Destroyer 3-2 Vs Amen 3-2 - AMEN WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Friday, January 2nd 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Destroyer @obnoxious @Amen

[Destroyer]

In for 12

[Destroyer]

Pics?

[Destroyer]

pics faggot or what?
all you do is fucking post on these boards, u gonna tell me you havent seen this?
agree to pics pussy!

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

10 reg is cool. Busy bro.

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

Need EXT.

[Destroyer]

for 10 lines?
ok...

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

Bro. I have never asked for an EXT. Been really busy bro and rather use an EXT then no show, my dude.

[Destroyer]

aka Obnoxious

u vote for ur other site pals like its ur job, im voting for ur voting boycott
dudes thinkin RB so much, ving rhames barely beat him out for the voice spots
cats say, 'des? he a bull.' cuz i might rip u in half bitch
if they ever say amiable, its cuz ur a polite little faggot
i'll scar and beat u while i breathe deep - i'm dark and evil
& noxious gassed up in here, but still remains far from lethal
u talk hard but you'd choke in the drug game u wack bitch
u should watch The Wire... cross in front of ur eyes before u slip into blackness
scared to go pics, but u post selfies in chat threads... full of men, dude
guess u dont want cats to take whacks at em, unless its in the privacy of their own bedroom

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

Listen...

Everyone's pulled your card, bitch & I know this verse'll bruise ya',
Fuck punches; I'll give Dest' a knee to the face w/ out having to read his worthless future.
You're cursed to lose, bruh cuz dudes wack w/ the bars clown,
Des puts so much heart & soul in to verses then cry's like a faggot after he's stomped out.
Broke lame... Listen; w/ text you need to retire & stop the shit,
Cuz when it comes to his Cash flow, it's biting his bars for a cypher accomplishment.
Save the pic battle fuckin' geek, you'll get crushed indeed,
A pictures worth a thousand words, while yours will provide Allen & Sharp w/ the top punches of the week.
He'll get touched, quick dawg your weak, trash your shit,
Cuz the pen names fitting, considering you destroy every concept that you flip.

10, ez.

[El Muffin]

nm fuck it I got time

ok




for starters

I like you both so ion wanna hear no shit you fgts


Des

u vote for ur other site pals like its ur job, im voting for ur voting boycott
dudes thinkin RB so much, ving rhames barely beat him out for the voice spots
ok opener. creative but nothing extraordinary. just ok
cats say, 'des? he a bull.' cuz i might rip u in half bitch
if they ever say amiable, its cuz ur a polite little faggot
(cool wordplay)
i'll scar and beat u while i breathe deep - i'm dark and evil
& noxious gassed up in here, but still remains far from lethal
pretty cool nameplay
u talk hard but you'd choke in the drug game u wack bitch
u should watch The Wire... cross in front of ur eyes before u slip into blackness
(eh..seen similar punches but not with that show as a reference but thought u were going somewhere else w/ this ..not feeling tbh)
scared to go pics, but u post selfies in chat threads... full of men, dude
guess u dont want cats to take whacks at em, unless its in the privacy of their own bedroom
(ok close)

pretty consistent verse. only one I wasn't feeling at all was the wire. the rest varied from ok/cool



Everyone's pulled your card, bitch & I know this verse'll bruise ya',
Fuck punches; I'll give Dest' a knee to the face w/ out having to read his worthless future.
(I think this is a played nameplay if im not mistaken..but I haven't seen it personally. wording carried this tho. liked it)
You're cursed to lose, bruh cuz dudes wack w/ the bars clown,
Des puts so much heart & soul in to verses then cry's like a faggot after he's stomped out.
(lol)
Broke lame... Listen; w/ text you need to retire & stop the shit,
Cuz when it comes to his Cash flow, it's biting his bars for a cypher accomplishment.
(yikes..even if it isn't true..its resonant in my mind solely because of allen knight...gotta admit the bars were similar but ion think your a biter but we as battlers are supposed to exploit things like this.. lotb thus far)
Save the pic battle fuckin' geek, you'll get crushed indeed,
A pictures worth a thousand words, while yours will provide Allen & Sharp w/ the top punches of the week.
(eh)
He'll get touched, quick dawg your weak, trash your shit,
Cuz the pen names fitting, considering you destroy every concept that you flip.
(ok)


relatively close one. but amen went for the throat.. Ill be honest I was expecting des to come a bit stronger considering the animosity but his opener was on some creative shit..wasn't harsh at all just clever..the rest of his verse was similar ..clever but nothing that made me go damn.

amen on the other hand fucking was mad as hell when he wrote some of his lines..in particular the cash one. lmfao that was just ferocious.

close one but if im being honest here and I always am. I gotz to give this to Amen

stay writing fellas

v/Amen

[Legion Of Cocks in my mouth]

i'll scar and beat u while i breathe deep - i'm dark and evil
& noxious gassed up in here, but still remains far from lethal

Vs

Everyone's pulled your card, bitch & I know this verse'll bruise ya',
Fuck punches; I'll give Dest' a knee to the face w/ out having to read his worthless future.
Broke lame... Listen; w/ text you need to retire & stop the shit,
Cuz when it comes to his Cash flow, it's biting his bars for a cypher accomplishment.

