XI WK IV: Scar (1-2) vs. Quill (1-2) (SCAR WINS)

Frank · 12-29-2022, 03:47 AM

Season 11 XI

VERSES: Thursday, January, 5th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 24 Hour Ext: Mod/Opponent Discretion

VOTES: Sunday, January 8th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 3 Vote Requirement Enforced/Penalty

MAXIMUM: 48 Lines: 64 IF AGREED UPON!

Goodluck! @Scar @Quill

TOPIC:

Scar · 12-30-2022, 04:01 AM

check. gl, old buddy

Scar · 01-03-2023, 02:59 AM

“Rabbit Hole”

Racsy, you will noticed my voice getting quieter
And as you do you might noticed your eyes getting really heavy
Tell me what you see.
I’m in a tunnel, lights; orange, purple, blue
Can u see the end?
No it’s an endless bend
Again, what else do you see, u piece of shit?
I see a pudgy Arabian guy lying on his bed playing with his phone
Oh? Tell me more.
He’s suffering wristpain, in the background I can hear voices
What kind of voices, you dumb shit?
What’s up with the attitude, doc?
Anyway, I think it’s the sound of the tv, doc
What’s he watching?
Iono, something stupid cause it’s in French. And France is stupid nah’mean?
You’re an idiot. I wanna stab your spleen
Tell me more about this dude
Not much to say, he thinks he’s cool
His mind is preoccupied with something.
Are you still in this tunnel?
Yes and I can see everything.
Ok back to This pudgy dude
Yeah he’s preoccupied with something, jeez
A writing exercise. He’s competing with other internet geeks
Poetry I think. He keeps thinking of lines but he’d often get side track.
Like what?
His bills, his wrist, his Facebook stats
There’s this fat bitch he’s trying to holler at
Yeah?
Yeah, she’s aite, but he likes those plumpers with the big ass
Don’t we all?
Facts, nigga! But yeah he’s been Trying to write it for days and..
He often sift through the archives for inspiration
His favorite writer is Big Baby follow closely by this dude name Nathan.
Who likes to repeat his rhymes. He’s the netcees version of Cortez.
And who are you? I’m Tay Roc. I came out of obscurity and won the title unexpectedly.
Why are you seeing this dude?
I’m not sure. But I find him interesting. He’s a solid writer but he thinks he’s better than he really is.
So he won’t even try because he don’t want to lose that illusion.
Nothing is worse than trying and losing.
Yeah it fuckin suck dick
Word, because you have to admit it.
Is that all?
Nah not yet. Let me tell you about this weird chick.
She seems like a sweetheart but I think she’s sick
She does not comprehend sarcasm
She thinks she’s dope and believe she has fashion
Her tic is she wants very hard to be accepted
Posting gross profile pic with ashy chest and shit

I study character. There’s so much subtext in our colloquial seams
Take This dude Uni for example, the ampled way he approaches the league
Often the first to drop, with a fist full of steam
His enthusiasm, seldom lacking
Nothing less than 40 lines, it seems

Then there’s my man lars, poshness wrapped in satirical cynicism
There’s an appreciation for the art somewhere, deep within him
bite his toungue? He rather press it against his cheek
And just as destiny dictates, his ego’s the apache chief

Then there’s Sinacog (Flores)
50’s suburban Americana
The summer sun steal licks from his cherry popsicle
Lost in thoughts, he slowly
Got up from the ground cursing at god who’s holy

It was th weirdest shit ever
Monster in maple street his passion raging
The twilight hour between science and imagination
Anyway, I’m convinced he’s trying to make some kind of statement.
To be blatant.!i think he’s just vacant inside
Losing sight of what joy is. Or perhaps we are dealing with a Freudian dilemma.
The frequent use of semen in his verses is concerning to say the least
Maybe he’s a virgin and is constantly battling his demons that is so prevalent in his verse. Semen’s demon. Spawn of satan, a product of virginity? I see his demons
Andrew Flores. Trying hard to be the pick of the litter
Well tryouts are trash, sir. And is often picked on. However u do got cornballs wearing capes for you. Don’t alienate those morons. I’m not interested in aj or dragon or Sinacog. Take these personality and throw them all away

Frank · 01-07-2023, 04:57 AM

@Scar
WINS!

