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Old 07-28-2015, 12:56 AM   #1
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Old 07-28-2015, 02:25 AM   #2
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Old 07-28-2015, 07:06 AM   #3
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des deploys ridicule. so this matchup is like Christmas dude
cuz u got 'spa' in ur name, & that's why u will always have bitch in u
des will slaughter u. try ur hardest & cats will say 'this kid is pretending'
@Flo Real should come in this thread if he still wants to see a 'definitive ending'
we meet in daylight? it will still end in ya death sir
des will cut u even stranger in the night, like a Frank Sinatra record
my blade game is mean, so when I poke through to ur spleen
you'll be saying 'no ta me' like u was in the trunk in goodfellas opening scene
ain't shit u got to tell me, cuz I'm going for that belt, g
& u will be taken care of first, like a mob boss who walks into a deli
arthritis & wrinkled wrists turn into lines that bring the hits
s'why u getting bodied by a guy born in 1976
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Old 08-02-2015, 02:22 PM   #5
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Ayy..

Bro you old. These punches'll fold you quick and leave u feelin blue.
So that just means my lines collecting a body. . before all them wrinkles do.
You ain't shit. Motherfucker lookin ancient but I got lethal sights.
I'll roll up on you w/ so much metal, it'll take you back to medieval knights.
I'll hurt em with these. Just make quick work w/speed and just boot this ho.
Hit you wit those bombs. . quarterback hands. . all I do is throw.
I'm doin murder here. Act like you cause fear but gramps get this fade.
I'll leave you wit so many caps and slashes. . it'll remind em of text verses from his days.
I shoot to kill. Bruh I'm sick, I'm ill and all my homies strapped.
So it'll be easy to put that target over your head like a fuckin nurses cap.
And rlly w/ those costumes? Man you look messed up and ur a trip.
Marilyn got caught with her dress up, while you just play dress up like a bitch.
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des deploys ridicule. so this matchup is like Christmas dude
cuz u got 'spa' in ur name, & that's why u will always have bitch in u
nah bitch in u concepts older than u are
des will slaughter u. try ur hardest & cats will say 'this kid is pretending'
@Flo Real should come in this thread if he still wants to see a 'definitive ending'
nah weak
we meet in daylight? it will still end in ya death sir
des will cut u even stranger in the night, like a Frank Sinatra record
meh
my blade game is mean, so when I poke through to ur spleen
you'll be saying 'no ta me' like u was in the trunk in goodfellas opening scene
decent, could have been better
ain't shit u got to tell me, cuz I'm going for that belt, g
& u will be taken care of first, like a mob boss who walks into a deli
lmfao this cracked me up ngl
arthritis & wrinkled wrists turn into lines that bring the hits
s'why u getting bodied by a guy born in 1976
smh

Yeah idk I think you just didn't care about this battle and fucked around, or you just underestimated your opponent and dropped some baby bars. Nothing really stood out here..


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Ayy..

Bro you old. These punches'll fold you quick and leave u feelin blue.
So that just means my lines collecting a body. . before all them wrinkles do.
ehhhhh meh at best
You ain't shit. Motherfucker lookin ancient but I got lethal sights.
I'll roll up on you w/ so much metal, it'll take you back to medieval knights.
alright not bad
I'll hurt em with these. Just make quick work w/speed and just boot this ho.
Hit you wit those bombs. . quarterback hands. . all I do is throw.
ok
I'm doin murder here. Act like you cause fear but gramps get this fade.
I'll leave you wit so many caps and slashes. . it'll remind em of text verses from his days.
this was dope, I hope people get this
I shoot to kill. Bruh I'm sick, I'm ill and all my homies strapped.
So it'll be easy to put that target over your head like a fuckin nurses cap.
lol too much going on here not feelin it
And rlly w/ those costumes? Man you look messed up and ur a trip.
Marilyn got caught with her dress up, while you just play dress up like a bitch.
meh at best for a personal, coulda been flipped better

Not a bad verse here, you had that killer bar and a few okish ones, enough to take this.

I thought des was gonna win this but I guess he didn't want to, Spaz came with some decent stuff here so he takes it.

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Old 08-05-2015, 08:29 AM   #7
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Spaz had
Nurses cap
Caps and slashes
His first two bars were ok. Rest fell flat for me.

Des had the first two bars. Wanted to like the good fellas line but I just couldn't get my head around it. Perhaps it was wording. it deffo had potential for lots. Shame really. Everything else was not to your usual standard from what I have seen of your work bro.

