da pocket's her hand when she tuggin a nigga hard
ayyy lmao
I'd dismantle u proper, hand on da Glock, animal, monster
Hammer is cocked bruh, a few clicks & u'd checkout like an Amazon shopper
okay
Aloe, Sime, Res, & Rygar ALL treated u like a casual poo
& since u Cottonelle w/ them niggas I'll go ahead & wipe my ass w/ u too
haha good
Fuck ya statements.. ur dead & shooting's da sole factor
Whatever u say I'ma get around da point w/ lead like I'm using a protractor
I liked this one since Im that nerd type
But 4get typin shit at u.. I let da steel just bark instead
These shells can spinoff into ya brain, but we NEVER Fear the Walking Dead
not bad
I'll off ya head, & u won't escape da punching whirlwind
If u Kabob & weave bitch, u just spendin time w/ ya bald head ass girlfriend
nah not feelin this
Strik keeps it tyrannical, bully nerds type yo, please Bob
I'll just hold down power & start pushin this square like a iphone screenshot
this cool
See dog u wack as shit, mostly we all laugh at ya scripts
Anybody feeling Lines just did 3 rails of molly & read ya verse after it kicked
nah i dont dig this bar weak closer
Squad.
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@WalkingDead
Ya'll.

Any site That I repped . They call me the king there
you ain’t even the foremost of niggas that constitute netcees here.
okay
Seen the way u type . U think thats first class
Getting to switch numerous characters . Rockstar North is signing ya ass.
dope
Facin me. fool u about to get thralled
Like smug Bowlers in Cricket . you stepping over the line with no balls
haha yes this line was gold
This fuck be a low life prick ,more of a negative type
only positive sign he rocked had switzerland’s flag Stripe
oh shit throw some education in this bitch. i dig this
Plus
He dont know hip hop. he’s here to act fellas
What he writes comes very close to wraps like quesadillas
killed it here lol
he got no friends, girl ,family to hang or talk about
Masturbation be the only time he tries to come out
lol
By taking one glance at this loner’s book shelf visually
i knew 100 years of solitude got him great impact.. i mean literally.
this okay
With such names. you aint climbing heights in this biz
levi’s 501 filed on for a trademark change. knowing about who strauss
better ending

Whatever.
honestly this battle was close to me for both.
vote goes to strikta tho both were close
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