12-29-2022, 03:47 AM	#1
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	XI WK IV: Scar (1-2) vs. Quill (1-2) (SCAR WINS) *Season 11* XI *VERSES:* Thursday, January, 5th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 24 Hour Ext: Mod/Opponent Discretion VOTES: Sunday, January 8th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 3 Vote Requirement Enforced/Penalty *MAXIMUM:* 48 Lines: 64 IF AGREED UPON! Goodluck! @Scar @Quill *TOPIC:* __________________ *VETWORK*

12-30-2022, 04:01 AM	#2
Scar Senior Member Join Date: May 2019 Posts: 530 Battle Record: 7-5 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5689706	check. gl, old buddy __________________ I remember the poplar trees

01-03-2023, 02:59 AM	#3
Scar Senior Member Join Date: May 2019 Posts: 530 Battle Record: 7-5 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5689706	“Rabbit Hole” Racsy, you will noticed my voice getting quieter And as you do you might noticed your eyes getting really heavy Tell me what you see. I’m in a tunnel, lights; orange, purple, blue Can u see the end? No it’s an endless bend Again, what else do you see, u piece of shit? I see a pudgy Arabian guy lying on his bed playing with his phone Oh? Tell me more. He’s suffering wristpain, in the background I can hear voices What kind of voices, you dumb shit? What’s up with the attitude, doc? Anyway, I think it’s the sound of the tv, doc What’s he watching? Iono, something stupid cause it’s in French. And France is stupid nah’mean? You’re an idiot. I wanna stab your spleen Tell me more about this dude Not much to say, he thinks he’s cool His mind is preoccupied with something. Are you still in this tunnel? Yes and I can see everything. Ok back to This pudgy dude Yeah he’s preoccupied with something, jeez A writing exercise. He’s competing with other internet geeks Poetry I think. He keeps thinking of lines but he’d often get side track. Like what? His bills, his wrist, his Facebook stats There’s this fat bitch he’s trying to holler at Yeah? Yeah, she’s aite, but he likes those plumpers with the big ass Don’t we all? Facts, nigga! But yeah he’s been Trying to write it for days and.. He often sift through the archives for inspiration His favorite writer is Big Baby follow closely by this dude name Nathan. Who likes to repeat his rhymes. He’s the netcees version of Cortez. And who are you? I’m Tay Roc. I came out of obscurity and won the title unexpectedly. Why are you seeing this dude? I’m not sure. But I find him interesting. He’s a solid writer but he thinks he’s better than he really is. So he won’t even try because he don’t want to lose that illusion. Nothing is worse than trying and losing. Yeah it fuckin suck dick Word, because you have to admit it. Is that all? Nah not yet. Let me tell you about this weird chick. She seems like a sweetheart but I think she’s sick She does not comprehend sarcasm She thinks she’s dope and believe she has fashion Her tic is she wants very hard to be accepted Posting gross profile pic with ashy chest and shit I study character. There’s so much subtext in our colloquial seams Take This dude Uni for example, the ampled way he approaches the league Often the first to drop, with a fist full of steam His enthusiasm, seldom lacking Nothing less than 40 lines, it seems Then there’s my man lars, poshness wrapped in satirical cynicism There’s an appreciation for the art somewhere, deep within him bite his toungue? He rather press it against his cheek And just as destiny dictates, his ego’s the apache chief Then there’s Sinacog (Flores) 50’s suburban Americana The summer sun steal licks from his cherry popsicle Lost in thoughts, he slowly Got up from the ground cursing at god who’s holy It was th weirdest shit ever Monster in maple street his passion raging The twilight hour between science and imagination Anyway, I’m convinced he’s trying to make some kind of statement. To be blatant.!i think he’s just vacant inside Losing sight of what joy is. Or perhaps we are dealing with a Freudian dilemma. The frequent use of semen in his verses is concerning to say the least Maybe he’s a virgin and is constantly battling his demons that is so prevalent in his verse. Semen’s demon. Spawn of satan, a product of virginity? I see his demons Andrew Flores. Trying hard to be the pick of the litter Well tryouts are trash, sir. And is often picked on. However u do got cornballs wearing capes for you. Don’t alienate those morons. I’m not interested in aj or dragon or Sinacog. Take these personality and throw them all away __________________ I remember the poplar trees Last edited by Scar; 01-03-2023 at 03:02 AM.

01-07-2023, 04:57 AM	#4
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	XI @Scar WINS! __________________ *VETWORK*