Gotta vote spaz for consistency
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Old 08-06-2015, 10:56 AM   #8
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des deploys ridicule. so this matchup is like Christmas dude
cuz u got 'spa' in ur name, & that's why u will always have bitch in u
^kinda blatant flip on a cool idea
des will slaughter u. try ur hardest & cats will say 'this kid is pretending' @Flo Real should come in this thread if he still wants to see a 'definitive ending'
^again. hm. coulda done more w/ this. still okay
we meet in daylight? it will still end in ya death sir
des will cut u even stranger in the night, like a Frank Sinatra record
^cut stranger? uhm
my blade game is mean, so when I poke through to ur spleen
you'll be saying 'no ta me' like u was in the trunk in goodfellas opening scene
^i get the "say no to me" part but i don't see the wp...
ain't shit u got to tell me, cuz I'm going for that belt, g
& u will be taken care of first, like a mob boss who walks into a deli
^hmmm okay
arthritis & wrinkled wrists turn into lines that bring the hits
s'why u getting bodied by a guy born in 1976
^ehhh

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Bro you old. These punches'll fold you quick and leave u feelin blue.
So that just means my lines collecting a body. . before all them wrinkles do.
^ooookay
You ain't shit. Motherfucker lookin ancient but I got lethal sights.
I'll roll up on you w/ so much metal, it'll take you back to medieval knights.
^hm. okay
I'll hurt em with these. Just make quick work w/speed and just boot this ho.
Hit you wit those bombs. . quarterback hands. . all I do is throw.
^okay
I'm doin murder here. Act like you cause fear but gramps get this fade.
I'll leave you wit so many caps and slashes. . it'll remind em of text verses from his days.
^lol okay
I shoot to kill. Bruh I'm sick, I'm ill and all my homies strapped.
So it'll be easy to put that target over your head like a fuckin nurses cap.
^cool concept
And rlly w/ those costumes? Man you look messed up and ur a trip.
Marilyn got caught with her dress up, while you just play dress up like a bitch.
^this idea was rly cool. but u coulda done MUCH more w/ it. this came out kinda basic

i got spaz w/ the upset. i think des was kinda caught sleeping here. i'm used to seeing better from him. most of the time, his lines are more on the hard to get side. this time, they were kinda simple and basic and felt somewhat bland cuz of that. but i mean the verse wasn't horrible or anything. it's just that spaz had some nice lines here and few misses. so he takes this on consistency imo. gd battle.
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Old 08-06-2015, 01:42 PM   #9
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des deploys ridicule. so this matchup is like Christmas dude
cuz u got 'spa' in ur name, & that's why u will always have bitch in u
des will slaughter u. try ur hardest & cats will say 'this kid is pretending' @Flo Real should come in this thread if he still wants to see a 'definitive ending'

^^^^
This opening sequence was pretty dope, I enjoyed this the most
I triiiiiiied to enjoy that Sinatra line but it felt off to me, didn't really work
that Goodfella's line would have been dope as well, but missed slightly
wasn't really feeling that closer, not something I would expect from you
came off more braggadocio this time around...clean opening though

I'll hurt em with these. Just make quick work w/speed and just boot this ho.
Hit you wit those bombs. . quarterback hands. . all I do is throw.
I'm doin murder here. Act like you cause fear but gramps get this fade.
I'll leave you wit so many caps and slashes. . it'll remind em of text verses from his days.

^^^^^
I feel like this was the strongest section you had..
that opener was an alright flip didn't really hit as hard as it should though
I thought the medieval knights line was cool but the set up was weird
the nurses cap was pretty slick but it felt too stretched out, still worked though
the above quoted should have used 'bullets' instead of bombs thats more fitting
either way dope verse...


v/iSpaz I felt he came with stronger hits and kept his composure throughout
I enjoyed Desy's verse but it didn't hit as hard towards the end
either way both had their misses but Spaz had more hits going for him
nice battle fella's
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Old 08-08-2015, 08:35 PM   #10
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QB hands, caps n slashes, medieval Knights, nurses cap

V/Spaz. Des came up short. Best verse from Spaz I've seen so far. Pretty consistent
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This was a good battle. Des has his signature style and I love that he sticks to himself, stays true to himself, and does his own shit. Thing is it can backfire badly. That closer was wtf bro, that was really disrespectful to Spaz, which can backfire Like I said, and boy did it. You basically wasted a down, a pitch, and free throw, whatever. You gave him one, you said here take a free punch. And he took it and landed, and won by one punch. You get what I'm saying? It was ridiculous to do in a playoff situation in my honest opinion, especially when the rest of the verse wasn't "fire".


Spaz you had some really played shit, and the fact that its played and a cliche gun bar at the same time really hurts you. Alot. Feels forced to the max. But you did have some hard ass punches and you at least tried from beginning to end, that makes a difference. It's a momentum thing and sometimes you can just tell what lines had effort and which ones didn't.

des deploys ridicule. so this matchup is like Christmas dude
cuz u got 'spa' in ur name, & that's why u will always have bitch in u
we meet in daylight? it will still end in ya death sir
des will cut u even stranger in the night, like a Frank Sinatra record
this is signature Des lol
ain't shit u got to tell me, cuz I'm going for that belt, g
& u will be taken care of first, like a mob boss who walks into a deli

Those lines weren't great, but they atleast landed.


Bro you old. These punches'll fold you quick and leave u feelin blue.
So that just means my lines collecting a body. . before all them wrinkles do.
I'm doin murder here. Act like you cause fear but gramps get this fade.
I'll leave you wit so many caps and slashes. . it'll remind em of text verses from his days.



Closer was cool as well, Medievil Knight was really bad, everything else was avg at least.

V/Spaz
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