V/ amen

Executed his verse better
Fresher concepts

[timeless]

ving rhames, noxious, closer

vs

opener, last 2 bars

Amen had LOTB with the opener imo. I got him taking this being more creative. Des wording killed it for him

v Amen

[Blanco Bishop]

The wire..whacks

Vs

Destiny


Honestly i expected aWay better battle.
Des's wording wasnt his best but Amen's left even more to be desired.
Amen went from directly speaking to des then to us within the same line which made the bar sound unprofessional.

Des's misses were better n executed sharper imo.


V des

[Mercules]

RB line was OK

cats say, 'des? he a bull.' cuz i might rip u in half bitch
if they ever say amiable, its cuz ur a polite little faggot
--OK BUT KINDA FORCED

i'll scar and beat u while i breathe deep - i'm dark and evil
& noxious gassed up in here, but still remains far from lethal
EH DECENT NAMEPLAY

u talk hard but you'd choke in the drug game u wack bitch
u should watch The Wire... cross in front of ur eyes before u slip into blackness
-----OK

scared to go pics, but u post selfies in chat threads... full of men, dude
guess u dont want cats to take whacks at em, unless its in the privacy of their own bedroom
DECENT CLOSE

Vs


Everyone's pulled your card, bitch & I know this verse'll bruise ya',
Fuck punches; I'll give Dest' a knee to the face w/ out having to read his worthless future.---OK

You're cursed to lose, bruh cuz dudes wack w/ the bars clown,
Des puts so much heart & soul in to verses then cry's like a faggot after he's stomped out--------DAMN!
A
Broke lame... Listen; w/ text you need to retire & stop the shit,
Cuz when it comes to his Cash flow, it's biting his bars for a cypher accomplishment.----NICE. WELL WORDED PERSONAL
Save the pic battle fuckin' geek, you'll get crushed indeed,
A pictures worth a thousand words, while yours will provide Allen & Sharp w/ the top punches of the week.-----MEH
He'll get touched, quick dawg your weak, trash your shit,
Cuz the pen names fitting, considering you destroy every concept that you flip._-------OK DECNT CLOSE


VOTE AMEN. HE HAD 2 HARD HITTING LINES I REALLY GELT. DES WAS CONSISTENT BUT HIS LINES DIDNT HAVE MUCH STING

[PotatoSackLegend]

V amen bit morr consistent imo

[Junto]

cats say, 'des? he a bull.' cuz i might rip u in half bitch
if they ever say amiable, its cuz ur a polite little faggot
scared to go pics, but u post selfies in chat threads... full of men, dude
guess u dont want cats to take whacks at em, unless its in the privacy of their own bedroom

vs.


Everyone's pulled your card, bitch & I know this verse'll bruise ya',
Fuck punches; I'll give Dest' a knee to the face w/ out having to read his worthless future.
You're cursed to lose, bruh cuz dudes wack w/ the bars clown,
Des puts so much heart & soul in to verses then cry's like a faggot after he's stomped out.
Broke lame... Listen; w/ text you need to retire & stop the shit,
Cuz when it comes to his Cash flow, it's biting his bars for a cypher accomplishment.

Des had the amiable bar which was nice. Whacks at em was funny.
Noxious gassed concept had potential, wasn't a fan of the execution.
Opener and wire were eh...

I liked Amen's dest-a-knee, that was tight. Cash flow was good.
Closer was too simple, didn't feel that... but overall a more consistent verse to me.

v/Amen

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

cats say, 'des? he a bull.' cuz i might rip u in half bitch
if they ever say amiable, its cuz ur a polite little faggot
i'll scar and beat u while i breathe deep - i'm dark and evil
& noxious gassed up in here, but still remains far from lethal
scared to go pics, but u post selfies in chat threads... full of men, dude
guess u dont want cats to take whacks at em, unless its in the privacy of their own bedroom

I think Des really did his thing here...
Amiable was very clever and actually worked both ways unlike Amen's destiny line...
selfie line was a very dope personal...

I didnt really like Amen's verse...
as usual he forced worldplay that didnt work both ways...

vote- Des...

Bye...

[Cashius]

Amiable, and gassed were ok.

Vs.

Destiny was ok.

I thought Des took this. His two quotes were stronger.